A Better Fit, Part 1

Story by Ophion on SoFurry

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My first ever story submission , I hope you all enjoy. I fully plan to follow up on this teaser with a part 2. Please give and criticism you feel necessary. I'd love to hear all of it!

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"Oh, come on Kolo, fuck me harder..." It was obvious she wasn't panting or even moaning the words. She was sincerely asking for more from the gray stallion. Kolo had been working hard for nearly ten minutes to please the mare, but she had yet to begin enjoying herself; now she was getting frustrated.

Finally, Kolo could feel his arms begin to shake from holding himself over the white mare. He let himself lay forward against her and stopped the thrusting of his hips. "Sorry... give me a minute."

Kira rolled to the side and out from under him. "Never mind, just forget it. It's ok, really." Kolo sighed and fell onto his back next to her, deciding to just enjoy being alone with her. He ran his fingers over the soft light hair along her side.

"I'm glad you came over..." he offered timidly. His member softened slowly, but he still felt the ache of frustration. It looked like another night of satisfying himself, unless Kira decided to be kind with her mouth. Not likely, he decided.

"Yeah... I should probably get going. Homework. You know how it is..." she said softly, trying to be gentle about it. It was a lame excuse, but Kolo decided not to fight it. He just sighed to himself as she slid off the bed and walked to where her cloths were piled. He watched with renewed interest as her beautiful tail teased him with views of her rump. How could he have messed this up?

Again.

After Kira had left his bed and his house, probably for the last time, Kolo didn't feel up to releasing his frustration on his own. He dressed and went to the kitchen to get a snack. He had been burning a lot of calories upstairs, even if it hadn't accomplished much except giving him the chance to feel Kira's beautiful body.

He knew he was under par in certain areas, especially for a stallion. Everyone expected a horse to be... hung like a horse. He didn't think himself as small, but he still found himself turning away in the showers in the gym when other male horses came in. And then there were the girls.

Kolo always seemed to get along great with the girls on campus, joking and listening his way into their good graces. When he made it past the 'just friends' barrier with a cute mare, things always seemed to go great for a wile. Until they finally decided to follow him home one night. He knew from experience that he wouldn't be getting another chance with Kira. There were plenty of good-looking stallions that wouldn't prove a disappointment.

Kolo settled down on the couch with his sandwich and began thinking of how to keep himself distracted for the rest of the evening.

The street was crowded with cars inching past the entrance to the music hall, stopping often to allow concertgoers to cross to the double doors leading inside. From the sidewalk, pedestrians could her the sound of electric guitars tuning, interrupted by sporadic drum rolls. The band was almost ready.

Kolo squeezed himself through the crowd as it condensed to go through the doors. This would be a standing-room-only affair. Sure enough, he was surrounded by furs on all sides, pressed close together by the time they came to a stop on the floor before the stage.

Once the show began, no one cared about the tight quarters. In fact, with the fast paced semi-metal ballads roaring overhead, everyone seemed to thrive on the heat and excitement of their neighbors. Soon everyone was moving, from dancing to just swaying with the music.

Kolo enjoyed the semi-companionship that came from all the contact and shared enjoyment of the band. He was taller than most of the furs on the floor, so he had to trouble seeing the stage as the lead guitarist fell into a solo that really got the crowd going. Noticing he was standing in front of a rather short mare in a rather short skirt, he moved to the side and offered to let her move ahead of him so they could both see. In truth, all he wanted to see was her cute behind in that skirt, her tail flowing down to her knees. He considered dancing with the mare, but her white tail reminded him of the episode with Kira. He had come her to forget his worries, not revisit them and definitely not to put himself in the same position again in one night.

Moving on from the dancing mare, Kolo squeezed between patrons, pretending to be trying to get a better view of the lead singer. She was a slim but curvy vixen, wearing a tight band T-shirt and a knee length skirt. Her outfit was not reveling, but it followed her chest and hips in such a way that Kolo was sure she had half the male audience, and possibly some of the female, exited and short of breath. He didn't find himself in that half.

All the girls Kolo had dated had been mares. He loved their rumps, soft tails, and beautiful bodies; other species usually didn't hold any lust for him. Unfortunately, horse girls expected something specific from their horse boys.

Shaking his head as if to knock the thought loose, Kolo returned his focus to the music. He let himself enjoy the exiting rhythms and begin to sway with the crowd. Suddenly he felt someone touching both of his hands and tugging insistently. He looked down to see a rabbit girl looking up at him where he hadn't even seen her before. She was a full two feet shorted than Kolo with brown fur and a cute, enthusiastic face. He decided the word 'bunny' described her much better than 'rabbit'.

She tugged again on his hands "Come on, dance with me." Kolo caught on and set his hands on her waist as she turned back to watch the band. She began to move and he tried to match her motions. Her movement was slow and rhythmic, almost fluid. He had never danced with a mare girl who moved like this lithe bunny.

"I'm Kolo," He said, lowering his head nearer a tall ear.

"Erica. I like how you dance."

Kolo laughed a little, "Really? I always thought I was clumsy and awkward on the dance floor."

"Oh, you are," Erica giggled, "but I still like it."

Kolo blushed at her obvious flirtation. He had to admit that even though her body was far different from the usual mare frame he liked, he liked what he felt under his hand. Her shirt was a bit short, allowing him to feel the incredibly soft fur at her waist. He couldn't resist looking down at her slim body moving steadily in front of him, noticing her soft looking tail coming from the back of her tight jeans. It had a white strip on the underside and he found himself wondering how far that strip went...

She must have noticed him looking because she leaned her head back, resting it against his chest, looked up at him, and interrupted his sightseeing. Kolo worried for a moment that she was mad, but her wide smile reassured him. He was shocked to see her back arch as he felt her rear end rub against his hips. "Your not very subtle when you look at a girl, are you?" She winked at him.

Kolo shrugged awkwardly "Guess not." She smiled again and went back to dancing, deliberately rubbing against him now and again. He felt his pent up frustration returning, coaxed by this little bunny girl. He felt himself stiffen a bit in his pants. Daring to be a bit forward, Kolo moved his hands forward a bit to the front of her hips so he could control her movements a bit more. He heard her giggle softly and assumed that she had felt something through the back of her jeans. He wasn't surprised.

The pair continued dancing though the show, enjoying each other's different movements and rhythms. Eventually she turned to face him, no longer concerned with the band. He looked down his gray muzzle at the girl who he was now beginning to think of as exceedingly beautiful. She just looked back up at him and smiled.

Finally the band stopped playing and people began filing out the doors. As the band packed their gear, Kolo and Erica continued to dance slowly, talking quietly about their lives. Erica was a student at a small technical school near to his own university. She hoped to become a technician at a local hospital, to be able to help others without twenty years of medical school. She lived alone near the school. Kolo smiled inwardly when she said she was single.

As the two finally wandered into the street, asked sternly to leave by the clean-up crew, Kolo noticed the slight red tint to Erica's fur. He couldn't take his eyes off of her.

She turned away shyly. He couldn't tell through her amber fur but he assumed she was blushing. She finally turned back to him, "Would you like to come over for a while? The night is young, so to speak."

Kolo almost didn't believe what he was hearing. What this little rabbit girl really suggesting what he thought she was? Still mentally reeling from the day's earlier drama with Kira, he decided he would let the evening take him where it would.

As they began walking hand in hand toward Erica's apartment hand in hand, Kolo had the pleasant thought that he might very well discover the destination of that intriguing white tail stripe.