Friday the 13th
Here we go, my very first story I actually really finnshed, I hope the grammar and pelling isn´t that bad at all. Since I'm actually from germany I might have some little speeling and grammar errors, please excuse those and enjoy reading this first and last story of the hamster-pack.
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It was a sunny friday in the middle of a field.
In the field there was a little hamster with brown fur.
The hamster is called Almura but friends just call him Al, he's insane, crazy and ... well he´s just a wierdo who runs searches and sniffs.
He has lots of adventures.
Almura is just one year old and has no family.
He's single and enjoys his life with his friends.
Sure he has female friends but he's not intrested in having a family.
One day he woke up and streched his entire body several time.
Finally he got up and loked around sure nothing changed in his hole under the earth.
As he was completly awaken, he went to the kitchen and opened the firdge "Nothing to eat ... no food." he closed the fridge and turned around thinking.
After minutes of thinking walking around and thinking, he realised that he's in the middle of a field and it was autumn that meant he just needed to go out and search for food.
Outside he met some friends that searched after food too.
One of them had a great idea; parts of the field are reaching into the forest but it is dangerous to go there.
Almura was the leader of the now 3 ham strong group, a female hamster called Nikky and another male hamster called Teddy.
When they got to the end of the first field they had to cross the road which was used by cars and trucks to get from field to field.
They looked left and right and left; no car.
Suddenly they heard a screaming sound far up in the sky, a falcon. The group ran back to hide, Teddy asked what to do, Nikky looked with wide eyes up in the sky, Almura was at thinking "We´re going further ... When we run zick-zack the falcon can´t catch us!".
Teddy calmed a bit and grabbed Almura's shoulder "Are you nuts? The street is broad and even if we run zick-zack, the falcon is still able to catch us!" he looked at Nikky, she nodded and agreed with Teddy.
Alumra looked at Teddy and then to Nikky "No I'm going!" he turned away from them and looked at the street then in the sky at the falcon.
Then he turned to his friends "Will you join me? Or not?".
The two hamsters were thinking but decided to join him "But you go first!" Nikky yelled at him, Almura nodded and ran over the street.
At the half of the street he started to run left then right, he started to run zick-zack.
The falcon was far away but still a root of danger.
As Almura reached the other side, he breathed heavily and deeply "Get over here the falcon is far away." Nikky nodded to Teddy "I'm, the next!".
Nikky started to run, she ran straight across "Hurry the falcon´s comming!!" screamed Almura in fear.
Nikky who was just 10 feet (Hamster feet, ... around 10 inch)ran faster in fear.
When she reached Almura she gasped heavily and turned around taking a look into the sky trying to spot the falcon "Where is he?" Almura cruled by laughing loud over the ground "RUN!!!" Nikky screamed out in pure fear pointing at the down rushing falcon who headed out for Alumra who cruled laughing on the street.
Almura stopped laughing and looked up spotting the attacking falcon.
He screamed in fear with wide eyes when he got up on his four feet and ran to Nikky into the save field.
Almura sighed deeply "That was close.", he looked to Nikky, she nodded.
The falcon disappeared and finally Teddy was on the other side too.
"Well that was close!" Almura gasped, when he calmed a bit he huged Nikky for her wake eyes; she huged back.
Evantually they calmed more and continued their journey.
"Hop, hop, hop, hop, hop, hop, ..." they looked around, far away the sounds of voices, all together, tireless and constant "Hop, hop, hop, hop, ..." the hamsters stopped and looked around "Where are the voices coming from?" asked Nikky scaring, [(õ.O teachers work "scared" is the original !)] Almura shruged but kept looking "I don't know but we should keep walking!" Nikky and Teddy nodded, Almura started walking the other two of his fellows followed him.
The voices came closer.
Almura stopped when they reached a clearing "ANTS!" Almura almost shouted to his fellows.
The hamsters backed off a bit and planned what to do, ants are aggressive so they can´t just run or walk through.
Almura looked back at the clearing "And we can't fly ... " Nikky sighed "So we need to go around" Almura nodded.
As they continued walking Teddy's stomach started to growl loudly, he blushed slight "I'm hungry.".
Almura teased him and pointed to the ants which where carrying some seeds "You're mean Almura!" but he just nodded content smiling, Nikky babbed him on his forehead, looked angry at him and and shaked her head, Almura started to purr "Rrrrr I love it!", Nikky blushed deeply and smacked him down [(In anime style just imagine some Hamtaro drawing styles)] "Stop that!" she yelled.
When they continued walking, they found some seeds and made a break to rest their feet and fill their stomaches.
They kept walking around the clearing with the ants, it was a large clearing "Almura it's getting dark and my feet are hurting!" yelled Nikky, she was the last of the row.
Of course it got dark but not dusk dark, it was the dark from large rain clouds, a light wind started to blew through the field which made some seeds falling down.
Almura stopped and looked into the sky "That´re rain clouds!" suddenly he sneezed loudly Nikky backed off because Almura's sneezing scared her.
Teddy pated Nikky's shoulder "Calm down he has just sneezed ... bless you Al." Almura turned arouned and and nodded "Thank you.".
And the hamsters kept on walking [(Ok it´s getting boring .... )]
The wind increased it´s power and blew stronger, some of the seeds were falling down on the hamster's heads which made them walking faster to evade the seeds.
The wind started to blow stronger and it started to rain heavily the hamsters started to run to search something to hide from the rain.
They ran that fast that they didn´t realized that they suddenly ran across the clearing, but there wheren´t any ants left because they had ran inside their home deep under the earth.
When they finally found a large piece of wood they got under it to hide for the rain Almura sighed "Damn it's coming down like a waterfall ..." he looked at Nikky "Everything ok?" Nikky shaked her head and growled with gleaming eyes at him "No nothing is ok! My feet're hurting, my stomach is empty therefore I have hunger and I'm really not in the mood to do just one step further! It was really the insanest idea you ever had!" Almura sat down thinking.
Teddy who listened to them tried to calm Nikky a bit "Hey calm down no one could ever know that we get in such a situation and we can't change it ... In the other way; It was your decision to join so don´t complain ... I´m pissed off too but do you hear anything from me?" Nikky looked out to the rain "Seems like it never stopps.".
[(Yeah that is just Nikky, just ignored the fact and does so as if nothing happend.)]
After some minutes of silence and thinking, Teddy got up and and walked around a bit deeper into the piece of wood.
[(It´s a very large piece more like a tree that felt down and started to rott slowly.)]
"Hey Nikky , Al come over here, here's a way!" Almura jumped up scared as he heard his name because he was a bit faraway "W-W-What happend?" he looked around and spotted Teddy who pointed to a entrance to another room which more looked like a long path or a part of a cave.
"No! I don't move just feet into that!" yelled Nikky at them Teddy shaked his head "Ok your decision then wait here until we're back!" she growled more "Ok I'm coming with you!" Nikky got up and went to Almura and Teddy "Ok time to go." Almura pointed to the entrance and started to walk on "Wait!" Nikky stopped him "I'll go first my nose is more sensible and my eyes too!" Almura lowered his head "Yes my mistress." he snickered and got a slap on his head as Nikky passed him.
So they started to walk into the that ''path'' it was very dark and kinda wet, the air smelled sweet and somehow mouldy and mildewed "It smells ugly down here do you really want to go further? ... Nikky?" Almura the last of the group asked worried but Nikky just kept walking.
When they reached a room or at least a more larger part they made a rest.
"Mmmmmeeeeoooowwwwww" Almura looked around "What was that?" Nikky screamed "A cat!" she wided her eyes and looked around but she was unable to see anything dangerous.
Teddy was silent as suddenly a scent of blood filled the air in the hole.
Nikky screamed "Blood! Al run!!!" but no response, Nikky started to weep and suddenly felt sharp teeth on her neck digging deep into her, she swallowed one last time.
The End !!!
Copyright by [KfG]Ren (2003)