Re-Written
RE-WRITTEN
Warning: I apologize to all the readers that read the old story "Fucking Rebbeca". This is a revised version of that old story. The characters and the situations have been changed. In addition, the title as well, you can see, but this is an adult story with sexual situation, so if you are under 18 or 21 years, you must stop reading.
This is a platonic love story. You must read it from the beginning to the end before making criticisms.
Creebba was a lizardwoman. Yes, she was a lizardwoman. It was hard to see lizardwomen because the lizardmen were always hiding them. Nobody knows why they hide them. She was in her house, in an old village lost in the middle of a rainforest. It was a season of tension for her. Every year, at the third month, during three days, one lizardwoman was take out of her house and tied up in the middle of the village, so every lizardmen can rape her. And an uncomfortable feeling indicated her that she would be the next one.
The exterior of the village was sunken into a weird atmosphere. Nobody was out of their houses. The tall pole in the middle of the main square was waiting for its next victim. Two ropes and a muzzle cover. Nothing else was on the pole. One of the houses opened and three lizardmen came out of it. They were huge, muscled and powerful. Their limbs were hard, and their costumes were precious, made of gold and fine fabrics. Their skins were of different colours: green, red and brown.
-Ok. - said the green lizardman. - The pole of this year points to one female. Creeba.
-I cannot believe it. - said the Green lizardman.
-What did you say? - said the Brown lizardman.
-She's suffered the death of her husband. - said the Green lizardman.
-You think that's unfair? -said the Brown lizardmen.
-I only said that...
-My wife was the chosen one the last year. Your wife has not been raped yet by the lizardman of this village. My wife passed three months in the doctor because of this ritual.
-He is saying that this is not funny for him.-said the red lizardman.
-Of course it's not.-said the green lizardman.-I am the first one who disapproved of this stupid folklore. Let's stop talking.
The green lizardman breathed deeply and started to walk in the direction to Creebba's house. It was the unique house with a blue roof of the village. That was because Creeba was a blue lizardwoman. She was the only blue lizardwoman of the village. That was why so many people voted for her as the next one for the ceremony. The green lizardman stopped in front of the house, making a noise with his huge armour and ceremonial costume. He reached his right claw and gave three knocks on the door.
Creeba jumped on her chair. She heard the knocks, and the roof shook with the bounds. However, she was paralysed by the fear. They chose her. They finally choose her to be the one on the pole this year. She stood up slowly. Her legs were shacking without control, along with her arms. She walked to the door and opened it.
At the entrance of the house were three lizardmen. She knew them. They were Green, Red and Brown. They called them that way because their scales were always shiny and bright. Nevertheless, with so many armours and costumes she could barely see anything of their skins.
-We have come to take you to the pole.-said Green.
-I know that.-said Creeba.
Before leaving the house, Green whispered to Creeba:
-I am sorry.
The two lizardmen Brown and Red closed the door and followed Green and Creeba to the pole. Some lizardmen of the village opened their doors and looked outside to see how the three big lizardmen tied up the small and fragile lizardwoman. Green took the rope and tied it around Creeba's wrists. He took the muzzle cover and put it inside her mouth. Green approached to Brown and told him:
-Now, you will say the speech of inauguration.
Brown froze. He grabbed Green's strong arm and said:
-What??? That's monstrous!!! I am not going to say it!!!
Brown moved his right arm and grabbed Green's balls with his claws, squeezing them. Green gasped and a horrible pain sank into his groins and genitals. Brown moved his mouth to Green's ear and whispered.
-You will say that speech to know how you can feel. In addition, if you ever touch me again I will squeeze your balls so hard, that one of your testicles will explode.
Brown released Green's arm, but he did not release Green's balls.
-You understood what I told you?-said Brown.
Green nodded. Brown increased the pressure on Green's balls.
-Use your mouth if you can.-said Brown.
-Y-Y-Yes.-said Green.
-Yes? Why do you say "Yes"? Be specific.
-Yes, I understand.
Green released Brown's balls, who breathed deeply at the edge of collapse. After taking a breath and healing the pain of his genitals, Green walked to the center of the main square and said:
-Village of lizards, listen to me! Every lizardman, young, adult or old can now rape this lizardwoman during a period of three days! The rapes must be only 30 minutes long! If one of you has raped her you cannot rape her again! The three days of rape starts...Now!
The three lizardmen left the main square. But Green stopped for three minutes to see the face of Creeba. His balls still hurt because of the squeeze. His heart hurt more than his testicles. This was unfair. He didn't care about Brown's words. This was unfair. Widows must not be allowed in the ceremony. He left the main square with his legs spread to not hurt his genitals anymore.
Creeba saw the first lizardman. He was young, about 16 years old. He had innocent eyes, and stared at her with curiosity. When he talked, his voice sounded girl like.
-My dad said that I would never forget the first time I rape a female.
Creeba sobbed while she saw the young lizardman approaching to her from behind. She felt the soft hands taking her hips, and the squishy erect cock at the entrance of her cunt. The young lizardman said nothing when he introduced his small manhood inside Creeba's cunt. He was not too big. He was a dwarf. The small lizardman found himself comfortable inside the female's cunt and he started to mount her like a horse. First slow, but after the first twelve humps, he increased the pace.
Creeba felt nothing really. Only some little tickles inside her body, nothing else. The young lizardman moved his left foot and placed it on Creeba's left asscheek to help him on the humps. He was so focused on the intrusion of her cunt that he started to slobber on Creeba's back.
-Oh, yes! Oh, right there! Oh, yes! - said the young lizardman.
The humps were more powerful and faster. However, Creeba felt nothing more than those tickles and a little pressure inside her flesh walls. She said nothing. It was not allowed, talking when a lizardwoman was tie at the pole. The young lizardman yelled. A warm feeling spread inside Creeba's vagina. The young lizardman came inside her.
He took out his cock and rubbed it against Creeba's ass to clean it. Then he left. Creeba sighed. This would be three very long days. In the village lived about 200 lizardmen. About 100 of them were in their adult age. And 50 of them had a cock bigger than 15 inches. That was the big problem.
She moved her head and saw another lizardman. This one was bigger and older. He was naked showing his green scaly body. The scales were dusty and dirty, and his face was covered on saliva and sand. His skull had the same shape of a Komodo dragon head. The lizardman licked his nasty lips with a nastier long tongue and said:
-I like to fuck an ass.
The lizardman moved right behind Creeba and took her hips. His hands were rougher and stronger. Her skin was soft so she started to feel a light pain near her asscheeks. She felt the cock rubbing between her buttocks. And she discovered that it was thicker and longer than the last one, about 9 inches or so. He rubbed his cock head right in front of her asshole staining it with some squishy liquid drips. The cock was covered in a sticky slime.
Then, in one single movement, the lizardman introduced his cock all the way inside Creeba's ass. The walls of her anus spread away with a painful sensation. When he got all inside her ass, he stopped. The lizardman waited for 2 minutes. And he started mounting her with savage and wildness. Her ass was not big enough for that big rod of meat. The pain was beyond words. She preferred to have him inside her cunt and not inside her ass. The lizardman started to laugh and dripped saliva over Creeba's ass. He had his body separated from Creeba's body, and his legs spread to have a better balance. With that balance, he could give several humps in a few minutes.
-Oh, yes! Oh, baby! I love your ass!
Creeba felt really guilty and filthy. She became a toilet, two holes to fill and nothing else. The muzzle cover inside the mouth did not let her talk. In addition, her stuffed ass started to hurt like hell. Every pump of the komodo-like lizardman was painful. It was like a glass bottle bursting against her anal flesh walls. The lizardman shook his tail with elation. And trampled on the ground with his feet.
-I want to put my feet on you!-said the lizardman grinning.
Without taking his cock out of her ass, he jumped, placing both feet on her ass. Creeba moaned because (add "of") the sudden hit on her buttocks. She could feel the long, sharp and dirty toenails, rubbing against her soft scaly skin. Now the lizardman had his full body on Creeba's one. He started to hump and mount her like a wild bull. They were like two wild animals. Well, not exactly. The lizardman that was like a Komodo dragon was a wild animal. Creeba was only a victim.
-Oh dear! Oh, my little bitch! I am so...so close! Oh, I cum!
Before feeling the nasty warm liquid fill her body, she thought of one thing, her husband. He was looking to her. In spirit, of course, he was looking to her from above the clouds. The lizardman finished his fun. He cleaned the seed covered cock, rubbing it against Creeba's asscheek skin.
He left the place. Nevertheless, there was another lizardman ready to take her ass. This was a huge, bigger and stronger lizardman. His head had the shape of a crocodile head, but with a smaller nose. He was smiling and licking his lips with the long tongue. Creeba sobbed. Her inner parts started to hurt. The feeling was like all her sensitive organs were on fire. Why did she have to pass all that suffering? The lizardman walked to her back, and introduced his insanely big cock inside her asshole. She yelled and gagged. The penetration was bloody horrible. She felt as if a knife was cutting her flesh and skin. But that was not the worst. The lizardman hit her on the forehead.
-Do not cry bitch! - He said, spiting saliva over her face.
He took her hips and started to mount her, as the other lizardmen did a few minutes ago.
Green was in his house. It was a nice house made of wood, placed at the entrance of the Village. It had two floors. The first floor had the dinning room and the hall. The second floor had the bedroom and the toilet. In his bedroom, he had a collection of blunt weapons. He had everything: six knifes, two axes, one hammer, four swords and five maces. On a wall, he had a bow and seven arrows. The arrows had a head made of gold. It was a present from his wife.
-Green.-called her from the dinning room.
- What is it, dear? - said Green.
-Dinner is ready.
- I'm coming.
Green was in his bedroom, looking through the window. He had a nice view of the pole. In the past, he always watched the pole with luxury. He saw it as a sexy ritual. It was like a game of voyeurism for him. He watched females being raped during those three days. Once and again, and again, and again, and again, like a madness of sex and fluids. However, at this moment, watching Creeba's rape, he only felt sickness. Why did they do this? Lizardwoman do not deserve this. They were living creatures. They have a soul and a heart, and feelings.
Every year, the council of the Village said the three rules.
-First rule: Lizardwomen have no soul.
-Second rule: Lizardwomen have no heart.
-Third rule: Because they have no heart and no soul, lizardmen must give their heart and their soul. The unique way to make this, is raping a Lizardwoman every year, at the third month, during three days.
And, nothing else was said, except the name of the raped. When Green heard the name of Creeba, he felt a heavy ball inside his stomach. Sometimes, he thought about changing the rules. Widows must not take part of this insane ceremony. Widows, daughters, and old lizardwomen must was forbidden in the pole raping.
-Green! Dinner is ready!
-I told you I'm coming. - answered Green.
He ran downstairs and entered the small and poorly illuminated room. The table and the dishes were made of wood. He sat on his big chair covered with animal skin and started eating. The dinner was simple: lettuce and a steak. The little dinner was like a buffet for them.
-Are you ok honey? - said Green's wife.
-No, I am not. I am...pissed. - said Green chewing a piece of lettuce.
His wife was in silence. She did not eat, because of respect. But she asked him.
-Why are you pissed?
-Don't you think that this ceremony is...demeaning?
-Mmmhh, I think we must stop talking about this. You know what happened the last time we "chat" about the ceremony. I want no more problems.
Green kept eating dinner, while outside Creeba suffered another rape.
The lizardmen cocks were nasty. It did not matter whose cock was. Those horrible pieces of scaly meat were painful, rough, sticky and hot. One of those horrible sticks was thrust again into Creeba's body, this time into the ass, wounding her soft flesh and injuring her organs. The owner of that cock was a HUGE lizardman. He had a body as big as an elephant (and his cock was like an elephant cock too). His arms were powerful to keep Creeba immobile, using the grip of the hurting claws. His mouth full of teeth was open, and his lips dripped saliva on her back. His tongue ran around her neck, shoulders and face with snake-like motion. However, that did not matter to her, because the thrusts of the cock were painful enough to keep her attention on her poor asshole.
Green did not sleep well. He passed all through the night with a unique thought in his mind.
-I will talk to Brown tomorrow.
There was a little tavern some houses away from the pole. In the upper floor, Green and Brown were drinking wine with two goblets made of wood. The room had an orange light, and the temperature was quite hot. Green was half-naked. His costume was on one side of the room, with the armour and the ceremonial clothes. He was wearing only a loincloth and a vest made of leather. They were both sweating like pigs. The wine in their goblets tasted like garlic soup. The silence had the control of the little room with closed windows. Then Green decided to break that calm.
-What a heat from hell!
-Yes.-answered Brown.
Green stood up and walked towards the center of the room. From outside, the screams of Creeba could be heard without problem. Brown looked to Green, and saw an expression of uneasiness.
-Do not think about it.-said Brown.
-I can't.-answered Green.-I feel guilty.
-You are guilty. You can survive with it.-said Brown drinking a little bit of wine.
-It is your fault. You made me do that speech.
Brown put the goblet on the table and said.
-Come here.
Green didn't move.
-Ok, I can tell you this from here.-chuckled Brown with a sigh.-Green, I am not going to feel guilty because you're guilty. My superior made the same thing with me before he left this obligation.
-I cannot do this for a living.-said Green.
-I can squeeze your balls again, no problem for me. Look at me.
Green looked to the place where Brown was pointing with his claws. Brown's genitals were un-protected so Green could see the he had only one testicle.
-My superior had no mercy with my balls. He exploded me one when I argued with him. I refused to fill his place in the ceremony. You do not know how it hurts, and my balls are not as big as yours are.
That was true. Green testicles were bigger than Brown's.
-I am sure that with those big balls, the pain can be very big.-said Brown grinning.
-I cannot do this Brown. I am not ready for this yet.-said Green.
-I invited you here, because you are a nice lizardman. I do not want to explode your balls, but I swear that I will, if you deny succeeding me.
-I still not sure.-said Green.-Brown; they are living creatures like you and me!
Brown jumped from his seat with fury. He pounced Green over the wooden floor and caught his balls again with his right claw. This time he increased the pressure in his squeeze. Brown approached his mouth to Green's face and spoke with spitting saliva.
-How... How dare you say that? How can you say that they are like us?
-They...T-They are living creatures! Not two holes to fill! They are not sexual-vicious objects!
Brown's rage and wrath increased the squeeze on Green's balls. The pain and agony took control of the tortured lizardman's body.
-You will finish worst than I! Nobody says in my presence that those elements are living creatures!
-T-T-Tha-t's why you physically abuse your wife!?-said Green
Brown's first reaction was to do nothing. Green's words stabbed right in the center of his mind and, when he analyzed the meaning of what he said, the pressure on Green's balls increased more than before. Brown did not care about the lizardman; he only wanted to pop those testicles like two little plums.
Green was completely paralysed. He could not move his limbs because of the pain. He did not yell. His jaws were closing with force, and the saliva dripped between them. Suddenly, into the mist of pain that the crotch was, he felt two little explosions.
Brown's claws closed completely around Green's balls. The testicles had exploded in a combination of skin, cartilage, blood and flesh. His sharp fingernails ripped off the rests of the gonads. Brown was smiling. Green was yelling, moaning and gasping.
-Now you know how I feel.-said Brown.
Green looked to Brown's face. The pain across his body and nerves turned into rage. The green lizardman closed his right claw, and threw a punch right to Brown's chin. The brown lizardman closed his jaw so fast that he bit his tongue. The sharp teeth of the brown lizardman cut the fleshy muscle like a knife. A lake of blood started to appear inside his mouth, and a waterfall of red colour fell over the wooden floor. Green stood up. He had no force in his legs, so he helped himself up with the arms. Brown was yelling with his mouth closed. He had both claws covering his bleeding muzzle.
Green charged against Brown and he gave him a punch in the guts. Brown answered by pushing with the knee against Green's crotch. The Green lizardman screamed in pain and agony falling again on the floor. Brown took the wine bottle by the thin part; he broke it against Green's head. A haemorrhage appeared over Green's left eye.
Brown was ready to slash Green with the broken bottle, when Green took a piece of sharp glass and stabbed it on Brown's left foot. He fell on the floor screaming. Green took the broken bottle and stabbed it in Brown's genitals. The lizardman felt again the pain of his unique testicle and penis, little pieces of glass cut his flesh, pouring more blood on the ground. Brown did not stop yelling, so Green stabbed Brown's throat with the bottle.
When the broken glass cut the skin, the muscles, the flesh and the veins, Brown stopped yelling. His mouth and throat were filling with more blood. His vision was blurry and covered with a bloody veil. He was dying. Why? What did he do to deserve such a nasty death? He only did what they ordered him. The last thing he saw before dying was Green's face. Then he sank into the darkness, with the sharp and painful feeling of both throat and crotch.
Green was horrified. What did he do? And why did he do that? He killed Brown, his superior. Because of the lizardwoman at the pole. The first he did was to clean his crotch carefully with a piece of sheet. The rough fabric made more damage, but he didn't care. Once he cleaned his crotch, he stopped the bleeding with an improved bandage. The fighting surely alerted the owners of the tavern. He must escape but how would he escape? And after escape, what could he do?
He killed a soldier. He was a murderer. If he left the village the only thing he would find, was the rain forest. Why did he kill Brown?
-She...-said Green. - I did this for her. I must save Creeba. And...what can I do? What will happen if they attack us?
He must find weapons to defend her and himself, needing to heal his wounds. The increasing pain of his burst balls was a signal of infection. Ignoring the pain and the bleeding, Green opened a window. He checked out the exterior. Nobody was on the exterior of the village. He saw the tall pole, and his house, some meters away from there. Green wondered if he could jump properly. He first came out of the bedroom through the window. Nobody was outside on the street. He moved slowly on the roof, the pain of the groin made him go slow. Green decided to jump roof over roof to approach his house. The movement of his legs during the jump increased the pain of his crotch. His house was one jump away. He crawled over the roof, and looked around, to see if there was somebody outside on the street. Nobody was there. It was like an isolated city. Green took an impulse and jumped to his house's roof. He landed, but with the bad luck of breaking one of his toes during the landing. He got to swallow the pain and kept walking.
He opened a little door in the floor of the roof, and jumped into his house. He was inside his bedroom. On the wall, over his bed, there was a big collection of blunt weapons. He took a hammer-like weapon. It was made with a not-heavy metal, so Green could swing it without problem. He also took a shield and a knife with two blades.
He heard a scream outside.
-Help! Help at the tavern!
There was not much time. With the equipment, without healing up his wounds, he ran out of his house right to the pole. Nobody noticed what he was doing. All the people of the village were running, but in the opposite direction of Green. Between the multitudes, he saw his wife.
-"Fuck her too".-he though (thought).
He reached the pole. Creeba's aspects were looking bad. Her skin was pallid, and her eyes were red. Green approached her carefully, trying to ignore the pain of his crotch and belly. He touched her shoulder and said.
-Creeba? Are you ok?
Creeba mumbled like in a dream, and woke up. She turned her head. He saw Green, one of the lizardmen who tied her there. But there was something different in him. He was bleeding. His crotch was bleeding. Green took her muzzle cover out of the mouth. Creeba's mouth was dry and atrophied. Her tongue was dead.
-Can you walk?-asked Green.
-I-I...don't know.-said Creeba.
Her ankles and wrists were tied as well. Green cut both ropes with the knife. She lost her balance and almost collapsed on her knees. Creeba never understood why he was doing this. Green took her hands and, together, they started running out of the village. They crossed the limit, far away from the wall, when somebody yelled.
-ESCAPED!!! SHE ESCAPED!!! ALARM!!!
The huge bells of the church started to sound.
-Great.-said Green.-Run!
They increased the pace of the race, but not enough to escape form them. Two guards saw them crossing the limit. Their only chance was to get inside the rainforest. They were about six feet away from it.
-What happened?-said Creeba.
-Run!!!-said Green.
They heard a whistle near their heads, and an arrow landed next to Creeba's feet. That was the first arrow of a rain of arrows that came over them. All of them whistling furiously like a hive of bees. One arrow hit Green's right shoulder. It didn't hurt, but it was like somebody punched his body.
They entered the woods. The ground was full of leaves, branches and roots. The arrows kept flying around them, but the trees stopped all of them...except one. One single arrow hit Green on the center of his spine. He stopped running and fell on the ground, breathing blood. Creeba stopped too, but Green shouted.
-Run!!! Run away from here!!! Run for your life!!!
Before left, Creeba said in whispers:
-Thank you...
Creeba ran away, and Green saw how she merged with the leaves, the branches and the trees. Five seconds later, Creeba wasn't there anymore. Using the hammer as a stick, Green stood up with a lung hissing and the mouth full of blood, ready to fight against the village soldiers.
The first one arrived running, without armour and brandishing a sword. Green took the thin end of the hammer and swung it over his head. The thick end of the hammer hit on the forehead of the warrior, breaking his skull in two pieces.
The second warrior arrived too fast. He slid the sword against Green's guts. His belly skin opened and his intestines scattered on the ground. He had force enough to swing the hammer against the second warrior chest, breaking his ribs.
The third warrior wasn't so easy. He attacked Green with two swords, the first one cut Green's left hand. It didn't hurt, because his injured balls and guts hurt enough to cover all the other pains. With one hand only, Green stopped the second sword and swung the hammer to hit the warrior on the feet. The third warrior collapsed onto the ground, yelling in pain, but he slid his sword and stabbed it in Green's right knee. Green fell on the ground, the hammer slid from his claws and, finally, fell on the ground over his knees.
He heard steps, and then a cold and cutting feeling into his heart. Somebody stabbed a sword into his chest. Before the final explosion of colour, Green had a thought.
-"I saved a life".
Then everything became black.
One year later...
Creeba found a better place to live, a village where everybody, males and females, had their rights. There were no sexual pole ceremonies or male chauvinism, only calm and happiness. She had her own house, with a nice little garden. However, every day, she thought about the price she had to pay: the life of Green, and the happiness of his wife. But...what the fuck? She escaped from the domination of males! She was a survivor! That was the thought that kept her alive! The thought of knowing that, from this moment on, she would be free forever.