Sweet Revenge part 3
#3 of Sweet Revenge
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Where the hell is it Marcus nearly screamed it could't have gone that far! As he was hobbling along the road he wondered just how he was to get back at the macros. I don't even know how many there are around here. Right then he caught sight of some metal a little ways off the road. Well there's my car at least I hope my stuffs okay. As he started down the side of the road he some bush's rustling. He immediately dropped down to the ground and felt his ribs shifting. He bit off a yell of pain and scooted into a nearby bush and held his breath. Just as he stopped moving a man stepped out of some bush's directly in front of him. As he debated what to do the man looked around before walking towards Marcus's car. Well I guess that settle's it Marcus thought before crawling out of the bush. Surprizingly the man didn't seem shocked to see another human. Hey my name's Marcus can you tell me if there is other people around here? For a moment the man just stood there. Then he said my name's James and no there's no one around for miles. I was afraid of that Marcus replied. Yeah sorry to bust your bubble but about three months ago some macros came and started building a mobile home park. Since then they kinda killed everything in the county. Anyone alive besides you? Not that I'm awear of. Shit Marcus muttered well I'm glad someone's alive. But why did you come here if there's macros around here? I heard someone yell Ouch you fucker and came over to see what was going on. That was stupid. Yeah I guess it was. But uhh you wouldn't happen to have anything to eat in yor car would you James asked? At that Marcus grined yeah I have some beef jerky in the front seat. Thank the Lord!!! I'm sick of tomato soup. Marcus started laughing and then groaned in pain. Well I guess today's your lucky day. James said I guess it is but are you okay you look kinda dinged up? Yeah I got kicked by that macro vixen. Well then let's get you back to my camp I got some medicne. No I'll be okay for a while. You sure? Yeah come on and help me empty the trunk I should have some junk in it that could be useful. So what are you doing this far out county James asked. I was going to Westwood city to see my family....I recently got out of the Marines and was on my way home and ran into a macro. Shit I'm sorry to hear that.... So westwood's gone then. Yeah the mobile homes are on the cities remains.... Well that's what happened to you so my turn I guess James began. I was at my farm when they first attacked the city as I drove over to the city I realised that there would't be any survivors so I turned around and went back to my farm. But I was too late....they smashed my farm.... That sucks Marcus replied at least you got away. Yeah but they destroyed every thing I owned so....all I got left is a bunch of tomato soup. By this time the trunk was empty and everything packed up. Hey can you help put a splint on my leg Marcus asked. Sure I'll try first time for everything I guess James said. While James was splinting it he said. Umm if you don't mind me asking....what are you going to do once your healed? Marcus sat for a second before replying. I'm gonna kill them. Just how the hell are you gonna that!?!? James exclamed. I don't know yet but I will.....I'll find out how even if it kills me. You are going to die you know that...right? right?