To Live Immortal
#1 of Chimera's World
This is my very first attempt at writing so please bear with me. I accept critique but please be kind. I happily accept the sandwich technique for critisism. Also, if you can offer help in helping make me a better writer, I will gladly accept it. My inbox is always open! I will be continuing this story to the best of my ability but I apologise in advance if I suddenly lose my muse. Yes this story will always fall under 'Extreme' content and graphic violence will most likely be prevalent. Alright, hopefully I have everything covered!
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This is the prologue to "To Live Immortal".
Few things to note, Chimera has extremely fast regeneration (curse) and as such he is 1) immortal, 2) eternally young in the age he was cursed in, 3) cannot physically die
Everything about his past will be gradually explained so don't worry!
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"More... More!" A vicious voice snarled, glaring obsidian claws ripping through the pathetic body of a coyote that had the misfortune of falling to its death. The hulking form of a winged, furred, scaled monstrosity of a creature devouring what meat and bone could be salvaged from the ruined form. Chimera wasted no time devouring every last morsel of the small beast aside from bowels and skin. There was so little of it though, the coyote was scrawny and ill tasting.
Tossing the body aside, Chimera, muzzle and paws stained in blood, paced around in his hiding spot far away from the hole in the caverns ceiling. "Never enough, I need more!" he snarled again, twisting around as if he was suddenly surrounded by enemies, baring his teeth with hackles raised. His voice echoed through the empty caverns, thin stalactites trembling from the thundering vibrations.
Flaring his wings angrily, he loosed his uncontrolled emotions and began to rush headlong into the rocky walls. Smashing his skull and the base of his horns repeatedly into them, any of them, whatever direction his body propelled himself. The stalactites fell like rain from the sky now, broken loose by his rage, many of which piercing his body unforgivingly. With a loud pained shout Chimera roared his agony in unrelenting fury. The echoes of his roar bounced through the caverns, amplifying the noise to levels not even he could bear to stand as he collapsed on the ground, bleeding profusely from his wounds.
Many of the stalactites had hit major organs, but he did not die. Rather, the large needles of rock were forced from his injuries almost as quickly as he had acquired them. His body regenerated the damaged flesh, the lost blood, an endless cycle that gave him infinite youth and immortality. With a miserable groan he felt muscle and tendon stitch back together. The dizziness from the loss of blood disappearing, skin scabbing over before that too healed, fur regrowing with not a scar to be seen beneath.
Chimera grunted a few times in his heavy pants as he recoiled from the exhaustive process. But there was no reprieve from his madness as a startled deer bleated in panic and pain, finding itself knocked around as it descended down the hole. His roar had caused a nearby herd to startle and one unfortunate individual descended with the loud breaking of bones and cries of hellish pain.
The deer, a doe, landed with a horrendous thump and crack, its broken legs bouncing from the impact. Its body was flatter than it should have been, the left half of its ribcage sunken in, shattered. The dying female continued its cries weakly as she tried to lift her head up, sensing Chimera's rather hungry presence nearby.
Chimera looked hungrily at the creature, but in this instance it was not for food. It was autumn, so the deer were in heat and the doe's fleshy lips inflamed with needy lust to breed. Upon seeing such a tantalizing sight a massively large erection sprouted in quick time from its furry sheath. The long pointed dick twitched in anxious lusty need, precum squirting like water from a faucet down his shaft onto his large furry ballsack.
His predatory instincts kicked in and, like a savage beast, he lunged upon the dying creature, who bleated a terrible shriek of fear. He was completely feral, there was no sentience within him to feel sorry for the creature as he thrust his cock hard into the doe's sweet folds. She was young and by her size, possibly unbred which drove the ecstasy of the burning heat rushing through his loins to even higher. The doe cried out again, endlessly as her breathing became ragged. It was any wonder she was still alive as he began to breed with her.
Chimera's breathing became rushed, laboured, raspy as he grunted and growled, his large form towering over the deer. He brought his head down to its neck and quickly took it in his maw, clamping down hard into its succulent flesh. The deer gave a final shrieking noise before death took it. But he didn't stop. He pounded hard into her, crouched low as he fucked her crumpled broken form. His thick veined member thrust hard, sliding out till there was little more than his head before shoving it with all his strength back into the animal.
His pace was quick and hard, his cock fitting snugly into her, causing each slap of his hips and balls against her form to create a loud wet smacking noise. With each thrust he ripped her vaginal walls little by little, blood, still hot, mixing with what juice her body had produced and his own precum. He shoved harder, harder, frenzying as he sunk his claws deep into her shoulder and back for grip. He could feel the tear growing larger, splitting open before his pointed tip. God yes!
The pressure began to build quickly within him. He could feel his seed rising up into the hilt of his erection as his shaft slid as fast as his legs could possibly go in and out, in and out. Blood and juice dripped out from the deer's pussy in increasing amounts, more blood than anything right now as the barrier between him and her lower torso grew thin. He flapped his wings furiously, tail slapping the ground hard in quick repetition as his body began to spasm from the oncoming orgasm.
His jaw bit down as hard as it could in one forceful movement with a loud feral grunt, shearing through half the deer's neck as his hips buried himself to the base of his knot, balls almost crushed against the animal's backside. His final thrust ripped his cock right through the doe's walls and into her torso where the head mingled with bruised bleeding organs.
The feeling of her walls giving out before him sent a startled but satisfied pang through his body. His pupils grew small, as small as they could from their dilated state and a loud roar of pain and lust, even louder than his earlier one rang through the caverns. His knot enlarged swiftly, ripping her flesh even more than he already had as it locked him in place. He shot a long single rope of hot white semen into the deer's torso, filling her chest cavity with his seed.
The echoes of his roars sent Chimera's already insane mind to a whole other level and his roar only grew louder from there. He couldn't stop, he came and came and god it was more painful than anything he had ever experienced, like his erection was going to burst open. He hung his head stiffly down and raked his claws down the body he was now completely love locked with, slicing the flesh open. Blood, various body fluids, and thick white semen pouring from the wounds as he sliced clean through into her chest cavity.
After a few minutes his orgasm finally began to die down, the entire contents of his balls completely and utterly spent into the corpse he had just raped. His shout faded into an exhausting pant, his heart pounding hard, making his chest ache as his lungs and throat burned. He had no time to think, to regain sentience after such a bestial act, his body was far too spent to keep conscious and he collapsed into the pool of fluid, blood, flesh. A dreamless sleep quickly took him and his unconscious form twitched violently from its exertion.