Hell Sucks Chapter One

Story by Bete Noire on SoFurry

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#1 of HELL SUCKS


Hell Sucks Part One.

I'm writing this story as a method of kicking my writer's block in the ass. This is the first of a two part series explaining what happened to Ariel while he was in Hell. That being said, the following story contains torture, blood, violence, and generally a lot of stuff that probably happens in Guantanamo Bay. If you don't like, then exercise your right to leave this page. For those who decided to stay, make sure that you are really sure about staying. I'm not kidding. Well then, now that I've scared away the people with weak stomachs, lets proceed shall we?

Ariel let out shout of pain as he was punched repeatedly in the stomach. Each blow seemed to break a rib, or rupture one of his internal organs. The skin around his abdomen was a sickly color of black, blue and purple. The Half-demon's assailant let out a chuckle at the sound of Ariel's shouts, and just continued striking him.

"You know Ariel, this is definitely a good way to release some pent up anger." Came the voice of the assailant; a demon by the name of Bloodlial. Ariel just looked at the demon with a look of anger in his eyes, and spat in his face. Bloodlial barely blinked as the globule of spit hit him below his right eye, and ran down his face. The demon instead lifted Ariel over his head, and tossed him across the small room they were in. The sickening sound of flesh and bones hitting solid steel filled the room as Ariel hit a wall, and then slid down to the floor, blood trickling out of his mouth. With a growl Bloodlial walked up to Ariel, wrapped a demonic claw around the half-demon's neck, and asked a question he had been asking for a long time; "Will you submit yourself, and become a full demon?"

"Go fuck yourself with a cactus, and then kill yourself, you worthless piece of demonic shit." Ariel said through clenched teeth as his body slowly healed all his injuries. With a snarl, Bloodlial slapped Ariel hard across the face, before picking him up and carrying him over to the center of the room; coming to a stop in front of what appeared to be a medical examiner's table, complete with leather straps to hold someone in place. With a huff, Bloodlial dropped his captive on the table and started strapping him.

"I'm gonna give you one last chance before I start really having fun." Bloodlial said as he secured the last of the bindings.

"Screw you." Came the pained reply.

Rolling his eyes, Bloodlial walked to the right side of the table, where an entire cart of various instruments of torture was resting. Hmmm. What shall we start with? Waterboarding? Nail pulling? Hot rocks? As the demon was thinking, he ran his eyes over each choice he was considering, before he saw something that looked interesting. Reaching with a claw, the demon picked up what appeared to be an ordinary doctor's syringe, filled to the brim with a translucent liquid. With barely constrained glee, Bloodlial took the cap off the syringe, and pressed down on the plunger to get rid of any air bubbles. As he did so, a small stream of the liquid dripped onto the examination table, where it proceeded to burn a hole into the upholstery. Ariel's eyes widened at what he just saw, and immediately open his mouth to scream, only to be stopped by a claw covering his mouth.

"Now, now, none of that Ariel. We don't want to wake the neighbors." Chuckled the demon as he slowly brought the syringe over to Ariel's neck. With a bit of rubbing with his thumb, the demon found the jugular vein, and immediately inserted the syringe. With a smirk on his face, Bloodlial looked down at Ariel's pleading face before slowly pressing down on the plunger. The effects the liquid had on Ariel was instantaneous. Almost as soon as it had touch organic flesh, the liquid started burning the blood in Ariel's vein, before eating away at the walls of the vein. As soon as the liquid burned it's was through the jugular vein, it then began to eat away at the flesh and bones around Ariel's neck. Small blisters appeared on Ariel's neck, before they popped open to reveal holes that one could see through.

Throughout the process, Ariel was constantly screaming in pain, and thrashing about in his bindings. The half-demon was thrashing around so much, he almost bit off parts of his tongue; several times. In the meantime, Bloodlial had found a chair to sit in, and was currently laughing in amusement at the pain he had willingly inflicted on Ariel. So that's what happens when you inject someone with hydrochloric acid. Heh, it makes for awesome effects. Still laughing, Bloodlial watched as the acid ate its way through Ariel's neck and shoulders, before it finally lost its potency. However, while the acid had finished its job, Ariel's screams were still going on as his flesh, and bones were exposed to the world. After a full minute of yelling in pain, Ariel's body finally rebooted itself, and started to regenerate all the lost tissue.

"You bastard!! You fucking bastard! I swear to God when I get out of here, I'm going to kill you slowly!" Shouted Ariel as Bloodlial got out of his chair and walked over to the cart again.

"Boy, you're going to be working for me by the time you get out of the table, so shut the fuck up. Oh, and what you just experienced is nothing compared to what I'm going to do next." Bloodlial replied as he picked up a familiar looking weapon. Ariel raised his head, biting his bottom lip to keep from yelling in pain from moving his still regenerating tissue. What he saw made his blood run cold. In the hands of his demon tormentor, was the barrel of a World War 2 era flamethrower. Strapped onto the demon's back; were two fuel tanks, and based off the sounds of moving liquid Ariel heard; they were full. Grinning evilly, Bloodlial lit up the flame at the end of the barrel, and pointed the flamethrower at Ariel's helpless body. "Burn baby, burn."

With a single twitch of his claw, Bloodlial pulled the trigger, causing the fuel in the tanks to flow into and out of the barrel, hit the flame, and send a plume of fuel and flames onto Ariel's body. Whatever screams that came out of Ariel's mouth were instantly cut off as the flames entered his mouth, and burned both his throat and vocal chords. Bloodlial just smiled as he watch the skin all across Ariel's body slowly start to blister, before peeling away to reveal the flesh underneath. After a while, the flesh started disappearing, leaving the flames to eat away at muscular tissue, along with a few of Ariel's organs. While he wasn't able to express his pain through screams, Ariel was still able to move, and move he did. The poor half-demon's brain was in overdrive, and was causing Ariel to thrash about, which made his skin peel away and fall on to the floor with a sick 'splat.'

After a good five minutes of listening to the sound of sizzling flesh, while smelling what could only be described as smoked jerky, Bloodlial waved his hands in Ariel's direction, and extinguished the flames. With an almost bored look on his demonic face, Bloodlial walked over to Ariel, placed two claws on the half-demon's wrist, and was elated to feel a faint pulse. Excellent, the boy is still alive. Smiling evilly, Bloodlial asked Ariel the same question again. The response he got was a weakly raised middle finger. Snickering, Bloodlial just grabbed a towel from his cart, covered Ariel's face with it, and then slid it off as he applied pressure on it. The result was any and all leftover skin on Ariel's face was stripped away. The poor half-demon squirmed in pain, his muscles too weak or destroyed to thrash around anymore. Bloodlial just looked at the spectacle before he grabbed another towel, covered Ariel's face with it, and then grabbed a bucket of water.

"Come on BOY! Just say yes already!" shouted Bloodlial as he poured the water over Ariel's towel covered head. The water splashed over the towel, where it began to go into Ariel's mouth, and down his windpipe. The half-demon's immediate reaction was to start gasping for air as his brain was tricked into thinking that it's body was drowning. The gasps for air were cut off as another bucket of water was poured over Ariel's head. They then started up again as even more water made its way down the half-demon's windpipe. As this was going on, Ariel's had regenerated most of the organic tissue it had lost from both the flamethrower, and the acid. After watching his captive heal, and gasp for air for a few moments, Bloodlial took the towel off of Ariel's head, and grabbed the boy's freshly healed neck.

"I'm not gonna say yes you filthy bastard." Ariel said, before spitting directly in Bloodlial's left eye. With a roar, the demon punched Ariel in the jaw, effectively shattering the bones there. "You monstah's really have a problem with my jaw, huh?" Ariel muttered as his jaw slowly healed, before it was broken again by Bloodlial's fist. Ariel let out pained chuckles as Bloodlial hit him in the jaw another five more times, before he finally quit. Snarling, Bloodlial picked up the first thing he saw on his torture cart; a surgeon's scalpel. Turning around to face Ariel, the demon traced the blade of the scalpel along the skin of Ariel's arms, hands, fingers, and shoulders.

"Ariel, I'm going to enjoy each and every minute of what's coming next." With a shout, Bloodlial raised the scalpel over his head, and brought it down straight into Ariel's right hand. The half-demon let out a hiss of pain in response as the blade cut through skin, and bone, before coming out the other side of his hand. Snarling, Bloodlial took the scalpel out of the wound, brought it over to Ariel's shoulder, and then started to make a small incision about two inches long. Confused, Ariel watched as the demon discarded the blade, before bring a claw to the wound. Without a moment's hesitation, the demon plunged his claw into the incision, and kept going until he felt his claw scraping Ariel's collar bone. A yelp of pain escaped Ariel's lips as he watched Bloodlial wiggle his claw around in the wound, which sent a burst of blood into the air and onto the floor. Ariel let out another yelp of pain as he felt the claw intentionally dig into the flesh surrounding it.

"Why do you want me so bad, huh Bloodlial?" taunted Ariel as the demon removed his clawed digit from the wound. A moment later, the wound closed up, leaving no sign it had been there. The demon ignored Ariel's taunt and walked back over to the torture cart. There has to be some sort of way to break him. Let's see if shooting him will work. Letting out an angry sigh, Bloodlial picked up a small handgun from the torture cart, and pointed it at Ariel's right knee. Before the boy could say anything, Bloodlial pulled the trigger, sending a bullet flying out the barrel of the gun to embed itself into Ariel's right knee, with a crunch and a spurt of blood. A loud yell filled the room as Ariel felt the pain similar to a thousand white-hot needles shoot up his leg. A moment later, he let out another yell as the same pain came from his left knee after having it get shot by his demon captor.

"You seem to keep coming up with ideas, ain't ya?" Was all Ariel could manage to say through the pain he was feeling. Bloodlial said nothing in response. Instead he just raised his gun, and fired two more bullets at Ariel, which were dead on target. Each bullet entered Ariel's both of Ariel's shoulders, and lodged themselves in his flesh. A sharp intake of breath after each shot was the only evidence to show that Ariel was in pain. Growling at this, Bloodlial tossed his gun away before walking over to his torture cart. Bullets, waterboarding, being burned alive, being beaten up, stabbing, and corrosive acid didn't work. What else can I try? Looking at his cart, Bloodlial noticed a very simple device; a set of pliers. Blinking, the demon picked up the pliers, looked at them, and then at Ariel. A maniacal grin started to creep across his face as he thought about what he was going to do with what he held.

"Ariel, make a choice. Yes, or continue the torture." Bloodlial warned.

"Hmm, torture me, I enjoy it." Replied Ariel.

Chuckling, Bloodlial walked over to Ariel's feet, and grabbed the right one with his claws. Still grinning, the demon gripped the nail of Ariel's big toe with the pliers, and started pulling hard. Ariel let out continuous hisses of pain as he felt the demon attempt to forcefully pull out his nails. After thirty seconds of pulling, Ariel's hisses of pain turned to full fledge yells as Bloodlial succeeded in pulling the nail out with a small spray of blood to follow. Not wasting time, Bloodlial did the same to the rest of the nails on the toes of Ariel's right foot, then switched over to the left foot, and did the same thing there. After he finished with the last nail, Bloodlial wiped his brow of all the blood that had sprayed onto his face before moving over to Ariel's right hand. With a quick grab, Bloodlial started the process of yanking the nails out of the fingers of Ariel's hands. As this happened, Ariel was constantly shouting in pain, along with biting the inside of his cheeks in an attempt distract himself from what was happening to him.

"Come on you sick bastard! This ain't going to get me to submit." Ariel shouted as Bloodlial pulled out the last nail from his hands. The demon just smirked at Ariel, and walked over to where he had positioned the half-demon's head. Before Ariel could react, Bloodlial had his claws of his left hand inside the half-demon's mouth, forcing it to stay open. The demon deliberately lowered the pliers as slowly as possible before stopping at Ariel's teeth. The half-demon's eyes widened as he realized what Bloodlial was going to do to him. He immediately try squirming away from the pliers and the clawed digits in his mouth, but it was all for naught. With a sadistic grin on his face, Bloodlial began pulling out the teeth in Ariel's mouth. Each pulled tooth resulted in a flash of intense pain followed quickly by a spurt of blood, and a dull throbbing in the half-demon's gums. As soon as Bloodlial pulled out the last tooth in Ariel's mouth, he threw his pliers away as he repeated his question.

"Will you say yes?"

"I'm going to give you a slow miserable death, you faggot!" was Ariel's slurred response. Bloodlial let out a sigh as he listened to the reply, then went back to his cart. Well that didn't work. This boy seems to be tougher than I was told he would be. Oh well, since it seems that the physical torture ain't working, let's try the ever so effective threatening those close to him. Placing his claws behind his back, Bloodlial started circling the table Ariel was strapped to. Ariel followed the demon's movements with a wary look in his eyes, wondering just what other torture he was going to experience next. "Hey buddy, you looking like you're at a loss. You pissed that I keep coming back from whatever you do to me, and still saying no?" the half-demon taunted as Bloodlial stopped by the cart and picked up a piece of paper.

"You think this is funny don't ya?" Snarled Bloodlial.

"Yeah, pretty much. You just a pussy ass demon."

"Pussy ass demon huh? How bout I have someone go kill your boyfriend for me, will I be a pussy ass demon then?" As he spoke, the demon showed Ariel the paper he was holding. On the paper was an image of Eric killing several supernatural creatures alongside an unidentified male. Ariel's eyes narrowed into slits as he regarded the image before looking back up at the demon. Bloodlial smiled, confident that he had finally gotten Ariel to give up. That is, he was confident until he heard Ariel start speaking.

"Listen, and listen well, you little punk ass demon. I really don't care what you do to Eric. I'm gonna tell you right now, I don't give a shit about the furs or people in my life." Ariel paused for a moment to breathe, and then continued speaking. "That lion I work with may be my boyfriend, but I will very easily kick him to the curb if it allows me to kill you supernatural faggots. So go ahead and kill him. I'll still say no, and I'll say it with a shit eating grin on my face." With those words, Ariel closed his mouth, and promptly gave Bloodlial the finger. The demon in question had listened to every word with his jaw wide opened in shock. This boy is a sadistic killer. He's even worse than some of my brethren in Hell. With a growl, Bloodlial tore up the image of Eric in front of Ariel and started pacing back and forth in anger as he considered what he could do next.

Ariel watched the demon's angry pacing with a smile on his face, glad that he had shocked him enough to get a moment's rest. After having his skin, flesh, and muscles burned, getting his skin and flesh eaten away by acid, getting all his nails and teeth yanked, and then healing himself, he needed to regain some energy. Unfortunately for him, he wasn't able to rest for long. Bloodlial had grabbed a sledgehammer from his cart, and had thought it a perfect idea to slam it down on Ariel's balls. Ariel instinctively attempted to grab his testicles in response to what happened, but was held back by his bindings. Seeing he wouldn't be able to move, the half-demon settled for the next best thing; he started cursing to show his pain. "Hijo de puta. My fucking nuts. You fucking demon, I'm going to fucking joder tu cabeza. Te voy a matar, I swear to God, you faggot ass bitch. Puto maricon!" Bloodlial just looked down at Ariel in amusement, letting the mixture of Spanish and English words go over his head. When it appeared that Ariel had finished his tirade, Bloodlial picked up the sledgehammer again, and aimed it for Ariel's stomach.

"I'll ask again. Will you submit?"

"Bite me." Was the response the demon received Rolling his eyes, Bloodlial brought the hammer down, and hit Ariel's stomach. All the air in Ariel's lungs immediately escaped through the half-demon's mouth, and he had to struggle to suck more in just to be able to scream. Unfortunately, his screams were cut short when Bloodlial brought the sledgehammer down on his hands, and the lower part of his ribcage. At that point, one of Ariel's lungs punctured his lung, which led to the half-demon to begin coughing up blood as he started his screams again. As soon as Bloodlial saw the blood pouring from Ariel's mouth, he dropped his sledgehammer so that Ariel's body could heal up again. Within seconds of the sledgehammer hitting the ground, Ariel forced himself to heal up, using up the energy he had gained from his earlier rest.

"Still enjoying this boy?" asked Bloodlial as he watched Ariel heal himself. The half-demon just looked up at Bloodlial before laying his head back down against the table, too tired to even respond. Bloodlial grinned at the display. It appeared that he was finally getting somewhere. The boy is getting weak from all the healing he's doing. Let's see if this can lead to his mind getting weaker too. The demon grabbed the next available instrument of torture he saw, and smiled sadistically at what he grabbed when he raised it to his eyes. Perfect. A mutated strain of the flesh eating bacteria. And apparently it only last's five seconds, but doesn't kill anybody. GREAT! A look of happiness crossed Bloodlial's face as he opened up the container that the bacteria was held in, held it over Ariel's stomach, and poured it all over him. The response from both the bacteria and Ariel were quick. As soon as the bacteria touched flesh, it quickly began eating, leaving large holes all across Ariel's skin. For Ariel, each fresh hole that appeared led to him letting out silent yells of pain. Bloodlial just looked on, laughing evilly and enjoying the pain that he had decided to inflict on Ariel.

Well ladies and gentlemen; this part of the story is over. The rest will pop up hopefully within a week. As always, constructive criticism is welcomed, and criticisms that ain't constructive are not welcomed. I hope to see you all again shortly. Good day and good night.