Bloody Red Sun of Fantastic L.A. : Prologue
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This is the opening to a book I'm trying to write, it will have four parts, any criticism is appreciated. It's going to be a Hard Sci-Fi with character development.
Hope you enjoy.
I belive in complete and absolute non-ownership of everything, and so I do not claim to own these character but rather submit them to public domain. If you wish to use them feel free to do so in any way (though I would like to be notified if they are used so I could see that story or artwork). This is a work not by an author but by humanity as is everything man made.
Warning! The following content may be disturbing to some people. The following story will deal (Eventually) with Adult themes. If you find this Disterbing do not read. Warning!
Bloody Red Sun of Fantastic L.A.
Some useful terms to know.
Klein psedo-Vulpine - alien creatures that somewhat resemble earth foxes. They reach about one meter in height, and weigh abour thirty five kilograms. They have collar bones, opossable thumbs, tri-chambered hearts, and are both bi, and quadpedal. When they walk bipedal their thumbs slide to be opossable, when they walk quadpedal their thumbs retract to act like dew claws.
*UTE - the United Terra Empire. An empire made up of humans it is vast and powerful. *
UTM - the United Terra Military. The military of the UTE.
Tesa-warps - Warp gates that open up temporary tesaracts so that one can travel light years without time dilation.
Tyrannis Regent - the supreme commander of the UTM.
Chancellor - the elected head of the UTE.
The National Assembly - the main governing body of the UTE.
B.C.E. - Before Common Era.
C.E. - Common Era.
U.E.E. - United Earth Era.
Deutschlish - a mix of German and English, it is the standered language throught the U.T.E.
Snarel - the mother tounge of the Klein psedo-Vulpine.
E.L.P. - Earth Like Planet.
Prologue
U.E.E. - March 8, 439
Major General Petraus stood around the main holo table in the command room along with the other senior officers of the ship. Their was a somber silence draped around the room. Though it was not uncheerful, for this was the moment these men would shine. All their carfully laid plans would be history in just a few short moments. The silence was broken suddenly. "Major General Petraus, the first, second, and third Frigate divisions have arrived on schedule. Drop ships aproching in twenty seconds". They waited the tense twenty seconds. "Drop ships report all clear. Preparing to Travel through the Tesa-warp sir. On your call General". Major General Petraus stiffened then gave the command. "Travel through the Tesa-warp now". Their was a few more seconds silence then the head engine man reported back. "Successful travel sir. All ships confirm placement". Over the ship radio they heard all of their ships report in. "Sir awating your orders". General Petraus quietly grabbed the phone attached to the holo table. "Navi-com officer Tiaus turn on all sensors and open up fleet wide short broadcast range". "Yes sir". The holo table flicked to life, and gave off a three dimentional area of their surrondings. General Petraus quietly cleared his throat than begain to speak. "Men of the U.T.M. I proudly lead you all on this day of advancement of the glorious U.T.E. today we capture another E.L.P. I remind you this is only the seventh one found to be near the Mother Planet. Men I call you all to arms to capture this planet, for the glory of the U.T.E. we shall be victorius. All ships launch drop pods now"! At that moment all four hundred fifty drop ships in the fleet General Petraus presided over droped onto the unsuspecting planet Volerran.
Just as the drop ships entered into the Volerran atmosphere Klyzab was waking up from a nap to go play with his sister Efuvno. He was completely unaware that a man he would come to love and admire was about to deprive him of a possibly wonderful life and instead would alter his future forever.