Sappy Valentine's Story|Week 5 BPWW

Story by Ratzmaus on SoFurry

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Well I guess the titel says it all, especially how much I wasn't exactly caught by the prospect of writing a valentine's story assignment. There could be a huge load of mistakes or, better said, wrong put words in it, I only let the spellcheck run over it. Let's just hope I'm a good enough writer not to fuck up something I had less interest in.

Yes, I know, a few days late, I was busy watching Dr. House and ignoring valentine's day. Even writing this I was busy watching Dr. House, so please go ahead and shred it, if I wrote something bad :P

I suppose I forgot to say that this assignment was "Finish the story" so all of the story ABOVE THE FAT LINE is actually from Skatelian and the rest is from me. It's also valentine's day themed.


The knocking of the door became so insistent, so perversely annoying, it disrupted the young male's sleep. With a loud groan he got up and sleepily walked towards the bathroom. It had been a short night, a heavy day at work the day before... His mind wanted more sleep, but whoever was at the door knocking didn't share that goal with him.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

"Ugh... Coming..." He said as he washed his face a little bit with cold water, trying to wash away his sleepiness. He gave his reflection in the mirror a couple glances, as if the essence behind that sleepy face would change if he looked at it enough. His fur wasn't brushed, and his eyes looked heavy and tired.

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

"I said, I'm coming!!" He said a bit more exasperated. It was Friday, and he had the day off. He would've loved to sleep in, but apparently that wasn't an option anymore. The heater rumbled as it tried to fend off the cold air from a February morning that was trying to sneak in.

"I swear, if it's that vacuum salesman again..." He groaned. His hands made a motion as if he was snapping someone's neck, obviously an exaggeration but nonetheless an indication of his current frustration. He walked to his room again and got his naked furry butt into a pair of old jeans and a shirt that was in dire need of a pressing. He didn't care, he only needed to look decent enough to drive whoever was out there out so he would return to his delicious slumber...

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK

"Grumble mumble..." He made out beneath his breath, as he finished up with his clothes and headed towards the door. He paused for a second, collecting himself before opening the front door slowly, hissing softly at the rush of gelid air that rushed inside once he did. Without giving whoever was at the door a look, he began to talk.

"I already have a vacuum cle-" he began, before he was greeted by a massive hug from a fur in an equally massive trench coat.

"LUCKY!!!!!" Came the voice. It took him a couple extra seconds to really get who the fur beneath that massive coat was. His anger dissipated at once, now that he knew who this mysterious and unannounced visitor was.

"Dani! What are you...?" He said quickly, returning the hug.

"That can wait, I'm fucking freezing out here, care to let me in?" Dani asked.

"Uh? Y-yeah! Yeah, no, yeah, absolu... Sure!" Lucas said, still a bit sleepy and groggy as he got out of the way for his friend to come in.

"Sorry for almost tearing your door down with the knocking, I was just too cold..." Dani apologized.

"It's fine, don't worry about it" Lucas said softly as he closed the door and upped the thermostat a couple extra degrees.

"Thanks... So, how've you been? I heard that the business meeting yesterday went like shit..." Dani said softly, reveling in the feel of warmth inside the house.

"Oh, don't even mention that... Fuck, I thought that gross-berg and associates wanted to merge, but apparently they wanted to buy us out of the competition for the new litigation process... I had to spend five hours just convincing our rep team that we would most definitely go bankrupt if we took the deal..." He began, moving towards the kitchen. "But I don't want to bore you with the details. Hot cocoa?" He asked as he got some chocolate and a small bag of marshmallows.

"That would be nice, thanks"

"Sure... But yeh, I was gonna just take the day off. Not that I don't like you being here though" he said with a chuckle as he prepared a couple of mugs full of delicious hot chocolate with tiny marshmallows on it. Both paused to take a sip, and moaned softly at the warm sweetness of the drink.

"I've always loved how you make these..." Dani said softly. "Does the fireplace in your living room work?"

"It does. I keep it burning most of these nights, since the central heater usually needs a bit of help in heating up the place when it's this cold..." Lucas said with a chuckle.

"I thought as much... It's the part I love most about this house. That, and the big ass fluffy rug you have in front of it... I'd sleep there every single night of my life" Dani said with a giggle and another sip of the chocolate. "I'm sure I've said this like, a million times, but you have a great house to live on..."

"Thanks... So, what brings you here on this cold morning?" The male asked, yawning softly.

"Well, it's Valentine's Day, you silly...!" Was the reply, as if it was the most obvious thing in the entire world. At once Lucas remembered that that was one of the reasons he had the day off.

"Oh! Right, I forgot it was today... It's so nice of you to swing by to wish me happy valentines..." He said with a smile as he took a sip and set the mug down.

"Oh, I didn't come here to wish you a happy valentine's day" Was the reply. Lucas looked at Dani with a weird gaze.

"Wait, then... Why...?" He began to ask, but then noticed that Dani's trench coat buttons were being undone.

"Lucky, silly silly Lucky..." The fur said as the trench coat fell to the floor. Lucas' jaw dropped as well. All traces of sleepiness were taken away from him in that very instant, his hands shaking. Had he not placed the mug on the counter it would've shattered on the floor.

"You don't really...?" Lucas asked. His voice wasn't nearly as confident as it sounded when he thought he was going to confront the vacuum salesman.

"Lucky oh lucky... I'm here to MAKE it a happy Valentine's Day" Dani said with a teasing smirk.

Lucas peered down again at the, now, severely under-dressed friend of his. Despite a positively sappy shirt, Dani was butt-naked.

"You know, I'd be fucking freezing too with just a shirt and a trench coat." he teased his friend a tiny bit, peering down at his friend's crotch, barely hidden under the slightly longer shirt. Dani always managed to find some way to make him look even more girlish then his shorter than average height and seeming lack of muscles already suggested. A sappy pink valentine's shirt was a great way to show it off even more!

"Oh come on, just enjoy it for a bit!" the fox said with a childish and playful whine, turning around, showing off his backside, even bending over a bit and curving his tail upwards with a soft wag. Lucas looked at that cute butt first, before letting his eyes wander upwards, scanning the sentence on the shirt.

"You're going to make a certain girl happy by suggesting valentine snuggles, right?" Lucas stated, trying to put on a serious tone of voice, playing down Dani's eager show even more. After all, he finally managed to recover from the big surprise.

"Even though I think she won't be as convinced by you showing off your rump." he said, trying to make it sound matter-of-factly.

Dani turned back around, trying to look hurt and pissed-off at the same time, but they had been friends for too long. The fox knew his friend was only teasing and a quick look at his doggy friend's crotch told him, his show had at least some effect on the silly mutt.

"YOU are a big ass, you know that?" Dani asked with a complaining whine, pulling a little pout-y face at the chocolate colored labrador.

"And you HAVE a big ass, you little girl!" came a quick retort, the two canines standing, pondering, both having quite some happy wagging tails. Finally the mean, challenging grin on the labrador's face faded into a softer smile.

"It looks cute... but ultra gay, couldn't you just... I dunno, get a more manly present~?" he asked his friend with a wink.

"You're so meaaaan..." the fox pouts even more, his ears folding backwards a little. At least until he was embraced by the strong arms of his canine friend...

"Just a few minutes..." Lucas said, leaving his buddy for himself for a bit, walking into his bathroom to splash some water in his face and check himself a bit in the mirror. He might be teasing his friend, but he didn't want to look awful after such an offer. Brushing down his fur a bit and freshening himself a bit up with a short wash and some deodorant, he tried to make himself look more respectable, actually looking awake now.

Returning to the soft crackle of a starting fire, Lucas found his valentine present sitting on the big ass fluffy rug and he promptly takes place next to him after grabbing his own mug again. Silently wrapping an arm around the fox he smiled and nipped at his warming drink, just watching the fire. Soon enough he felt Dani's hand reaching out, straight for his crotch, rubbing the dog nonchalantly.

"You know Lucky, I think you want to enjoy your valentine snuggle now, don't you?" the fox asks, setting down his mug and reached with both paws for the pants, opening them and let out a soft whistle, being surprised by a snapping upwards rod.

"Uhhh no undies... that's sexy..." Daniel whispered under his breath and leans right in, starting to work on his friend's cock with broad licks, making the labrador moan and lean a bit backwards, a hand starting to pet Dani's head.

"Like I said, some person just woke me up..." he said, letting the fox enjoy a few more licks before Lucas pulled his face back up for a more passionate and real kiss, even slipping his tongue into the vulpine's mouth, tasting his own musk of his friends tongue.

Dani, not the one to simply stop his ministrations started to jerk his friends stiffening cock off, soon bringing it to it's full glory and then pulled himself away with a needy moan. Going on all fours, he raised his rump and tail up high and gave a little waggle.

"Trench coat, left pocket, you lucky pup..." he said cryptically, but Lucas didn't need much convincing, he stood up, stripped out of his jeans and walked over to grab the coat, ruffling through the pocket to find a small black bottle. Throwing the piece of clothing back to the ground he quickly opened the bottle, lubing his member up nicely as he stepped back to the fireplace, kneeling behind his presenting friend.

"Now let's get you ready for some snuggles, you little girl..." Lucas teased the fox, squirting some of the cold liquid on the puckered hole of his red furred friend, making him yip out in surprise and then moaned as a warm and gentle finger started to work it around and inside his tight hole.

Leaning forward a bit more so he could raise and push back his hip even more, Dani now really presented himself for his date. And he soon was treated by the labrador mounting his body, pressing his cock against his tail-hole. With a whimper, Dani tried to relax, already used to the feeling he managed it rather soon, even pushing back to spear himself on his friend's cock.

"Yes... that's it..." Lucas moaned out, giving the other boy's butt a quick, harmless smack and a short thrust. Lolling his tongue out already, he started a generously slow pace for the fox, but the warm prick still spread him slightly uncomfortably, having no real fore-play. At least his date seemed to enjoy the warm, squeezing tunnel quite a bit.

"Yes Lucky... told you I'd make your valentine a happy one... oomph..." he fell forward, nearly on his nose as the labrador pushed his hands and started to strip the fox from his last article of clothing, not taking out his member. The squirming about made both him and Dani pant rather loudly, the fox blushing hard under his fur as he was wrestled around and out of his shirt, his muzzle and nose feeling a bit squished, even though the rug he was pressed against quite often was so damn soft.

"Happy now, I guess..." he grumbled a little, squeezing down hard on his friends cock, making Lucas yelp out.

"Hey!" the dog said, growling lightly and grabbed the fox hip, giving him a hard thrust, getting a high pitched yelp in return.

"Little girl... play nice~" Lucas said, leaning over the fox, pressing him down and nipping at his nape.

Despite making him feel tense, it ultimately made him even more relaxed as Lucas started to nip and chew a bit at his neck, the harmless, grazing teeth of the other sending tingles down his spine as he got fucked up the butt.

"What a nicely prepared present..." said Lucky, sniffing at the fox' fur, smelling the wonderful scent of girly perfume, the soft gleam of his pelt shining in the flickering and crackling flames and the utter softness as he wrapped his hands around Dani, digging his fingers into his belly fur, telling him how carefully the fox brushed his fur.

"A pity I'm gonna make it all dirty and sweaty... we both have the day off after all..." Lucas whispered into the fox' ears, making him whine out softly. Having a hard week of work with that fucking business meeting to prepare, Lucas was pent-up, his thrusts soon became harder and faster, his knot kissing at his present's tight ring.

"Uhhh... Lucky..." Dani whimpered out, his cheeks feeling flushed and hot, his knees starting to hurt. Despite the softness of the rug, being taken so rough was giving him a rash, even after just a few minutes of sex.

"Don't worry... just a bit..." came the panted response of the canine, pumping away at his friend's rump and he was honest. It wouldn't take long, with the pace and intensity he was going at Dani's butt, he soon dug his fingers into the belly fur, tugging a bit on it as he desperately tried to hold out just a few thrusts more, not wanting the great feeling to stop.

Below him, the fox was dripping pre on the rug, his own rod now heavy, dangling and swinging with every thrust. Rough or not, he enjoyed every damn minute of this... "Lucky..." he moaned out, falling back forward on his nose as the arms that held him up suddenly vanished. Mere seconds after that also the full, hot feeling of cock in his rump as Lucky crawled around him in a half circle and clambered back on his feet.

Dani knew exactly what to do and with a hot feeling head, his cheeks flushed with a perverse blush, he quickly knelt up, wincing at the slight pain in his butt.

"Ahhhh~" he held his muzzle open for Lucky, his ears soon being treated with a lusty groan. Dani watched his friend as he closed his eyes and soon his nose filled with the musky scent of cum he oh so loved, the chocolaty sweet taste of his drink washed away by the thick, creamy taste of Lucky. A quick waggling tail showing that Dani loved this even more then hot chocolate with tiny marshmallows as his face was being covered in thick strands of seed.

"Mhhrrrr...." Lucas growled happily, his toes curling at the soft feel of his rug at the sudden rush of orgasm faded and he opened his eyes back to a wonderfully splattered muzzle of his fox friend. One strand of it even dangled shortly at Dani's chin before it dripped down on his white furred chest. He saw Dani close his muzzle and take a big swallow and knelt back down.

"Lucky... so much..." the fox whimpered out with a soft pant.

"You did make it a rather happy valentine's snuggle..." was the prompt response and air was pressed out of Dani's lungs as he was squeezed in a rather hearty hug. Even with his friend just doing the one thing that turned him on the most, nearly every bit of lust was suddenly blown away, as he felt the weight of his friend against his body and Lucas only felt the soft, warm feeling of adoration. The labrador knew it was now or never...

"Let's hope I can make it a happy valentine's day for MY fox." Lucas whispered into the slightly startled vulpine's ear, poor Dani not used to big signs of affection from his doggy friend. Thus it took him a few seconds before the word's finally clicked in Dani's brain.

"Lucky... are you really?" he whimpered out happily, digging his cum smeared face against Lucas' shirt as he snuggled his date happily.

"You are my valentine... now and forever..." the chocolate labrador's words rung in Dani's ears and heart long after they were spoken.