A Vampire's Kiss

Story by Nevermore_Raven on SoFurry

, , , ,

This is my first written story, it was done as a commission idea for Vampireboy.

If you like it, (as of today) I still have 4 spots open for story commissions. If you would like one, PM me and we can talk.

Thanks

SC


The year was 1229. Jonathan had just lost his estate and all of his money in a foolish game of poker. As he was just about to jump from a nearby bride, to end his own misery, a wildly handsome stranger wearing a long black trench coat and formal attire appeared and offered Jonathan a choice. He could help him to kill him and end his self loathing misery or give him a life beyond his wildest dreams and fantasies. "No rush!" The stranger said in a rasping tone, explaining that he would be back the next night to hear his decision. "Meet me at the open field behind the farm tomorrow night."

Jonathan went to stay at a local Inn that night as he had lost his estate. "Just one night please ma'am" He said to the maid who stood behind the bar. As the maid guided him to his room, he began to think. "What could a stranger do to make my life better? I guess just a house and a job would be better than the slump I'm in.". When he arrived at his room, Jonathan removed his shirt and stared at himself in the mirror. He wasn't a hugely built gentleman but average for his age. When the man finally retired to his bed, he fell into a deep sleep quickly without even realizing.

Awakened the next day by the same maid who brought him to his room, he was almost as surprised as she was when he sat up. "Terribly sorry sir" Said the maid, cleaning up the glass she broke in shock. "What is the time?" Asked Jonathan, not caring that the maid had broken his glass. "Half an hour past Four sir" The maid replied in a startlingly fast manner. Shocking the man into fanatic consciousness. " Thank you for the night but, I must be going now." He put the last few coins from his pocket onto the dresser, thanked the Maid and left down the stairs and back into the outside world.

That very night, from Seven PM, he waited for the formal man to arrive in the field behind the farm. Jonathan turned to look back at the town and as he turned around, he saw the formal man stood in front of him. "How'd you get here so fast?!" Jonathan asked. "I have my ways my friend" Answered the mysterious man in his rasping voice. "I believe I never introduced myself, my name is Daniel. And you are?" He looked toward his company with a tilt of his head. "Jonathan sir, Jonathan Melgrave." "Well Jonathan, have you made your decision? A life beyond wonder or your own dark demise?"

"I wish for a new life" Jonathan said quickly after virtually no hesitation. "A wise choice my friend" Daniel growled as the irises os his eyes began to glow a ghastly yellow. He stepped closer to Jonathan, opening his mouth and revealing two large fangs inside his mouth. As he drew closer to him, he tilted his head, taking hold of Jonathan's neck and biting down on the left side of his corotid artery. Daniel began to drain the blood from his new friend's neck, slowly at first but becoming faster and faster. "What's happening?" Jonathan muttered before his eyelids closed as he drifted in and out of consciousness. Daniel bit down on his own wrist and placed it close to Jonathan's mouth. He began to take in the blood from his wrist until he finally passed out. Within minutes, Jonathan awoke thirsty for more of what he tasted. "Good, you're awake" Daniel said standing up next to his friend before helping him to his feet. "There is an inn not far down this road, lets go grab a bite there, shall we?"

Upon reaching the inn they were greeted by a young looking teen boy dressed in a shirt and formal trousers. "Good evening gentlemen, how may I serve you tonight?" "2 beers and a private room for me & my friend here. Thank you my good boy" Daniel said. "Of course sirs" Replied the teen. He quickly showed them to a rather posh looking room complete with a four-posted king size bed. "Your drinks will be bought up to you shortly." Daniel stopped the teen and took hold of his arm. "How about I taste your kiss before you go?" "Me?" The boy asked. "Yes what is your name young man?" "Kieran, sir" Answer the teen. After a short hesitation he spoke again, "Well ok you seem like a nice enough man." Daniel & Jonathan sat down on the king size bed. Jonathan tapped the sheets between them to signal Kieran to sit down. Daniel slowly began to kiss Kieran's young and plump lips. The boy moaned, hints of lust on his voice. The man then bit Kieran on the left side of his neck, sucking his rich youthful blood from his veins leaving just enough for his heart to continue beating. Daniel turned to Jonathan and said, with blood on his lips "You should let my friend taste your young youthful lips" Kieran turned to Daniel and asked with the little strength he had left in him "Is his kiss as deep as yours?" "Deeper my boy." Replied Daniel as Jonathan leaned in to kiss Kieran's sweet lips and then bit in to his neck to suck the little blood that was left in the boy's veins. "Excellent first kill Jonathan." Daniel said as they drank their beers and left Kieran lying lifelessly on the sheets of the inn.

Two weeks later, while the two vampires were leaving their house for the nights kill, a young boy was seen by Daniel running through the streets looking for his little lost puppy. The boy knocked on the door with the large brass knocker and both Daniel & Jonathan opened the door, filling its frame with their large shadows. "Have you seen a white puppy sirs?" The boy asked in a small yet polite voice. Jonathan turned to Daniel and whispered into his ear, "Can I have him as my friend?" to which Daniel answered "Why not?" And they invited the boy in to their house, and brought him to a large fitted bedroom. Jonathan's eyes began to glow the ghastly orange shade and his fangs began to swell. "Look at the color of my eyes" Jonathan said hypnotizing the boy "Feel my bite" He said as he sank his fangs into the left side of the young boy's neck. Unlike the others he didn't kill the boy, instead he had transformed him into one of them.

Moments later the boy awoke. "What is your name child?" Asked Daniel, "Logan sir, my name is Logan." The boy and his new friends talked for a couple of minutes, Logan told Jonathan and Daniel that he was hungry for his own taste. "Of course you want to try and drink." Daniel said, he rang a bell and up came a human boy servant "Yes Masters?" The child said. "Wow!" He shouted as he saw Logan's black polished leather snow boots. "Could I try them?" Said the boy. "Yes, you can" Replied Logan huskily "But first, let me kiss you, you sexy little thing." Logan slowly kissed the lips of the boy before instinctively biting the left side of his neck. It all happened so fast that the servant didn't know what hit him, Logan was greedy and sucked his blood dry in seconds. Daniel scorned the child for his foolish mistake. "You must stop drinking their blood before the heart stops!" Daniel shouted to Logan. "I'm sorry Master" Replied the boy, hanging his head. "I was just SO thirsty. I won't do it again" After the three Vampires had finished their drinks and chatter, they all retired for the day. "Tomorrow, is a new day" Jonathan whispered into the ear of Logan as he drifted off to sleep.