The Prisoner's Revenge (Sequel to The Prisoner's Punishment)

Story by Pyro The Dragon on SoFurry

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#2 of Tickling Stories

This is a sequel to the first story I wrote. I had lots of fun writing a sequel to this and I hope you enjoy reading this one as much as the first one!


After serving his time in the dungeon, Pyro was finally free. Pyro is a gold dragon with white underbelly scales who stands on his hind legs and looks like a real dragon. Not too long ago he was released from the dungeon after having been tortured by Maxwell, the dungeon torturer. Maxwell is a black dragon with red underbelly scales who stands on hind legs and looks like a real dragon just like Pyro. On his way out, he had intercepted a sword from the dungeon. And there was one thing Pyro wanted...revenge.

It was on this fateful day that Maxwell got to take a day off from his job. It was days like this where he could walk around and enjoy the fresh air and great outdoors instead of working in a smelly dungeon. While Pyro was walking around in a field, he ran into a familiar face. It was none other than Maxwell, the dungeon torturer. Maxwell turned to face him and said "It's you...". "Yes, it's me" Pyro said. "Aren't you the prisoner I tortured before?" Maxwell replied. "Yes, I am. What are you doing out here?" Pyro asked. "Oh um...I'm taking a day off. So I can be away from that smelly dungeon!" Maxwell answered. "I see..." Pyro said, with a smirk on his face. "What are you looking at?" Maxwell asked. "Something I've been wanting to do to you..." Pyro said, stepping closer to Maxwell and tickling his underbelly scales.

Maxwell only blinked and looked at Pyro curiously. "I'm not very ticklish..." Maxwell said. "Aww you're not?" Pyro said. "Heh heh...no not really" Maxwell replied. "Dang...and I had plans for you." Pyro said, scratching under Maxwell's chin. Maxwell then blushed and couldn't help but giggle. "Tehehehehe! What are you doing?" Maxwell giggled. "So you ARE ticklish..." Pyro said. "Yes, kinda..." Maxwell replied. Pyro got an idea and unsheathed the sword he stole from the dungeon. "Where did you get that?!" Maxwell growled. "That's not important right now, is it?" Pyro said, carefully poking the sword on Maxwell's underbelly. In response, Maxwell yipped and jumped up. "Hey, don't do that! That tickles!". "I thought you said you weren't very ticklish." Pyro said. "I was only holding it in so you wouldn't try..." Maxwell confessed. "Now this should be lots of fun!" Pyro said, excited.

Pyro then got some rope and tied down Maxwell's feet so he couldn't move. "Oh you wouldn't dare..." Maxwell growled. "Oh I would dare." Pyro said, picking up a branch with his tail. "What do you think you're doing?!" Maxwell yelled. "Unleashing my vengeance!". And with that, Pyro brushed the leaves of the branch on Maxwell's underbelly scales. "No!! Hahahaha!" Maxwell laughed and squirmed. "Tickle, tickle, tickle!" Pyro chanted as the leaves fell off the branch, leaving behind bare twigs. "Hahahaha! That tickles!" Maxwell yelled while squirming more. "Hehe I know." Pyro giggled. He then put down the branch and tickled the soles of Maxwell's feet with feather. "Tehehehehe!" Maxwell giggled, kicking his feet. Pyro smiled and then also brushed the feathers on Maxwell's underbelly. "Tehehehehe! Why are you doing this?!" Maxwell yelled. "Because it's payback time!" Pyro said, laughing.

Pyro then proceeded to tickle Maxwell on the sides of his belly, near his wings. "Eeep!!" Maxwell squeed. Pyro laughed and tickled him hard under his wings. "No, no!" Maxwell yelled, laughing and tucking his wings in. "Awww..." Pyro giggled at Maxwell and started tickling his belly with his tail. "Hahahahaha! I give! I give! Please stop tickling!" Maxwell pleaded. Pyro ignored his plea and slid his claw on his underbelly. "Tickle, tickle, tickle, tickle" Pyro again chanted as he slid his claws up, down, in a zig zag, and a circle on Maxwell's underbelly. Maxwell blushed hard and continued to laugh. "Please! I beg you! Hahaha!" he again begged. "Very well." Pyro giggled and stopped tickling.

Maxwell panted hard, catching his breath. "You got me good, my old prisoner..." he said. "I sure did! I got you begging for mercy!" Pyro said, excited. "Indeed you did...no one would have guessed that I'm ticklish myself." Maxwell said, smiling. Pyro patted Maxwell on the back and said "You took it well.". "Heh...it was fun actually. In a weird sort of way." Maxwell said. Pyro then untied him and said "You can be free to go. Enjoy the rest of your day!". "I will. I just might see you around again. Heh, heh..." Maxwell said chuckling, then turning around and walking into the sunset. Pyro waved goodbye and turned to head back home, smiling and feeling satified with his rather fun and delightful vengeance he had wreaked upon Maxwell the dungeon torturer...