Unnatural Attraction 1 (rewritten)

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#1 of Unnatural Attraction


ive finnaly found the time to rewrite this as i promised here it is again. and also some tweeks to the characters have been made plz enjoy

special thanks to the golden malamute for help with the editing. :)


It had been a day since he was told he couldn't go on a trip with his friends this year, and that he had to watch his 11 your old sister Lucy while mum and dad went on a trip to visit their sick grandpa. Jack was sitting in the living room channel surfing. It was Friday, so most of the good shows weren't going to be on till tomorrow night. He sighed, he was still upset that he had to give up on a planed trip that he had gone on every year with his friends, he didn't know why his mom and dad couldn't find some one to watch her. Couldn't they just dump her onto one of their neighbors?

He shrugged and thought maybe they already tried, they have always let him go on far off trips with friends and other family before now.

''Guess I'm just being spoiled'' he laughed, it wasn't so bad he and his sister did get along very well, and she is fun to play games with. Behind those adorable little puppy eyes, lays a cold blooded WARZONE killer. God she is brutal in that game.

He saw his sister walking out of the kitchen looking a bit guilty. She was walking a bit funny and holding her leg as she walked.

''Hey Lucy! Come here'' he called out to her making her jump a little, she slowly turned and smiled oddly and started walking over. She's clearly hiding something, and that something was sorta bulging out of her pocket. she slowly approached and asked as calmly as she could. ''Yes, what is it?'' Jack couldn't help himself as he began to question her. ''So why are you walking all funny, you didn't hurt yourself in the kitchen did you?'' he fained concern, as she quickly tried to think of something to say.

''Ohh umm y-yes I did, b-but don't worry I'm ok.'' she was so cute when she lied, and this was a lie he was going to exploit for a good laugh.

''But your walking all funny, and you seem to be in pain. I think you should take off your pants and let me have a look at that leg, we might have to take you to the doctor''

Her ears lowered a bit and her face started turning red, she didn't know what to say but as he crept closer she backed up a bit. ''n-no I'm fine I swear''

he smiled ''I'm sure you are, but I got to make sure.'' he crept closer and closer still, until she turned and tried to run to her room up the stairs. She got no further then 3 feet from the stairs when Jack grabbed her, she tumbled to the floor and tried to crawl away but Jack grabbed her ankles and lifted her upside down facing him.

''So what are you hiding sis?'' he interrogated her, her ears where flat and she was trying to wiggle away but she knew he had her. ''Nothing!, let me go!''

''nothing you say? Alright you leave me no choice'' he started shaking her by the ankles causing her to whine and wiggle more only to her disadvantage. Her shirt fell past her chest, and the contents of her pockets spilled out onto the floor. Some candy bars, skittles, cookies, a sucker, and a twinkie!. he saw as he shook her some more. She nearly fell out of her pants before he saw nothing else was in her pockets so he stopped, and put her down. She lay there for a few seconds dizzy from being upside-down and being shaken. Her shirt was still up off of her chest and jack got a good look at her budding breasts. His face got a slight red tint as he nudged her with his foot to make her get up. He couldn't help but think she did have an attractive body at this young age, she is slim, has slight curves in some places and her breasts he thought, would develop into some pretty nice breasts some day; maybe not Ds but no less then Cs he figured.

She groaned and quickly pulled her shirt down to cover herself when she realized her shirt wasn't covering her like is should.

''Weren't hiding anything my ass, you raided the sweets jar, now what am I going to tell mom when she gets home?'' he said while standing over her.

She got up and started to plead with him. ''Please! Don't tell mom I- ill do anything you want, you can have some if you want. Just please don't tell mom or ill never get sweets again!'' he thought about her pleading for a few moments adding slight hmmming sounds. A thought came to mind but it was pretty far out there. He always wondered what a girls breasts felt like, and with hers budding already it might give some insight as to how they feel; but he wasn't sure he should.

''Anything I want, no matter what?'' he asked as she shook her head yes then spoke softly. ''Yes, anything you want no matter what.'' her tail was between her legs submitting to him as he stood there thinking about what he thought earlier, then decided to try it. ''Ok, but first you have to swear never to tell anyone about this deal we have ''

''ok, I promise'' she agreed as he leaned down closer to her.

He hesitated at first then asked. ''lift up your shirt, and l-let me feel your breasts'' she took a step back as she heard him tell her what he wanted her to do.

''W-what?'' she asked as he repeated himself.

''I want you to lift your shirt and let me touch you''

''I, I cant, anything else but that. Boys aren't allowed to touch girls there.''

''But you said anything I want, no matter what it was.'' her ears dropped flat as he came closer; but she knew that she promised him anything and promises are supposed to be kept no matter what. ''o-ok, b-but not here.'' he agreed and suggested they go to his room. They gathered up the candies and took them with them on the way to jacks room up stairs. Once they got there Lucy walked in first followed by Jack. Jack locked his door just in case someone came home early and closed the blinds to his window as well.

Lucy was stuck now and she was nervous about what she was going to let her brother do, as he walked over to her slowly. ''ok, no one can see in and we are all alone. Now take off your shirt.'' Lucy was hesitant, but did as he asked with little protest, lifting her shirt over her head and let if fall on the floor. Jack couldn't believe she was actually going to let him feel her up like this. ''Ok now sit on my bed.'' she walked over to his bed and sat down with her arms crossed over her chest embarrassed. As jack walked over to her he nudged her arms down and reminded her of her promise.

The young German Sheppard laid down with her arms at her side as he leaned over her, and cautiously extended his hand to her belly. She gasped a little as she felt his hand move along her belly. She closed her eyes and waited for it all to be over, but he took his time. I can't believe it he thought, as his hand was just below her left breast, so close. Just as he was about to feel her up the sound of the front door slamming, and their dads booming voice from down the stairs fell on them like a lode of bricks.

''Jack, Lucy!'' he yelled as they heard footsteps coming up the stairs. Jack jumped up and rushed over to grab Lucy's shirt, throwing it to her. She put it on as quickly as she could as jack turned his game consol on, and booted up their saved game on WARZONE to hide the real reason they both were in his room alone with the blinds closed. Lucy saw what he was doing and grabbed an extra controller, just as a loud thump and jiggle of the door handle came from outside. ''Jack open the door.'' he commended as Jack rushed over and unlocked the door letting his dad inside. ''why was the door locked?'' he looked in the room and saw Lucy with a game controller, and playing the game he'd bought jack for his birthday. '

'Sorry dad, I didn't know the door was locked when we came in here to play our saved game.'' their dad shrugged thinking this answer was good enough.

''Jack, Lucy I got some groceries in the car I need you two to bring in; and jack you know your mother doesn't like Lucy playing that violent game a lot.''

Jack slumped his shoulders ''I know dad, but Lucy is the only one I can trust my life with on the battle field.'' he waved his fist around as their dad laughed while shaking his head.

"Well I'm not your mother so after you get the groceries in have fun, maybe ill try playing with you guys.'' Lucy cheered in the background as she got up and ran past them. Her face was still red from earlier, luckily their dad hadn't notice. Lucy was relieved by getting out of letting jack touch her for the time being.

Moments later Jack come down to help with the groceries, it seemed that their dad stocked the kids up for an apocalypse, rather then a week end. Jack took in the more heavier bags and Lucy handled the smaller stuff, while their dad briefed them on the plan for their parents absence.

''I'm sure you kids wont inhale all this in the week end but if you find you guys don't like some of the stuff here ill be leaving 35$ for ordering out, Jack I don't want you to spend it on yourself like you did last time.'' their father looked sternly at jack who in tern lowered his head in shame. Since the last time he was left alone for a few days he spent all the money their dad left for food on stuff he wanted on eBay. Jack stood up straight and reassured his father that he would be more responsible with the money their father kindly left them.

''Don't worry dad. I've got it this time, promise. When you and mom get home we wont of spent a dime over the cost of a medium pizza'' their father looked at him with a smile, then set on about finishing packing his and his wife's bags for the trip. Jack and Lucy didn't look at each other the whole time they were putting the supplies away in the proper cupboard's. Seemed like they were still embarrassed about what they were about to do before their dad came home early.

About thirty minutes later the task was done, and Lucy went into the living room where their dad was sitting watching some sports. As she came to the couch, she sat down next to him and cuddled into his arm and smiled. He smiled back at her and knew she wanted something, the only time she ever cuddled him during sports was to ask for something.

''Ok hunny, what is it you need?'' she giggled a little and gave him the cutest puppy eyes you'd ever see.

''Daddy, when you said you'd play the game with Jack and I did you mean it?'' he wrapped an arm around her and nuzzled her.

''Of course, as long as you guys teach me how. I don't play games that much, but yah I will.''

"Can we play now?'' she asked, as he thought about it for a moment.

Jack came into the living room after another moment as their dad spoke again. ''well your mother wont be home for another hour or so, ok ill play.'' Lucy hugged him as Jack decided to go get the game consol out from his room, he hooked it up in the living room and booted up the warzone game. Their dad really didn't understand how the controls worked, or how to make his character without A LOT of help. Both Jack and Lucy rubbed their heads in frustration while helping their dad create his character.

Their hour was long gone when the kid's mother came home from work

and she found was her cubs playing a game she didn't like with a husband that was supposed to be packing their stuff for the trip. After a short conversation later their dad was back to playing while mom went on to making dinner, everything else was forgotten for the time being. But in the back of Jacks and Lucy's minds they knew Jack would collect on the promise Lucy had made, sooner or later; and jack planned to do it when their parents went to bed for the night.