Torn Prelude Part 1
#1 of Torn prelude
Torn prelude is a mini story about 3 or 4 parts long that gives you a sneek peek at Torn and and see parts of the story line that wont show up in the chapters. Be sure to checkout Torns offical site: http://ianrusso.tk/stories/torn/
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? Time change? @ Location@ 'Thoughts' "Talk" (author notes/explanation) " 'quote' " Inner dred
point of view
? 11 months after Dai sold his soul ?
@ In pocket dimension of: Acedia@
'Its been 11 months 10 days and 15 minutes since i sold my soul to save my brothers life and was left here. Unable to move in my weakened state due to my 'transformation'.That means for almost year with nothing to do but lay on the cool lava rock looking stone ground, and look at the old grandfather clock with a gargoyle on top, and count. For almost one year all i have done... is count. '
Why is this happening to me?..
? 11 months ago ?
"Now press your bloody finger right below your name!" Dark said obviously enjoying Dai's pain
I did just that, once done the parchment of bunch of red text appeared. The jackal snatched it away. Just then the right side of my upper back started glowing red. As it did this I felt excruciating pain which forced me to my knees when I looked up I was no longer in the hospital. I looked around, it looked like I was in a room made out of lava rock but the rock was cool to the touch. There was no door, but there was a old clock with a gargoyle statue on top. I look down and I realized that I'm no longer wearing any clothes. Then out of nowhere Dark appeared( Still wearing clothes), he walked behind me and grabbed my chin roughly from behind using his pointer finger and his thumb and turned my head from side to side.
"Hmm You have a nice body, and a valuable soul. But your mind is too pure Ill have to create you second conciseness for you to use when you slaughtering people for their souls." Laughed Dark
"No... I won't do it!" Yelled Dai
"Aww you have to, I own your soul, and thus I own you!" Dark Said pointing Dai's face toward his own
Dark took a black diamond looking rock and jammed it into my back. As I felt him penetrate my back I screamed in agony and tears ran down my face. As quickly as he shoved his hand into me it left me, and I felt the rock that was planted in grow tendrils. The tendrils rapped themselves around my spine and then my heart, all this hurt more than anything I had ever felt before. I couldn't even make a sound it hurt so bad. I was left there unable to move, all I could do was stare at the old clock.
? Present time ?
"Ahhh!" Dai screamed in pain as the rocky ground started to crack around him
"I am a monument to all your sins." Acida said
To be contined