test short story (feedback please)

Story by mattfoxlikesretro on SoFurry

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do you want me to finish this or should i stop before you guys get grossed out? there are going to be some seriously fucked up things in this story if i continue.


Camping, a short NSFW story, which contains some VERY fucked up stuff. BE WARNED. seriously, in the following paragraphs are some really fucked up fetishes and acts including BUT NOT LIMITED TO:

infestation bugs oviposition larvae mind control corruption NC/rape

(none of the above is in this 'test' chapter, but it will be in the full release)

also, this story is VERY graphic. it can be damn sexy if thats what your into, but if not then i suggest passing this one up

alright, here goes nothing

Kitsep was having the time of his life, he loved camping. he had loaded up his vespa with the basics, and headed out to anywhere. at first he just drove, not really caring where he ended up, and it was wonderful. he took the back roads, enjoying the warm, sunny weather. he had planned this trip very carefully, there was a high pressure warm front passing through the area, and he rode the wave of nice weather west, following the blue, cloudless skies. every now and then he would stop for gas, either filling up from the old metal jerry can strapped to the front of his scooter, or pulling in to one of the rare truck stops or small town service stations to replenish his fuel supply.

the first few days were wonderful, he pitched camp wherever he could, riding his scooter across the scenic countryside from dawn until dusk, pausing occasionally to stretch his legs and smooth out his fur, or if he saw something cool or unusual. near the end of the fourth day of his trip, he pulled over one one of his curiosity driven excursions. this time it was a farm house, or at least, what was left of one. the house itself was in fairly alright condition, but the surrounding structures were in wretched condition. there was a grain elevator, which seemed to have been split down the middle, the culprit seemed to be some sort of tree growing up the middle of it, as kitsep drew closer it turned out to be a large fungus, the offshoots having grown into the concrete/wooden architecture and literally ripped it apart from within. directly next to the silo/elevator was an old barn, leaning horrible and bowing down the middle, where most of the debris of the elevator had fallen.

off to the side stood a few other structures, all leaning or missing sections of the walls. a few rusted tractors and the massive husk of a stripped combine dotted the lawn, some of the antique machinery residing in the falen structures. as kitsep puttered around the somewhat tall grass of the lawn, something caught his eye, gleaming in the evening sun. a bit of chrome glinted in the partially crushed barn, partially obscured by dirt, fallen rafters and 40 years of dust and debris from the dilapidated structure. he parked his scooter and stood it up on the stand, the metal bar sinking into the soft earth a tiny bit. "huh... little more... moist than i was expecting in a place like this... and cold..." he padded through the grass, unaware of the eerie silence that was only noticeable now that the motor was shut off. the structure loomed over him as kitsep stopped in front of the hole where the large sliding door once stood. from this close the bit of chrome could easily be distinguished as a headlight cowl from an ancient automobile, surprisingly free of rust. a bit of dusty bodywork could be seen attached to it, part of a hood and a slightly flared fender, but the dust and derbies obscured the rest, combined with the setting evening sun.

looking to the sky, kitsep knew he had spent too much time admiring the farm and he had to get going, he could probably make another 30 miles before it was completely dark out. with that he turned to leave, not noticing the thick slime coating the ground and some of the foundation around the fungus infested building only a few yards away. nor did he notice the squirming larvae inhabiting the muck, the tall grass obscuring the creatures. resembling large grubs, the little bastards were about 5 inches long and 3 across at the midsection, crawling slowly around, starting to notice the warm-blooded fox waling away. unaware of the slimy critters watching him, kitsep was equally unaware of the dark eyes that had been watching him from the farm house ever since he had arrived. the creature saw him heading for the scooter and disappeared from the window. it had been years since someone had stumbled onto these grounds, and he wasn't going to let this one get away

kitsep rolled the scooter forward, the stand snapping back up into place under the scooter, covered in thick, black dirt. just as he was about to mount the bike he jumped as a deep voice called out "hey! wait!" startling him enough to make him nearly drop the scooter. "what? whos there?" he looked around, spotting a form looming in the farm house's side entrance, a small set of steps leading up to the doorway. in the shade of the setting sun the figure couldn't be made out too clearly, but it was obviously a canine, and quite a large one at that, the creature's head nearly brushing up against the top of the frame, his shoulders easily touching each side as well. "hold on kid, what are you doing out here? where are you going" kitsep flicked one of his ears, a little uneasy about this stranger, something didn't seem right... "i'm... i'm going on a cross country camping trip. why?" the creature gazed at kitsep, a thin smile forming on his lips, too far away for kitsep to notice "come over here, i've... got a cold and my voice is going out... its hard for me to yell like this." kitsep nodded slowly, the fur on the back of his neck rising a bit, his tail bristling slightly. "s-sure... who are you?" he wheeled his scooter closer to the stranger, entering the shade and stopping a few feet away.

"you said you were going on a cross country camping trip? well where are you going to stay? its getting dark out." kitsep calmed down a bit, the stranger, he could see it was a male wolf now, seemed friendly. "well yeah, i was going to go another 20 or 30 miles down the road, figured i'd set up camp along the side of the road." the wolf looked at the scooter and the small assortment of bags and cases strapped to it, again, something seemed off about him... his gaze was distant, almost as if he was looking past kitsep instead of at him "well why don't you stay here? i've got 4 spare bedrooms, i don't get visitors very often, and i can cook up a good old fashioned country dinner for you if you want." kitsep perked up a bit "really? i don't want to be a bother to you" the wolf chuckled a bit, his laugh was as deep as his voice, and made kitsep feel a bit more at ease. "sure, sure. it would be my... pleasure... to have you around. its been so long since anyone has visited me, i love having guests." kitsep smiled a bit and once again parked his scooter, pushing it up right against the house before he untangled a small suitcase from the rope holding it on "i really do appreciate this, its been a few days since i've slept in a bed. is there anything i can do in return?"

the wolf smiled at kitsep and shook his head "nah... i enjoy entertaining guests. come on in, i was just about to cook dinner" kitsep nodded, stepping up into the house, the larger wolf stepping aside to let the small fox through. as kitsep passed by he smelled a strong musk... a bit strange, but intoxicating just the same. he caught himself standing and inhaling it. rather embarrassed, he fluffed up and stepped past the wolf and splayed his ears "s-sorry... don't know what came over me." the wolf chuckled again, his grin going unnoticed by kitsep as he led the fox into the dining room. "sit tight, i'll handle dinner ok?" the wolf patted the fox on his head, that strong musk once again washing over kitsep. as the wolf left, the musk stayed. the entire house was permeated bu the scent. it didn't smell like wolf, it was something different... kitsep shivered a bit, leaning over the tail as his mind started to wander to strange places... and he caught himself with his tail raised, presenting himself to nobody. "what the hell am i doing? whats wrong with me?" he thought to himself, his fur fluffing up as he panted slightly, the scent triggering his body, a familiar tingle in his groin announcing the return of his estrus, he had gone into heat.

"n-no... n-not now..." he whimpered lightly, squirming in his seat and panting softly, waiting for the wolf to return. it was hot, unbearably hot. he had to take off his shirt, the wolf wouldn't mind, right? he would understand. he raised his arms without thinking, something in the back of his mind screaming at him to stop as his body moved without his consent, drawing his tee shirt up and off, depositing it onto the floor beside the chair. he slipped further and further into the strange heat, the scent still washing over his body. he had to cool off, he had to. he stood up, a bit dazed as he stumbled to a window, nearly falling over as his heat intensified, the crotch of his shorts growing dark slowly, his natural lubricant dribbling down his inner thighs as he fell even more deeply into lust. he tugged up on the window desperately, the glass not budging as he tugged, after a few tries his knees buckled and he fell to the floor. his paws moved of their own accord, tugging his shorts off and flinging them into a corner, revealing his cunny, the lips of his feral fem-bits puffy with arousal. he instinctively rolled on his back, pressing his paws to his crotch as he started rubbing at himself, slipping a few fingers into his snatch as he started to work at himself.

end test chapter one