Smoke: 'The Countdown'

Story by Mickey Torrento on SoFurry

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#3 of Smoke

 

Hey there. Sorry about the long wait but the college is pri...


Hey there. Sorry about the long wait but the college is priority. So this story is my longest one... it has 4400 words while my usual chapters are around 3000. I felt like you deserve a bit more for waiting. Good news is that Christmas holiday in UK start in 2 weeks time which will leave me with lots of time to write chapters. Enjoy!

Smoke: The Countdown

"No way! Do you realize what trouble he might cause when out of control?" - It is 6am. Me and Mc Krein were in his office.

"Listen to me... If this is his last day then I want it to be perfect... If he dies... then I don't care what happens to me... I can't stop you from killing him and I can't make him run away... He served you for 6 years... don't you think he deserves that last act of kindness from you?" - I was really desperate.

"Well... he served me the longest... *Sigh* I guess... but if you try to run away-..."

"He wouldn't even want to."

"But be back before 2pm..."


8 Hours Left

Me and Sam went over to the beach, sitting on a big rock and watching the sunrise.

"Sam?"

"Yes, babes?"

"Does it hurt to die?"

"I-... I don't know. I guess this depends on how quickly it happens..."

I look down, saddened. - "He will toy with me... I can tell by the way he acts."

"Well... I hope he won't."

The usual thoughts came to my mind... I said them before thinking: "If he does... then I guess it's a punishment for being weak... papa had to replace me because I am no more use to him..." I didn't cry... this thought was too realistic to sadden me. Deep inside I knew this day will come... I knew about this day throughout entire 6 years. You can't be perfect forever... Technology gets better, science gets more advanced... and a kind like me gets replaced... That's the way it goes.

My brother wrapped an arm around me. - "You should be ashamed of yourself... but for a different reason. Mc Krein depended on you for 6 years... you never failed him and thus he should be the one punished... but I doubt you understand... I doubt you ever will..."

I understand in some way... but then again; if Shir spares me, what would I do with my life? I can't do anything else but kill.

7 Hours Left

We were walking through the town. I had a chance to look at different furs... there was a gazelle, talking through the phone in hurry. I could tell a story about him from the look in his eyes. Fear... He heard something from a phone which worried him. A tragedy happened and he is still in the shock state as he half-runs, probably to his car... By the way he half-runs I can tell he is not fully saddened... there was a benefit in the tragedy.

"People are so easy to read... like open books. Don't you think?" - I asked.

"Can you read me?"

"You are obviously fighting with two similar feelings... sadness because of what will happen as well as rage because you know you can't do anything... then you go back to feeling sad because you feel helpless... And then there is a spark of happiness... but I can't quite figure out why."

"It's you... I'm happy that at least I can spend some time with you in normal environment for once..."

"Speaking of normal environment..." - I said as the nearby bank alarm rang.

"Well that is some bad timing..."

"Why bad?" - I then made my way over to the bank...

"We were not supposed to catch attention." - Sam was worried while following me, although he soon stopped, seeing I am almost at the bank's entrance.

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"I might as well do something good for once." - I told him before entering the bank.

The shooting started straight away as I quickly dived behind a knocked over desk. A few bullets went through the desk and hit a floor next to me. I had to find a different spot. For a short moment they stopped shooting, thinking I am dead. I used that moment to sprint into nearby corridor before quickly placing paws and footpaws between the walls, 'climbing' up.

Thieves entered the corridor but none of them thought about looking up. I grabbed two daggers from my waistband before jumping down, stabbing one of the thieves in his shoulders before slicing his throat.

"Behind!" - Shouted one of the thieves just as I threw one of the daggers at him, piercing his forehead. Before he even got a chance to drop dead I sprinted and then kicked forward his now dead body and successfully knocked out two of the thieves with it. The last one standing was a tough-looking tiger and he took a chance to punch me in the muzzle.

Even though I might be good at fighting, my young body is not invincible and thus I stumbled over to a nearby wall, smelling blood in my nose. The smell got me excited as I looked up at the tiger. He aimed another punch. I parried it with my forearm (feeling as if he broke it). He swung a second claw at me but I jumped up, placing paws between the walls again (keeping myself in the air that way) before starting a flurry of kicks. He parried all of them but I didn't stop, landing on the floor and grabbing my dagger before swiping it at him. The swipe missed but instead of stopping I did a 180 degree spin with my head low and my footpaw high in the air, kicking him in the side of his head.

The other two thieves got up and I ended up in a '3 on 1' fight. The first one aimed a machine gun at me. I swiftly kicked it out of his paw, grabbed it by the barrel and knocked him out. The other one creeped up behind me so I quickly used the gun once more as a meele weapon, hitting him in the stomach and then up the chin, knocking him out as well. I then spinned the gun, now holding it properly just as the tiger charged at me.

*BANG!*

A hole in his forehead and blood on my face which only got me more excited and blood-thirsty. The bang made more thieves check out the corridor just to start dying like flies, being shot one by one as I used up all the ammo left in said machine gun.

*Click!*

No ammo. Who cares? I dropped the gun and picked up my daggers before sneaking back up to the main room. I heard them and they probably knew I am alive.

"Who the fuck are you?" - One of them asked.

I sighed at the fact this question has been bugging me for so long. - "No one, I guess..."

"Listen... 'no one'... If you don't drop your guns now, we will make sure you look like a swiss cheese."

I shrugged to myself before grabbing the machine gun with no ammo and throwing it into the main room.

"We are not stupid... your guns too."

Heh... I grabbed the Desert Eagles and threw them as well before hiding the daggers in my jeans.

"Now slowly show yourself with paws up."

I made my way over to the middle of a room, keeping paws up.

"...you're... a child?" - The one who's been talking is a middle-aged wolf. He had 2 wolves on his sides. One to the right and one to the left.

I snarl at him: "A child outside but years of experience and pain inside..."

"Whatever... you're still stupid." - He then aims a gun at me.

I grin, grab my two daggers and throw them at the two wolves beside him before leaning back as much as I could, letting the bullet fly above my chest and muzzle as the daggers pierced the two's throats. He attempts to shoot me a few more times as I start doing back hand springs and then back flips, avoiding all bullets. Finally I reach my Desert Eagles, grab them on my last back flip and shoot. I managed to shoot him with the left gun, hurting his shoulder. He drops the gun and hides behind a pillar. I shoot a volley of bullets at the pillar before sneaking up to it... he wasn't there anymore.

"Come out, come out, wherever you are..." - I sang while aiming guns at possible hiding spots.

"Who do you work for anyway?" - He asked but the echo made it impossible to locate him.

"Does that matter?" - I could smell him... he is getting closer. Old trick... talking to distract while sneaking up.

"No, not really. Not for you, anyway." - Ah, that was a sign. I instantly turned around and aimed. I was right; he wanted to sneak up to me. Once again the battle started. I used up my ammo clips in one go, trying to hit him but the guy knows how to avoid getting shot. Before I get a chance to grab new clips from my belt, he kicks me on the chest, causing me to drop the guns and fall on my back. Instead of just lying on my back I instantly flip backwards when landing to get back on my footpaws.

He grabs my Desert Eagle but I do a spinning hook kick straight in his muzzle sending some blood from his nose onto the floor. He doesn't waste time and aims the gun just as I use a tornado kick on him, hitting him twice with my footpaws and causing him to spin in air after the second hit. He lands on the floor as I catch my Desert Eagle in mid air and try to shoot him.

*Click.*

"Hahaha..." I start laughing at the fact we both forgot there is no ammo in my guns. He also chuckled just before I grabbed his gun and made a big hole in the forehead, killing him instantly.

5 Hours Left

"Out of all possible exits you decided to go through the canals..." - He said while sniffing me as we entered the manor.

"The police was everywhere. I had to escape unnoticed... um, big brother?"

"Yeah?"

"Wanna take a shower with me?"

He smirked before replying: "I'd love to."

4 Hours And 40 Minutes Left

Me and Kiba entered the bathroom, locked the door and straight away started kissing as I pushed him onto a wall. He gasped into my ear as I kissed his neck, feeling his body and soon he began undressing me. We took a short break to take all clothes off before stepping under the shower. Hot water and steam around only made us even hornier. I picked him up and pressed against the wall while kissing his side, hot water ran down our bodies. Looks like it is one of these days when Kiba is in need for closeness... on such days he loves to be a toy... he loves to be used in any way I want to use him...

"Thirsty?" - I ask and he nods.

I open my muzzle and let the shower fill it with water. Kiba opens his maw thirstily as I put my muzzle above his and let the water spill into the willing kit's mouth. He swallows before the kissing starts all over. Soon we begin rubbing shampoo into our fur, feeling each other's sides as our fully erect furhoods rubbed against each other. The warmth and softness in my crotch area caused me to cover tip of my loving brother's canine cock with pre as he slipped finger into my tailhole.

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"I think you're the one that needs to get clean there." - I said with a murr as he swirled the finger in my butt.

"Want to give me some help?" - He asked before pulling the finger out and handing me a clean, empty shampoo bottle.

I grinned and poured some PH-Friendly shampoo onto my fingers before saying - "With pleasure."

As the bottle was filling up with water I grabbed his unusually fluffy and now wet tail before lifting it up and slipping a lubed finger into his willing tailhole. Soon enough he dropped on all fours, shivering and gasping for air as I savagely fingered him. I knew it drives him crazy since that one finger is enough for him to feel some pleasure but not enough to feel full.

He looked so cute... being under the shower on all fours with open muzzle and a lovely blush on his cheeks, trying to control the shaking as I kept his bushy tail up, exposing that lovely, tight pink hole... his fluffy ballsack that I'd nuzzle day and night... and his perfectly shaped, soft and young 4 inch meat, slightly bouncing up and down along the pace of my finger. Water running down this pink beauty only made it look even sexier.

"You are so perfect..." - I whispered into his ear just as he managed to squirm something that sounded like: 'Gh!...' and losing strength in his arms, lowering chest so that it touched the shower floor while keeping his butt up. I pulled the finger out, causing Kiba to feel even emptier but not for long as I slipped tip of the bottle soon after that and squeezing the warm water in. Kiba murred instantly... It feels really nice to know you cause someone to go through so much love and pleasure.

"Will you manage holding it in?" - I asked and he nodded, thus I removed the bottle tip. Indeed, almost nothing spilled as he clenched his muscles. Kiba loved douching... 'Why not make it even better?' - I thought before leaning in and kissing his buttcheeks and licking his lovely, clean tailhole. After a few seconds I carefully turned him on his back before kissing that lovely chest of his. My lips moved down onto his tummy... it was constantly rising up and going down as he tried not to moan in pleasure from all the loving I give him. Soon I moved further down and kissed the tip of his adorable, pink meat that straight away rewarded me with some pre. I licked the lovely gift off before kissing it a bit lower... and lower... enjoying every throb it caused... every gasp he couldn't stop and every shiver that lets me know he's going through more pleasure than he can handle. The perfect, fluffy sheath... that grey thing I adore... it's so cute... My tongue slips inside of it, exploring around his furhood as he grabs my head and scratches behind the ear with a face expression showing sex daze...

I gently took his lovely two orbs in my paw before kissing them, left one first... then the right one... and back to the left one while I massaged them ever so gently... he was in heaven... you could tell straight away...

"B-brother..." - He whispered weakly.

"Yes, babes?"

"Can we do the special brother hug after our shower?"

"I'd love to." - I said before licking new pre off his furhood, causing him to squirm again.

The special brother hug... one of our more lusty and yet romantic things that we do when being alone. I am glad I can do it with him once more.

4 Hours Left

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After the shower we hastily put most of our clothes on and stumbled over to Kiba's room, trying to hide the boners hidden inside our underwear. As soon as we entered his bedroom we did same thing as in the shower; locked the door, grabbed each other and started kissing lustily while preparing for the special brother hug by unzipping my jeans and undoing the boxers' button in order for my furhood to poke out of it. I sat on edge of the bed before Kiba took his jeans off and sat on my lap with his briefs on. Then he grabbed lower part of the briefs and moved it away to the side, exposing his tailhole and lowering himself onto my meat. Kiba then bit his lower lip as the tip of my cock started entering him. He was so tight I could tell exactly where the anal ring was while it made its way down my shaft, clenching every few seconds to soon stop before the knot. I licked my fingers and slipped a paw under his butt to lube up my knot as much as I could. He stayed silent with closed eyes, enjoying my pulsing meat inside of him. I couldn't help but to feel him down there with my finger... I could tell his soft hole was lovingly wrapped around me, twitching every now and again.

"You're okay, babes?" - I asked while kissing his cute lil' nose.

"Uh uh..." - He moaned.

He then lowered himself completely and soon we both groaned; the knot blobbed in. I had to focus all I could not to cum right there because his hole clamped down under my knot which is one of the most pleasurable spots on canine cocks. I started breathing unsteadily along with him because his hole was clenching uncontrollably, squeezing pre out of me... each little bit of my meat was being hugged tightly by his insides as if under pressure. He reached down to fondle with my balls while we kissed in every way we could think of. We were om nom noming each other's lips, licking each other's tongues, exploring each other's maws and I soon grabbed his tongue with my lips and suckled on it like a lollipop.

The special brother hug was truly magical because without any thrusts you have time and mental strength to enjoy both aspects of sex. The physical pleasure you get with every hole clench and every cock twitch as well as the loving aspect of being able to wrap your arms around the lover. I couldn't hold it and clenched my muscles for the second time, spraying his insides with pre and causing him to moan in pleasure. He then leaned back allowing me to kiss his chest lovingly; either giving it a simple peck or a lusty lick here and there before moving onto his nipple and grabbing it with my lips and running my tongue over it, sending shivers of pleasure down his body. Soon I grabbed his lovely sides in order to allow him leaning back even further so that I could kiss his tummy and drive my tongue into the belly button. He leaned head back as well with an open muzzle and tongue lolled out. Soon I placed my right arm behind his back and began exploring my brother's chest with a left paw. We've spent a few minutes like this in almost a complete silence. The only sound was my lips kissing his belly and Kiba's unsteady breathing. I then moved my left paw onto his cock and grabbed it. My brother let out a very loud yet cute moan before hugging me very tightly and shivering. I could feel my paw being wet from his pre, thus I stroked it very, very slowly... almost petting it instead as we held each other tightly, eating up each other's muzzles. He carried on fondling with my balls ever so gently. His soft paw pads there felt really nice.

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"I... I love you so much, big brother..." - He whispered along with an exhale. - "...so much..."

He then used his claws to rip my shirt off... seems he still wanted more... I don't mind at all.

I followed my brother's lead and ripped his briefs off before picking him up and placing on the bed, kissing his muzzle the entire time. After a minute of snogging it was time to move on; while laying on top of him and kissing his neck I start lifting my butt up in attempt to pull the cock out. His hole rejected the idea, keeping a firm grip on my knot and causing me to send another rope of pre into him. Soon Kiba started helping by trying to push out my cock... it caused even more pressure which forced me to desperately think about something completely random in order to avoid climaxing so soon.

_ 3 Hours And 30 Minutes Left_

Along with my help, Sam managed to pull the cock out... I felt so empty now... not for long though as he forced the meat back inside. The knot was still a problem and he had to work his way in with it before pulling out. It was driving me insane... not because it hurt... I felt no pain since we made sure to lube and stretch me, but I just couldn't get enough of that feeling when being full. After a minute or so I felt something hot leaking out of my hole as he pulled out. I was sad the first few seconds, thinking he came already but it was only his pre that shot out just before his tip slipped out of my hole. He grabbed his own cock and used it to smear the pre all over my hole, teasingly slipping the very tip of his meat before pulling it out and grinding his shaft and knot over my lubed entrance.

Then, without further hesitation he used the paw to aim his cock before mercilessly slipping it all back inside. This time my hole gave almost no resistance to his knot until it slipped in which then caused my insides to clamp down once more. He rejected it and forced his cock out, leaving tip in before filling me up with his meat again. I was in heaven... I was literally in heaven when he began to do really deep thrusts, poking my G-spot hard. I instinctively tried to move up but he grabbed my hips and slammed himself back inside. I didn't mind... I wanted to be his toy again... he can play with me, he can use me and I will love him for it.

Soon enough my brother really picked up a pace, having one arm wrapped around my thigh to keep me still while using the other one to furiously stroke my furhood. I had a firm grip on the bed with both paws as he violated my hole torturing me (in a good way) with his entire length and knot; going in and out, in and out at crazy speed, ignoring any resistance on his knot. My mind was gone... I could only feel the warm arm around my thigh, the firm grip on my cock as if he tried to milk me and the crazy speed at which his meat was pleasuring me. He didn't slow down at all when I reached my climax, shooting a small rope of cum onto my tummy, feeling the paw still trying to milk me as his own meat started filling me up, load after load until I couldn't focus on holding onto to the bed anymore.

He started slowing down with both the thrusts and milking me until he blobbed his knot in for the last time and finally letting my hole clamp down on him. We laid there on our sides... the fluffy chests pressing against each other while our tongues danced lovingly, twisting, licking and exploring...

I felt so nice... my tummy was full of Sam's love... my butt was filled with his meat and his arms holding me lovingly.

Soon the exhaustion kicked in and we entered world of dreams with arms wrapped around each other tightly.

10 Minutes Left

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When standing for the last time... you know there is nothing to lose...

The sandy floor covered in water... a warm, slight rain hitting my face as I take steps, feeling the soothing warmth of transparent liquid on my footpaws.

Light... becomes a beauty... water becomes salvation... and the surroundings finally get noticed because you know this is the last chance to see all of this.

All I am wearing are my gun holsters with the Desert Eagles and light black shorts with grey piece of cloth wrapped around the waistband, gently waving along with the summer breeze... No point wearing heavy clothes because they won't protect me from his swords...

I look at the bamboo bungalow where Sam and papa are... Sam is crying... will I ever get a chance to calm him down? To hug him and tell him we are going to be fine?

"Ready to turn into a swiss cheese?" - Shir was wearing long white cloth pants and the sheaths with Katanas on his back.

Deep inside I feel as if he was already having them swords above my muzzle, aiming for my throat... But if I have nothing to lose... then why not give him a hard time first?

He sees me smiling cutely as I put paws behind my back like all these years ago with Jason.

If I am to die... I will show papa that I am not the type of fox which will go down quietly.

"What you're smiling at?" - He asks.

"I am smiling because my torture will end no matter what happens today... yours has just begun."

The water is running down my muzzle. Calming me down. The sunlight shines in my face, like a fake hope. The water around my footpaws... an invisible trap that will cause fighting less fair.

"If someone wants to replace me then so be it... but I will show that it was an unwise decision... even if you chop my limbs off I will do all I can to break your arms and legs and drown you in your own blood." I get into fighting stance and extend my neck, making a crack noise.

He draws Katanas and shakes head. - "Mc Krein is right... You're like a dog... I need to put you down... if I won't then you will end up destroying a new couch."

He's lying... papa would never say something like this.

I snarl at him just as papa sighs and opens his muzzle:

"You may begin."

To Be Continued...

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