Blaze the Buizel

Story by Buizel51 on SoFurry

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This is just an example of my story writing skills. I will eventually decide whether to further this story if others ask me to or not. This story was made during one of my assignments in a college Composition (English) class as a grade. Blaze is also a fictional character I created between the end of my 8th grade year & the beginning of my Freshman year (9th grade) in high school. I hope whoever reads this can enjoy! ^///w^


Blaze the Buizel

Blaze, is unlike any other super hero I've ever seen in my entire life. And having the form of a sea weasel Pokemon named "Buizel," in my opinion, makes him more unique. Having entered through a portal to our dimension from his universe had already discombobulated him enough, but alternating his DNA to become partial human DNA made the situation more confusing.

Blaze was having a regular day in his own universe scavenging for food, helping other Pokemon that needed the assist, and going to the pond near his makeshift shelter every evening to relax and think about his day. However, this night had unexpected events waiting for him at his doorstep. Later that night, Blaze heard an eerie sound coming from the nearby pond. Having realized that the noise was not from his world, he quickly jumped to his feet and ran towards the pond. Upon his arrival, he was astonished to find what seemed to be an electric, blue, swirling vortex in front of the peaceful pond. Blaze had never seen anything like it before! He'd only seen similar versions of the portal summoned by other rare and powerful Pokemon a few times in his life before. As he approached the gateway prudently, it was too late to realize that the portal began to pull him inside as it was closing. He was carried off his feet a split second before he reacted. As he was pulled closer to the closing vortex, he heard the portal discharge static to the ground. He tried reaching towards the ground, and tried pushing himself away from the portal by using his Water Gun ability. He noticed this ability worked for only a few seconds before tiring himself out. Blaze took one final breath and yelled for help, but he knew nobody would be there to help him; it was very late at night in his world, which meant most Pokemon were sleeping. He looked towards the portal seeing he was getting closer to it every second, inch by inch, foot by foot. The electrostatic discharge took ahold of his body as he passed through the closing vortex behind him; however, he felt no pain. He screamed as he felt the gravity of the portal pull him down towards the other end of the gateway. A strong shockwave rushed through his body after impacting a smooth, solid floor on his back and head. He whimpered slightly from the pain, but barely got up to his feet from the eventful moments that had taken place a few seconds ago. Blaze blinked several times to make sure his vision was fine, but he could hardly see a thing inside the large, dim room. A screeching alarm made him jump a foot in the air a minute after his arrival of this newly discovered universe. While he covered his ears, shouts and stomping could be heard outside of the dark room, "Move! Move! Move! Quarantine whatever the hell's in there containing that energy source!" Blaze realized he was in a severe situation and he had to get out of there NOW. Not knowing where to go, he prepared himself for the confrontation that was going to pass through that door.

This is basically my introduction of Blaze's new adventure. He had just gone through a portal the human race had engineered to open a door to other dimensions. But he didn't expect it to be his dimension. What Blaze doesn't know is that the portal multiplied his powers and alternated his DNA to become partially human DNA. In his adventure, he tries to look for a way to return back to his own universe risking his life and the life he knew in the past. Now, he must make a life changing decision whether to go back to his world and retain the peaceful life he once had or become mankind's hero saving humanity from their self-destruction in the near future.