Asali's Torment

Story by Etalrian on SoFurry

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This is a reworking of my old story "Asali's Torment" from my DA account. Asali's torment was actually a dream I had that as many prolly assume I was Dem. That sucked waking up with... well, you guys know how that works. I was feeling "blue". Rereading it I felt too ashamed to post it before I had a chance to rewrite it.

Asali and Dem have always had a hidden romance brewing, he spies on her. She secretly knows and flashes him every chance she gets.

Dem is always shot down by her when asked and this story finally tells why. No, there is no torture or rape in it despite the title.

Hope you enjoy!


"Asali's Torment" by ~lilbastrd (my DA account) **Normally I would leave their speech in Etalrian. (I did in fact create an esoteric language with over 150 words for them.) To make it simple and easier to read without having 2 lines for dialogue I always put thier words into english.

**I actually lost the opening to this story and I will try to rewrite one soon but for the meantime I am hoping to finish the fun parts of this short story. Lesson to all, do not try to write a story on papers you might throw away.

Dem, Drayfah, Malah, and Emlor were sent on a scouting mission into the neutral territory on planet Eta. Malah stayed with the shuttle while Dem, Drayfah, and Emlor went to the trench filled lands they know as neutral.

During the mission Dem, Emlor, and Drayfah split up to cover more ground. As usual Dem set Drayfah in the center path so he has himself and Emlor within a shorter distance heading in corrosponding forty-five degree left and right angles. Moving swiftly in his medium-heavy armour he dips into a trench in search of new enemy tunnels.

The ground is sandy, unlevel, and rocky with the trench sides reaching well over eight feet high. Infrequent dips in the side walls continue to grab his attention despite his visor showing no signs of movement or any signals, he knows these sensors are capable of being tricked easier then his own natural senses and relies on them seldomly. The silence eats at him for minutes before he notices a oddity in the wall side. -What's this?- Touching the smoothly worn rocks with his bare claw he realizes they have been placed there and recently.

He looks up to the ridge noticing a shape atop it. His visor's system bleeps in distress as he removes his hand. "BLEEP! Expl..." an explosion erupts from above the wall and sends a cascade of rocks and sand to fall over him before the system could complete it's warning.

-A trap! - "...ve detected" he dove aside as the rocks tumbled down around him, but Dem was a bit too late. -I should have expected that, what a rookie mistake.-

He felt the wieght on His leg and looked to it. -I am lucky, it only caught my left leg. Even if it is at a bad angle.- Buried under rocks to his knee his armour plating sank into the ground beneath and slightly bent under the weight.

Dem clawed at the rocks to no avail, and he would not risk an explosive decide this close to his person nor could he reach his cutting tool on his left leg past all the rock. without having another current plan Dem calls out over the comm.

"Drayfah, I ran into a trap. I am alright but my leg is pinned under some debris. I can't get loose. how soon can you get here?" he waited only a moment to get his answer.

"Dem, I can get to your location in no time. I will be right there." there was a delayed pause before Emlor was heard adding his two cents.

"Dem!" laughing heartily. "You took a trap? hahahaha, get your mind away from your sensors lad or you might lose your tail." Dem waited with his weapon ready to fire if anyone were to come checking the trap. the first to arrive however was Drayfah.

Surveying the area first, Drayfah lept into the trench and moved over to Dem. "What kind of trap was it? Enemy make? Friendly?" he asked in rapid-fire fashion. -ahhh, the inquisitive youth...-

"Were is your cutting tool?" Dem asked as Drayfah fumbled a bit at his empty left ankle compartment before looking back at him. Dem assumed a dumfounded and ashamed face was currently hidden behind the helmet. He was right. "uhh, I think I left it back in the shuttle... Maybe I can move them by hand." as he progressed to try Dem saw the futility of his weak frame attempting to push a large rock aside. "Nevermind that, I want you to go back to the shuttle and get something to remove this rock... Safely. Perhaps, YOUR CUTTING TOOL?!" he yelled.

Drayfah was reluctant to leave him alone but obeyed. "Okay Dem, I'll be right back!" and with that he ran off into the distance.

Dem moved his hand up and pressed the switch on his helmet to open the comms again. "Emlor, we hit a little snag. Drayfah is going back to the shuttle for tools to remove the rocks"

"I'll turn back and head your way. I have no one to call if I get into trouble and I am not going to risk leaving comm range." Emlor always was a cautious one. Dem decided he was right to be so cautious and agreed. "Okay, meet up with us at my location". "Okay."

Dem continued to scratch and claw at the debris with little success. His leg was buried deep. His armour was holding the wieght keeping his leg relitavely safe, but he was still uncomfortable, his ankle was twisted underneath the rubble and he had no idea how bad it was but he could feel it throbbing with searing pain.

As he clawed at the rocks hoping to uncover his own cutting tool from the pile a familiar voice came about. "Well, well, I'm a lucky lady" It was a feminine voice. Somewhat muffled and raspy, obviously behind a helmet's filter.

He heard steps coming closer. Dem quickly whipped his head around to find Asali leaning against the rocks above him with her light armour showing her shapely figure behind a mesh of mail. Her tail swayed passively side to side while she walked towards him.

"Hahaha, how did you get into this mess Dem?" "Asali! , could you help me out here? I could use your wrist pulse cannons here." "But why would I want to spoil my fun?" the comment left him confused. she continued walking around till she stood two feet behind his head. She removed the devices from her hands tossing them aside like junk metal. "its not funny, I could use..." looking up at her suddenly he noticed she was standing defiantly, legs spread a bit, and her tail was moving in a near hypnotic fashion to him. "a hand..." Dem was seeing Asali's well formed figure from below almost as if he planned this and couldnt help but lose track of thought as he looked onward to the gap between her thighs. his eyes followed the midriff of her tail to the thin bikini styled chainmail covering her tender vent and he gulped. Asali leaned over to face Dem.

"Dem, you have always been on my mind, and now your at my feet. how does it feel?" she said without hiding her cheerful tone. Without thinking he replied "Feels pretty good" then let out a sigh, after realizing how pitiful that sounded. Standing up right she began to walk around him slowly, looking him over as she has a few times before.

"Ive been watching you dem." she moved her hands up to her helmet reaching for the clasps. "I have been Waiting for a time to make my move." Asali removed her helmet revealing her fine scaled face, pale yellow eyes, and seductive grin. Standing a few inches from his free leg she tell him "Now you cant resist me." she decends and slowly moves up his body. Crawling on all fours finnally reaching a position eye to eye with Dem's. Her breastplate inches from his and her tail swaying lightly in anticipation while Dem's mind races to catch up. - She wanted me to mate with her all this time? I thought it was one sided! if only she said something or accepted my advances. -

"I would never resist you, Asali. I have wanted you since I first saw you." He said admitingly still in awe of the turn of events, his hands remained on the ground. Asali lowered her body slowly onto his and licked his unguarded portion of his neck. She felt one sided and took his hands and placed them on her body and wrapped her tail around his. Her smooth scales caressed his as she did. This elicited a small hiss of bliss from Dem.

When she reached for his helmet Dem reacted fast, grabbing her hands with unintended force before allowing her to continue. "Never resist huh?" she joked with him while removing his helmet. Unmuffled by the filters of their helms her voice sounded heavenly to Dem melting his worries further. "Asali, This is the first time I heard your voice... It's exquisite." Asali turned her head shyly making a quick glance back she met his unhidden eyes. His Bright orange and red gazing into her yellows almost locked in study of one another.

Dem moved his hands around her and pulled her close kissing her passionately

She started to grind herself against Dem, who was now obviously in the mood. Her armour cold to the touch but her body so warm. She pressed herself to a sitting position and began to remove her breastplate which covered her upper torso. tossing it aside her bosom was now covered only by thin chainmail form fitted to stretch over her curved body perfectly. "Well Dem, are you not planning to join me?" she placed a hand on his armour with a satisfied smirk. "A guy can't help but look at such beauty and lose track of time" he removed his breastplate with her help.

She leaned in and kissed Dem deeply while she placed a hand under his leggings. She gasped in shock when she felt his girth in her hand then her delighted grin returned when he moaned at her touch. Dem was beyond excited and had forgotten that he was trapped. But was very glad he had been. He wanted her so badly the world itself dissappeared around them.

She pulled her hand from his shaft to loosen his leggings. Dem pulled her close when she did to another deep kiss then he continued by biting her gently on the neck. she growled low as he did. she moved herself back to sit on his thighs. Dem's potruding length fully free from it's sheath, lay directly in front of her. He reached out and undid the clasps on the sides of her chainmail "panties" while she pumped his length between her claws. Dem was holding her hips close as she continued to rub him feeling a dampness against his thighs. She lifted herself up and removed her chainmail bikini which showed her dampened vent. "Enough play Dem." she called.

Her tail lifted above her in a faster almost greedy motion while her hands wandered across his body. "Asali, I want you so much." Dem's tail was twitching eagerly as he squeezed her breasts through the mail. "Do you love me Dem?" she gently slid her smooth lips over his member. The precum dirpping from his tip smearing across her small opening with a back and forth motion. "Yes...." Her hand posed around his dick, rubbing just outside her vent. "Then say it...." she slid torturingly slow down Dem's pulsing organ, placing his tip at her door. pressing him gently against her clit she blushed and sighed.

-I might not even make it for a minute at this rate-

Asali moaned deeply when his reaction to thrust came about, pushing him slightly inside her wet folds. Dem was barely inside of her yet he was about to burst, her vent was a wonder and the feeling inside was blissful. "...I love you."

Her reaction to his thrust was excitement but also shock, she was unprepared for his sudden intrusion into her body and she only gave two inches of herself to him before moving away. Dem was VERY arroused but a feeling of concern and sadness at the lost feeling struck him like a battering ram. - Did I do something wrong?- Breathing heavily and blushing deep red through her scaled cheeks, she swallowed and took a deep breath. A smirk of triumph appeared upon her face as she looked down on a bewildered Dem. "Asali?" in second which seemed like ages her face returned to a casual one.

"Thats all I wanted to hear." she stated calmly, the passion removed from her tone entirely, as she picked herself up grabbing her discarded armour and garb

"WHAT?!" he yelled in distress. "Asali, I thought we had something." he called as she reclasped her undergarments. "We did Dem. In fact, you gave me more then I expected." she couldn't hide the slight blushing. "How could you?" Dem questioned with demand in his voice. "With ALOT of restraint, my dear." averting her eyes and taking another deep breath. Now completely bewildered -does that mean she really loves me too?- "Then, why leave?"

"Dem..." she said looking at him over her shoulder before she continued. "I really do care for you..... And... I have to admit, I am impressed with your "abilities"." she said looking over his still fully erect shaft.

"But I cant be with you when you keep getting in to messes like these." she added before turning again, continuing to walk away. "I need a powerful mate and if you truely love me then you'll have to fight for me."

"How?" he said with a powerful agression in his voice. she stopped and faced him once more "Defeat me in combat, Dem. Then you may be my mate." Tilting her head to one side while she spoke. then she walked away "Asali, that's just another reason why I love you...." he whispered to himself. Asali dissappeared around a outcropping of rocks.

"I LOVE YOU, AND YOU WILL BE MINE!!!" Dem yelled with all his lungs could muster when another voice came in to the scene....

"WHOAH! Okay I am leaving, this isnt what I signed for" Drayfah and Emlor were now standing above the ridge looking down on Dem. His exposed manhood beginning it's retreat to sheath.

"Drayfah! Emlor, I..." dem realized then that he had not replaced his garments yet. and also that the pain was much worse than before. The wieght of the rocks had obviously caused some cirulation issues.

"I bet theres a interesting story here" Emlor said matter of factly. unphased by Dem's nudity. (he was in the military a long time and saw alot of things, no big deal.)

"You have no idea." Dem replied reaching for his garb he covered himself. "I better go stop Drayfah. Then I will help dig you out of there." "Sure, take your time. Not like I lost feeling in my leg yet or anthing important" laying his head back reliving his moment (though a bit different in his mind)