The Man ch 1

Story by DireBlackWings on SoFurry

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#2 of The Man

So this is just a short story, maybe one or two chapters worth. If anyone has any ideas fo...


So this is just a short story, maybe one or two chapters worth. If anyone has any ideas for my other story the one with the twins, can you give some ideas, I decided to try and put thing other furs want in this chapter and try to see how that goes.so I'm going to borrow a character from full metal alchemist, you know the gorilla guy darius, I found a pic of him that I like but its not mine so I just leave a link. Also just subtracted the hyper cock and the fact that he's older, he looks like the pic but in my story he is 19 and again does not have a hyper cock. http://fchan.us/src/a_1290340976501.png. So back to the short story.

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-Darius-

Just another boring day at school for me, the coolest guy in school. I'm a half human half gorilla hybrid, I look more human though. I'm very muscular and have furry patches on my arms and legs and on my chest with a happy trail leading to my crotch. The day was just filled with me doing nothing but sleeping. Well except for in between classes and lunch, those are the time when lots of girls would just pile on me. Especially the cheerleading squad, I'm pretty sure I'm the envy of all the guys. I mean who doesn't want to cuddle with the hottest guy at school, not to mention the strongest, fastest, and the guy with the biggest dick. Every time I'm in the locker room, I could see all the guys out of the corner of my eyes just eyeing the big package I have. I could even see a blush on an arctic fox, though I had to beat the hell out of him for being a fag. I hate fags anything to do with them, I wouldn't go out with a guy even if no girl would ever talk to me or do anything with me.

Well the day came and gone and it's already the next day. Today was different somehow, ever since I entered the school not one girl came up to me to try and get me to go out with her. All day was like this, I didn't know what was going on. This was very unusual for me, not once has a girl not want to talk to me. Well lunch came by, and that's when I knew what was going on. When I walked in, I saw a huge crowd of girls, I saw very little but it looks like there was someone in the middle of the crowd. Someone is trying to steal my thunder, what the fuck, who the hell does this guy think he is trying to steal my girls. I went to one of the girls, a cute wolf from the cheerleading team, and asked what the hell was going on.

"Hey Lindsey, what's with the crowd and why aren't they around me." I flat out said.

"Didn't anyone tell you, we got a new student." She said a bit too enthusiastic.

"So, what makes a new loser so popular?" I asked getting a bit annoyed that a newbie is getting more attention than me.

"He is not a loser, he can give you a run for your money, he's a foreign exchange student from the carribeans." She replied.

"So what he can't be that good looking." I said getting even more annoyed.

"Oh he is and he's bigger than you and he got a hot accent." She replied. That got me ticked off, I started to push some girls aside just to see who the this guy is. When I got to the center, I found a huge black flightless dragon with silky fur all over, two short thick horns, and three spikes on the side of his jaw line under his ears, which were like dog ears. He had to be about 6' something and had a medium thick tail that was pretty long; dam I'm only 5'12".

"Who the hell do you think you are coming in here to my turf trying to steal my thunder." I said a bit angrily at him.

"Huh, oh hola how are you." He said in a noticeable but not strong Spanish accent and a smile.

"Don't whatever you just say me, I know your type be all nice and get more popular than everyone else."

"Excuse me, but I don't know what you're talking about, these lovely mujeres(women) were nice enough to show me around since I'm new here." He said while all the girls giggled at that complement.

"Well....ring ring." The bell rang.

"Well it looks like I must head to my next class, if you will excuse me I must go." He said.

"You got lucky punk." I said.

School ended and I headed over to the football field in the back of the school for practice. The rest of the school day after lunch all I thought about was that stupid dragon. He got me so ticked off. Well I went my way to the locker room and pushed everyone out of the way like usual. When I made it to my locker, I was surprised to see him there. The stupid dragon was in the football team's locker room.

"What the hell are you doing in here, this locker room is for football players only." I said with a glare.

"Cool it, Darius, his last school recommended him for a spot on the team, he was a star player back in his school." The big burly bear couch said.

"I wouldn't say star sir, just good." replied the stupid dragon.

"He, modesty, I like that kid." The couch replied and left the locker room.

"You're dead on the field." Was all I said to the dragon before I went to go change.

The couch first made us warm up by telling us to run around the whole football field twice, last person to complete the task had to do 50 pushups. That stupid dragon was the first to finish the laps. Next was a bit of practice, I was the one who was suppose to block him when we split in to two teams. The first time we started he got passed me without breaking a sweat, the second time he just plain ran over me. And he got the nerves to come back and help me up, that asshole is going to get it now. Ever since he came to the school, everyone was giving him more attention than me; I'm supposed to be the popular one not him. When we had to go to the weight lifting gym he out did me again. I was bench pressing 200lb while he benched pressed 350lb, he had to be on steroids, if I can't do there is no way in hell he can. After practice I was so ticked off now, I was going to show him his place wither he likes it or not, and nothing he says or does will change the fact that he would soon find out who's the man around this turf.

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Srry this is short, promise the next one will be longer. Comments are welcome, also if you do leave a comment, can you tell me what the story or my writing is missing. I can't put my finger on it but there is just something missing from my story. Whatever .