Devolution collection completely rewritten.
Ok. Read a few of my old stories that I wrote. Well not so old stories. Anything that I have on Devolution will be rewritten completely here, given a sleek shine and everything. I will make this work. And I need to know if I failed so I can hand it over to a buddy to get him to clean it up. :P :3 (^.=.^) (T.=.T) (lovin these Emotes)
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Prologue...
Allice walked out of her room, many thoughts on her mind. She has been wondering what to tell her father, in love with the one male he would not approve of. Allice slowly stepped into the large bedroom and stood at the foot of her father's bed, looking down and unable to make eye contact.
"What is it Allice? Is something bothering you?"
"It's just that I'm kinda worried what you are doing. How will mom and I make up for your absence?"
She switched subjects perfectly, escaping the possible yelling that he would have given her if she told him of her new boyfriend. Though it was still very much on her mind.
"I'll only be helping test a new robotics program. No need to be worried. All I'm going to do is go into the lab, help run a few tests, and come back home."
...That was the last thing he said to her. The next few years passed and all went to hell. The new robotics program they were 'testing' ended up adapting, beginning to learn, calling the human race inferior to itself and began to take over human bodies for a power source. They began building much better weaponry and even made an artificial brain which learned equally as much as a human's and processed the information more than ten times as fast, learning everything quicker than before and even adapting better. Soon all humans became enslaved, put into experimental camps. The machines figured it only fit to devolve the humans, turn them back into animals. Within a month of the creation of the camps, the machines had begun to do several experiments until one human came back from the table...Alive.
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Allice's eyes shot open, the needle piercing her skin and keeping her asleep was pulled out, along with several other needles. She felt weak, barely able to lift her arms even, thoughts swam left and right as her dormant brain had reawakened after such a long time. A single machine with a green retina hovered over, scanning her body from head to tow then the retina turned red.
"Scanning complete. Subject #12974 experiment success. Tests completed. Subject...Alive.", the metallic voice played.
The machine left her and the table pushed the upper half of her body upwards, making her body bend into a sitting position. A screen lowered in front of her and a pixelated face materialzed, being drawn quickly to look human.
"Hello subject #12974. You are the first to survive the harsh treatments in which the devolution process brings to the human body. Not only that but you are within a state of complete recovery. You will be able to walk out within a few days from now with your new life.", the feminine voice played.
"Wh...Where am I? What is...the date?", she asked.
"You are more than likely wandering what of your age and what of your family. All family is unknown as we do not keep records of humans anymore, all files have been discarded. Your age when entering the Devolution camp was fifteen. You are now twenty three. At the peak of your breeding age. Through monitoing of your estrus periods as you slept you should be going through another cycle which will start within minutes. You will be kept seperate from all males until full strength is recovered then released into the environment."
"You mean the environment you destroyed?"
"Hmhmhm. My dear, we have not destroyed the environment. We have terraformed the planet into a wide green forest. We are mostly solar powered, using fossil fuels only in dire need of energy. Nuclear energy has proven too dangerous to the living creatures of this planet so we have also haulted the use of nuclear energy on the entire planet, mining and ejecting the radioactive materials out of the planet's atmosphere and continuing on to the moon. Atmosphere levels of radiation were monitored and made sure there was no rise in the radiation levels to retain the atmospheric levels. So once you walk outside it will be like when you were a child once more playing in the forest."
"Whate are these Devolution processes for?"
"Take a good look at yourself."
Allice looked at her own body, noticing that every inch of her was covered in soft fur, her legs were no longer straight but digitigrade instead, ending in paws which looked to belong to an animal. She looked at her hands and got a near exact result, keeping their shape and at the end they were padded, claws jutting out of them but they still retained their human form and her entire body was colored like a dog and a fox.
"Wh...What am I?"
"In the anthropomorphic kingdom of animals and crossbreeds and even cross mutations, you are what is called a folf anthro. You are a mix between a wolf and a fox but are also permanently having of the human formed body. You will not be able to walk for the first few days on your hind legs alone. Your ears and legs have been modified, given operations to be extended and reshaped. You will have to walk in the animal stance known as, "on all fours."
"So I'm an animal now..."
Her ears drooped and a soft whine came from her then the recognition of what she just did shocked her.
"So when can I leave this room?"
"Imediately if you like. We have a shortage of operation tables and if you do not move quickly you may be forceably moved."
She sighed then rolled over onto her side, swinging her feet over the edge The feel of her new legs felt natural, like she was born like so. Allice dropped onto the floor, holding a paw spread stance to keep her ballanced. She took a few steps to get used to her new legs and slowly walked out of the room, following her instincts to follow the green arrows which lead her to a small room. It was colder than the last room, like she was put into a refridgerator. She shivered slightly then looked herself up and down. Her fur quickly shifted in color, becoming white all along her body and thicker. she felt a little bit warmer but still cold. As she wandered around the room she felt a burning sensation in her nethers and brought both hands between her legs.
"Damn it! What is this?"
She began to get heat flashes and soon felt like she was in a perfectly temperate room. She found a spot under a vent and laid down, spreading her four legs out. Then she finally noticed her tail as the air brushed over it, tickling the soft bushel of fur. In her heated daze she peered over her well shaped rump and saw the thick white tail which was attached to her body. The burning sensation between her legs became more intense, almost painful to her.
"I can't believe what has happened to me. What of my friends, my family. My family...Dad."
She curled up, holding her tail to her chest, lacing it between her legs, and slept soundly.
The next morning came quick, a robot passed by with a few more male humans who looked in each room, shouting at the many furry females which lay in each. Allice held her own tail closer to her and blushed from embarrassment. Another robot passed by, handing each of them a piece of raw meat. At first Allice looked at it in question then licked her lips, she hadn't eaten in days. The fire between her legs returned and she flinched.
"Damn...I'm going to have to get used to this."
She picked up the raw meat and bit into it instinctively, not even remembering that the last time she ate raw meat she hated the taste. It was one of the few things that tasted so good to her aside from fresh cherries which she used to pick when she was still a little child. Though looking over herself she looked a lot younger, keeping the shape a sixteen or seeventeen year old female human would. She brought her hands to her breasts and felt them, squeezing them lightly and letting out a soft whine. They were about the size of melons, full and not drooping like sacks of water, she didn't like it though. It made her feel like she was a whore or something close to one. Allic sighed lightly then laid back down, taking another bite of her lunch.
"I hate this. Why do We have to be like this anyway? I mean, we as humans adapted a lot easier when we were just humans."
She finished the meat chunk quickly and laid her head on her arm, enduring as much of the painful fire, which continuously sent rivets of pain to her brain, that sat between her legs.
"Curse this body."
Allice felt something sharp pierce her skin, hitting her on the rump. She turned around to look at it was then her vision blurred, becoming almost blackened, she rolled over and the feeling in her neck disappeared as she drifted into a deep sleep. Once she woke up she was fully aware, her tail between her legs as fear struck through her mind.
"What happened?! Where am I?!"
Allice was locked in a metal box, the only source of air being of a set of holes which ran along the door and two sides. it wasn't big enough as of so she could stand on her hind legs but big enough for her to stand on all fours. She peered through a hole and the sight of trees passed by along with weveral large shadows which were played upon the canopies by the many transport robots bringing hundreds of live subjects like herself to some new place. She barely got a great view of the beautiful landscape as the machine lowered onto the ground, the bottom of the box she was in opened up and she dropped. Allice and several other females were left alone in a small group as the machine flew off back to where it came from, shooting of with a loud boom.
"Where are we?"
"If I'm correct. This place is the Australian outback! But it isn't baren and rocky. It's...lush and full of life."
"Mommy? Is that you?"
"By what I know, we passed by about eight years of life. Don't call me mommy. Call me mother or mom. I will no longer baby you for you need to learn to live without my help."
"Ok..."
"Hey! Is that you Betriece?"
"Hell yeah it is! Is that the same voice which my old friend Anna used to have?"
"Oh hell yeah sistah! Whats been shakin?"
The talk between everyone passed as if they were in reunion with one another for a while before it got dark. Once someone noticed the change in all the shadows, everyone began quietting down and disappeaered into the underbrush but they could still be heard nearby, and Allice herself had crawled under the root system of a tree, finding it quite roomy. It was a rather large tree though, as if over a hundred years had been put into it. Though it had only been eight years. Then thoughts came to her mind that put her own head in a fight of it's own.
"Father...Mother."
She hadn't seen her father since the day she spoke to him last, when he went to go help test a new robotics program. Her mother disappeared shortly after that, not showing up in the records or anything as a human being.
The next few days passed without anyone doing anything else other than foraging for food, practicing to walk on two legs, talking, and returning to hiding when nightfall came. It was all too fast for Allice though and during the middle of the night she crawled from under her tree and shook herself off. Allice then began running through the forest, no actual sense of direction.
She just had to get away from it all.
Chapter 1...
Allice got up after her nightly 'pleasuring' and crawled from her den. She began running, not looking back nor did she turn left or right. She just ran for what seemed like an hour before the urges overcame her once more. She slowed down then stopped, clenching her fists andgritting her teeth, trying anything to keep herself from fondling herself as the feeling to relieve the urges.
"Damn it! I can't take this!"
"Then why don't you quell the urges like everyone else does?"
"Eeek!"
Allice jumped, losing ballance and falling in a spread position, vulnerable to any male.
"Whoa. You...Wow. What a fine pussy you have."
Allice blushed from embarrassment and used her tail to hide her nethers as she got up. She turned to the person and was face to face with a male fox.
"Eeek!"
She jumped once more, this time keeping her balance.
"Don't jump like that, your breasts keep jiggling oh too cutely."
The fox seemed drunk, toying with her. She covered her breasts and sat down.
"Stop it! It's not funny!"
"It is to me. Eheh. Ehehehhehh."
"What do you want from me?"
"I don't want anything. Your scent of arousal woke me. I was having such a nice dream though."
"Well it's not my fault! I didn't wish for such a body!"
"Whoa. You need to calm down little missy. Is that the way you talked to your boyfriend?"
"No...Allex..."
"Allex? Allex Sebei?"
"You know him?!"
"Yeah. Thats the guy who was killed on sight in one of the camps. He tried climbing a fence last time I remember."
He gave a soft yawn and laid his head down on his paws. Allice's ears dropped, the sure sign of a saddened or depressed mind.
"Oh. Ok then."
"Hey. It's nothing to be sad about. The kid was not a good one. None too bright either. Listen. You were better off without him."
"Thanks for trying to make me feel better but thats not why I'm sad..."
"Well you can tell me all about it tomorrow if you wish. For now, just sleep. You shouldn't be alone either. There are a lot of males hiding in the bushes. You don't want to wake them or meet them either."
"What?! But I...I uh...I don't remember where I came from..."
"Listen. Lucky for you I'm a nice guy. You can sleep here with me or in a tree for the night."
"Oh...I think I'll just lay down here."
"Ok. Just don't make too much noise if you decide to pleasure yourself at night. Lots of the mails here are horny. Including me. But I don't show it. I try to hide it."
His eyes were closed.
"Why are you telling me all this?"
"Because I really want a girlfriend. Plus. Saving you might work. It doesn't look to hard to keep you away from a bunch of horny males."
"What?! I should have known. You just want me for my body!"
He didn't reply. Only the visible rise and fall of his back was visible. Her anger disappeared and she laid down next to him.
"Well. It's probably the best I could get. Might as well make do with what I got."
She shivered slightly as the wind picked up, spreading cold air throughout the area. Allice closing her eyes to escape the cold, feeling the warmth from this male's body. It felt so warm to her. Her fur changed white again, giving her more warmth as the temperature quickly dropped. She huffed and steam took the place of her breath, becoming the last thing she saw before her heavy eyelids shut.
The male woke first, Inhaling a lung full of air and stretching each leg, his front legs forward then his back legs outwards. He noticed something brush against his left leg and turned to see the female folf. He froze, looking at her lovely body, speachless, embarrassed, and confused. He jerk away, panicking.
"Oh sh-shit!"
He looked around, finding some large leaves sprouting from a snow covered plant. The sun peaked through the bushes and the sounds of the other males rising became audible as he quickly Allice with the leaves and shoved her against the tree to further conceal her. All the males moved from their hiding places, passing by the single frightened male.
"Hey Bentley. No need to be scared of the robots."
"Oh it's n-not the robots. I'll be fine. Just give me a few minutes and I'll be with you guys."
"Ok. Whatever."
Once the last male left he hurried over to the pile of leaves and pulled allice out as she awoke from her deepened sleep.
"What are you doing?!", she whispered.
"You have to get out of here! Go that way, keep going till you find other females, find some place to hide even!"
"Wait...I thought you wanted me to be your girlfriend..."
"Eh?"
"Don't you remember last night?"
"Oh damn it to hell...I thought that was a lucid dream..."
"But you were awake. Do you not remember anything that you said?"
"I do but...That is not the me me. That was who I wished to be. I have wished to have a girlfriend but I wished for her to see me for me, not beause I got horny and woke up!"
"But...You have swayed me. Is wasn't very much that you did but you still did and I don't see anyone else. I thank you very much for you actually worrying about me. but you don't want me?"
"I...Wha...I don't know!", he shouted.
"Listen...Calm down.", she smiled.
She took his head into her arms and pressed it against her chest. His breathing slowed and he closed his eyes.
"I...Thank you...You are so gentle."
"Just try not to think of it too much. Just relax."
He stayed quiet for several minutes, swaying with her as she hugged him close. Another male walked in from the bushes, trotting along with a happy face, just prancing around as if he was in a happy mood.
"Het Bentley! We're waitin for...Whia. Hot! Oh yeah. I'm gettin some of this!"
The wolf approached the two and Bentley's eyes shot open. He pushed away from Allice and took a stance in front of her, growling deeply at the wolf.
"Oh! Sh-shit!!"
The wolf skittered away and Bentley stopped growling, waiting till he heard nothing more than a scamper from a few feet away.
"Uhm. Over protective much?", Allice asked.
"Actually. That wasn't me. I think that was Instinct."
"Instinct. Hmm. Maybe this is one of the flaws the robots fixed."
"Maybe. But. I've never been mean to anyone. In mine or anyone else's defene or even in offense. I...I don't understand."
She walked beside him.
"Then don't try. It will only cause more confusion. I...I chose you because I knew that it would be the best of what I would ever get. To take up your drunken offer was what seemed like a good idea in this new world. And now I'm sure of it."
"But I've only...Stopped rape. Holy crap. But wouldn't we have to get to know each other?"
"Well that is what I originally thought. But there may be points where you will have to introduce me to your friends. It will take the right words though as of for now. You could just be my caretaker or something."
"That could work perfectly but, stay here, I will stay as well. We could live together for a while and probably find a home to claim as ours."
"Whoa. We need to think of one thing right now. Our friendship. So lets just start by getting to know each other. My name is Allice Nomei."
"I am Rickler Tensauc. But it's so hard to pronounce, everyone calls me Bentley.
"Ok then. Let's continue."
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Further in the woods, the many animals began their own wonderings, finding new mates and all. Everything was being recorded by the drones though. The robots which kept watch of everything.
"Robot 2729. Report."
"There has been suspicion of a sighting near Air's Rock."
The robots flew overhead above the large trees, following up until they came across a husky whipping out long strands of quickly moving wind streams. He walked on his hind legs, dancing upon the rocky surface as he manipulated the sand and rustic dust to make a beautiful swirl of red coloring. The robots' sides opened and several guns came out, targetting the husky. They opened fire and he dropped dead, blood pooling under him. The guns retracted and the robots left, not even documenting anything of what just happened.
"Any news of subject A?"
"No sir. She shows no signs."
"Data tabbed, verified, pending offer, accepted, awaiting new command, new command recieved. Find Kikler Nomei."
Chapter 2...
Their talk took a long time to start, only a few words passing by every few minutes. It seemed hopeless till one of them brought up past memories, then they began talking frequently, going well into the night. The rustles of the other males going around them to avoid them were audible as they talked. But they lowered their voices a little so that no one would be eve's dropping easily. It didn't matter any way because they were talking so loud you could hear them twenty yards away.
"Whoa. So you didn't really get to use it till you were seventeen. That condom must have been crumpled by then."
"Surprisingly, it hadn't. I kept it as a seuvenir though, never used it at all. So I figured why not make a joke of it and stapled it to a card, writing 'emergency condom' above it."
Allice laughed aloud.
"I never knew you'd be one to think of such a stupid antic.", she chuckled.
"Hey. You mind finding a small place you and I couldhide for tonight. It got cold last night. Luckily you were there or I might not have survived."
"Sure. I'll be right back."
"No ait!"
But she was gone already, darting forth into the underbrush faster than he could follow. She passed by several wolves, foxes, and even a folf which looked directly at her. She searched for about an hour before giving up and she trotted back to the spot she remembered, only to get pounced by a big wolf, he landed on her actually. She yelped and rolled him off of her.
"Ok you bitch. You're going to be MY whore, not that cunt Bentley's."
"Who says I'm going to listen?"
"You will or I rip your throat open."
"How are you going to expect to do that with ease?"
"Fear! What else? All I have to do is show my teeth and you will be scared."
He bared his dull canine teeth and she laughed at him.
"You got a lot to learn. Wow. If you're going to try and threaten someone, you better have the ass to back it up. You ain't got nuttin on me. You can barely stand on ya own four legs."
"Sh-shut up! It's not f-funny!"
"Oh? Is the wittle baby gonna cry?"
"Leave me alone!"
He now had his head lowered and his tail between his legs, his legs shaking unsteadily underneath him, proving her point of him not able to stand properly.
"Listen. Make sure you can go against a male and me before you come near me because I've got my own little guard fox."
"Whatever. Just go."
She left and met up with Bentley shortly after,nuzzling up next to him as he slept. She liked him as a friend and his body heat kept her warm at night.
"Good night my love."
"Good night.", he answered.
Chapter 3...
Allice Woke and shivered slightly. The land around her was covered in a thin blanket of snow, the tree holding up much that would have fallen on them. She shook the snow from her fur then nudged Bentley awake.
"Wake up. It's snowing.", she smiled.
He opened his eyes and squinted them slightly, the white snow blinding him in his sleep induced transe. Bentley shook himself awake, shoving off the snow as well.
"Need to be quiet. I'm getting tired af having to sit in the usual spot and sleep. Maybe we could find some place to...Well live together.", he said weakly.
"Well. We can't live together, mainly because I still don't know you as much as your thought of wife. But I can sure as heck find a place to settle where the both of us could have a nice little hole."
"Ok then. Would you please? Because I'm still tired."
"Ok. I guess I'll search on my own."
"Thank you."
He laid back down and slept, the cold barely bothering him. She sighed then trotted off, prancing in the snow as it crunched audibly under her feet. Her hand had formed more into paws over the few days, weeks or however long she had been out here. They looked more like her hind paws, having a similar shape but keeping the distinct human curvature. In her searches, she noticed her own breath in the air and was overjoyed. She played around, breathing warm breaths and watching the steam rise. Allice ran forward, looking for a small hole or something again and started to notice that as her breathing increased, whatever she breathed on became melted if it was frozen. But very quickly. Like her breath had become hotter. Se ignored it so and continued running, breathing faster and faster till she stopped running. Her breath was more solid, being of a thick white fog. She experiamented a few times and started to see it getting thicker and darker.
"That is, kinda weird. I've never seen my breath so thick."
She pushed the thoughts of worry out of her head and looked around her, finally finding the said home. She yipped for joy and a bright flash scaredher, causing her to yelp and a flash of flames shot out in front of her snout. Not from her mouth but in front of her snout. The tree in front of her showed visible scorch marks from the small blast, blackened and partially singed from the hot flames. She breathed heavily, huffing a few more flames out, but they were not as large. She calmed down and approached the tree, touching it. It felt solid, cold once more. The tree qucikly encased in a very thin layer of ice, becoming white with the frost.
"What on earth is this?"
She sat back, watching her breath once more. It showed only steam now, no flames. She felt warm though, her body accepting heat from an external heat source. The sudden urge of running had overcome her and panicked, bolting forward, but the heat only heightened. Her breaths became quick and fast, rasping out fire which cascaded down her sides., but she didn't burn however. She picked up speed, lifting off the ground. She wished to stop but her legs continued, or her back legs atleast. Though she held her front legs forward, slowly padding them across the solid air. Allice took a view of what was behind her and her lower half of her body swirled with flames. her back legs having disappeared in the long flaming tail. She continued on though, hovering through the forest. Others seemed to join in, adding to the long flaming tail which trailed behind her. Around twenty people had joined in, all of a fox variant in nature, all had flames swirling around them. She looked ahead and saw the outline of something. It surrounded them all, becoming a type of shield which cascaded over the flames even. It seemed to swirl with energy, passing through everything it touched. Allice stopped suddenly, hovering in midair as the rest continued on. She stayed suspended in midair though, floating. Upon a view of herself she saw that she was different. The flames kept burning, hiding most of her features, but she could easily make out the large tufts of fur surrounding her wrists and hands.
"This. It doesn't make sense. I'm scared. How do I get down?"
Her question was answered. The flames flickered to a low level then dissipated. She fell several stories, landing on a set of branch that seemed to break her fall prefectly. As she stood up, something grabbed her, knocking the breath out of her as it kept going forward. The distinct sound of bullets hitting dirt sounded from where she was once before. Allice coughed and a hand held her snout shut, and she refused but to her disadvantage, whetever had her was more than tripple her size. The ground around them became darker and darker, clouds rolling in above. They were close though, going the same speed as them and keeping only about three hundred feet above their heads. Snow began falling rapidly, creating a small snowstorm as the weather tried to blanket the area in snow. The person stopped and punched the ground, making a very deep hole and put Allice in. Whoever it was jumped in just fast enough to cover the hole above them as a muffled explosion sounded from above.
"Who?! What just happened?!"
"Be quiet!"
She stayed quiet and the sound of vibrations from an electric engine came from above, becoming muffled even more as it travelled away.
"My name is Kezeirick. Your's?"
"Allice...How did you know that I was being chased? I didn't even know."
"Thats because the robots are trying to keep things covered."
"What do you mean?"
"That fire display you did. You brought so much attention to people who didn't know they could use fire like so. They barely know how to control it and are all more than likely going to die if my friends don't help."
"What? You mean I can control this at will?"
"Yes. Try thinking of warmth."
"Ok."
The air became thinner the longer she thought, slight shivers running up her spine as it grew colder, oh so much colder.
"No! Not from the outside. From the inside. Feeling warmth from the inside out. From the outside is heat's opposite, cold."
She concentrated harder, never having felt the described feeling before in her life. She thought longer and longer, nothing happening. Then she watched as a memory unfolded in front of her eyes. The memory was quick, taking only seconds to go through a process of months as the robots performed a single process that would have caused her so much pain if she were awake. The needle being entered into her stomach, a warm fluid filling her womb. Then she could slowly feel her belly growing with the children inside of it and then her own water breaking, releasing the children. But it slowed here. She doubled through the full seventeen and a half hours in mere seconds, her mind slowing it. The time finally came when her body gave the natural instincts of the animal control. One after another, the pups of small yelping and crying foxes being taken as she gave birth. The memory finished once the seventh had been born. Her pups. A tear streaked down her cheak and she couldn't think of anything other than that. She slumped down and sat, bringing her paws to her eyes.
"I...I have children...They...They made me have them...But...Their my children!...My pups...My pups...I have to get my pups."
"Damn. I can't have this happen. Not now! That memory isn't supposed to be accessed yet!"
"Wh...What are you talking about?"
"You see, your memories, everyone's memories were wiped. The processes used and needed were very costly."
He uncovered the hole and tossed the crying folf over his shoulder. Once outside, the ground was blanketted in a very thick layer of snow.
"Ok. For now, I'm sorry it had to be done but we needed to run tests."
"So. You took them from me why? Why do I not have my children?"
"Ok, ok. Listen. First, they have no father. They were asexually produced."
"This is all so much. Why are you telling me all the horrible things which have happened to me? Why not the good...?"
"Listen. There is no good which will happen or has happned till those robots are taken down. I have to give you every detail in a summarized description or my boss will kill me. I'm almost done torturing you though. The one you had supposedly hooked up with has been sent to our little camp for now. He will be arriving here shortly as he passes by."
"Ey! Kez! We got a problem!"
"What? Don't tell me, the robots."
"Yes sir. They found Bentley as I was telling him the whole story. This protocol does not work well. They shot him dead. But I threw myself to cover and buried myself like you told me."
"He...He's dead...No...Not bentley."
"Oh great. More emotional damage for the missy here that I personal operated on. You know, I wish that I could connect with my patients sometimes but my job refrains me from doing so and when I wish to connect a little bit to help them relax and finish a job it always comes to something happening. You could have kept your mouth shut."
"Hey! I've had enough...Just...Take me to this camp and I'll go lay down For a few hours, days. I don't know how long this depression will last."
"No. I'm sorry but that is also a part of the news I haven't told you. You need to learn to think like a real flamer fox. You can not lay down till you have discovered how to control your emotions. Now I need you to think of warmth from the inside out."
"I don't want to. I just want to be left alone."
"No. Do it.", he commanded.
"No!"
She pushed him away and he grabbed her arm, pulling her back. She punched him and flames burst from the impact, pushing him back a few feet, the lizard clenching his singed chest.
"Good...But...You don't need to hit...How did you do that one though?"
"I...Thought like you told me. If it was to get you to shut up then I decided to do it. Plus. I wanted to hit you."
"Good. Let something other than depression take over. Now lets go. and hey. I'm sorry for having to push you and kill your dreams of...Well...Seing your pups but we are not powerful enough to face the robots...yet. For now, you need to finish transforming. I will explain the details later. for now, lets go."
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Ok. I've finished editing. Seriously people, this time be harsh about it. Tell me of any spelling errors and if it holds a beter storyline.