Whip of Fate

Story by Ecliptic on SoFurry

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Whip of Fate

The cool breeze rushed over the water like a great eagle, sending goosebumps running all over the slippery body of a female anthro shark. She was sexy beyond belief. Men on the beach always tried to have a way with her, but she sourly refused any invitations, no matter how hot the man was. Gillya was indeed a very tasty treat to lay eyes on, but she was a she-devil in disguise. No man has ever been with her, for she hated the idea of a mate, but deep down, she was soft enough to accept a proper "meal" if the chance presented itself. Laying under the shade of her umbrella, she rolled onto her stomach, gingerly untying the knot in her bikini top straps. Letting it fall limp on either side, she slipped it out from under her. She looked up for a moment, noticing a few men staring at her with hungry eyes as she stripped off her top. Growling, she snarled at them, cursing under her breath.

"Pigs will be pigs." She told herself.

Having a sudden change of heart, she put her top back on and rolled up her towel, tucking it onto a pink napsack she kept at her side. The umbrella was folded and placed in the sand while she gathered the rest of her belongings. Not realizing she was fuming after witnessing the series of men watching her, she stood up rather fast, losing her balance as she waved a hand back to catch herself. To her surprise, she felt another set of hands grab her from behind, steadying her from falling. Startled, but relieved, she turned around to see her potential hero. Her nose touched the nose of another anthro shark, but this time a male. Blushing, she looked into his eyes, mesmorized by his soft glare.

"Are you alright ma'am?" He asked.

"Um, yes, I'm fine, thank you." She blushed even redder, making him giggle.

"That's great, glad you're alright, I'll just be on my way then." He nodded his head to her and turned to leave.

Gillya stood frozen in her spot, watching him walk away with sad eyes. It then hit her, she knew something was meant to be with him and her.

"Wait! Sir!" She stumbled as she slung her napsack onto her back.

Turning to look at her with a warm smile, he replied, "yes ma'am?"

His reply made her blush redder than a tomato, which in turn, made him giggle once again.

"I'd really like to uh...maybe we could..." She was lost in her words, clearly falling for this young man.

He took a few steps closer to her, gazing deep into her warm eyes, taking her hands in his as he breathed out calmly.

"Would you like to attend me at dinner?" He smiled.

"Yes! I mean...uh...yes, sir." She looked down at her feet, still blushing.

"You're cute you know...and my name is Finn." He winked at her, taking hold of one of her hands, walking with her along the beach.

She couldn't help but look at his calm face, down to his slightly muscular shoulders and chest, feeling herself get uneasy when she got to his stomach. He looked over at her with a grin, which made her shoot her head in the other direction. Chuckling under his breath, he led her to his car parked in the beach parking lot.

"After you." He said as he held the passanger side door open for her, smiling softly.

"Oh thank you." She got in the car, giggling to herself after he shut the door, making his way to the driver door. Getting in, he put the keys into the ignition and turned them to start the engine. The car awoke to life, sending a "VROOM!" from within its' metal depths. Finn looked over at Gillya with a sly grin on his lips, making her blush again.

"What kind of engine does this have?" She asked, trying to impress him.

Smacking the dashboard with a hand, he replied, "this baby has a V6 engine in it, and is automatic, since I can't drive stick if my life depended on it." He looked over at her again, still smiling.

"Oh, yeah I prefer auto myself, can't deal with all the gear-changing, ya know?" She smiled weakly.

"Mhm, I agree, cars are divine and all, but I just like something simple to get me from point A to point B." He replied as he put the car in drive, pulling out of the parking lot.

While in the car, they struck up a conversation about their lives, their interests, and other things. Finn pulled the car into the driveway of his house, clicking a button on a remote on his keychain to open the garage door. Gillya suddenly felt a sick sensation overcome her body.

"Um, I thought we were going to dinner?" She asked, looking worriedly at him.

"Oh, we are having dinner, just at my house, if that's alright. I understand completely if you'd rather eat out, I just wanted to make you something myself instead of take-out cooking." He gave her an apologetic look.

Now feeling foolish, she blushed and looked away. Finn smiled and placed a hand on her thigh to show her he meant only good intentions by his offer.

"If you're worried I'll hurt you like some pig, I'd never do that to a woman, especially one as sweet as you." He leaned over and gave her a swift kiss on her cheek.

Closing her eyes, she didn't realise she was making a satisfied face, pushing her lips out for a kiss, lost in her own world. Finn giggled, then decided to make her fantasy come true, giving her a sweet kiss she'd never forget. Moaning in surprise, Gillya felt her body slump, totally in love with his lips on hers. As if this wasn't enough, when he parted his lips from hers, she blurted out, "oh Finn I want your babies..."

Her eyes then shot open, realizing what she just said. She hid her face from his view, blushing even more than before. Finn chuckled as he got out of the car, shutting the door to make his way around the car to her door. He opened it for her, and just as she went to get out, he wrapped an arm around her side, pulling her from the car like some handsome prince. She smiled softly as he shut the car door for her, taking hold of her hand to lead her up the steps to the front door. Finn inserted the keys into the keyhole, turning it and pushing open the door.

"Lady's first." He said, smiling.

Gillya curtsied casually and walked into the house, looking around the hallway. She smiled as he walked past her, taking her hand again to show her around his home. They walked into each room, as Finn told Gillya all about each one, going over it quickly so they could get dinner going.

"Your house is beautiful." Gillya said, resting her chin in her hands, keeping her eyes on him.

"Thank you, it's nothing much, but it's cozy for me." He winked at her, which made her blush.

Finn danced around the kitchen as he got out ingrediants and supplies to use for making the romantic dinner for them both. He then turned to her and said, "I'll be right back miss." Leaving the room, he came back a moment later carrying a small CD player. Setting it down on the counter, plugging it in and turning it on, he put in a CD and pressed play. An up-beat, swingin' song started playing through the speakers, which made Finn sway his tail side to side, while nodding his head to the beat. Gillya laughed as he swept around the kitchen, preparing the food and setting the oven to cook, while spending a few minutes with Gillya, twirling her around and dipping her down low, kissing her neck. She moved her hips to set him off, and he responded by taking his shirt off, which made her eyes widen and glow with love. Finn moved his eyebrows up and down with half-lidded eyes to act silly. She giggled at him, loving the time with him, dancing until the food was ready for plating.

"So, here I have some baked Salmon Wellingtons, with soft mashed potatoes, and a side of Caeser Salad. He grinned, proud of his cooking, putting a plate of food before her at the table, along with his own beside her.

"Oh one more thing!" He said, going to the fridge and taking out 2 glasses. He poured chocolate milk into each glass, bringing them to the table as he sat down beside Gillya, finishing off by lighting a candle in the center of the table.

Gillya couldn't help but noticed how prepared he was.

"Do you always eat with someone?" She asked, curious.

"No, actually, you're the first gal I've been with." He replied as he chewed on a piece of Salmon.

Puzzled, Gillya found herself lost in a world of love. She was head-over-heels for Finn, and wanted to be with him for the rest of her life. They ate dinner quietly, sharing a few stories here and there, talking casually about things. Finn put the dishes in the sink and came over to sit with Gillya again, taking her hand in his.

"Gillya, I know we just met...but I feel so much for you already, and I have a feeling we're meant for each other." He smiled softly at her.

"I...feel the same way." Gillya said, blushing.

Finn smiled, and started to lean towards her for another kiss. He was surprised, but pleased, to see her rush forward to meet his lips half-way. His hand rose up to caress her cheek as they kissed, lost in a river of love, passion, and longing. Pulling away from each other, Gillya looked away again, her shy eyes kept to the ground, while Finn kissed her neck.

"Um, hey, would you like to stay with me tonight?" He asked shyly.

"I guess I could...but where?" She looked back in his eyes.

"Well there is a spare bedroom next to mine, for guests. It's never been used, so you may stay in there, if you wish." Finn smiled at her.

"That sounds wonderful, sure I'll stay." She couldn't help but keep her eyes on him.

Getting up, Finn led them into the living room. She sat on the couch as he went to put a movie into the DVD player, turning on the TV.

"I hope you like horror." He asked.

"Like it? I love horror!" She said with a evil grin on her lips.

Finn laughed, as he put in 'Halloween' for them to watch. Gillya sat at one end of the couch, while Finn sat in the middle, watching the movie like nothing amazing was going on. Around twenty minutes into the movie, Gillya turned her head to look at Finn, adoring his easy eyes and calm body language. She then thought to herself, "time to make a move..."

Pretending to cough, she inched closer to him, before moving right beside him. He looked at her with his soft eyes and a smile on his lips, saying, "hey there little lady." Gillya blushed as she looked down, then back up into his eyes, and moved closer until their bodies touched. Smiling, he wrapped an arm around her neck and shoulders, encouraging her to rest on him. She did just that, resting her head on his chest and sighing happily. They cuddled together until the movie ended. Gillya got off Finn as he stretched his arms up while yawning, still shirtless, it also stretched his chest muscles, driving Gillya crazy.

He stood, walking towards the doorway. Looking back, he held his hand out for her.

"You coming, sweet heart?" He said, smiling.

She adored the way he called her that, almost swooning as she stood up, taking his hand to follow him upstairs. Leadning her to the guest room, he bid her goodnight with a kiss and went into his own room.

They both plopped onto their beds, sighing happily as they though of each other, madly in love. Finn turned over on his side and shut his eyes, slowly drifting off. Gillya on the other hand couldn't sleep, she found herself wanting to be in his arms. Finn tossed and turned in his bed, trying to gain some sleep. He soon found that all he could do was think about Gillya.

Getting up, Gillya stood beside the bed, in just her bra and panties. She didn't care, she just wanted to be with Finn. She slowly crept towards the door, peering out into the hallway to see if he was in the bathroom or not. Walking out of the room, she closed the door behind her, and stepped towards his room. Opening the door, she gazed into the dark room, trying to see the bed through the blinding night. She slowly walked to the side of his bed, noticing he was laying the other way, with his body facing the opposite wall. Seizing the opportunity, she slipped into the bed, sliding the covers over herself and moaning softly, closing her eyes. Finn noticed a sudden change to the way the matress was. He turned his neck to look over his shoulder, and to his surprise, noticed Gillya laying beside him, with her back to him.

Finn smiled and rolled his body over to press his chest to her back, reaching an arm around her waist to cuddle her. Gasping, she also turned to face him, giggling as she came nose-to-nose with him yet again.

"I need to stop doing that." She said, blushing.

"It's alright, I don't mind." Finn laughed quietly, kissing her lips.

"I'm glad to be with you..." She moaned.

"As I am, with you." He sighed.


This is part 1 of a new story. It's based on my original characters; Gillya & Finn. Enjoy!