The Ancient Bronie - chapter - awakening to the new world
#2 of The Ancient Bronie
the anchent bronie wakes to the new world
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sssssss. as the pod opened I thought about what might have happened in what seemed like no time. I opened my eyes and realized I was still in my underground hideout. I instantly ran to the control panels to activate the celestia cam. what I saw intrigued me as I stared through the eyes of my own creation I saw a palace, multiple guards and the working Luna model sitting next to celestia. I wanted to see it with my own eyes so I began building my own robotic pegisi.
over the next long two months I built my pegisi and monitored all that was happening. learning there ways and what was considered normal by them.
at long last it was done I thought finally I can live among the ponies and learn all that was discovered during those thousand years. I climbed into the consciousness transfer device and moved my consciousness over to the pegisi. I tested the joints learning that I forgot to oil them so I squeakily walked over to the oil and greased the joints of the mark 1 holding the oil b nanobots. I laughed remembering when I had made the first ones of this world. after greasing my self I spent the next hour making sure everything worked as expected as I finished every test just knowing I was getting closer made me happier and happier.
after finally finishing I downloaded the knowledge of celestia into my brain and entered the teleporter with a year of battery power in my body I was teleported into the nearby Everfree forest where it was a short walk to what was now known a ponyville I started to walk down the main street and got many stares. I passed it off as them admiring my wings and then I began the long trek to celestas castle in Canterlott I got a running start and jumped into the air and began to fly letting the main AI in the body take slight control so I could fly to Canterlott
about an hour later I arrived at the canterlot castle and gazed in the art laden entryway a couple of gaurds blocked my way so I told them I was an old friend of celestia. they let me in almost instantly I walked up to celestia and had noticed her biogeneration cells had finished her full transformation making her a real living organism with a few electrical conponents still in her body unseeably covered by skin and a layer of short hair. I walked up to her and casualy struck up a conversation telling her I had come back and needed a place to stay neer ponyville. she almost instanty replied that her personal student had moved there a year ago she gave me the address and I flew back to ponyville to meet a pony named twilight sparkle who had studied history and just about everything else. at the address I found a large tree with a door on it. when I nocked a purple unicorn opened the door and I greeted her
hello are you twilight sparkle
why yes I am and who are you
my name is jim, I believe you received a message from celestia informing you about me.
why yes I did its good to meet you jim.
here is where you will be staying she said as she led me to a guest bed built on one of the monstor tree branches
its not much but its all I had ready on such short notice.
thank you
just then there was anock on the door
twilight you in there
let me get that real quick
I followed her to the doorand watched a blue pegusis with a multicollered mane almost burst through the door when she openedit
hey twilight we were gana go on a picnic wana....
whos that
oh sorry this is jim he's afriend of celestia
and this is rainbow dash one of my good friends
nice to meet you rainbow dash
woa you know the princess
more than anypony else
what makes you say that
no reason I say a little too quickly
pause
well any friend of twilights is a friend of mine she says
so do you two wana come to the picnic
sure we say In unisin
great then lets go
so we began the treck to the picnick
so jim tell us more about yousays twilight
well im one of the smarter ponys as you can see I built my wings and was born an earthpony
woa, I was wondering about your wings. said dash
so, I said changing the subject, where is this picnic
its at our friend applejacks barnsaid twilight
cool it will be nice to meet some more ponys, honestly I haven't talked to anypony in years.
jeez he sounds like you twilight, a hobet who only leaves hme for special occasions. sad RD
hey that's not true said twilight
is too, you always have your nose in a book
ok ill admit I read a lot but im not always in the house
whatever
as the bickering ended the barn came into view, there were apple trees everywhere but blocking out most of the view was a the large red barn and next to it four other ponies sat on a large blanket the orange one saw us first and said
hey look twilight and dash made it, she said mouth half full of an apple.
yay said the pink one and ran up to us and gave me a onceover glance.
who's your friend twilight she said in an overly ecstatic voice
this is Jim everypony, he's one of celestas old friends and he's staying with me in my guest room
RD trotted over to the food and shoved half of an apple in her maw biting it off and chewing loudly
and Jim these are my friends applejack she said pointing at the orange and yellow one, pinkie pie she pointed her hoof to the pink one who was now bouncing with half of a sandwich in her mouth, rarity, she said pointing to the white and purple one and fluttershy she said pointing to a tree.
you guys have a pet tree I said confused.
they all burst out laughing as I looked closer at the tree I could see a yellow and pink pony hiding behind the leaves
no fluttershy is just a little shy she said as she flew up and pulled the pegisi from the tree.
hi she said in a high pitched quiet voice
she and rainbow dash came down to the blanket and dash convinced her that I was nice
so what's for lunch I said sitting down.
well we have apples, hay sandwiches and some pie pinkie brought. said applejack
what kind of pie is it, I said
apple, duh pinkie said having finished her sandwich
I looked at the food and realized I didn't like any of it except for the pie
I reached over and got a slice of pie on my plate and grabbed a fork with my nanobots bringing them up to my mouth so I could take a bite. everypony froze andlooked like they had seen a ghost.
how did you do that said twilight breaking the silence.
ya how did you just use magic without a horn rainbow dash piped in
oh, I umhave a couple of talents that nopony else has I said taking a second bite
they all seemed to start brething again but still stared amazed at my floating pie
are you mares ok I said
they all seemed to break out of there trance and went back to there food except rainbow dash who didn't seemed saticfied at my lack of an answer
didyou put an invisibility spell on you horn she said rubbing the spot a horn would be If I had one.
dash don't be rude said applejack as she pulled the pegusis to the ground next to her
oh don't worry about it I said I guess its kind of interesting huh
ya it is a pegusis with majic has never been fond before its like your an alicorn with no horn said twilight
man this pie is good I said changing the subject again
thanks said pinkie as she showed her face into the second pie
is that normal, I said
nope that's just pinkie twilight said
all of the sudden a small explosion sound came from my stomach
everypony jumped
was that you said rarity
It was then that I rembered the matter to electricity convert I had made in my belly
depends, are you going to freak out.
no said rainbow dash
well then yes it was me
they all gasped yet again
awe come on I said
sorry rainbow dash said
and went back to the apple
and whats you cutie mark she said pointing to my flank
um its a electronic circuit
what said twilight
its a complicated piece of machinery
oh she said
we finished the meal in silence and me and twilight walked back to the house
so what was all that weirdness, said twilight
um, was all I managed to get out
and why did and explosion come frome your stomach
I was still in silence
and what is machinery anyways
you've read the old legends right
yes I have a copy of almost everything
is there anything in there about humans
ya why
ok I if I tell you my story will you promise not to tell everypony
fine but I need answers
ok ill tell you my story, but first you have to tell me all that you know about humans,
ok fine well ive read that they used to rule the land of equestrian but they all died out and now us ponys live on the land, people have found strange things underground but to put it simply, I don't believe in them, I mean an animal the walks on two legs and doesn't have wings is redicules to belive.
well lets just say I am what remains of them
YOUR WHAT
calm down calm down your drawing attention
fine if your realy are a human why do you look like a pony
well first off this is a body I created from metle,
no wonder your shiny
and second of if you try to find my body you will be insineratted with lazers
wow
I got to chose to paint this cuttie mark
ok
and I have lived longer than celestia
wait a minute legends say celestia is more than a thousand years old how could you be older
I made her
what there is no way you made celestia that makes no sence
we came up to the door of the house and walked in locking it behind us
shes a robot o built with my own human hands
there is absolutely no way that's true
I can make here come here and confirm this to you
ok fine if you can make her come here without using spikes magic then il belive you.
hey guys how was the picnic. said spike walking downstairs with a bowl of saphires and a spoon
twilight turned around and looked at him with a deadly glare.
ok ok im leaving jeez twilight what happened
nothing just let me talk with this nice colt in private
fine whatever he said taking his bowl of saphiresdown the stairs to the basement
ok look the only reason im telling you all this is because you have become a princess
ok so your telling me your like a god to us
I prefer not to be called by that but I was the creator of your species so I guess I am.
she sat on the ground rubbing her hooves on her temples
any other questions twilight
why isn't celectia here
sorry forgot to call her I said with a microphone extending out of my cheek
hey celestia I broke the news to twilight would mind coming over her and you have my permission to use the teleport drive.ok see you in a sec
the microphone whent back into my cheek as I completed the call
then there was a poof and a small puff of smoke as celesta appeared out of nowhere
twilight I know its hard to believe but its true he did make me a thousand years ago and he is the last of his kind
ok I believe you but why
because my species messed up the planet and whe government wanted to fix the world to they gave me super powers and killed all of my species but me I was left behind as a cleanup crew and created celestia to rule the new world filled with you ponys.
wow this is just a lot to obsorb
well duty calls said celestia may I use the eleport drive to get back to canterlot
sure
there was a poof and then she was gone
I just need to sleep on it said twilight as she looked out the window realizing it was dark
ok ill see you in the morning twilight I said and made my way up the stairs to the guest room where I set an internl timer to reboot me at 5am or when multiple stimuli happened at once
first part of the real story and a little info given to twilight