The rise of rebellion (initium)

Story by cursesha on SoFurry

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#1 of rebels

this is only a taster of a story i wanted to do for a very long time. its based around the album "wretched and divine" by black veil brides if you didn't get the reference at the start. i am looking to collaborate with others for character ideas for the rebels and the main characters behind the serpents so if your interested in putting a idea for a character forward please let me know


"the kingdom of god is inside you and inside you, not in a mansion of wood and stone,

split a piece of wood and god is there, lift a stone and you'll find god"

Andy biersack/ wretched and divine/ 2013

The rebellion is know around the four kingdoms of contri it was seen as the beginning of a new era and the end of the oppression of a once great a slave driven empire. ruled but dictators and forked tongue serpents who believed in there only being one true Superior race compared to the all the canines, felines and humans that served under them in the darkness of the pits in mines or even in the factory's and steal mills producing armor for the soldiers who keep them in line.

no one really did see it coming but the rebellion only really started outside the walls of this dark and fear driven kingdom in a small desert town called lindriff which was the only last safe heaven for thief's, homeless and the poor for those who could afford the taxes imposed by the serpent empire.

the people who lived in this town built on sand and dry wood all pay for their freedom to the serpents beyond the walls they even hide the fear that lives in the very depths of their minds and travels down to the hearts till it cripples them completely to the point of insanity.

lindriff is where the first real rebel show'd up no one saw his face due to the fact he hide under a cloak with the rebel silver rose brooch that he wore to remind him and the people he meets that hope and a good future is coming to them.

they say he walks the sandy streets at night and by day watches over the people of lindriff waiting till the time comes to break the walls down and start the rise of the rebellion. for most people and furs alike this was just a pipe dream something not any slave, thief or even any human being would think of doing.

especially since the leader of the serpents who run the kingdom beyond the walls was once a rebel himself why he betrayed his fellow rebels is only really down to rumors and whispers the only person or fur that really knows the truth is the one who still lives and breaths to this day the only one who walks the sands in the belief of freedom from the oppression of the dictator named by many people as Claro or to people in the main castle as "et faciam illud occidit" or in English "killer of rebels".

time will come when Claro will face his fate at the hands of a rebel but question is will it be just one or will it be many?

"fate of many lies between the sands of lindriff

whether its fortune of brave or loss of the poor

the sly serpents who loom over the lands my sleep easy this day

but they will sleep in fear

fear that one day freedom and hope will rise again

to destroy the shadows of enlightened pigs

and once again rain free!"

message from the rebels