Bui's New Slave

Story by TiranMaster on SoFurry

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A quick request from a friend during my stream. =)

Featuring my friends niven and mishterbuizel

Niven is just a regular jolteon, though he won't stay like that for long when he meets an odd Buizel named Bui...

I hope you all enjoy! ^.^

p.s. I'm so sorry for the lack of stories as of late, I've had so much crap thrown at me... >.


Niven the jolteon a member of a Pokémon rescue team, hummed to himself as he walked down the forest path, as he walked little sparks of electricity jumped between his quills. The forest buzzed with activity as ledian and ladyba flew overhead and other Pokémon walked in the underbrush.

Niven's reason for walking through the forest was that he needed to get back to town to meet up with his friend Tiran the Umbreon, having finished his own mission. Niven blinked as he walked out from the shade of the trees letting the moonlight shine down brightly upon him, the jolteon stopped by a river which laid parallel to the path to look into the gleaming liquid. "It's a beautiful night..." He muttered to himself.

In the deep blue of the water, the lightning Pokémon could see fish swimming past him towards an unknown destination. Now that he was out of the forest, Niven was stunned by the sheer quiet of the world around him. Feeling parched, the jolteon lay down on his stomach and started to lap up water from the river.

Deep in the watery world beneath, none of the water types noticed save one. A buizel saw the jolteon dipping his head into the water and a sly smile spread across his muzzle, his whiskers twitching mischievously.

After taking a nice cold drink, Niven picked his head up licking water off of his nose and muzzle. After resting for a while on the shore of the river he stood and shook off the dirt of the ground before taking off in the direction of town once more, not realizing that in the water next to him was a buizel watching him intently.

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Bui giggled to himself as he followed the jolteon, he had long been searching for a slave. He would've enslaved one of his fellow water types, but they all knew him. If one of the denizens of the water disappeared, they would sooner or later trace it back to him. With a land Pokémon, they wouldn't know that he was connected to it all. Now all he needed to do was pick the perfect time to ambush the unsuspecting jolteon, thankfully it didn't take long for him to find the perfect timing.

The jolteon above yawned long, staggering as if he had taken a sip of Oran berry juice. Bui grinned as his swimming speed increased and he rushed far up river before hopping up on land and shaking off water to wait for the jolteon.

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Niven couldn't stop yawning; he was extremely tired after a long day of traveling. Thankfully it wasn't too far away to get to the town. The jolteon's eyelids kept sinking as he walked, getting increasingly hard to see in front of himself. He was so tired that he nearly ran into another Pokémon, "Oh... sorry..." Niven muttered tiredly.

The other Pokémon chuckled lightly, "It's alright; you look really tired. Why don't you take a seat?"

Trying to shake his head, Niven muttered. "I can't, I need to get home." Even though he said this, his back legs suddenly collapsed out underneath himself.

The stranger let out a malicious laugh, "Good, it's already working."

Niven was confused, but he found that he couldn't move his head. "W... what did you do to me?"

Niven felt a hand pat his head, "Do you remember when you were taking a drink of water?" The jolteon muttered his affirmation, "Well, why you were drinking I used a very special toxin in the water that weakens your mind to mental commands."

Scrunching up his brow, Niven questioned. "So... you used a poison which makes it easier to make me do what you want...?"

The stranger chuckled, "Yes, and even if you don't know it. I actually whispered your first command to you while you were walking along the trail; that command was to become extremely tired. Which I'm sure to you, doesn't sound very great. But it actually helped me judge how easily you listen."

The jolteon tried to move his body but found that it wouldn't respond at all, "What are you going to do with me?"

Chuckling, the figure patted Niven's head. "Well that's easy to answer, but I think I'll keep that to myself for now. But for now, I want you to look up at me."

Once more, the jolteon's body reacted to the stranger's commands and he found himself looking at a confident looking buizel. "A buizel...?" He muttered in confusion before anger pulsed through his body, "You know I could just shock you right now and get rid of you?"

The buizel shook his head, "No, you can't. As I'm sure you've already figured out, your body will only do what I tell it to do. And your attacks are under the same restrictions, now jolteon. Tell me your name."

Niven was about to blow him off but his mouth acted without his permission, "My name is Niven."

Nodding the buizel paced around him, "I like that name, though I think the name slave works better."

Confused, Niven tried to crane his neck to look at the buizel but as always. His body refused his commands, "What do you mean slave?!"

Ignoring his question, the buizel pondered. "No... I think the names Slave Jolteon would be better, which do you like better Niven?"

But the jolteon wasn't listening; now he was try his best to get away from the insane buizel. "Leave me alone!"

The buizel wasn't easily detracted though, "I think Slave Jolteon is a fine name. Alright Niven, from now on you shall no longer remember your name nor will you respond to that name. You shall be Slave Jolteon." Niven tried to clench onto his old name, but a moment later it was gone. Now he was Slave Jolteon. "Now, what is your name?"

The jolteon tried to resist, but it was out of his lips before he could stop himself the words rushed through his lips. "Slave Jolteon."

The buizel chuckled, "Good, now. I want you to know who I am, my friends call me Bui. But you will call me master, for that is what I am. I am your master, do you understand."

It was like a switch, one moment Jolteon hated him. The next he loved his master, the one who had owned him since he was an Eevee. "Yes master." He said with reverence in his voice.

Bui grinned, "Good, now you would do anything for me. Is that not right Slave?" Slave Jolteon couldn't help but nod his head as fast as he could, now that the jolteon was a slave. It seemed that the old rules of not moving had been removed. "That is very good, now follow me slave. We have much to do tonight."

Slave Jolteon yipped in happiness as he jumped up, "Yes master!" The Jolteon followed close behind his beloved master, lying on the ground was a bell that up until a minute ago had been worn by the jolteon. It was all that remained of the jolteon known as Niven...