The Tale of Thorns - Chapter 1

Story by ClawsofSlash on SoFurry

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#2 of The Tale of Thorns


The sound of chickens squawking was one of the many ambient sounds in the village of Gravaad. Above, the moon and many bright stars bathed the dodeeja villagers in their welcoming light while they went about their nightly tasks.

Children laughed and screamed playfully as they ran circles around one of the city's main Torchpillars, which were tall, thick columns that held large torches to provide additional light for the villagers. Tonight the torches weren't lit, letting the sky do all of the work.

A shopkeeper stood on his toes with his back to the road as he reached with his hooked cane to re-set his "Open" sign when he heard the hoof-beats and the rolling wheels behind him. His ears twisted backwards as the carriage hit a large puddle, and abruptly soaked his back with muddied water. Turning, he growled and shook his cane then lowered it with a scowl when he saw the emblem on the outer door.

Listening to the hoof-beats and feeling the occasional bump in the road was keeping Ruufus awake and restless inside the wagon. The light brown dodeeja's eyes were transfixed upon the silver circlet he held between his hands, playing with it as he reminisced. With a solemn expression, he went over the events which brought him to where he was now.

When Ruufus was young, he possessed a special gift for magic. In his younger years, his parents were approached by an order known as The Green Flame. They wanted to take him away, to train him and hone his magical power.

In the time his parents were given to think it over, they approached the monks in his city. They offered to take him instead, for his own protection, and to keep him close to his parents.

Since then, the monks had watched over him as they monitored the rapid increase of his raw magical strength. By the time Ruufus turned 8 years old, the dodeeja age of puberty, his powers had grown past his threshold of control. The monks had difficulty keeping up with the property damage he caused by accident; many of the other boys and girls his age stayed far away from him out of fear. His mind always swam with the thoughts of the people around him, unable to shut it off... unable to make them stop thinking such horrible things about him.

One fateful night, young Ruufus huddled in his bed. His knees were pulled tightly against his chest, and his eyes were wide open. His mind was filled with images of things that were going on around him, as if he was actually there. Standing by the two monks in the next room as they conversed about how messy the animals behaved that evening. He could see the spider's web in the next room, and could clearly hear the fly buzz in futility as the spider wrapped it up in her silk. He could even see the spry child who snuck defiantly from his bedroom for a daytime snack.

His brain swam with turmoil from the images he just couldn't seem to stop. Suddenly, it began to die down, and all he heard was the thumping of a pair of boots.

"Ruufus..." the soothing voice of a young female came from around the corner and resonated in the mind of the young dodeeja. One of his legs slipped from the tight hold his hands had upon them and his head rose slightly so that his eyes could stare quietly upon the entrance to the room.

From around the cover of the grey stone wall came a young adult dodeeja. She wore a long black robe with a golden trim around its edges, and was wearing a white stone mask. She had a golden chain necklace tightly coiled around the fingers of her left hand. Holding it out, Ruufus could see a glimmering magenta-colored stone. His first instinct was to recoil and back away from the stone.

She shook her head and continued to approach him. "Child, your power over-whelms even your own mind. Let me take that pain away..." Much as he tried to back away, the wall was as far as he could go. As the amulet grew closer... the world itself became dull to him, and he was soon asleep.

In truth, he couldn't recall much of what had happened from then on. He recalled being tied up in a mostly empty room where dodeeja dressed in similar black robes and masks would chant over him and feed him strange liquids until he was sick. How long he was there was uncertain, but he remembered his rescuer with crystal clarity.

After the door to his prison exploded, he was first grabbed by one of his captors, held by her with a wicked blade to his throat as they faced the doorway. The female shrieked, "Not a step closer, Inquisitor! If we cannot have him, nobody will!" She held him so forcefully, it made tears streak down his face, and he tried to let out protests through the cotton binding his mouth, but couldn't get out more than muffled sounds.

In the doorway he could see the green cassocked figure of a strong dodeeja. He raised his hand, and a bright white glow shot from his palm, washed over the room, spreading an icy chill. Ruufus' captor wailed in pain as her muscles became rigid and she dropped the knife.

Stepping into the room, his savior lowered one hand and raised the other. Aside from one chestnut-colored patch around his right eye, his face was a frosty white. "By the Order of Uzzadujoza, your heresy is at its end!" He addressed the captors with undeniable authority.

Ruufus ran into the warmth and comfort of his rescuer's arms. He buried his face into the older male's cassock as his young hands found the first comfort he's had in days, perhaps weeks.

"You're safe now, young one. You're very special... and we won't let them have you again."

It was Grand Inquisitor Coldclaw who had rescued him from the Order of the Green Flame, and after that he was kept in Dotanzo'ukka. Here, Ruufus was trained to control his abilities, and when he was able to control them, he was taught to empower himself through them. As soon as his powers became strong enough, he was allowed to choose his own path and take control of his destiny. The devotion the order had given to him, he then decided to give back, and he chose to become an inquisitor to uphold and enforce the laws of Uzzadujoza within the mortal world.

Since his initiation in the Trial by Fire, Ruufus had a rough time as an inquisitor. Most of them had incredibly powerful combat prowess, but Ruufus was more suited for the actual interrogation part. His powers developed mostly into the area of telepathic invasions, telekinetic movements, and anything more invested into the realm of the mind. His commitment to the law and his lord however kept him pushing harder and harder until he eventually tested himself and became a High Inquisitor.

His ears lifted up as he felt the cart come to a stop. Snapping out of his thoughts, he slipped the circlet back onto his head. As the monk who drove the carriage opened the door he announced; "High Inquisitor Ruufus, we've arrived at Tuzudoka Manor, the Grand Inquisitor is expecting you."

Ruufus stepped from the carriage and smoothed out his cassock. "Thank you, good monk. You may join me once you un-tack and stable the horses."

With a quick bow, the monk gave a quick "ku, kaoton izzidonjo" as a response before going about the un-tacking of the steeds.

Ruufus made his way through the doors of the manor, which were guarded at either side by guards from the Kingdom Military. Entering the main hall, a well dressed female servent greeted him with a bow. "The Grand Inquisitor is in the bedchambers."

He smiled and respectfully replied; "lead on." She led him through the manor and to the main bedchamber. Along the way he passed rows of servents, and he caught a respectful bow from the master of the house who was kind enough to lend his home to the Order.

When entering, he could see that the place was as fixed up as it could be. More candles burned than he would find in a normal prayer service. Resting in the plush red bed was the old dodeeja, still wearing his traditional green cassock and his golden circlet. The white fur of his face had become sparse from age and he appeared to be very weak. His hands were folded upon his chest, and his eyes were mostly closed.

Ruufus took the chair beside the bed and laid his hand upon those of the old dodeeja. "Kaotu kaoton izzidonjo..." he sighed deeply as he spoke with the same affection a child would give an adored grandfather. "Coldclaw... I never thought this day would come."

Coldclaw drew in a deep breath, and lifted one of his hands to take Ruufus' into it. His hand was ice cold, but that was how it always was. Replacing his ring finger's nail was a shimmering crystal which was cyan in color, and radiated a chilling power of magic. He turned and opened his eyes, which revealed their clouded appearance. "We all knew... it would one day." He beckoned with his other hand, as his arms and head shook with his weakness. "Young Ruufus... come closer," he coughed suddenly, but attempted a smile as he continued, "I want to look upon you again."

Ruufus let his face come near the eyes of the Grand Inquisitor. "I don't know what I... what we will do without your guidance." He could feel himself starting to cry, as much as he tried to hide it or stop it, the tears would not stay contained.

Coldclaw brought his hand to the side of Ruufus' face. "Oh how you've grown. From a confused young kit, to a respected buck." He brushed his thumb against Ruufus' face and pushed away an escaping tear. "Find guidance not from me, but from Uzzadujoza. You will find the strength to continue on."

Ruufus sniffled and nodded gently, holding his mentor's hand tightly. With a sudden whine, he no longer felt like the respected buck, but more like the young kit. He drew closer and threw his other arm around Coldclaw, embracing him as he let out his tears.

Coldclaw moved his hand from Ruufus' cheek to his back and squeezed at the back of his cassock. "Hush now... this is no means for a High Inquisitor. You have made this grand mark for yourself in life, and while I may be passing on to take my seat beside Uzzadujoza in the world beyond, you must yet make your best mark upon this world. Do not dwell upon my passing, but never forget the words I've taught you... young Ruufus. It is... not how we die that makes our mark... but how we live."

As he finished talking, he took another deep breath. Ruufus released his embrace with the old one, as he returned to his previous resting position. A weary and clouded pair of eyes closed themselves as Coldclaw said one last thing; "Now, I am so very tired... and I must rest." A deep exhale left his lungs as he spoke, and soon his chest did not move at all.

Ruufus stood quietly and reached into his cassock. Pulling out the divine symbol of Uzzadujoza, he clutched it tightly in his grasp. Before he could go any further, the monk entered the room. He looked up, and with a shaking voice he spoke to the monk like a friend. "Could you, dear monk, please speak the prayer of passing for the Grand Inquisitor? I am afraid my emotions would make it..." he paused to take a deep breath, "difficult to finish."

As the night dragged on, other monks flocked from nearby cities. When the dawn was about to rise, a gilded carriage arrived on the scene. This one was the transport of the Champion of Uzzadujoza himself, Blackwarp. As Ruufus suspected, the Champion did not seem too surprised by the passing of the Grand Inquisitor, and the obvious need to find someone to fill his shoes.

By the end of the night, the Champion met with Ruufus. It was a short meeting where the Champion ordered Ruufus to take a precession of monks and military guards and escort Coldclaw to the Holy City of Tao'uzzan for a proper burial. Ruufus of course complied with the request, and went to ready his selection to set out at the next sun-down.

"High Inquisitor, the dawn is breaking. Shall we rest?" The monk smiled warmly after asking and waited patiently for Ruufus to answer. Unfortunately, the inquisitor was still deep in thought, gazing upon Coldclaw's circlet in disbelief. Finally, the monk decided to ask again. "High Inquisitor?"

Ruufus broke from his trance and his eyes shifted over to the monk. "Hmm? Oh, yes... certainly." He nodded absently to the monk and sighed gently. Standing from his seat in the carriage, he came to the door. As he stared out into the coming sunset, he descended the steps to the dirt and looked back at the military guards. "Squad Captain Nazadar."

The dodeeja captain came over on his steed. Both were impressively armored in plated steel and he was wearing a dark green tabard with the traditional black decoration of a crown surrounded by a thorny wreath. Holding his reigns tightly and sitting up, he leered down at Ruufus. "High Inquisitor, I prefer native tongue to common."

"Ku, ku... Tido du dokee'at." Ruufus conferred the message that he wanted the camp to be set up.

Nazadar appeared displeased by this, and opened his mouth to speak. Just as he did, there was an energetic blast which erupted through the air around them. His horse reared up, and he had to hold on tightly. "Azza!"

Ruufus found himself turning in circles as he saw orange ovals being magically drawn in the air. Once each oval was completed, a blanket of energy filled them in, with a spiraling light, like a moving tunnel. "We're surrounded!" Ruufus shouted to the others, trying to push his voice above the constant rumbling sound which radiated from each of the magical portals. "Pull in tight, and stay away from them!"

Nazadar echoed the commands in the dodeeja native tongue for the military guards. The portals rippled with energy, and human-like figures started appearing, leaping from the spiraling depths.

Ruufus' eyes went wide. He hadn't seen anything like them before. They stood on two feet and had two hands like him, but they didn't have the thick fur his people had. Instead, these creatures had bronze-colored flesh, and were completely lacking a tail. To him, their heads looked close to monkeys, but flattened, and thinner. Their ears were smaller, and their lobes jagged at the edges, like arrow-heads.

One of them approached and grinned, displaying a row of jagged shark's teeth. A flicker showed in his ruby-colored eyes as he announced. "We are the kin, and we are here to kill you, dodeeja!"