Aki and Treecko - Commission
There was a cool breeze blowing through the forest, whipping through the trees and causing some leaves to fall gently to the ground. The fall colors were at their peak, all the different reds, oranges, and golds shining brilliantly in the sunlight. A lot was happening in preparation for winter time, and every creature was getting ready for the first big frost that everyone could feel was very soon.
One of these creatures was a Sceptile, gathering berries and what not for his lunch. He didn't live in this forest, though. He lived about sixty or seventy miles away from the spot he was, but there was a shortage of food around that area, due to a population explosion of bug Pokémon that year. He had just arrived in that part that morning, but he had spent the day relaxing from all the walking he had done the past two days.
When he arrived, he was extremely happy to find that there was an abundance of food in this part of the forest he was in. He had just woken up from a nap, and after he ate a few berries to fill him up for a while, he went on a search to find the materials to make a bag to carry all the food back in. He didn't have too long, for he could feel that winter was getting ready to rear its ugly head and strike any day now.
He shivered at the cool breeze, and looked at the sky. He had slept longer than he intended, for the sun was on the opposite side of the sky of what it was when he had slept in the tree. He had to hurry and find a certain kind of tree that has the perfect kinds of leaves to make bags out of. It was a skill that a lot of Pokémon like him knew, for obviously anything to do with grass was his forte.
For about an hour he jumped from tree to tree, searching and searching for one of these special trees. He knew there had to be some, for they were all over the place where he came from. The geography couldn't differ THAT much within seventy miles could it? He searched, and searched, and searched. He could not, for the life of him, find any of the type of tree he needed. By the time he searched an entire five square mile radius, he was starting to become discouraged. If he couldn't find one of those trees to make a carrying bag, he might have to either stay in this forest for the winter, or just... starve.
While the latter was worse obviously, he wanted to keep from either if at all possible. The sun slowly dropped lower and lower and all the shadows grew longer against the ground. It wasn't even really late, but being that time of year, days were short. The temperature dropped slowly, and the Sceptile was getting colder and colder, until he could barely move his limbs from the chilling air. He spotted a bush with a bunch of Aspear berries in it, remembering they were good for curing freeze burns, so he figured they might help him warm up as well.
He leapt down from the branch he was on and grabbed one, taking a bite. He was surprised by the thickness of the skin, and when his teeth finally pierced it, he was greeted by a sour taste. He was taken aback, but he could feel his body warming immediately as the juice ran down his throat. He gulped down the rest, feeling a lot better, until he heard a noise.
It wasn't completely night time yet, but it was fairly dark outside, so he couldn't see exactly what he heard. He stood completely still, waiting and waiting for the figure to leap out at him. Out of the corner of his eye, he spotted a creature about his size step out from the bushes, and he knelt down. As it grew closer to him, he noticed that the creature seemed familiar... It was another Sceptile.
"Who are you?" he cried out, remaining completely still.
"My name is Aki. I live just a little bit away from here." The figure replied.
He lowered his guard and stood up. "My name is Treecko. I'm from another forest a long ways from here. I was just picking these berries to help stay warm."
Aki walked closer to get a better look. "Ah, another Sceptile! I've not seen any outside my family for quite some time."
"Yes, I live in a forest about 70 miles west of here. I've been trying to find a hammock tree for most of the day so that I could make a bag to take some berries back with me. We had a shortage."
"Ah, I'm sorry to hear that. There actually aren't any hammock trees for miles from here. They're all out west, where you're from."
"Ah, that's a shame... I don't know what I'm going to do then... "He sighed, his body drooping down. "Well, I don't know what I could do then, except stay in this forest for the winter."
Aki put his paws on both of Treecko's shoulders "Hey, don't worry too much about it. You can come to my place if you want to. I have plenty of room in a place I made myself. It's just a few minutes' walk from here. "
"No, no... I couldn't. I can find a place for myself around here, I'm sure." He blushed, but it wasn't visible in the dark.
"No, please! I wouldn't mind. But I came out here to get some berries in the first place, so you can help me pick some, if you want."
"Okay, I can do that. I might as well earn my keep if I'm going to stay with you, I guess..." The two started to silently pick at the Aspear berries. Treecko was still blushing.
"So, Treecko, eh? Was that a nickname or something?"
"I, uhm... I... No, that's my name..." He was still becoming more and more embarrassed as time went on. He never was good at these situations, and he'd been made fun of too often of his name, so he was sort of worried that Aki was going to make fun of him.
"Oh, that's fine. I had a Meganium friend once named Bayleef. It's still a fine name. "He threw one more berry into the bag he was carrying. He then threw it around his back and it tightened like a strap backpack, keeping them from falling out. "There a few more berries I need to get, just follow me."
While Treecko wasn't necessarily a coward, he was unsure about being in new places, especially in the dark. Aki seemed to know where he was going through, so he just stayed right behind him. A few hundred feet later, they arrived in a clearing where there were five or more bushes, completely filled with Oran berries. "Here we are, we just need some of these, and then some Pecha berries and we'll be set."
They started to pick the best looking Oran berries and throw them into the bag. They filled it up and moved on a few hundred feet more to another clearing with even more Pecha berries than there were Oran berries. After Aki's bag was completely full, he started walking into the forest some more.
"So... Are we going to your house?" Treecko asked timidly.
"Yes, it's not far, just another minute or two and we'll be there." And just as he said, Treecko could see a light shining through some of the trees, and then a massive tree with a house built into the side of it appeared. It was densely surrounded by other trees, so it would have been hard to spot from the tops.
"This is my home. I've lived here for a year or so now. It got me through last winter all warm and snug, so I assume it can do the same for you too." Treecko's mouth was agape, surprised with the rather large dwelling.
"How did you do this?" He asked, walking up to it slowly. "My family and I always lived in a cave, and I live in a tree house in the branches, but this is just awesome!"
"Yeah, the tree had this huge growth at the bottom, and I hollowed it out into a house!" He opened the door and invited Treecko in. Treecko followed him into the door into a spacious room. There were only two rooms in the house; there was a main all-purpose room that served as a bedroom, living room, and a kitchen. That was in the odd growth in the tree. The other room was in the actual trunk, and it was a dug out bathroom that led to an underground "sewage" type container.
"Wow... this place is awesome... You even have a fireplace!" Treecko said, admiring the stone fireplace against one of the walls that even had a chimney. "How did you do all of this?"
"Well, along with my family, all the Pokémon around here are extremely nice, and they all pitched in to help me build this place! I love it here."
"Wow..." Treecko stood in the doorway, not really sure what to do.
"Go ahead and sit down if you want, I don't mind. You're going to be living here until you figure out what to do, so go ahead and make yourself at home!" Aki sat his bag of berries down on a table and started to pull out some. "Would you like some?"
"Sure." Treecko sat down with him at the table, and Aki handed him an Oran berry.
"Take this; I'm sure you're tired for searching all day."
"Yeah, I am..." He took the berry and slowly started to eat on it, feeling energy course back into his body. All the weariness wore off as the juice ran down his throat.
"Mmm... Thanks." Treecko ate the rest and wiped his mouth.
"So, why is your forest so low on food you had to come this far to find any?" Aki asked, eating a Pecha berry.
"Well... Uhm, all the bug Pokémon in our area had a population spike and they ate so much of the food it's hard to get any just to survive. A lot of the trees already have no leaves because they've all been eaten... It's a pretty bad sight."
"It sounds like it, I'm sorry to hear that. Did you have a family?" He offered another berry to Treecko, who took it.
"Uhm, yeah, but they don't live in that part of the forest. They live north of where I do... Or, where I lived, I guess I should say."
"Oh, so you were all by yourself? That must have been really lonely."
"Yeah, I did get pretty lonely sometimes... I didn't have many friends back there.
"Oh, that's too bad. Everyone around here is friendly. We have a pretty tight knit community."
"That's nice..." Now that he was in the light, Treecko's blush was pretty obvious. He was twiddling his thumbs and staring at the table.
"Hey, what's the matter?" Aki asked.
"I-I... Nothing. Nothing is wrong, I'm fine." He looked at Aki, his face as pink as a rose.
"Well, I'm not convinced. There's got to be something wrong for you to be this nervous."
"I just... I don't know..." He buried his face in his paws.
"Well.... One second." Aki got up from where he was sitting and stepped behind a chair, pulling out a basket of perfectly ripe Fuji apples. "Here, have one of these. I picked these for my family and friends, but I'll share one with you."
"Oh, wow! Fresh Fuji apple! Those are rare..." Treecko said, astounded. "I've only ever seen one Fuji apple tree, and they're usually stripped as soon as the apples are ready."
"Yup, I picked these before they were ripe, and they just now got to the perfect age."
"Can I really have one?" Treecko asked, blushing harder than before.
"Sure. I'll have one too." He took two apples from the basket and sat the basket back down. There were still a good amount of them, but they were so rare and tasty that one would hardly want to waste even one.
Treecko took a single bite from the apple and a wide grin spread across his face. The skin was the perfect texture, and it had the best flavor of any other apple he had ever had. He'd only ever had one other Fuji apple before, and this was even better than what he remembered.
"This is so good~" He said, continuing to eat away at the apple.
"Yes, they're my favorite!" Aki was doing the same, hardly stopping to chew.
"Thank you so much for this... But why did you let me have one? I mean, you just met me and all..."
"You seem really down about not being able to go back to where you used to live."
"Yeah, I guess. But I think I'm starting to see I don't have to be so sad. You're so nice; I think I could be even happier here. H-how long would you let me stay?" He asked, twiddling his thumbs again as his face burned hot.
"As long as you want, hehe."
"Th-thanks..." Though he was still blushing, the nervous tension that seemed to hold Treecko back from really getting in to the conversation seemed to melt away. The gift of the apple just seemed to mean something to him.
"Of course; what kind of Pokémon would I be if I were to just let you freeze to death out in a cold, lonely, unfamiliar forest? Not a very good one. It's the least I can do for you, to let you stay with me, at least until spring." He finished the last few bites of his apple and set it aside on the table.
"I've never had someone be so nice to me before... I'm usually quiet and keep to myself. And when I do meet new people, they usually just make fun of my name."
"That's not a very nice thing to do. I don't care what your name is, it doesn't change that you're a nice Pokémon yourself. The world needs to be more kind, I think. There's not enough love in this world."
At the mention of the word love, Treecko flinched. He averted his gaze from Aki's, not letting their eyes meet. He fidgeted in his seat, staring at his eaten apple core. "Hehe, yeah..."
"Hey..." Aki's tone of voice became really soft and comforting. He scooted his seat next to Treecko and gave him a hug. Treecko closed his eyes and set his apple down, slowly embracing the other Pokémon back.
"I... Thank you." Treecko said, left speechless by the act of kindness. "I... don't know what to say..."
"Then don't say anything." Aki looked him straight in his eyes, leaned in, and touched his lips to Treecko's. Treecko's face lit up, as did Aki's. Slowly, the two's mouth parted and their tongues met, encircling each other in a dance. They could taste each other, and it wasn't an unfamiliar taste, for they both tasted much like the other. For several minutes they held each other in their arms, bodies tight against one another and they both started to sweat.
Aki broke the kiss eventually, but it was a slow, gentle break. He pulled his tongue back and showed his way out of Treecko's mouth, his tongue sliding across Treecko's and seeming to hold on for one last moment before it left it, as the hands of two lover who were leaving each other for a long while.
Aki took a breath, and without stuttering, said clearly, "Treecko, I love you." For such a powerful phrase, the meaning was sweet, gentle. The sound echo's in Treecko's mind, and he was able to repeat the phrase right back.
"And I love you." The two once again met their lips, but not for long. Aki stood up and led him to his bed in the back of the house. He held Treecko's hand as he led him there, and gently pulled him down to sit with him. He sat, as did Treecko, and he scooted closer to kiss him one more time. This time though, Treecko was the one to act first. His paws went from Aki's shoulders to his chest where he started to rub. His kissing grew more passionate as he touched the body of his new lover, and explored every inch of it.
Treecko leaned forward against Aki, guiding him to his back. With Aki under him, Treecko sat up and sat on Aki's lap. His eyes caressed the green body under him, much as his paws did. Every inch was explored, leaving no little bit unchecked. It was incredible, having another Pokémon to share his body with. Aki closed his eyes and rubbed Treecko's arms with his paws, muring quietly to himself.
With all the physical contact, a tension grew in both of the Pokémon's regions, and they both yearned to let it loose. But just touching each other wasn't an act to be ignored, for a strong bond was formed through the exploration of each other's bodies. It was an issue of trust, and that trust was built upon. Sex was an intimate act, but how could two have sex if they didn't feel comfortable just touching each other, enjoying what the other had to offer.
"Mmm, Treecko~" Aki said, putting his hands on Treecko's sides and rubbing, his belly and chest rising and falling quickly.
"Aki, once again... thank you." He said, putting a paw to Aki's cheek and softly rubbing it.
Aki's paw traveled south from Treecko's sides to his belly, stroking it for a few seconds before reaching their destination: Treecko's swollen genital slit. A pink tip was peeking out from between the folds of sensitive skin. A gentle touch to the folds, and a twitch from the pink object, and a grunt from Treecko, and the object proceeded to leave its hiding place, revealing itself to the outside world for the first time.
"I... I've never done anything like this before..." Treecko admitted shyly, his entire body seeming to glow pink.
"Neither have I." Aki replied back. He let the pink member slide through two of his digits, enticing a shiver from Treecko.
"I probably won't last long, I'm sorry."
"Again, neither will I. We're both experiencing this together for the first time. I'd have it no other way."
"I'm still really nervous about this."
"As am I..." Aki started to slowly rub Treecko's member, the warm flesh twitching as the last small bit finished extending from the slit. Aki blushed as he rubbed it, but he didn't want to stop. It was an amazing feeling being able to do this for another Pokémon. He could feel himself starting to harden as well, for the tip of his own member poked Treecko in the tail. He closed his eyes and let out a sigh as he flexed it and it rubbed against Treecko's leafy tail.
"Mmm... Are you going to... ride me?" Aki asked shyly. Treecko just nodded, his eyes closed. He rubbed himself against the flesh, muring quietly to himself with the soft rubbing as well.
"I'd like to have a little more lubed, though, since this is my first time taking anything."
"I don't think I have anything, and I just don't think Saliva would cut it... Oh! I have an idea. Can you go get a couple Pecha berries from the table? They're extremely soft and mushy, so they might work."
"Okay." Treecko quickly got up and grabbed two berries and returned to his position on top of Aki. This time though, he sat behind Aki's member, so it was sticking up from underneath him, physically touching his own. He blushed hard and reached down to rub the two together for a second.
"Mmm... You feel great, Treecko." He got a blush in response as Treecko took the two berries in his paws and squeezed them, both easily mushing in his grip. It felt weird, but somewhat satisfying. He continued mushing them up until it was nice and pulpy. He took the soft berry flesh and lowered it down to Aki's member, spreading it all along its length.
Aki let out a loud moan as the sweet berry instantly let loose a very pleasing, cool sensation on the sensitive flesh. Treecko's paws rubbed up and down, spreading the soft mush all long it until it was nice and slippery. "Okay, here I go..." Treecko said, raising himself up above Aki.
Treecko reached a paw back and grabbed hold of Aki's member, rubbing it along the base of his rear until he felt it touch his tail hole. Aki shivered as his tip rubbed Treecko's skin, and he let out a small grunt as he felt the small hole, and then he moaned out loud as Treecko very slowly began to lower himself down onto the shaft.
And the deed was done, the two's body joined together, and they were now one. Both of their cries rang out in the small house and their bodies shook in unison. Treecko yelped in pain as his hole was penetrated for the first time, and the long shaft dug deeper into him until the whole length was enveloped in his inner warmth. Aki, on the other hand, let out a loud moan of extreme pleasure, and his entire lower region burned hot with the most intense feeling he'd ever experienced in his life. It was new for both of them, and even though Treecko felt pain at the time, it was still something he wouldn't want to stop or give up. The high he was getting just from knowing he was sensually connected to this other Pokémon greatly made up for it. And luckily for him, the pain began to dissipate as time went on and the longer he sat there.
As the two settled in to the position, they knew they would have to act, so Treecko went first, slowly beginning to raise himself up off the shaft, and waited at the tip as he felt his innards closing back in the absence of Aki, and lowered himself back down, feeling them stretching to accommodate it. He flexed his own member and a little bit of pre started to leak from his tip onto Aki's belly. Aki wrapped his paw around Treecko's member and started to slowly rub, not wanting him to finish so quickly before him.
"T-tell me when you get close..." Aki said, already breathing heavily. He wasn't close yet, but this was already intense.
"O-okay..." Treecko found the most comfortable way for him to continue what he was doing, was to put both of his paws on Aki's chest and slowly thrust his entire hip against Aki, also causing his member to thrust into Aki's paw. The Pecha berry was really helping Treecko, and it actually added to the pleasure, having some of the berry inside of him and feeling the coolness of its juices. The painful sensations he had been plagued with at the beginning were all but nothing now, for it was replaced with the most wonderful sensation he could possibly imagine. Aki's member seemed to bend and curve just right to hit all those sensitive points inside of him. With each time he lowered himself down on the shaft, more pre leaked out from his tip, covering Aki's paw.
Through the extreme pleasure he was getting from Treecko's tight hole, he didn't stop rubbing. He was determined to do his best to give his new friend what he was doing to him. It obviously wasn't the same as his insides, but it was the best he could offer, for he couldn't lean in far enough to suck him. It didn't matter though, because what he lacked in stimulation on his penis, he made up for with getting Aki's member to ride on. The berries juices were beginning to wear off, but Treecko's insides were doing well at producing their own lubricants, along with the pre-cum that was leaking from Aki.
The few minutes seemed to them to last an eternity, and their bodies seemed to melt with their souls into one being. For that little bit, they were the same Pokémon, and they both didn't need to know every little minute detail about each other, for they both understood each other as a whole, which meant a lot more than every single little detail.
Their eternity was nearing its end though. Being both virgins, they did their best to hold on a long as possible, but their climax was inevitable. The pressure in their loins built and built, until it was just too much to bear. First, it was Treecko. The constant prodding against his prostate was just more than he could handle. His body started to shake, then he let out a loud cry, and his member twitched. Several large shots of seed spurted from his tip and hit Aki in the face, neck, and chest, and eventually dribbling onto his belly. It was such an intense feeling, he almost felt like he would pass out and his vision became slightly blurry.
Aki came soon afterward. He felt Treecko's insides squeezing with each shot of his seed, and it clenched around him, urging him to unleash his load inside the awaiting depths. He gave in to the urge, and let the tight feeling in his region loose in the form of a hard-hitting orgasm. He screamed out in pleasure, gripping the leaves he used for his bed in his paws as his load exploded into Treecko, spurt after spurt of his warm semen filling the once virgin depths, making Treecko moan into the air.
As both of their yelling and moaning slowly came to an end with their orgasms, Treecko nearly fell forward onto Aki, making Aki's member pop out of him, a few beads of cum running down his backside and down Aki's member. Treecko was panting harshly and sweating profusely, resting his head on Aki's chest.
"Th-that was the most amazing... The most amazing thing ever!" Treecko breathed, trying to catch his breath. Aki was much the same way.
"Yeah~ It was great... I-I can't even really explain it..." They held each other for a few minutes until they both finally had their wind back. They lied in the bed, for several minutes, just hugging each other and kissing. Treecko had cleaned his cum off of Aki, cringing a little bit at first at the taste, but it was different and interesting enough to keep him from stopping. He eventually warmed up to the taste, secretly thinking to himself that he wanted to try Aki's. The curiosity eventually got to him.
"Hey, Aki?" Treecko asked.
"What?"
"I was just wondering... can I taste you? I really want to see what you taste like."
"What do you mean? You mean like... a blowjob?" He asked, nervously speaking the last word.
"Yes, I want to see what you taste like. You don't mind, do you?"
"No, of course not. Go ahead."
"Okay..." Treecko turned around from where he was laying and laid his head right above Aki's still somewhat erect member. It was slimy, but that's what Treecko was hoping for. He put his paw on it, and it twitched, leaking a little bit more cum. Aki mured loudly, spreading his legs for Treecko. Treecko licked the bead of cum from Aki's tip muring for it tasted better than his own.
Treecko slowly took Aki's member into his maw, muring loudly as the extremely sweet taste left over from the Pecha berry. It made a fun act an amazing act. Treecko slowly bobbed up and down on the sweet treat, causing Aki to moan. He was rubbing Treecko's back while he was sucked off.
Treecko paused for a second. "Man, we need to do the Pecha berry thing more often! You taste amazing after all those squished berries!" Just as Aki was about to say, "Thanks," Treecko delved back down onto the member, causing him to grunt instead.
After such a great first orgasm, Aki was still somewhat worn out from it, giving Treecko more time to enjoy the tasty treat. He could have sat there and sucked Aki off all day if he had the chance. Aki's moans started to become louder and louder as Treecko went on, though. He assumed that he was getting close, so he braced himself, getting ready for Aki to cum at any moment.
He was correct, for Aki's moans quickly became shouts, and eventually his body started to shiver before he let out one last yell, and he shot a smaller sized load into Treecko's mouth. It was just enough for him to get a really good taste, but it left him licking his lips, wanting more.
"You taste really good, Aki. I want to do that all the time! It makes you feel good, and I think it's fun!
Aki was panting lightly, but he recovered fairly quickly. "Yeah, me too. "
"Aki... I love you." Treecko snuggled against Aki's body, resting his head in his arms.
"I love you too, Treecko. But now the question arrives; are you going to stay here until spring? Or are you going to stay forever... with me?" Aki's paws rubbed Treecko's back, causing him to sigh deeply.
"I think I just already had my question answered for me after that, wouldn't you say?" He licked Aki's neck, kissing it as well."
"Yeah, I guess so. I'm glad I stumbled upon you. While there's a good community around here, I was sort of lonely, because there were no other Pokémon that I could get with like this. All the other Sceptile are my family."
"I know what it's like to be lonely... But we don't have to worry about that anymore. I have you, and you have me!"
"That's very true. I think I know the answer, but I still want to ask you this, just to be one-hundred percent sure."
"What is it?" Treecko asked.
"Treecko, will you be my mate?" Aki looked him right in the eyes.
Without looking away from Aki's eyes, Treecko nodded. "Yes, I will be your mate. Aki, will you be mine?"
"Yes, I will." He gave Treecko a big hug.
"So, is it official now?"
"I guess so. So tomorrow, besides collecting food, I guess we'll also be telling everybody, hmm?"
"I guess so... I'm kind of worried, Aki. What would other Pokémon think?" Treecko blushed against Aki's chest.
"Don't worry about it. As long as we're together, nothing bad could ever come of this. We just have to be there for each other when needed, and even when not needed."
"I'll always be here for you." Treecko said.
"And I'll always be here for you, too." Aki responded with a nuzzle.
"Well, I'm glad I decided to come all this way after all. It did much more good than it would have done harm."
"Yup, looks like you made the right decision."
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