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Well, I was finally able ta finish this. Seemed like everything was tryin ta get in the way. Even the weather was tryin its hardest ta slow me down....Most of it was probably because of a small depression I've been going through....Still am actually, umm....anyway, this is was why I had ta wait until now ta post it....& now I'm ramblin for some reason, LOL. Anyway, this chapter isn't part of the "The Hitchhikers" series, (Officially) since its almost entirely fantasy, but what happens between Esby & both the school, & Jonwolf, are the extra's that weren't mentioned in the series. I'm still thinkin of how it'd be part of the series so this may change. Anyway, since this started out as a school assignment that never got turned in, not ta mention the adult twist I've recently added to it, hopefully it gets what it deserves here on Sofurry. I'll put more after the story so until ya get that far, Enjoy!!!

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The Hitchhikers

Fantasy Chapter - Her Worst Idea, EVER!!! (Uncensored)

Her name is Esby, and her story begins now. She had a great life. One that included a semi-decent job, a boyfriend, a family that took care of her, and friends that loved, adored, and cherished her. Other than that, she was one of the most beautiful students in her school. She is a cougar, and her burnt-orange fur was one of the finest pelts anyone could have. Lucky for her, the pelt was all hers. Atleast, that was before that incident several years ago.

This goes back to her Junior Year of High School. She had just transferred to the school that her boyfriend was going to. His name is Jonwolf. She wanted to be closer so she could see him more often. Once she was at the school, she saw a different side to things though. As usual with new students, she figured she would try to fit in. This meant that she would have to talk to the gossip-girls, (or so they were called, not including the term "slut-girls" in which some of the students considered them; Although, that term was never actually said out loud out of fear) of the school to gain info on not only the school, but the people within it. However, some of the info she was given wasn't what she expected. This info forced her to think for the rest of the day so she could make a decision the next morning on how she would try to fit in.

While laying down in bed and waiting for sleep to overcome her, she thought of something. Instead of keeping her mouth shut, she ended up asking a question that had come to her. "How am I suppose to fit in if I've only been here for one day?" she said out loud to herself; hoping to think of the answer in the process. Shortly after asking her question aloud, her room suddenly became very hot. She felt as if a fire was at her doorway to her room. Sweat began to erupt from her pores, mixing with her fur and cover her body as she began panting.

"How far would you be willing to go to get an answer to your question?" an eerie voice suddenly asked. "Who are you? What do you want?" she asked back a bit frightened as she pushed herself back against her pillow. Her fur heated up even more as a ball of flames began to appear in midair at the doorway to her room. The ball of flames began to grow in size, and changed its shape until it filled her doorway. The flames stopped growing, but its shape kept changing until it began to take the form of a dog-like figure. It wasn't until the flames turned to fur that Esby realized what was in her room. Her questions weren't answered yet though.

The figure turned out to be a pit bull, but its extra features scarred Esby. The pit bull had bright red flames flowing away from its eyes, nose, and mouth. Its' claws looked just as sharp as razorblades. The pit bull was leaning against the doorway to Esby's room. She could tell it was a male, but wasn't sure of what was about to happen. It was looking directly at her (Either that, or her body; she wasn't sure) with bright, piercing, red eyes as it stood before her. Esby had looked this creature over and cowered in fear as she pushed herself further into the back-bored of her bed. It wasn't until she looked his face over that tears began to form in her eyes. She could see those flaming red eyes, those creepy scars that stretched from the side of his eyes to the side of his chin, and that bone-chilling smile he had stretched across his muzzle.

"I'm known as the Dealer, and I know the answer to your question," he replied with an eerie grin on his face. As he drooled, drops of liquid fire dripped from his mouth, stopping midway to the floor as they burned themselves out. "A.and w.what might the a.answer b.be?" she asked with fear in her voice as she stuttered. "The answer would be to use the information you got from those girls to your advantage," he replied with a mischievous grin.

Esby thought about the answer she was given and ended up with another question instead. "How am I to use such information if it will backfire no matter what?" she asked with more courage than before. "If you make a deal with me, I will make sure nothing happens to you as your idea of fitting in, comes true," he said as he crossed his arms together with his right shoulder leaning against the doorframe. Esby wasn't sure if she should trust him, or try to find another way to fit in with this new school. All she knew was that she wanted to fit in no matter what. It was then that she began to fallow the road to disaster.

"What would it take to make such a deal with you?" she asked with a hint of seriousness in her voice. He smiled a bit more and then said, "It would cost you nothing but your soul." "So what would the deal be exactly?" she asked a bit quickly with a small grin. "I get your soul within time, and your idea of fitting in becomes reality; just as long as you follow the advice of those girls that is," he replied as he gave her the offer. She probably thought she was dreaming for such a simple deal to make her fit in at school. I say this because of what she said next. "Deal, but you should know that it may be awhile before the deal can be completed" she replied with a grin of total confidence. "Now THAT, I do know," he replied as he stepped forward. This was her biggest mistake, and yet she didn't see it, figures. When he was right next to her bed, he moved his right hand forward as if to shake her hand. She moved towards him and shook his hand. "Deal," he said as they shook hands.

The instant she shook his hand was when she suddenly became scarred. His body turned into flames, her hand was glowing, and the room suddenly got so hot and bright that she had to shield herself from such intensity. When the room went back to normal, everything in the room was the way it was before the creature showed up. "I must've been dreaming....but why would I dream such a creature....I guess I could use the advice and see what happens," she thought to herself as she decided whether or not to use the info from the girls or not. Soon after laying down, thinking of what to do exactly with the information, she fell asleep.

When she woke up, she turned off her alarm, got out of bed, and began to get ready for school. Her fur was matted in places from sweating last night, SO OBVIOUSLY, a shower was in order. She took off her nightgown from last night, and headed for the bathroom. She grabbed a towel along the way before locking the door behind her. By now your probably wondering why she didn't wait until getting into the bathroom before getting undressed. Well, ya see, she lives with her mother, & cousin. Her stepfather is already at work by the time she gets up, & her little brother didn't live with them all the time. He normally just visited them from time to time. Anyway, she stepped into the bathtub, placed the towel over the curtain rod, closed the curtain, & began taking her shower. It didn't take long for her to work the suds from her shampoo into her fur. The water moving across her body; the scent of her shampoo; the warmth of the steam from the water; It was all she could do just to maintain her composure as her slit began to drip its nectar. She hadn't messed around for days so that wasn't the best thing she had ever done.

After rinsing off, she turned off the water, and got out of the tub. She grabbed the towel she had before, and began drying off, starting with her headfur. She took extra care of the inside of her ears, as to make sure her ears were as dry as possible. She didn't want ta experience another ear infection like before. She found out that it was because she didn't dry off her ears after showering. Anyway, as she dried off, the water in her fur slowly soaked into the towel. She probably paid a little too much attention to herself in the shower when rinsing off though. I say this because when she was finally drying off a special area, she wasn't sure if it was ever gonna be dry. Atleast her conditioner gave her fur a good shine. Her fur almost had a metallic shine to it.

After getting her shower, having a bad hair day for 5 minutes after using a blow-dryer before adding gel to her fur, and getting dressed, she was ready to face what the day had to offer. She had made her decision, and with this being a new day, she would use it to execute a plan she thought of. Hard to believe she would actually use the information she had acquired, just so she could fit in. She probably doesn't even know or understand what the term "popular" actually means.

After she got on the bus, she put her plan into motion. While at school, she began to ignore Jonwolf. This was because he was the most hated & disliked person at this school. She knew that by doing this; that she would end up breaking up with him, which didn't happen until she made a phone call after school to tell him they weren't meant for each other, so it doesn't make sense if ya ask me.

Anyway, since the day she used the info she was given, (Along with the advice from the Dealer) as it stood, her popularity did sore to new heights. The downfall was what she had to do to get this far. She had ditched all of her friends and became friends with the popular kids. She was rude towards the kids that were disliked or weren't popular. She was like a star with the other popular kids. Atleast, that was until she went too far with the advice she was given.

Somewhere down the road as she went from disliked to popular, she had an idea that screwed up her life even further. Since she wasn't going out with anyone, she thought she could go out with someone she thought would be good for her. The bad part to this was that some of the people she wanted to go out with weren't always single. In the process, she broke up atleast 4 or so couples at the school, and was even tackled by one of the girls she had stole the guy from. What was funny and yet stupid about it was that the guys actually went out with her even though they already were with someone.

Because of what she had done, she was now known as a disliked person at the school. Her popularity was ruined because of her mistake, and yet she didn't stop making them. Many of the guys she went out with from here ditched her after they found out a few things about her. She tried to get back with her first boyfriend/A.K.A./Jonwolf, but ditched him a couple times to be with someone else. He realized how she had changed for the worst, but figured he'd give one more chance if she was good enough for it. Besides, Esby begging him these three times ta be back together had happened along the span of 10 years. They had broken up & got back together all 3 times, but she always turned everything he had ever said to her or done for her against him, saying it was his fault they were breaking up even though it was hers. She had begged him back 3 times before, & as usual, Jonwolf's soft spot for (people he had feelings for, who were crying while desperately begging) got the best of him. She said that they were meant for each other and that life had given them another chance at total happiness, so as usual, he took her back. Total happiness is exactly what it was ever since they got back together.

When that day had finally came; she loved it, and so did her boyfriend. Since he was her first boyfriend, and since she was his first girlfriend, they had a great time together. They even fooled around with each other. It was only a one-time thing, but it was something. Turns out that fingers can do a bit more than just touching. It was nothing exotic far as adult standards, but they loved it nonetheless. Everything was as if it were perfect, so they decided ta share more about themselves to each other, rather than only knowing what they already knew about each other. Since he practically knew just about everything there was ta know about her, it was just him that ended up sharing a few things about himself. He figured he'd test her on whether or not she had truly changed ta meet what she promised to him. Her promise was that no matter what, she would try her hardest ta be her old self so they could be together. That since they were meant ta be together seeing as life had put them with each other 4 times, she was meant ta be with him. His test was simple, tell her a secret about himself that only he knew about, and see if she keeps his secret or not.

That was the point in their relationship that flipped in a bad way. She took his secret the wrong way, and instead of embracing what he was, she threw herself into a twist, and lashed out against everything he stood for. Again, she had broken up with him, but not before telling his little sister, and eventually, the students at school. She felt stupid after awhile and figured she could get back with him with an apology, but the damage was done. Turns out that telling everyone that he was bi, (instead of letting him tell them himself when he was ready) wasn't the best idea. He'd never go out with her after the break up, (Especially after specifically telling her that he wouldn't be able to go through another break up). While she was at home, crying for her mistakes that she could have prevented if she thought clearly about everything, she yelled for the Dealer to come to her.

Since her parents weren't home, nobody could hear her except the Dealer himself. Of course, he did appear to her again. His fiery appearance had given him away as they stared at each other. "Why did everything go wrong?! You told me to use the information I was given, that you would make sure I'd be fine, & yet this happened!," she said loudly with anger and sadness in her voice. They glared at each other for awhile before he replied by saying, "The information you were given had nothing to do with stealing the loves of those around you. That was all you, and you alone; and is why everything fell apart." At that moment, she realized that it actually was her fault, but as usual, she would never admit to doing it, or that she cared about it. She had lied too many times for her to be able ta change at all.

She thought about the deal she had made with this fiercely demonic-looking creature, and what she had done. Her life was practically over, and could never change back. "Take my life....and my soul along with it," she demanded after realizing that her life wasn't worth living. She couldn't believe what he told her next though. "Why would I take your life, or your soul, when I'm having so much fun watching you screw up....besides, the deal changed when you made the wrong decisions within the deal itself. The deal now; is that you've ruined your life for what is mine now, you will not die until I allow it, you will find love but love will never find you, and if you mess with the lives of those around you as you've been doing lately, your life will tend ta get worse than it already is. Until I decide on what day you shall leave this world so that I may have some fun with you, you will keep living in the world you've created for yourself. See you in Hell, many years from now," he said as he turned to flames and left Esby's room. She didn't like the way he had said "fun", & had cried herself to sleep that night, and several nights after.

Since that day, she had been living her life just like the Dealer had told her. Only she still made the same mistakes that put her in this mess. Her mistakes have forced her to live a cursed life, and yet she wasn't trying to correct any of them. If only she had listened to commonsense, she could have just lived a regular life. Probably the same life as Jonwolf, but a better life than what she had now. Jonwolf had become well-known in the school, & after he started lifting weights, playing baseball, having fun in FFA, etc; he had actually become a popular student at the school. There will always be those that didn't like him at the school, so not everything changed, but the bad things that were going on at the school died down for the most part. As for Esby, as of right now, she just waits for the day that the Dealer will come and take her from her cursed life. Until that day comes, she will just live her pathetic and miserable excuse for a life that she had created for herself. The downfall to all this is that she had many years left ta live.

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Well, I hoped yall liked this chapter as much as I did writing it. I was hoping ta have this done & posted by the end of Febuary, but many things got in the way....some of these things are a bit hard ta bare, & a bit hard ta explain at times. Anyway, some of yall probably noticed more than just adult things added ta this version. My only answer ta that, is that the other version seemed too perfect ta change or add to it. While adding the adult twist ta this, certain things seemed ta change though. If your wondering why only a little of an adult twist was done ta this, well, I'd say that this was only ta give a small taste of what kind of writing I can do, & ta hopefully not change the meaning behind this story. Until later on, Catch yall later <(^_^)>