Bloody Red Sun of Fantastic L.A. : Part I Chapter III

Story by Van Rorie on SoFurry

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#4 of Bloody Red Sun of Fantastic L.A.

So I got really board waiting for Paprika to finish torrenting so I wrote up Chapter three. This Chapter is more like what the rest of Part I is going to be like so if this is your kind of thing, right on. If this isn't your kind of thing then quit fucking reading it. Still no Yiff (again that will mostly be parts II and III). For all you Yiff fans though I am debating on whether or not to write this really smutty short story I've got a rough draft done on. If anyone's interested in that speak up now. Well that's pretty much it for now. Hope you enjoy.


I believe in complete and absolute non-ownership of everything, and so I do not claim to own these characters but rather submit them to public domain. If you wish to use them feel free to do so in any way (though I would like to be notified if they are used so I could see that story or artwork). This is a work not by an author but by humanity as is everything man made.

Warning! The following content may be disturbing to some people. The following story will deal with Adult themes. If you find this Disturbing do not read. Warning!


Bloody Red Sun of Fantastic L.A.

Part I Chapter III

"Help, someone please help me"! Klyzab yelled at the vastness of wherever it was he was being held. The place was enormous and he couldn't see any of the walls because it was too full with cages. He heard a voice above him shout urgently.

"Be quiet; if they hear you, well it's not a good thing".

"But where are we, I want to go home, I want my mommy". Suddenly the sound of footsteps penetrated Klyzabs ears.

"Shit now you've done it, you stupid cub". Klyzab saw one of those large metal beasts approaching him; it carried some kind of metal pole in its hands. The metal beast was at his cage, Klyzab went over to the side of the cage that it was one.

"Pleas, I want to go home". The metal monster simply slipped the first half of the par through the cage. Klyzab saw that on his end of the metal bar there were two small metal bumps protruding out from it about two or three centimeters. The bar suddenly tapped him on the side and he doubled over in pain. It felt like his body was on fire. He tried to scream out but his voice had abandoned him. Instead he just fell to the floor of his cage and writhed in pain. The metal tormenter just looked at him then quietly left, perhaps in search of new prey.

Sometime later Klyzab found the strength to get back up on his feet.

"No don't stand they don't like that. Just sit or stand on all of your limbs and don't talk, they hate it when anyone talks". The mysterious voice echoed softly from somewhere above Klyzabs head, probably from one of the upper cages above his own. He sat there for only a few moments before deciding to try to sleep. His head and body still ached immensely and he hoped sleep would help him.

His sleep was disjointed and restless. He could not find a comfortable position to sleep in and it was so hot in the building that his fur created an endless supply of sweat. He thought he dreamt of his mother but it might well have been of nothing.

He was awoken painfully with a sharp shock from one of the rods in the hands of a metallic monster. This one was accompanied by another with an odd set of straps with him. Klyzab in his post sleep and painful shocked daze was shocked once more by the rod to ensure that he wouldn't move when the two giant automatons opened his cage. While his mussels locked up and his body gipped in light spasms, the one holding the leather straps fitted them over him roughly. It was effectively a vest that limited his limb movement and as an added bonus a muzzle. Klyzab was quiet literally dragged from his cage across the hall of the building. Eventually he was able to stand, but only on all four of his limbs. The vest made it impossible for him to stand straight up. So he walked quad-pedal down the hall, his mussels still weak from the minor electrocution he had received. After what felt like walking a few kilometers they reached a set of doors. The doors had some strange markings on them which Klyzab could not understand. The hallway they entered into from the doors was long and narrow with numerous single doors dotting each side of it. He was quickly led into one of these smaller doors. He looked around him and was surprised, the room almost looked like a doctor's office his mother took Efuvno and him too. It had a small table and some general equipment around it. Suddenly Klyzab saw a sight that gave him an even larger shock than before. It was a large being, almost two meters tall with fur only on the top of its head. It had no muzzle and rounded eyes. It was presently taping at some kind of rectangle in its hands. The leash they had been leading him with was clipped to a stand next to the main table of the room. The strange furless creature made an unintelligible sound, to Klyzab at least, and suddenly he found himself being lifted onto the table. He was restrained on the table in such a way that he was crouching in quad-pedal manner. The furless creature walked over to him and tapped some more on his odd rectangle device. He then walked over to a counter that ran around the back wall of the small room. He pushed a few buttons on a small device there and then came back with what looked like a large stapler. He went behind Klyzab so he wasn't able to see what he was doing. Suddenly there was a sharp and intense pain in his ear. The pain was vastly different from the pain of the shocks of the rods carried by the metal ones. That pain was shocking and burning, with an aftertaste that made moving near impossible. This pain was sharper and more intense but also more shallow, lasting just a few moments before being replaced with a dull ache. His ear had a new added weight to it and it slowly dawned on Klyzab that he just had his ear pierced. He knew what it was because he had asked his mother about it once. The furless being then just seemed to inspect Klyzab, giving him a rough physical. After he was done feeling through all of Klyzabs fur and body he moved back over to the counter and opened a drawer in it. He brought back a small case and sat it down on the table beside Klyzab. He opened it to reveal an assortment of hypodermic needles. He picked up two from the case he laid the first one down and but the second one near Klyzabs left thigh. He pressed a button on the side and then Klyzab felt something seep into his body. The doctor put the used needle in a container containing medical waste. He then picked up the second needle and placed it on Klyzabs thigh again. He repeated the action of the previous needle but instead of feeling just a slight sting Klyzab began to feel drowsy.

Klyzab lie there silently giving in to the temptations of sleep, and possibly of sleeps half-brother death.