Templeton the Rat and Pip the Ferret1

Story by CollinFatRat on SoFurry

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A submission I made on an interactive story called Templeton's Big Adventure over on writing.com : http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1278588-Templetons-big-adventure-WG/map/1 . The precise chapter this takes place after is this one : http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1278588-Templetons-big-adventure-WG/map/1341122111 .

After gorging himself at a junkyard (prior to waking up at the fair, full details on Templeton's Big Adventure) Templeton the Rat decides to journey within the fair cafeteria, where he meets a ferret named Pip who shares his interests . Gluttony then ensues.


Attempting to stand, Templeton teetered slightly until his bubbling body stabilized. Being very heavy around the mid section, his body leaned forward and rump stuck out behind. The obese rat jiggled his massive belly with both paws. Sending pleasuring ripples that massaged his tender insides.

"I've already eaten over thirty lunches, but there's just so much more glutting to be done. I don't know if my stomach could take anymore."

At the sound of this, his belly rumbled loudly. Squeezing and patting his large bulk, the reassurance lead him to continue on. Each step he took was followed by a slosh, proceeded by his gut wobbling up and down. The feeling of being so overly fed was intoxicating, and never in all his life did he think to have a belly of such grand size. He continued to caress it while picking up scraps of food along the way with his large tail and popping them effortlessly into his gapping maw.

Soon, he found a small building which read "Cafeteria" and licked the drool seeping from his lips. Running over, he was greeted with tables upon tables, and open windows at the far end, where they served the food. Smelling all of the left out rotten goodies, he stuck out his plentiful stomach and smacked it heartedly.

"What a blessing. Lets see if I could still moved after such glutting."

Accidentally falling over onto his massive belly, Templeton dragged himself to the nearest table. Thankfully, there was a convenient step ladder to help him scale the tables faster, and with less effort than he would pulling himself up. The rewards were great as he reached the top. Pizza, burgers, corn and hotdogs, pie, and other goodies, were quickly wolfed down into the rats bottomless chasm. Already full from before, Templeton's stomach continuingly grew tighter and rounder, and sang in a symphony of gurgles.

It continued like this for almost an hour with each table, which numbered about fifty. With each new mouthful, Templeton would grunt at the pain of having to make room for yet another morsel. He was growing more belly then anything, enough to hold a few grape fruits. He even took little time to breath in between meals, and was left panting after swallowing whole anything he could get his paws on.

On the tenth table or so, the rat had been so careless as to attempt to shove down his throat a whole kiwi. His head having sunk and merge into his body, made it easy to swallow faster, but the sheer size of this thing made it troubling without chewing. Still, he shoved on, until the massive swallow let out a large gasp of air, and sent Templeton crashing down on the table, gasping for air. It was the only time he relaxed and didn't immediately move on to the next pawful of food. But the reward was great. Rolling onto his back, the tower of fur and bubbling fat rolled over onto his muzzle, which he nuzzled his belly before pushing it back. Stroking the tight expanse with his paws, he giggled and smiled happily.

"Now this is a stomach worthy of first prize."

"I'll say."

Shocked, Templeton looked around but saw no one. Then, furiously rotating his body, causing it to erupt in a torrent of sloshes and groans, he saw what was behind his belly. A female ferret of tremendous size, almost as big as him, for a rat.

"Hi there," she said happily while stuffing her face with a few baked potatoes she gathered. "Never seen you around here before."

Panicking at coming in contact with another predator, Templeton attempted to drag himself away. Unfortunately, his stomach was too heavy for him to leave fast enough, and before he knew it, he felt a paw patting his body.

"Never knew you rats could put so much away. This was a belly if I'd ever seen one. So soft and plushy, hehe, and loud. Does it ever stop bubbling." She patted it a few times more. "What's your name?"

Templeton being too frightened to answer, merely shivered. "Just make it quick."

"Make what quick?"

"Killing me."

Suddenly, the ferret burst out in laughter, and rolled him on his back so that they made eye contact. "I'm not going to kill you silly," she scratched his belly with a paw, which felt really relaxing to Templeton who was unable to reach as much as she was. "There's so much food here why would I need to. Besides, I'm not a fan of eating living prey. Which is why I came here, it's a paradise, and by the looks of you I'd say you think so too. My name is Pip, what's yours?"

"Templeton," the rat whispered, relaxing as she scratched his belly.

"Templeton, great name."

"Gee thanks," the rat giggled.

At the bobbing of his stomach, Pip giggled as well. "Well Templeton, this your first time here?"

"Yes," he said, resting his paws on his belly and sinking deeper into his large body. "There's so much glutting to be had here, and I'm not even done yet. My stomach can handle anything."

"Hehehe, I'll say it can. Having grown this much and still able to handle more. Hmhmhm, a stomach like this shouldn't have to be lugged around everywhere. Just wait here Templeton," she patted his belly, "I'll bring you some more food."

Hearing her own large belly slosh as she waddled away, Templeton blew a content sigh whilst rubbing his soft fur. "Well she's nice, and she's bringing us more food. What do you think of that?" His belly gave a large bubbly reply, which tickled Templeton who patted it merrily. "Yes I like her too."

"Okay, open wide you fat rat."

Looking to his side, Templeton eyes grew wide at the large pile of food she had gathered extremely quickly. "How did you do that so fast, you're so big?"

"If you come to the fair as much as me, you get used to being so big and kinda speed up," she smiled while holding a banana over his head. "Now come on, bottoms up."

Opening his mouth wide, the banana quickly shot down his throat and nestled in his stomach with a glop; finding a home with the rest of the days gluttony. "You like that big fella," she asked Templeton's stomach as she patted it, jiggling and sloshing it about, "Well there's plenty more where that came from."

As time passed, Templeton continuingly grew fatter and fatter as all he did was lye down and having food being brought to his awaiting mouth. The more he grew, the happier he became, and more bubbly Pip was about his size. Templeton was happy to be with someone he could relate to. Never did they reach a dull moment as she kept bringing him more and more food from the other tables.

An hour passed and all the tables were finished. Templeton continued to rest peacefully, while squeezing, nuzzling, and patting his globe like belly, which was so big he was able to rest his chin on it. Gelatinously it swayed from side to side and gurgled loudly. It was two heads taller than Pip, who stood beside it. Rubbing it while curling her whiskers.

"Goodness, your stomach really can handle anything. It's huge."

"Told-HIC-ya."

"I bet you've lived every rats dream today. To have a stomach this grand certainly is a tough job but you've managed in one day. Hehehe, I we could fill it up more; what do you say?"

"Hic-Hilp. I don't know, I'm getting kinda tired. All this-HIC-gorging has made me sleepy. Plus, my stomach has never felt more full than it-HIC HILP-does now. I should give it time to rest. It's done a good-HIC HILP-job today." At these last words, he lifted his heft arms and gave himself a pat, which sunk his whole paw into his fleshy body.

Pip giggled, "Well it certainly gave you this cute little hiccups mr fat rat. It's your call. We've yet to go behind the windows, which has all the food used to make everything out here. We could find more in there than we did out here. But if not, I know a place where you could rest. Hehehe, when I'm half as big as you, I would always go there. Humans don't know about, so we'll be safe until nightfall."

It was a tough decision. Though he was already an ungodly size, further eating excited him, and with the help of his new friend all he'd have to do was lye down and have food brought to him; just how he'd like it. But, he had already eaten so much, over gorged many times over and unable to see anything in front of him. Who knows, he might fall asleep in the middle of eating anyway. With a paw scratching his belly and another scratching his chubby face, he contemplated.