Disproportionate Revenge!

Story by RainierWolf on SoFurry

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Hmmmm. My first foray into posting on SoFurry! Hi all! I hope I get to know you folks more! If any of you find this honestly, legitimately offensive, message me and I'll move the age rating :3

Thanks all for reading!


Well, here we go. A repost of a story of mine that I posted back on FA a while ago under the name washington_timberwolf. Here's hoping it gets a bit of attention and critique here!

Hey! Look! Rainy posts something again! This time it's Vore related. My first foray into this kinda thing. If you have any comments or suggestions, feel free to comment! I won't bite! I'll just calmly swallow! ^-^

If people like it enough, I may continue it. But if that happens, it'll probably get a biiiiiit edgier. (Those of you who may know Lewis will probably run into a familiar feature of his character then! I'd also suggest reading from the description instead of a word document- I did some additional edits in here that didn't make it into the main document.)

Disproportionate Revenge

Lewis Llewellyn chuckled. The 14 year old cougar- covered still in what were his 'baby spots,' which were often the subject of ridicule and jokes, finally was having some fun. His latest experiment, a size reduction ray, was a complete success. The first test subject- an apple, was still sitting on his desk, albeit much, much smaller than before. His second subject, however, was a bit more personal.

"Ooooooh Mason. All those jokes are catching up to you now, aren't they?" He snickered, peering down at the kitchen counter. A Shiba Inu, the size of an ant, stared back up at him, shivering in sheer terror. "Stealing my homework, ripping it in front of me, you and your gang shoving me in a locker, pantsing me, throwing eggs at me, threatening to knife me for being a 'freak,' and now trying to break into my house when I'm home alone..."

"Look, I was just trying to see if you were here, okay? To apologize-"

"If you were going to apologize, I doubt you would have been reaching for my throat when I opened the door. I was lucky enough to get away!" Lewis growled. "Is your 'gang' with you?"

"N-no... I c-c-came alone" Mason stammered.

"So how does it feel being the small one?" the giant giggled, resting his head on the counter. "You know, I'm glad my brother taught me to stand up for myself. I'm sick of you guys tormenting me, and I thought you and the school would get that the last couple of times, but no. No one there listened. So I've been here, planning, building, and doing my work- maintaining my 4.0, while you make my life hell for me being who I am."

"I-I'm sorry"

"Bit too late for that." Lewis dropped a switchblade on the table, one he picked out of the now naked Shiba Inu's pants before he disposed of them. "If you were sorry, you wouldn't have brought this. What's your beef with me that requires bringing THIS, huh?"

"N-no, I always have it on me-"

"Not wanting to admit it huh? I'm not sure if you get this..." Lewis exhaled, his minty-fresh breath sweeping over the micro-sized bully. "But I'm bigger than you. And I can do whatever I want with you. Absolutely anything. And I've been getting ideas."

"I-ideas of what?"

"I'll leave that for you to find out." The cougar turned around, wagging his tail for a bit while he fetched a plate from a cupboard. "Mmmm... I'm hungry. Aren't you?"

"A little bit." Mason relaxed his guard, unaware of Lewis's plan. "So when are you letting me go?"

"Tomorrow."

"Why tomorrow? Isn't it a school day?"

"You'll see." Lewis grabbed a couple pieces of bread, then going over to the fridge and retrieving some lettuce, tomatoes, cheese, and bologna. Setting them on the counter, he began to assemble a sandwich. "Want a bite after I'm done with putting this together?"

"Nah, no thanks, I just ate."

"You sure? Come on over." Lewis grinned a bit. Mason slowly approached the massive sandwich, laying a paw on it before he found himself in Lewis's paw.

"Gotcha. Knew you'd be stupid enough to listen."

"I'm not stupid you little shi-" Mason stopped himself as the giant cougar purred, moving his paw over the sandwich.

"Little shit huh? Funny considering where you're gonna end up." Lewis chuckled, dumping Mason in between some tomato slices.

"O-okay Lewis... you can stop now" Mason gulped, then screamed in sheer terror, as the freshman put slices of bologna on top of him, then finished it with a slice of cheddar cheese. Once the bun came over the top of the cheese, Mason panicked, digging frantically trying to get out. "LEWIS!"

"Mmmm... I've got a yummy looking sandwich right here. Gonna send it aaaaaaall to my tummy." He patted his belly which grumbled in response. "Mom and Rainy always thought I was a strange eater, but oh well, this mountain lion needs his nutrients!" He started lifting the sandwich up, hearing the screams of his former bully inside, as he took a massive bite, he heard a bloodcurdling scream. Mason wasn't injured, but thoroughly scared out of his mind now.

"LEWIS! LEWIS DON'T- DON'T-"

"Don't what? I'm showing you the same remorse you've shown me since 6th grade." He chewed some more, and swallowed. Mason could see the lump travel down his throat. "And now for bite number two..."

"No- nononono, this isn't happening, this isn't happening! LEMMIE OUT!"

"Silly food, you're not supposed to talk! You're supposed to go in my belly!" Lewis taunted as he placed the sandwich in his mouth. Mason looked around, feeling the humidity, smelling the young fellow's cleanly brushed chompers, and finally, despite all attempts to avoid it, inadvertently tasting a bit of his saliva. Lewis's teeth sliced through the sandwich, leaving Mason trapped as he was batted around, lightly chewed, and rolled into a ball of bread, veggies and meat. He felt the ball of food he was in being stored in the cougar's cheek.

"Oh, by the way, I took antacids earlier. You're not gonna die. You may feel a bit of a burn. I can't bring myself to kill someone, even someone as horrible as you." Mason breathed an immense sigh of relief. Soon- reality began to set in. If he wasn't gonna digest, then he'd have to be-

"Nonononono- Lewis, lemmie out, Lewis, Lewis, LEWIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS!" he screamed as the bolus was swallowed, feeling the squeeze of the esophageal muscles on his way down- even in certain places that aroused him slightly. He plopped into the teenager's spacious belly, rolling around until he finally came to a rest.

"I guess they're right when they say: 'Revenge is a dish best served cold,' aren't they, Mason?"

A door swung open.

"We're home, Lewis!" His mother and Rainier walked in through the front door of the house, carrying groceries. His mother noticed his rather excited smile, blissfully unaware of what her son just did.

"Why are you grinning, Lewis, happy to see us come home? Did you eat?"

"Yes I did mom. Had a rather nutritious sandwich not too long ago." He belched loudly, eliciting a chuckle from his mother. "Excuse me."

"That's my boy. What else did you do?"

"I found out I'm gonna be giving someone some biology help at school tomorrow" he grinned, patting his stomach while Mason beat on the walls of his bread-and-condiment 'cell,' trying to get out. "I think I could go for a nap right about now, Mom. That sandwich really took it outta me."

"Well carry in groceries first, hon."

"Aye aye mom!" he smiled as he energetically bounded outside to help his brother, rubbing his belly all the way.

Tomorrow would be a VERY interesting day.