Bloody Red Sun of Fantastic L.A. : Part I Chapter VII

Story by Van Rorie on SoFurry

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#8 of Bloody Red Sun of Fantastic L.A.

So this is finally finished. I would have had it done yesterday but you know 420 and what not. Some friends and I ended up doing eight grams of Alaskan Thunder Fuck together and I don't remember anything but waking up in my bed. So hope everyone had a good 420, and what not. This is a happier point in the story, but it gets worse so yeah, be whatever. Also text that in bold is Deustschlish, and text that's in normal font is Snarl. If you don't know what those are go back and read the prologue. So I think that's it, comments and what not are appreciated. Hope you enjoy.


I believe in complete and absolute non-ownership of everything, and so I do not claim to own these characters but rather submit them to public domain. If you wish to use them feel free to do so in any way (though I would like to be notified if they are used so I could see that story or artwork). This is a work not by an author but by humanity as is everything man made.

Warning! The following content may be disturbing to some people. The following story will deal with Adult themes. If you find this Disturbing do not read. Warning!


Bloody Red Sun of Fantastic L.A.

Part I Chapter VII


Klyzab awoke when he heard the box start to open. He started to get up but then remembered that there was not enough space in the box for him to stand fully, so he continued to lie there. Light flooded the box and the front was removed. Klyzab thought that he should probably get out, but the box was safe, so for the moment he didn't feel any pressure to go outside of it. He heard strange noises coming from outside of the box, they sounded like the beings that had captured him, except that it was of a strained higher pitch and much more gentle. Klyzab stirred at the noise but still made no motion to leave his box. The noise came again, and at this Klyzab went outside of his small world in the box, if only to shut up whatever was making that noise.

The light was harsh at first, but Klyzabs eyes adjusted quickly to it, and he gazed up at the source of the voice. It was one of those beings which had captured him; only this one looked somewhat less threatening. It wore blue with green and brown underneath that, and it had black fur on the top of its head.

Klyzab stood up stretching slightly, and then found that the being in front of him was at least four times taller than himself.

The being reached out a hand to Klyzab, and Klyzab stood still in fear of what the being in front of him was going to do. He simply stroked Klyzabs head, and said some more of those words in to high of a pitch for his normal voice.

*"See it's not so bad out here, it must be a lot better compared to that box you were in." *

Klyzab didn't understand the being at all, but he didn't think the thing towering over him was dangerous. While still stroking his head, it reached into a pouch on whatever it was wearing and brought out a small loop of leather with a small metal circle attached to it. The being quickly fastened it around Klyzabs neck.

Klyzab felt the collar at his neck; it was firm, but light and breathable so it didn't bother him very much.

"Fredrick Francisco Chopin, that's your name okay. See it's even on your collar. I'll probably just call you Fred though. Do you like it Fred?"

Klyzab still didn't really understand what this thing was saying but he would try to figure it out. It seemed to Klyzab that this would probably end up being his new home for some time, but he didn't know for sure. The being stopped stroking his head, and started to move towards a door way across the room.

"Fred, come on don't you want to see your new home."

Klyzab sat there looking at him curiously. What did this creature want from him and why was he repeating that one word a lot.

"Fred come over here, you need to see the rest of the house."

Then something in his mind clicked that word he kept saying "Fred" that must be their word for his name. Klyzab then realized that the thing was calling him to follow, and so Klyzab got up to follow him. He followed him mainly because he was afraid that if didn't comply then those metal beings with painful weapons would come back, and then make him follow the nice creature before him.

Klyzab headed with this new being and entered into a large room with tiled floor. The large creature pointed again and Klyzab turned to see two bowls. One held water, and the other food. They both had letters on them, but Klyzab couldn't read their language so he didn't understand them.

The large being stood there expectantly and Klyzab took this as a sign to try the substance in the bowls. He ate out of the food bowl first and to his surprise the food was amazing. It tasted so savory and was insanely tender. He quickly tried the water and found that it had an almost fruit taste too it, and it was also delicious.

"I see you like the food Fred."

Klyzab turned his head quickly at the sound of his name wondering if he had done something wrong, but the creature just flashed his teeth at Klyzab and left the room quietly. Klyzab continued to eat until he had had his fill. He was happy for the first time in a while. This creature didn't seem to want to hurt him, in fact it was feeding him the best food he had ever tasted. Maybe this wouldn't be as bad as Klyzab thought it would be, maybe it would even be good.

After Klyzab finished eating he looked up to realize that the large being was no longer in the room with him. He was puzzled until he heard noise coming from the room next to the one he was in. He timidly followed the sound, still afraid that those larger metal creatures would come back if he accidently did something wrong. He went into the room with the sound and he saw something breathtaking.

The large being was resting on a couch but in front of the being was the most dazzling thing Klyzab had ever seen. It was a flat pane of what looked to by glass, and there was a picture in front of it that was moving. A moving picture, the idea of that itself would have amazed Klyzab, but it got even better. The picture in front of the glass pane was going out into the room itself.

A small tree was currently in the picture and Klyzab went to touch it, wondering what such a small tree must feel like. He reached out a paw to touch it. He leaned in and felt no resistance from the tree, so he fell onto the floor in a disorganized heap.

He heard the thing on the couch laugh at him, and was embarrassed and angry. He was also curious what kind of device was this, which could make moving pictures that weren't really there. His pondering was cut short when he felt to large hands lift him from under his arms into the air. He cried out in protest but was brought with alarming (to Klyzab) speed down onto the couch with the thing that was lifting him.

He was brought down onto the couch in a lying position which made him slightly scared. The large creature sat down beside him, and started to stroke his body. He petted Klyzab from his head all the way down to the base of his tail. The motion was calming to Klyzab as he started to slip into a light nap.

Klyzab awoke as the being beside him got off of the couch. Klyzab looked around and saw that the being was motioning for Klyzab to follow it. Klyzab followed it down a dark hall to a door which was cracked slightly. The man opened the door and went in, Klyzab followed him quickly. The room was obviously a bed room with all the furniture of one. The being pointed to a something in one of the corners of the room. Klyzab looked at and realized it was a giant pillow, or maybe a cushion.

Klyzab realized quickly that it was supposed to be his bed. That was fine with him; after all it looked comfy enough. Klyzab got on it and found he was correct the cushion was indeed very comfortable. He curled up in a ball, as that was his favorite sleeping position and watched what the being was doing.

The large creature was taking off whatever he had draped around him and was putting it in a basked in another corner of the room. Klyzab realized then that the being in front of him was male. The thing, now free from the stuff it wore, got into the bed and started to sleep. Klyzab lay his head down to do the same when he heard something.

He would hear the phrase very often, but wouldn't understand its meaning till very much later. The being lying on the bed spoke to him once more before sleep.

"Good night, Fredric."