The Day And Life Of An Umbreon-Chapter 2
Ok Sf Chapter 3 Great (Well Chapter 2 If You Disclude The Preview) I Dont Think People Get Some Stuff In The Story Heres Some Examples
_ -My Characters Are Feral _
_ -This Story Is Based On My Life _
-Some Characters Are Real (Jack,Matt Fuckin Tilson ETC)
_ Ookkk Please Give Your Honest Opinion Im Not Good At Spelling. _
_ This Chapter Will Be Much Longer Than The Last Two And Will Have Some Key Parts In The Story. _
_ OK Lets Go-Italics Are Thoughts _
_ By The Way I Know I Put Capitals In The Front Of Every Word Its Just A Habbit. _
The Day And Life Of An Umbreon - Chapter 3
*Holy Shit That Was A Long Day*
Dylan Was Thinking About What Was Coming Tommorow.
"Dylan!!"
Dylan Turned Around To See The Eevee That Was Jacks Brother.
"Hey Jorden Whats Wrong"
"Have You Seen Jack I Cant Find Him Anywhere" Dylan Could Tell That He Was Extremly Agitated.
"No I Havent Sorry Although He Was Meant To Meet Me At The Sixth Form Village But He Wasent There"
"Will You Help Me Find Him Please Dylan...."
"Sure I Cant Stay For Long Though Me And My Mum Are Going To The Docters About My Paw"
"How Did It Happen Again" The Eevee Was Always Curious
"Sombody Pushed Me Down The Stairs At School I Diddent See There Face Though"
"Okkkk I Think We Should Go Now"
*Wow I Think I Freaked Him Out How Random*
"Dylan!!!"
"Oww Why Is Evryone Shouting In My Ear Today Jackass"
"Well You Were Quiet For Five Minutes And I Got Bored" The Eevee Was Already Getting On Dylans Nerves.
<5 Minutes Later>
"Ok Jorden Ive Got To Go Now Text Me When You Find Jack"
"Sure" Dylan Could Tell Jorden Was Still Extremly Agitated.
"Bye"
<23 Minutes Later>
"Mum Im Home !!!"
"Hi Dylan Why Are You Late" The Leafeon Appeared Out Of The Front Room
"Jacks Missing And I Missed The Bus"
"Well Ok Go Get Ready We Are Going To See Dr Cox In 5 Minutes"
"Fine"
As Dylan Enterd His Room He Heard The Faint Bleeping Of His Mobile Phone Coming From The Inside Of His Bag.
*Its Proberly Jorden I Guss He Found Jack*
Dylan Unzipped Open His Bag And Pulled Out His Phone
*Ha Knew It. Jack Got His Tail Stuck In A Door Again.*
"Hurry Up Dylan"
"Coming Mum"
Dylan Walked Out Of His Room And Went Into The Hallway.
"Im Ready"
"Comon Then"
<At The Docters>
"So Dylan I Havent Seen You In A Couple Of Weeks,Hows Your Paw." The Mightyena Asked
"Its Alright Hurts Abit When I Wake Up Though."
"Thats Completely Fine It Will Be Like That For A Couple More Weeks But It Will Heal Dont Worry"
"OK Thanks Doc"
"Its Alright Dylan Just Be A Bit Careful."
As He Left He Saw The Espeon He Called His Best Friend.
*Ha Ha, Excellant.*
"Dixon !!, Heard What Happend To Your Tail-"
Dylan Tried To Hide His Amusement But A Snigger Fainted Across His Face.
"-Stop Trying To Hide It Jack Let Me See"
"No." Jack Wasent Smileing
"Why, Im Your Best Mate, Did I Or Did I Not Trust You With The Secret That Im Bi, Trust Me Im Not Gonna Laugh"
"Fine"
Jack Raised His Tail To Let The Umbreon See What Had Happend.
"Holy Shit Mate, Its Bent Completely In One Direction I Would Go To A&E If I Were You It Looks Broken.
"I Want To But My Mum Hates Hospitals"
"Ill Go With You, I Dont Have To Be Home Till Nine" Dylan Replied
"Really Cool Thanks."
"Well I Do Know What It Feels Like To Have Somthing Broken"
Jack And Dylan Began The Walk To The Hospital.