Castle In The Sky. Poem.

Story by teachmehowtodebkeh on SoFurry

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#9 of Poems

Its not done. Believe it or not, its just my second day with it and I dont know how to continue it.

There is also an art behind it ;)

all lines have 7 words.

Stanza 1: 4 , 3 / 3 , 4 / 3 , 4/ 4 , 3. ("numbers" number of words "," where there is a comma "/" new line.

Stanza 2: 7 / 3 , 4 / 3 , 4 / 7.

I still plan on making it longer.


Up on the caste, in the sky.

A place made, for you and I.

A kingdom free, from any lies.

A world be seen, for eager eyes.

Drawn beyond the lines of reason.

A blue world, set for relaxation.

The perfect weather, for every season.

Never did this kingdom have limitation.