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CHAPTER BREAKDOWN 2

Chapters 51-100

1. Kit wants Donovin to wash her in the tub but it ends up being that of Jenavee and Rena; in hopes that Donovin won't be overpowered by Kit's heat/scent. All three girls get into a water fight that Donovin is brought into when he becomes worried from the noises coming from the other room. Things degrade into a full out water war, but eventually ends up with a pampering session with brushes and oil for each.

2. Brushing session continues in greater detail. Jenavee explains what it means to go into heat as both Rena and Kit are recalled to their Pokéballs in hopes of preventing another fight. Return to the bathroom, upon which Donovin releases the Feebas and in that begins to feed it the necessary Poffins that'll turn/evolve it into a Milotic. Once Donovin and Jenavee fall asleep in the other room, they fail to notice the white like that lights up the room like the noon day sun.

3. Donovin wakes up very early to relieve himself and upon doing so in the bathroom he finds someone else in the tub. The occupant scares him and in his attempt to exit the bathroom he hits his head on the towel bar and sends himself back to dreamland. Upon waking Jenavee explains what happened late that night and introduces the newest member of the team/family...Milotic. The first words out of his mouth once he sees the Milotic for the first time is that of the Milotic's new name, Undine. Upon explaining what an Undine is to the new Milotic, she enacts the whole persona of an Undine and to that Donovin believes the trip up Mt. Cornet is going to be postponed.

4. Upon going down stairs the next morning, Undine really gets into her new character/name and let the nurse now how...bland her best Pokéchow is to which she compares it to Donovin's Poffins; this in turn sets off Rena and the two begin to butt heads. Eventually the bickering and dealing with Undine brings Donovin to his knees in his illness and eventually passes out from his failing health. Over the next few days Donovin's condition doesn't really improve and to that he eventually sees that of a Ghastly and Mismagius floating nearby.

5. Eventually Donovin gets tired of something following them, and with Rena's help, is able to cut down the bush the thing constantly darts from and exposes it. In attempt to get it to leave Jenavee uses a mild Thunderbolt to nearly hit it (But only explodes a short distance behind it) and the thing begins to wail. The crying of the infant Ghastly draws out the mother which it turns out to be that of a Mismagius. In a rage the Mismagius attacks but is met by that of Jenavee and Kit who team up against the enraged mother/ghost. Eventually, through a combined effort of Kit and Jenavee, they are able to calm the ghost down and are able to get the whole mess straightened out. Though the mother/Mismagius is upset with her son she still wishes to finish the fight, but wants the fight to be on normal terms.

6. True battle between Kit, Jenavee, and the Mismagius. After the battle Donovin takes both Mismagius and Ghastly to the tower and releases them with the excuse that he just wants to make sure that in her weakened state, after the battle, that a trainer won't get any bright ideas and try to capture her. A little further down the road Rena starts to show the signs of going into head and in that Donovin decides to help her along with Jenavee with her heat.

7. Love chapter between Donovin, Jenavee, and Rena. After the whole escapade in the tent, Donovin awakens to Rena missing and Jenavee asking why the tent smelled like Sleep Powder. Donovin is told that if he wants to ever see Rena again he's to throw himself into jail and release Jenavee. Once in jail Donovin meets Saturn for the first time and becomes enraged when Saturn tells him that he has no intention of following through with his obligation and will keep Rena for either breeding or understanding how Lucario manipulate Aura.

8. Flashbacks mostly, but generally focusing in on how Donovin got thrown in jail. Upon his release from jail, Donovin heads towards the Galactic building and pleads with Jenavee to stay out of the building as he doesn't want her to see what he's going to do in there. With a final kiss and a promise to get Rena back, Donovin turns and runs towards the Galactic building; blood on his mind.

9. Death, blood, resident evil scene. Scare one (The last) of the scientists so bad that not only does he shite himself but also wets himself. With the place clear now, Donovin calls out to Jenavee and the two begin the final leg of their search for Rena.

10. Upon entering the room Donovin and Jenavee find three Legendary Pokémon encased in some kind of pedestal, but that is pushed aside as Saturn walks out from behind one of them; a dagger pressed against Rena's throat. When threated with a knife fight Saturn quickly backs down and says that he just wants a Pokémon battle. Jenavee vs. Toxicroak, Undine vs. Bronzor, Kit vs. Kadabra. When the Pokémon battle is done Saturn tries to electrify Rena but is rendered permanently one handed as Donovin cuts off one of his hands with a hidden dagger.

11. Saturn escapes as Donovin applies some first aid to his injured team. Steven challenges Donovin and Kit to a battle, which as it turns out that Steven, is in truth Kit's old trainer. Even though Kit loses in a battle against Steven's Merill, Donovin tells him that he is lucky that Kit wasn't at full strength as well as how strong his team would have been if he'd just spent some time with Kit.

12. After dropping off his Pokémon/family at the Pokémon center (and explaining to Jenavee what's going on) Donovin decides to head over to the Gym to see what other Pokémon Steven has. Upon arriving at the gym he meets up with the referee of the gym, but after a long chat with him he leaves; but not before he announces that Steven only uses water types to the rest of the gym.

13. What has been happening back in the real world? Introduction to Kristy, Donovin's younger sister and to which she discovers she has the ability to communicate to her comatose/older brother through the DS.

14. Back in the Pokémon world. Now with everything settled Donovin and his family/team head south towards the beach but are met with several distraught trainers. Upon asking the trainers what the problem is they tell him that a trainer, with a Blaziken, came through and killed all their Pokémon.

15. A little further down the road Donovin meets up with the trainer (Whose name is Barry) and Rena jumps forward to do battle with his Blaziken. After a brief exchange of blows Rena takes a hit to her lower stomach and Jenavee takes over the fight from there. Jenavee is able to finish off the Blaziken but just like any other fight, Barry brought out his second Pokémon to which is a Weavile. Half way through the battle the Weavile fakes unconsciousness and in that the Weavile delivers an X-Scissor attack point blank to Jenavee. Recovering from the earlier fight, Rena rushes in to take over for Jenavee. Barry's last Pokémon turns out to be the Mismagius from a few chapters back and to that Kit destroys the ball with her Iron Tail attack.

16. After the battle with Barry, Donovin passes out from blood loss and wakes up to find himself in a Pokémon Center. It later turns out that Steven was the one who helped the girls to bring him over to the center for treatment. Over the next few days Donovin stays at the hotel for treatment but eventually everyone is excited to head down to the beach.

17. Mostly comedy in this chapter, mostly involving water pranks and such, so you'll just have to read it to find out what happens. After the day at the beach everyone heads back to the hotel only to find that all their possessions have been removed and left outside for them, due to the hotel having been filled up with reservations. With nowhere to go the group decides to sleep on the beach, to which Donovin cooks up some spaghetti.

18. Caution; M/M and F/F part in this chapter. To show Steven how much of a bond or love Donovin's team has for him, Jenavee and Rena kiss/French Donovin right in front of Steven. After learning that Steven is a Poképhile as well, Donovin wants to get back into his tent as quickly as possible, only to hide when he and his Buizel emerge from their tent. After a near discovery Donovin learns that Steven had slipped some 'attract' into the spaghetti pot and in that missed out on what was going on in his own tent. Once Donovin makes it back to his tent he sees that Jenavee and Rena had been effected by the attract and now his tent smells of the two's love making. A further surprise is upon the next day Steven decides to leave the group and do some one on one training with his Pokémon and to that leaves Donovin and his group to go on without him. Now on the road alone, Donovin discovers that it's near Christmas and to that decides to stop off in the next town to get those presents and compete in a gym battle while in said town. The final part has to do with a surprise from Rena and Jenavee that you'll just have to read to find out.

19. Donovin wakes up to find that he's returned to that of the real world, only to have his mother and sister tell him that he should have stayed in that comatose state so they could have lived off the money that the doctors would have paid them to use him as a research subject. Upon waking once more Donovin finds himself so disorientated that he doesn't recognize the people around him and falls back unconscious upon seeing a ghost rise up from the end of the bed.

20. Back in the real world, Kristy tries to explain to her mother that she was able to communicate with her older brother, but upon reaching his room they stare on in horror as the room is empty. Upon asking a doctor about the patient that was in the room he tells them that he's gone. Falling down in a fit, Kristy begins to cry, only to stop when a nurse tells them that the occupant isn't gone gone, but just moved down to the coma ward. What really sobers Kristy up is when she notices the Burnt/fried DS within the bag. Thinking quickly Kristy quickly grabs the DS and returns it to her brother's side, in his new room.

21. A bit of a back story as to how the Mismagius came into Barry's possession and to that why Donovin is having a bit of a hard time regaining consciousness. Kristy finally fills Donovin in on what's been happening in the real world and all of it comes together for him.

22. After a long session of sword training, Donovin returns to the room to take a shower. Upon taking a shower he has a talk with the Mismagius (Having Jenavee translate) and agrees to help her get home as long as she helps them beat the local gym leader first.

23. Battle between Undine/Milotic and the Mismagius.

24. Beginning to train Kit in dealing with water type/based attacks, but in that get to know Mismagius a bit better. Feeling in the mood to talk about ghosts, Donovin tells the group about one of his past experiences with ghosts and frightens them all (Even the Mismagius).

25. Battle with trainers in Crasher Wakes Gym.

26. Flashback as how the Mismagius/Samantha got her name. Battle against Crasher Wake

27. After the whole incident at Crasher Wake's gym, Donovin awakens to find himself in the Pokémon center's hospital; covered in scalding burns from rescuing Wake's last Pokémon from the slowly boiling water.

28. Donovin is still in the Pokémon center/hospital and has to remain there while his body recovers from the burns. To which Kit takes it upon herself to watch over him and keep him in bed so that he can recover. A bit more comedy in this chapter as well as introduction of a new character.

29. Introduction of a new trainer Rian and his Pokémon. Once things settle down in between Rian and Donovin, Donovin and Rian begin to share a few details about their pasts and to that how both had come up against Team Galactic.

30. Rian decides to travel along with Donovin for a while, mostly in the attempt on hearing more about how he took on Team Galactic. Rian and Donovin come across their first Galactic grunt together.

31. Switch perspectives to that of the Team Galactic grunt. Donovin and Rian have a 2 on 2 battle (Dratini & Scissor vs. Ninetails & Mismagius). After scaring off the grunt, Donovin and Rian return to the Pokémon center, only when they get back the nurse there the nurse pushes to go over Donovin's Lucario and Gardevoir.

32. Kit admits something to Donovin, only if he could understand Pokéspeech.

33. Switch perspectives to that of Kit. Flashback to Kit's past (To when she first met up with Donovin and her perspective of it all).

34. Kit's heat really hits her and since Kit had taken so long to help Donovin with the dishes (Use her flame thrower to dry the dishes), Jenavee and Rena go to investigate the delay. With Kit's heat affecting her she is much stronger and the fight between her and Jenavee + Rena things become ugly.

35. Rape scene between Kit and Donovin, only to be interrupted by Undine. Kit and Undine battle, to which Donovin helps at the end once he recovers enough from the rape. Jenavee and Rena's waters have broken.

36. Birth of Jenavee and Rena's children. Complication with Rena's birth.

37. After Jenavee and Rena give birth to their kids, they head over to the center once again to get a full checkup by the nurse. Description of infants and their inherited traits to Donovin being their father.

38. After passing through the marshes, Donovin and company stop for a minute to rest, only to have a Gentleman come out and desire that Donovin sell him the Shiny Riolu to him. The situation devolves into a two on two battle to which the Gentleman uses a Vespiqueen and a Beedrill to which Donovin chooses Undine and Samantha.

39. As it turns out (Thanks to the rain washing away his disguise), the Gentleman turns out to be a young trainer by the name of Andrew. Feeling disgusted with the failure of his Pokémon against Donovin's, Andrew decides to give up and throws the two's Pokéballs away. Donovin takes it upon himself to help the youth and points out that the honey that Vespiqueen make is good for human consumption and to that can be sold for a tidy sum.

40. Saturn makes another appearance and Donovin is gravely hurt.

41. Switch to the real world and how Kristy was able to once again save her big brothers life as well as get her own DSi

42. Now that Kristy has her own DSi, she uses it to talk to her brother and update him on what caused him to be injured/ill. In that conversation, Jenavee buts in and in that Kristy and Jenavee get to talking. After a few days bedridden, Donovin decides to stretch his legs and heads out to the trophy garden to enjoy some time to himself, only to feel Kit's Pokéball poke him in his side and decides not to put off/help Kit's condition any longer.

43. Switch perspective between Donovin and Kit a bit. Love scene between Donovin and Kit.

44. Now back on the road again, Donovin sets his sights on Hearthome city. The only problem with that is Undine is feeling a bit neglected and not praised for her beauty, to which she demands she be put into a Beauty Contest. Reluctantly Donovin believes that it would be for the best but during his study of the Contests he comes across a problem of the Dance portion of the Contest.

45. That night; after arriving in Hearthome city, Samantha awakens Donovin and demands/pleads with him to take her to the Lost Tower and search for her son. After arriving at the tower and searching for quite some time, Samantha wails in despair at not finding her son. In that a Goth like kid comes up to challenge Donovin and Samantha to a battle, to which he calls out a Haunter.

46. Samantha realizes that the Haunter is in actuality her son and to which the two get to talking. Realizing the switch in power the Goth boy decides to take the initiative and call out his other two Pokémon (Duskull & Banette) to demand that Donovin hand over all his money. In defense of Donovin Samantha and Haunter step up to the plate and to that battle against the Goth boy's Pokémon. After the battle Donovin releases Samantha so that she is now a free ghost and returns to the Pokémon center.

47. The next morning finds the group out training for the contest and to which had stopped for a brief bit for lunch. In idle conversation the talk begins to turn on over to Kit and how she seems to have mellowed out and is back to her normal self, to which Jenavee and Rena begin to press Donovin on how he was able to help Kit with her heat. After the whole training session Donovin heads off to fulfill the promise to Undine and bake up a large batch of Poffins, but along the way back he meets up with someone her doesn't expect.

48. Donovin has a long conversation with the person, that he never thought to actually meet in the game, but eventually the person says that they have to go and to that disappears around a building. During the night, Saturn has returned to Team Galactic headquarters to have them see to his injuries. The next morning Donovin has a bit of a pep talk with his team/family and confirms that not only will Undine be participating in the contest, but also that of Rena and Jenavee.

49. Donovin checks in with the receptionist and is now entered into the Coordinator Contest. Undine is up first and to that displays her skills in the Beauty contest.

50. Pokémon contest to where Jenavee, Rena, and Undine participate in (Long chapter that took four submissions to post).