When I saw you past the breeze.

Story by Xinnova on SoFurry

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I came to the realization that I've been doing things that everyone else wants for far too long now.

So I decided that today was me time, here I'm attempting my paw at a bit of a Haiku. Though this is honestly my first time trying such things, I just felt compelled to try it.

Done while listing to My December by Linkin park

Poetry @ xinnova2 xinnova2

Though I have to give credit to may825 may825 for giving me the idea a long time ago to try this. Thank you for helping inspire me to do something creative! <3

Comments are very welcome and appreciated, after all I need feedback! <3

Hope you enjoy!


When I saw you past the breeze- Written by Xinnova2

A cool breeze blew past the shores. A land of sea and beauty, one you loved so much. Love was found, when I met you.

A calm, warm breeze settled. The sounds of bells came out, echoing through the cove. Crying, the sound of a babe born.

Leaves fell, winters cold breeze. New beauty, a snows fall covered the land. Bitterness settled, a cold man's heart.

Moisture rose, a fog thickened. Everlasting love changed, turning into hate. A blind man's greed, never fulfilled.

A sound of crashing wave, no breeze came. Longing to escape, an old man wants out. A young child torn, a family broken.

Thickening fog, moisture still rising. Wife's freedom, escape from the pain. Death, the end of the beauty.

A gentle storm, darkness falling. Tears of a broken man, desire to end the pain. A young child's cries, a mother mourned.

Skies clearing, the fog remains. A child's escape, a father no more. The act of drinking, the husband's regret.

Sun filled sky, the breeze returns. A man's realization, the child of his wife still lives. A love renewed, a family reborn.