My Evaluation
Hi, my name is Tristam (known as Aragh on Yiffchat) and this is my first story, I am very open to suggestions and would like to hear any comments you may hear, good or bad.
You know the drill, if You're too young, get out, this is your last warning, otherwise, I hope everyone enjoys my story, if you like it well enough, I may write again.
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My name is Cael Malice, I am a pure white stallion standing as tall as a clydesdale. I am 23 years old, making me old enough to go for my "evaluation" Everyone I know had talked about it a few times, yet I knew nothing about it. I asked a buddy of mine what exactly the thing was for and all that he would leak out to me was that it was a physical mostly, an IQ test, and other things along that line. I tried to get him to tell me the true things, yet he would say nothing. I knew that there was something else to this "evaluation"....and I just had to find out.
I walked into the large grey building in front of me, feeling unsure about what was going to happen since I had no idea what to think. I had been chosen this year to go for myevaluation, which meant I was to get a physical and be tested about my personal knowledge. The secretary at the front desk, a slim squirrel of about 25 with a face hid by glasses stared in my direction for what seemed like an eternity, " Please wait over there." she said, pointing to a table with some chairs pulled up to it. The room enclosed me, making me feel more uncomfortable as it felt like an interrogation room used for questioning felons. As I sit there, I begin wondering about the second part of the test that noone knew about or would speak of.
I waited for about 20 minutes before heading back towards the reciptionist, " Pardon me miss, but I was wondering what was taking so long with the physician." I said. A little light flashed on her desk and she waved me on through the door at the end of the hallway. I entered a dark room, it was impossible to see anything and I felt something help me to the nearest table, helping me to lay down. My eyes took a little time to adjust my sight, but I could see there was 2 other people in the room, looking in my direction.
"Just stay still Cael, we're not going to hurt you," An invisible voice said, coming from my right side sounding of a female, by my best guess. I relaxed on the table which was slowly starting to warm up until it reached a comfortable temperature. An overhead light clicked on, revealing the two, an equine, like myself and an otter, both dressed in white.
"I'm doctor Susan and this is my assistant Mr. Adams, we are to give you your physical." They ushered me to the restroom to give them a urine sample, then back in again for a sperm sample, they tested my blood pressure, and let me go down the hall. In the corner of my eye, I thought I saw Susan smile in my direction before locking the door behind me.
It was then that I felt someone strong shoving me down the hall, making me break into a gallop through the next door, it slammed shut behind me, making a menacing snap as whatever it was locked me in. I turned around and saw that I was in some sort of a basement, and that I was not alone.
30 other furs, as well as Susan and Mr. Adams standing in the back. This must have been the second period of the evaluation, the one that noone talks about. I walked in cautiously, seeing Susan's smiling face calmed me down a little bit as I took a seat in the back.
After about 20 minutes of a stern lecture on life nearly boring me to death, the secretary from the front came in and began explaining what was to happen to us and why it had to be kept a secret.
"Hello Everyone, I am Miss Jennifer and I'll be your instructor and evaluator this evening, what you will be going through is a series of simple tests determining both who you will become, and who you will work for. These tests will not hurt at all and I believe you will find that they will both be simple and pleasurable. These tests will not be spoken of in public, nor will they be shared between family members, especially since you will ruin the fun for the children on their visit here." she said with a wink.
She lined everyone up by species and sent us into different rooms where we found that our instructors and physicians were waiting for us. Susan walked up to me and pulled me into a second room behind the one we already were in. "I don't suppose you know what is going on here do you Cael?" She looked at me intently. "No I have no..." I couldn't finish because the Mare cut off my words with a kiss. I followed it with a smile on my face as our tongues danced together, exploring each other's muzzles.
"I am here to evaluate how well you can satisfy a woman, Cael." and with that she turned around and bent over, picking her skirt up, showing me a preview of things to come. I leaned forward and took a whiff of her scent, breathing it in heavily before I tentatively began licking her pussy, bringing my tongue from the top to the base, swaying my tongue from side to side, making her shiver with silent gasps. I began to lick her clit, smoothing over it slowly with care, and as a reward I got a small moan out of her. She pulled my head closer to her shaved box and I stuck my tongue inside, trying to stuff her with it. I increased my soft, loving pace as her moans began to get more urgent. Her juices began flowing over my tongue and down my throat, which drove me deeper into her. I licked every crevice I possibly could without bringing her to orgasm, teasing her. She gave me an evil look, demanding for her release. I gazed into her eyes as I began to shudder, pulling my tongue in and out of her with lightning speed. She bucked against my face and pulled behind my ears, letting out a soft shriek, her pussy convulsing around my tongue. I licked the last drop of her soaking clit before looking at her face, still gasping from her massive orgasm.
After regaining her breath, she told me that she was only there to test how well a stallion could eat her out and she said she was amazed at my ability. I asked if I could follow up on the situation, but she refused and told me to go through the door to the next room. I reluctantly left Susan, but I gave her a smile before I left. "Hope you enjoyed it Susan," I said before walking through the door. I entered yet another room filled with the furs. There were only about 10 left now, the instructors up on the stage.
"Congratulations, all of you. There hasn't been this many to pass in a while, be proud of yourselves, because you made it through training. As you can see, this probably wasn't the evaluation you thought you would recieve." said the receptionist, still fully dressed. "Now, there are 2 doors, in one, you will find instructor Susan, and in the other, you will find a new person, they are going to judge you on your Manhood, on size, use, length, strenghth, and hardness."
I walked through the door on the left, pleasantly surprised to see Susan again. The moment I was through the door, she shoved me at the wall, forced me into a chair and stood in front of me. She locked the door, amidst to the shocked look on the other horses that were next. "I couldn't help myself after what you did for me...I want you...I need you inside me Cael!" she exclaimed, tearing off her clothes and nearly ripping mine. She began to lightly suck on my cock, which was constantly growing due to her affection. She licked the head and down the sides of it before taking it into her mouth. She devoured my cock, sucking long and hard on it, getting it fully erect before getting on all fours and looking innocently back at me.
I couldn't just let this mare go after her attention. I slowly entered her, feeling a hot moist pressure against my cock, she pulsed her vaginal muscles, which nearly doubled my pleasure. I thrusted into her slowly, pulling out a little bit and going deeper with the next thrust, my pace quickening as I heard her urges. She began to gasp as I got halfway inside her. With her contractions and my thrusts, I could swear she was going to cum then and there. I finally hilted myself inside, her pulses teasing me as the heat and the tightness drove me crazy. I sped up immediately, thrusting into her faster and faster; her moans growing louder and deeper. I finally got to an amazing rate before she cried out loudly, her pussy spasming over my cock, I just kept fucking her, wanting to give her the best orgasm of her life. I tried to keep my hold for another minute, but it was futile. Her warm entrance, her tightness, her moaning was just too much as I felt my cock twitch and sent waht seemed like gallons of my essance into her.
She was trying to catch her breath as she smiled in my direction. "I believe you just aced your evaluation Cael...you are going to live with me, your income will be from performing services for women like me, inside this center, but there is one last test before you leave..." I was about to question what this last test was as the door behind me opened and the receptionist pulled me into a kiss, placing my hand between her legs. I smiled and walked through the door to the rest of my life, working happily at the evaluation center.