Who Coulda' Guessed? WIP!!!

Story by Marvin Foxe on SoFurry

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My latest story idea. WIP


So, long time for not writing anything worthwhile. Well, here I go. Its only slightly adjusted from the story from an actual event that occurred during one of my off weekends. A close friend from the north came and visited some family and I stole some of her time for myself. It was well worth the theft.

Disclaimer: the only ones that should even be reading this should be 18 and up, this will end up to be surprisingly/unexpectedly naughty. If you are not legally allowed to read this or not morally obligated to read any part of this, navigate away from this site. You obviously got lost on your way to Nyan Cat. If you are here just to enjoy the dirty, sweaty, illicit activities that are generously detailed forthwith, stay and read! I thought I would write this out as a gift to my fine furry friends that got my nethers stirring in times of need. Now, I return the favor. Please enjoy and feel free to comment.

As I was driving up the extremely windy mountain road that seemed to just continually climb ever upwards in to the clouds, I was tearing around the tight switchbacks. Tires screeching and the engine groaning in my sad looking Chevy pickup, my shirt was off and my windows were rolled down because the AC was broken and the window never fully rolled up.

A huge grin bloomed across my all white muzzle as another breath of the moist air filled my lungs and the wind blew across my bare chest. The smell of green growth and living soil filled my nostrils. Me being so used to recently residing in the harsh deserts of Southern California made me appreciate the smell of growth all over again. Another screeching switchback and another car honking as I blow past it, I was in a rush, I was late for my date. I told her I would be there around 7 and it was 6:50 with 20 minutes to go. Not wanting to be late to seeing this beautiful female after many years of not seeing her physically was a definite must. Also not trying to seem like a bad guy in front of her family was a secondary. The road narrowed as I reached the 5000 foot elevation. Blind corners on a narrow road, not my strong suit. I was getting close to my final destination, as said by my GPS system. I decided that this was the time to slow down and put a shirt back on. I took a swig of mouthwash and sprayed on some body spray. Checked my hair, groomed my muzzle fur a bit and removed some eye goop missed from the last time I checked. I took a deep breath as my heart increased in pace, I could sense I was close.

I pulled up into a cul de sac with an "A" shaped log cabin on the right and a very modern house with a huge deck on the left. The flag on my GPS told me it was the cozy looking log cabin. I checked my appearance one more time before departing my beat up truck. On my way to the front door i realized how much I liked the Cabin. Little details were made everywhere to just prove how natural the surrounding area was. The wood siding roughly de barked leaving small patches of bark and the stringy residue that is left debarking was still there. The heavy wrought iron latch to the front gate, the fence posts made from small branches lashed together with strips of bark, the smell of pine and moist soil permeating the air. I finally knocked on the door of the cabin, surprised by the sturdiness' of it. A wagging Golden Retriever opens the door. The look of age evident but not so much so, a warm smile and blue eyes that just emanated creativity and interest in the world. I couldn't help but smile back. The initial look at the cabin was brief but there wasn't much blocking the view, there was a small sitting space made up of a small couch and a high backed chair with ornate floral designs in the wood of the supports. The kitchen was small but it was completely open to the rest of the room, the counter came out away from the wall with a few stools around it at one end. The wall facing away from the road was made up of large panes of glass looking down the hill and into the distance. The high ceilings and the abundance of windows made the whole place seem a lot bigger than it was. There was a loft and a hallway leading to the rest of the house.

"You must be Marvin!" she exclaimed, "I've heard so much about you! Come in, come in! Kayla is in her room getting ready."

"W.. Why thank you!" I stammered, surprised by the amount of energy that she permeated. "You seem to know me but..."

"oh, im sorry! Where are my manners?" she thrust a small hand out interrupting me, "I'm Aunt Marianne, Kayla's Aunt Marianne"

"Well, its nice to meet you Marianne" I returned the handshake warmly, still smiling from her general exuberance.

"KAYLAAAAAAA, HEEEEEESSSSS HEEEEERRRREEEEE!!!" She, startled me with the loud and random shout. She turned back at me and offered an apologetic grin. There was a loud crash coming from the hallway and some angry muttering as she turned around the corner.

The End! Feel free to comment, or even better, let me know what i can fix!