My Little Pony; Friendship is Magic. Not an offical chapter
#3 of My Little Pony
My Little Pony
Friendship is Magic
Not an official chapter
Not much to say except trying to improve character quality.
My Little Pony
Friendship is Magic
Not an offical chapter
Fluttershy moaned loudly, which really wasn't that loud. But to her, it was pretty loud; she swore everypony in Ponyville would hear it.
The snake, that she had taken care of, was currently inside of her small vaginal hole. The snake was moving and squirming, doing its best to please the one who took care of her. The snake was head in, licking all long Fluttershy's vent and making sure that she received the best treatment.
At first, Fluttershy was pleased that the snake was well, but then the snake asked to repay her. It was such an odd request yet Fluttershy, the kind natured mare that she was, reluctantly fell under the snake's charm and let her please her. She absolutely avoided anything of sexual or adult themed and it was never in her nature to go this far, but the snake... was very... persuasive.
Now, she was withering with pleasures and her body would jolt with pleasure, as the snake ravaged her body with it's own. Fluttershy was beyond blush and it was very hard for her to speak. Her body was so sensitive, her mare fluids were flowing out of her like a river form a mountain.
There were tears in her eyes, not from pain or discomfort but by the sheer joy and ecstasy that the snake was giving her. Her moans were quiet, compared to another pony but it was embarrassing that she was so loud.
It was not even after ten minutes after the snake had started did Fluttershy begin to feel her walls tighten and her breaths becoming heavily labored.
"Pl...please.... Sto...stop!" she tried to warn the snake, she was close but she didn't want the snake to drown in her fluids or to be crushed by her walls. For the snake, it only felt as if it blanket was covering her. A moist, hot blanket that had wonderful tasting fluids.
It became close to her climax when Fluttershy cried out loudly, not really which sounded more like a loud gasp, and her body exploded with fluids.
The snake felt her walls tighten and quickly exited out, having Fluttershy's fluids explode in her face. Fluttershy shook violently before falling and nearly passing out from the pleasure. The snake licked up around Fluttershy and itself as best as it could.
Fluttershy was panting heavily on the floor. The snake had given her something that she thought she could ever fully enjoy and now she felt horrible.
For one, she feels like she took advantage of the snake, especially when she could really refused. Now she knew that the snake's bandages were to be reattached and re-cared for.
But when she looked towards the snake, she saw that the snake had a very satisfied look on its face.
"I... I'm sorry that.... I...I... did tha-t." Her breathing was slowing but her voice was beyond anything but soft. Her voice was soft but that was mostly due to the embarrassment.
The snake was content and somewhat happy of Fluttershy's experience.
When Fluttershy managed to calm down, she cleaned herself off, still having the blush of the millennia and removed the wet bandages from the snake and adds new ones.
With the snake finally re-bandaged, the snake returned to rest. Fluttershy smiled that it was resting now, but still remained somewhat sensitive about the nature. She sure as hay Angel was not here to witness this mess. She would never let Fluttershy live it down.
Contented yet lightheaded, Fluttershy went to go check on the rest of the animals. Yet despite the events, she began humming a gentle tune.
Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie had headed up to Mr. and Mrs. Cake's home. Pinkie had quickly made a batch of chocolate cupcakes. Dash loved her cupcakes, as much she loved her, and they both munched away.
After that, they both decided to see the rest of the gang.
"Hey, Dashie?" asked Pinkie as she stuffed the last cupcake in her mouth. "Whft duh yool thftg twlht ivs ouing?"
Dash glared.
"Pinkie, I can't understand what you just said. Finish what you have in your mouth."
Pinkie crossed eyes, quickly swallowed what she had and licked her lips before speaking again.
"I said, what do you think Twilight is doing?"
Dash just shrugged.
"Beats me but knowing her, she probably is studying."
"Why can't that pony take a break?" asked Pinkie as she walked by Dash. "I mean, all she does is study."
"Yeah." Dash agreed with a snort. "Your telling me. Sometimes I wish I could sometimes grab her away from a book and shake her and force to not study for awhile and really have fun."
"Like us?" Pinkie said, somewhat giggling. She bumped her rear with Dash's. Dash grinned somewhat.
"Yeah like us. Though I wouldn't mind involving her in our fun."
Pinkie Pie gasped.
"Do you mean.... Like have her join us?"
Dash grinned but blushed.
"Sure but you know... how would she react? And is she the type of mare to really be into that?
"She should be," said Pinkie, somewhat thinking now. "Everypony here is a somewhat Vanilla liking lesbian." She stopped and thought.
Dash stopped. She turned to Pinkie who was staring blankly in front of her.
"Pinkie? What are you doing?"
Pinkie didn't answer and she stared off and had a questionable look on her face.
"Hey! Draco!"
Dash somewhat stared at her.
"Who are you talking too? And who are you calling "Draco?"
Pinkie ignored and then somewhat disappeared.
Draco? Helloooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! Little Draco!!!
......................... Um.... Yeah Pinkie?
When are we going to do a sex scene huh? I mean you hinted off in the last chapter but here.... All you told was how Fluttershy was moaning in the end of last chapter but here you finish? I mean, you could have at least put something close to it. And what was the deal with Twilight getting a new TV? And not to mention that Angel, that weird rabbit, is a boy and two, Big Mac just sits and walks away? That makes no sense and you just screwed up with all of that! What gives?!
.............. Hey it was my first time writing this series! I didn't really have anything to write!
That is a silly reason and..... why do you keep starting out with dots on your sentences? And why is it your writing this in... red and blue?
........... Well you just came out of the story and started talking in red and I'm just talking to you in blue..... And I'm the author here so... deal with what I have!
You better put some sex in here with me and Dashie or I'm busting through this computer and kicking your little tail ass!
Pft! You and what army, you weird psychotic son of a...
Hey! Hey! Hey! This is a kid story! No cussing mister! I don't need an army when I am crazy. And you don't like me when I'm crazy! Not cussing! Just keep it a kid friendly show!
........... Your telling me not to cuss and saying this is a kid story yet you want to have sex with your lesbian girlfriend?
.................. See! Now you got me having these dots! Just make a freckin sex scene!!!!!
ALRIGHT!!!!!!!!!!! Man your annoying!
Thank you! 'Giggles' And also have someone check your work... every time. Your first time got you like only two favs and one was from your brother... that is sad... not to mention that nobody really understood why Twilight got a TV... but I doooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Get out!
And you certainly can't write for hay, I mean... look you have these wavey lines under words here and there and all over the place! You really need to improve your writing!
Get out!!!
....... Your stories suck... and people are only going to read this one because of the sex!
"GET OUT!!!!!
"Um... Pinkie? Who exactly are you talkin' to?"
Pinkie shook her head and giggled.
"Nobody, just me being me!"
Dash just stared at her. Pinkie was only being Pinkie. That made sense... somewhat.
Pinkie happily pounced by and Dash reluctantly followed her through the air.
Twilight had finished installing the new TV and now had it going. The first channel popped up and that was channel to pop up was Oprah Winfreigh.
A large brown mare was talking to some guest about their problems.
"There," said Twilight. "It's all set.... And not a minute to soon. Night is coming and I think this is the best way to spend the rest of this evening is watching Television."
The channels that were being surfed were amazing. From what the pamphlet said about the cable TV that came with the TV, there were at least 2500 channels.
They were barely on one hundred when Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie came in.
"Hey, Twi. What you doing?" asked Dash. She went wide eyed when she saw the large TV that hung from the wall in the library.
"Where did you get that!?" she half yelled, half questioned.
Twilight giggled as she saw Dash's reaction.
"I got it today. I picked it up to further my studies and Princess Celestia said to keep one just in case something came up like an event or something.
"Really Draco? An Event or something?"
....... I am trying but this was rather difficult since I didn't want to start the sex and all till a bit after this....
'sigh' My advice Draco.... Stop... think and then type.
..... that is what I'm doing right now!
No you are not! Right now your just sitting on your chair.... Chewing on your earphones and now... now you keep fondling yourself.... See you do want to add it!
..... Fine I'll add it.....
What ever happen to the Pinkie that broke the 'fourth wall' with laughs and all? Huh? Now you acting a little bit... like Rarity but with anger...
Hey! I'm trying to make your story sound better by me popping up in and out of it and trying to get you to write something that will please the crowd! If you don't want my help, then good luck trying to make this as your best story here then you had with your other ones about incest between lizards and all or sex demons that you clearly ripped off of another person...
SHH!!!!!! Nobody knows!!!
"Giggles with grin" Now they doooooooo!!!!!
"Mumbles" Bitch!
What was that? I can barely read that.....
Does that say what I think it says?
....... Onto the story!.... Now the scenes with sex!
...... much better!
Pinkie Pie jumped from her position and squealed.
"Yay! A new thing to celebrate!"
Applejack just thought.
"Wha' is ther' to celebrate, hun? Is just a TV?"
Pinkie Pie thought for a moment before a laugh echoed the library.
"Well, we could just switch the channels till something cool pops up or something that will have us all... closer together!"
Ohh... that sounds good! See that sounds better!
Thanks.... I think?
"Well what kind of channels will have show or events of parties?" asked Dash.
"I don't Know!" sang Pinkie Pie as she began hoping up and down. "Let's just change the channels and see!"
So everybody sat down, and watched as Twilight changed the channels. Twilight sat up front while Dash stayed airborne overhead and Applejack and Spike sat next to Twilight.
It wasn't till the reach the thousands that the shows became more... adult rated. First began showing violent shows, like on networks like SPIKE,' making Spike laugh, especially with the disaster playing. Then came TV shows that had drama with really intense kissing, that only showed couples only moaning.
At the last, came the real... stuff.
The next channel after HBO, a loud moan echoed through out the library. The TV had been a bit particularly high, so everyone heard it.
Everyone's eyes shot open, especially Spike, as they all watched a tan mare getting pounded by large black stallion. The show was showing everything, including the action from between the legs.
"Sweet!" shouted Dash as she flew in for a closer view.
"Oh, my stars in Equestria!" Applejack, quickly shielded her eyes.
Spike just stared at the screen and concentrated a bit more.
Twilight was gaping and Pinkie Pie, well she was close to the TV by Dash.
Nice Job!
Thanks!
Twilight was too caught in it, she suddenly noticed that Spike had a growing red tip from him. She saw this and quickly turned off the TV, making everyone but Applejack, "aww!"
Twilight continued to stare at Spike as he slowly, became aware and covered himself up with his hands.
"Why did you change it, Twi?" complained Dash.
"Yeah," agreed Pinkie. "that was something we could have all done together."
Keep going!
Twilight shook her head before somewhat glaring at the two but with a blush.
"That is something little ponies like us shouldn't be watching! Besides... I think that that is something we could never do... unless there was another colt!" Now her blush grew redder and Dash just grinned but then laid it out with a cool expression.
"So... Twilight... Sparkle!" She said in somewhat devious voice and began slowly approaching her. "Would you... enjoy this if there was a male here?" She somewhat indicated Spike, who was blushing heavily here.
Applejack looked towards her.
"Woo! Just wait an apple pickin' minute here! Ya'll just realize that we could all get in a heap of troubl' just for even thinkin' about this?"
Dash just gave her grin.
"But aint that part of the fun?"
"Oh with Celestia! If ya' don't straighten out Rainbow Dash, I'm gonna tie ya down like catchin' a lose cattle! And trust me, that'll be fun for me."
Dash somewhat backed down and Twilight was just staring wide eyed at how open minded Dash was with this stuff. It all quickly calmed down.
WHAT ARE YOU DOING!? You're not going to do the scene?!
..... I just did.... Didn't you want a sex scene? "Laughs". There you have it! You didn't say who it should be with or how long. You just said to add a sex scene. That is what I did!
..... you know... when you go to sleep tonight, I'm gonna haunt you! I'm gonna enter your dreams and kick your tail!
Hey! I didn't really want to start this out in till after this chapter! I wanted this story series to be something between couples that seem never to get attention! OKAY I wanted to do a right story that had love, laughs and a story I want that would hopefully make people who read it... happy! Can you wait till I at least get one love scene in here? Like you and Dash! I wanted to make a nice beautiful scene with you two! But now you go and ruin it with 'sex filled needs!' I could care less about doing one! I just want to do several love stories between certain characters and if people loved them, then sex but right now, this story is being ruined by you!!!! Because you can't just stay in the story and are making me type everything up here!!! You ruined everything!!!
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"Dash?" asked Pinkie, somewhat in a calm voice, which really stunned everyone. "Can you just let it go? If they don't wish to do it, that is fine.
It was quiet, for everyone since Pinkie Pie just spoke calmly about the whole nature. Dash was confused about all of this. Pinkie Pie, shutting down, no! Something didn't make sense, but then again, it was Pinkie Pie. Nothing every made sesnse.
Dash sighed and backed off.
"Sorry Twi, about that."
Twilight gave a mental sigh and gave a small smile.
"It's okay rainbow Dash, I just never knew you were into this... kinda of things. Nor that you felt that strongly about them towards me!" Dash blushed heavily and looked down on the floor, scratching the carpet with her hoof.
"Yeah well.... Sometimes I get carried away."
"I'll say!" Applejack said, with a snort. "Ya bring in yer desires into other ponies, and they gonna think you're crazier than Rarity get when she sees dust in her room."
Dash nodded.
Twilight sighed and turned around to see Spike had somewhat fallen asleep. Though his tip was gone, she could still see he somewhat enjoyed that little... show back there. She then turned to her three best friends.
"You know... it may not be so bad but then again... we are just fillies. I think we should wait till we are old enough or just ready to handle this."
"Hmm!" said Applejack. "I may 'ave seen stuff like this but I for sure, wouldn' have done anything to anypony.... Without knowing what to do!"
Now it was Applejack's turn to blush and everyone giggled.
Twilight looked at out her window and saw the Princess Luna and began bringing out the moon.
"Well, I think we can call it a day" said Twilight. "If you want to stay and sleep over, it is fine."
Dash, Applejack and the seemingly quite Pinkie shook their heads.
"Sorry," spoke Dash, yawning a bit. "But I need to take care of some... needed business."
She gave Pinkie Pie a quick wink.
.... Thanks...
Don't mention it....
.Pinkie Pie smiled.
"Yeah, I uh.. think I left Gummy unattended in my bathroom."
"I'll join you," said Dash, bashfully.
"Well me," said Applejack, unaware of the two. "Im'a goin' home and hittin' the hay. I'm as tired as Granny Smith after a walk from the room to the next. I'll see ya all later!"
"yeah, thanks for the show Twilight!" said Pinkie happily.
"Sure, anytime.... I think?" Twilight said with a shy laugh.
Dash quickly followed after Pinkie and Applejack left right after them, closing the door.
Twilight used her horn and picked up the sleeping Spike. She walked up her steps.
She laid Spike on his basket, somewhat giving a glance at his lower legs before shaking her head and slowly lowering him. She pulled up his blanket and covered him up.
"Goodnight, Spike."
She then walked over to her bed and pulled her covers. When she lied on a comfortable position, she used her horn to turn off all the lights in the library and quickly fell to sleep.
You know what... I'm sorry about saying that about you. You really didn't mess up this chapter.
... well Okey Dokey Lokey... but I really thought you were going to do a sex scene.
Like I said, I will but not right now. This chapter was meant to begin one. You and Dash already hitted off in the first one. Now I was going to do another couple.
... let me guess.... Spike and Rarity?
Ehh.. close but something I won't reveal. Now I know this is going to upset you but.... I am going to rewrite this chapter.
But....
Look... I know that it would be cool for the readers to like this little blend of me talking to you.. especially when they think I'm going overboard and think I'm just a retard and all...
So true.....
.................................. Anyways, I really just want to make a new story of this one but something where it's a sweet topic and... you don't pop out. I mean its cool but I don't want to get these guys confused and have them throw rock or send hate comments.
Shaking head' Nobody hates you! Silly Willy, it's just that sometimes... you don't write smart stuff. And you don't have people hating your work.... Just that nobody gives a crap!
..... Thanks..... I feel so!!!!!! Much better!!!
You don't have to be all snooty about it! I like the way you handled a situation with me! It only proves one thing!
...................... And that is?
That handling Pinkie Pie is proof that you are just silly in the head and can take on any challenge! 'giggles'
.............................. just please don't go all 'breaking fourth wall' on my in the next chapter. I still don't want any bad comments or hate mail...
You wont! You know why?
No, Why?
Because! 'Slips on Deadpool costume'. Ill cut and stab anyone who tries to do any of that! 'Pulls out Blade' I'll make sure that no one makes you feel stupid but me!
Or me!
..... ? Who is that, Pinkie?
Oh... them? It comes with the costume and sometimes with other shows and all!
?? Huh?
He he..... my words are purple and Pinkie Pie is in a badass pony costume! She is... dun dun tha! PinkiePool!
Thanks!
"Sighs" Oh Boy! I'm not going to get any favs at with this.... Sorry about that.... a single fave from one of you reading this is worth knowing that somone like this chapter....
I'll break the computer just to get you to fave this!!!................... Draco? You really going to put those tags?