Winter's Palisade Chapter 1
#1 of Winter's Palisasde
The first chapter from a Novella i'm writing.
Criticism would be appreciated
Even as Nick lay there, Panting while clutching his abdomen,His thoughts were calm. He thought of his parents,Of the band, and of Matt. "Oh matt,Why?" Nick asked to no one in particular,He could remember the day's events clear as crystal. It all began with that morning..that fateful morning....
"Nick....Nick" A quiet voice whispered into Nicks ear urging him to awake from his peaceful slumber. "Nick" A little more forceful this time,Nick Begrudingly sat up to stare into the emerald green eyes of his secret crush(Not that Nick had the slightest idea to tell him) as he mused Nick from his newly awoken state. "C'mon Nick,We gotta hit the slopes before all the other skiers do" Cute Nick thought to himself, Maybe he should try something from this. "Fine,But can you carry me to the couch" Nick added to this statement,His trademark smirk which he could do like no one else. Matt's eyes shone for a brief moment before gaining a touch of mischief. "Ok,But you make the coffee,You make the best" He said said with a wink. As he slid his muscular arms around Nick,Nick felt the tip of his ears burn red. Didn't think he'd actually do it! Matt lifed Nick up from the bed,Nick still covered in the comforter, and slowly walked past his parents room,And then Matts, to the kitchen. An aromatic scent of coffee and peppermint jolted Nick out of his post-sleep haze. As he hugged matt closer,The muscular timber wolf gingerly lay Nick on the taupe couch. Nick was a wolf himself,But an arctic,Apposed to Matt's timber background,His fur was a white shade with a slight blue tint. Matt's was a more creamy color,Like coffee with lots of creamer. That was one of Nicks favor analogies. "Something wrong?" The question made Nick realize he had been staring at the bare chest of his sweetheart wolf. "Um..Nothing,Still want coffee?" He quickly said. "Of course" Matt said with a sly grin. As Nick walked to the percolator,His insides fluttered. Today's going to be a good day Nick thought to himself....
After making coffee for Matt and himself,They sat on the couch to enjoy the morning and watch a few things on the TV. About 10 minutes into this,A commercial came on advertising Trojan:Fur and Ice. Matt smirked at this and Nick giggle inwardley. Suddenly Nick felt a tingling sensation between his inner thighs and started blushing at this. No,Not now,Anywhere but here! He thought loudly to himself. Hoping Matt hadn't noticed yet,He quickly set his right foot on his left thigh,A common pose,Matt shouldn't be too curious. As the commercial rolled to it's end,Nicks thoughts quickly set themselves on the young timber wolf. Those musculed arms,That ripped chest. Unfortunate to him,He felt his entire face burn and his ears turn the shade of rose. He quickly looked down to keep his crush from seeing such a display. "Nick..You ok?" Matt asked with that tone of kindness only he could create. "Um..Yeah..I'm just a little cold,It snowing an all" He offered a weak smile and the sympathetic Matt accepted. "Then come here" Matt said with glee as he closed the distance between the two graciously. He quickly put an arm around Nick and then put the other on his stomach and pulled him into Matts embrace. OhmygoshOhmygoshOhmygosh,What do I do???! His thoughts were jumbled up,Contrary to what he was used to,Being in control of a a situation and offering witty remarks and intelligent comebacks. Matt's warm hands and smooth body offered a nice place for Nick to rest his body. "Just go with it Nick" Matt whispered quietly. As you wish He thought giddily. After pulling up a blanket over the two,Nick sat on Matts lap while they both "Adjusted" so there was little discomfort. After a few minutes of the Warm,Rhythmic pulse of Matts breathing, Nick began to feel sleepy. He wondered if he should just stand up and tell Matt that he didn't go that way,His parents would never approve of this. But if felt so good to matt,So...Natural and Right. He quickly decided what he wanted to do,And he would do it. He quietly nuzzled Matt in the crook of his shoulder,And lying there in that perfect moment,He fell asleep. As he lay there,Awake for a few more precious moments,He heard Matt whisper to him "Don't worry Nick, Just accept this,It's time you let go" Sounds good to me He thought as he snuggled up against his warm crush. "A good way to start a morning" he gently said with a grin