Kimoni\'s Banishment

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#1 of The Lion King; Kimoni's story.


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The Lion King: Kimoni's story.

THE ORIGINS OF KIMONEY.

To start this story, you need to know the history of my fictional character, kimoni (Kim-oh-ney) or Kim, as he is referred to.

He was a cub of ten days when his mother had died. The pride leader took him to his father, scar,

in the pridelands. His mother had been one of the last Nyamekye, an ancient race of pure blood lions, descended from the lion-god Jabari, the greatest lion to have ever lived. Due to the fact his father was of no descendant of the Nyamekye and his mother was, he is not pure blood, but he

has inherited some of the qualities; strength, honour, hansom, and he has a way of knowing what

you need to hear, or what he needs to do if you are in a certain mood. When the leader of his mothers pride arrived, everyone was shocked and surprised to hear scar had a son. Sarafina, scars mate, was already pregnant, so when scar announced he wanted nothing to do with him, sarafina

took pity on the cub, took him in, and raised him as one of her own. He had the velvet brown coat of scar, blue eyes, and hansom features. He is also nala's half-brother, through scar. When nala and simba was bourn, Kim was nearly one, and already twice the size of nala, with a tuft of black, silky main poking out on his head, elbows, and on his chest. Growing up he was best friends with nala and simba. He was one and a half when simba and mufasa were announced killed. He was by then nearly as big as some of the lionesses. This is where we pick up our story.

PART 1, THE BANISHMENT.

CHAPTER 1, THE MEETING

After scar had announced his rule, done the traditional roar, and had announced the hyenas were now part of the pride he disappeared somewhere into priderock. The lionesses started murmuring, forming into a circle. Nala curled up under Kim's legs, crying and sniffing. He had just ducked his head to comfort her when his mum walked over to them,

"Kim, the lionesses and I are going to a secrete meeting, tell no-one, especially scar. Watch over nala, for me. And when ever I'm not around from now on protect her." She said.

"I will mum." Kim said in a strong voice. Sarafina then ducked her head to nuzzle nala,

"Sweetie, I'm going to be gone for a couple of hours, ok? Don't worry, Kim's here for you, listen to him and do what he says." She nuzzled her mum back and nodded.

"Good girl." She leaned in to then whisper into Kim's ear,

"Keep her away from scar, I Don't like the way he's had his eye on her recently." Kim nodded, nuzzled his mum and watched her walk over to the waiting lionesses. They all walked off to commence the meeting. Kim looked down at nala and nuzzled her to get her attention,

"Shhh...its ok. C'mon, you need to rest, tomorrow maybe a better day." He said, she looked up at him with watery eyes and said,

"Why...why did mufasa and simba have to die, Kim? Why couldn't they have lived?" Kim licked her and said,

"Remember mufasa teaching us about the circle of life? Well, it was their time to end their role in it, so we can move on. Remember how happy you were when they were alive, and keep that memory. That is what they would have wanted, not for you to feel sad, but to remember the happy times you had with them, so they can live forever through us. C'mon, let's get a move on." Kim said, eyeing a group of hyenas close by. They made their way to the sleeping cave, nala seemed to have calmed down a bit remembering her brothers words; she would remember them forever.

CHAPTER 2, LESSONS.

As Kim and nala made their way to the main sleeping cave they encountered scar standing out side the cave, with a group of his hyenas. They were talking, until they saw the pair coming closer. They stopped talking when the two were in hearing range. As Kim approached he saw scar was not looking at him, but at nala, still in-between his legs for protection. Scar finally looked up at Kim, giving him a look of disgust. Kim just looked at him plainly. Scar then looked behind the two as if hoping to see someone else, but when he saw no-one he looked again at Kim and growled,

"where are the lionesses?" Kim stopped, remembering his mother's words,

"Are they not right behind me?" he looked back and then forward again, a face of false surprise and said, "they were right behind me, must have given me the slip. Boy I must smell bad." He said, directing his last bit at the hyenas, who growled. One of them who looked about as stupid as Ed the hyena lifted is forearm and sniffed his armpit, pulling away instantly, before one of the other hyenas slapped him on the back of the head.

"Oho, so you don't know where they are?" scar said, tuting and shaking his head,

"Last chance Kimoni, where are the lionesses, I want them back here now, not snooping around priderock." He finished. Kim kept looking at him it that same face and said,

"Well, that's what they're gonna be doing tonight, 'cause I don't know where they are." Kim said, making scar's face twist into anger.

"You little shit, you know, but just don't want to tell me. That right? Did 'mummy' tell you not to tell?" Kim's face turned into anger at this statement. Scar smiled, knowing he was pissing off his son. He then looked down at nala. She noticed he was looking at her, whimpered and looked at the ground. A thought flashed through scars head. A very naughty thought that would send a message to Kim, sarafina, sarabi, and all those other entire bitchs of lionesses. And he new what sarafina would have said to Kim about nala. He knew that sarafina knew he had his eye on nala for a while now. And he had planned it like this. She would get her precious little son to guard her. So now scar could violate nala, hurt Kim and piss off the lionesses in one go, witch he liked the idea of. So he kept smiling and said,

"I think you both need a lesson." He said. Kim actually was surprised and confused this time,

"Sorry, I don't think I heard right, you said both?" scar smiled even wider,

"Oh yes, Kim. For your disrespect and rudeness, you will be taught a lesson from this lot." jestering behind him at the hyenas, "and nala is growing up VERY fast, so needs a lesson from me of one of life's most important lessons." Kim instantly went,

"Fuck you, scar. You bastered, how can you even think of doing that? She's still a cub." Nala whimpered, whatever made her brother that angry couldn't be good. She looked from Kim to scar.

"Very easily, Kim. I am the king after all." Scar said still smiling widely.

"Get him." Scar said, and the hyenas ran at him.

"Run, Nala!" Kim shouted before the hyenas tackled him to the floor. Kim tried to fight back, managing to catch the hyenas off balance and subsequently rear up and strike one of the hyenas. He was only just a bit bigger than the hyenas but the blow sent the hyena spinning off where he lay ten foot away, unconscious. Nala, in all the confusion, had tried to run but had ran right into scars fore leg. She turned to run but scar picked her up by the back on the neck. Kim still struggled as scar went to the mouth of the cave, murmuring

"Keep guard, no one in." to the two hyenas whom just nodded dully.

"I'll kill you, scar! You hear me!? I'll kill you!" Kim shouted at him as he disappeared into the darkness of the cave.

When scar thought he was in far enough he set the crying nala down.

"Nala, you will answer every question I ask and do everything I tell you. And if you tell any one else I'll kill your brother, got it?" Scar said, without sympathy for her crying and whimpering. She nodded to show her understanding.

"Good. Now, what do you know about mating? Has your mother or delightful brother..." he hissed the last bit as you could still hear Kim shouting insults at him and struggling with the hyenas,

"...Ever talked about it? Mentioned it? Taught you about it?" he asked.

Nala didn't look up as she talked, barfly able to say two words as it was,

"My...My mum said...it was...where *sniff* cubs...come...from." She finished.

"Oh, looks like she left out the best bit for me." He chuckled and put his paw round her back and dragged her closer.

"Well my dear, you about to get a first hand experience." She looked up enough to see his sheath, where she whimpered seeing that his cock was already semi-erect.

"You're going to learn how to suck me off." He smiled, then forcing her onto his cock. She *Merpm* and tried to get off it, or spit it out. He growled and said,

"Nala, remember, do as your told or Kim dies. Suck it. Suck it like you would suck your mum's teat. Watch your teeth, or you'll get hurt too."

She whimpered more and started sucking, hoping it would be over soon. Scar started to moan, making 'oh' and 'ahh' noises as well as grunting. He started to move one of his paws down her back and in-between her hind legs. He rubbed her cubpussy with one pawtoe. He extended his claw into it and started moving it around. She felt a mixture of pain and something else that made her spine twitch and her brain beg for more. She hated everything that was going on, everything she could see, hear and even the musky smell of scars groin and cock. As scar moved his claw in her cubtwat he said,

"Ahh...two more moons and...oh...I'm gonna do some very pleasurable things...Ohhh, god! ...Under here, nala." He smiled at the thought and also at the fact he was nearly there.

"Here...here comes your milk...ahhh that's good...you hungry little slut." Nala was by now very tired and couldn't take much more. She could hear scar start to breathe very heavily and his cock started to twitch and give off some kind of sweet and sour substance. He started to make little thrusts with his hips. Every time he did this she gagged on his size. After another two minuets he came, and hard. The first get caught nala by surprise and made her pull off scar's meat, her muzzle full of hot lion cum. Scar took over by reaching down with one of his paw and started jerking off, spraying his seed all over nala. After ten seconds she was completely covered in his seed. She kept on crying, horrified about what had just happened. Scar finally calmed down from his afterglow and looked at her, feeling very proud that she was covered head to paw in his seed.

"No point in crying, dear. That's gonna happen a lot more now. Get use to it." Scar said, offering no sympathy or explanation of what had just happened. He left her in a pool of his cum crying and shaking as he walked out the cave. He saw Kim no trying to get into the cave. When Kim saw him come out he said

"Alright, let me up, NOW! I mean it, let me up!" scar amused himself for a few minuets by watching him struggle against the hyenas to get into the cave. After he got board again he said

"Let him go to his darling sister. Let him see what will happen if he's ever rude to me." The hyenas looked at each other and smiled, finally letting Kim up, who just darted into the cave as fast as he could. He found nala lying in a pool of what was unmistakably seaman towards the back of the cave. He ran over to her and sat down with her in between his forelegs. He began to clean her off, spiting scars seed out of his muzzle as he went on. It took him over half an hour to get her completely clean. He then picked her up and took her away from the pool and scene of her rape. She curled up into a ball and pressed herself against his maine and silently sobbed. After a little while she was asleep. He started to drift off too.

Kim dreamed of scar raping nala in front of him, and he was powerless to do anything, he could only watch his little sister cry as she was forced to do unspeakable things. Scar then finished with her and tossed her aside and started walking towards Kim who braced himself to fight. But the ground then crumbled and he found himself onto of pride rock, hanging over the edge as scar walked up to him. He sank his claws into the back of Kim's paws as he whispered to him

"This is how mufasa met his end, and how you'll meet yours." He then pulled his paws up and Kim fell.

He awoke before he hit the bottom, panting and sweating a cold sweat. He looked around, it was now night, the stars blinking at him from the sky. He heard movement from the entrance and looking, hoping it was not scar. But was relived to see the lioness sneak in. His mum came over to nuzzle him. But when she saw his face she said

"What happened?" Kim then sighed and said

"Mum, I'm sorry, but..." he went on to explain how scar had raped nala; how he had been pined and was unable to help her, how he had found her lying in a pool of seaman and had to clean her off. The lionesses had gathered to listen. When he finished his mother had tears in the eyes as she said

"Oh god, nala, Kim!" she nuzzled him and nuzzled nala as she slept in-between Kim's fore legs. She started to clean nala but Kim stopped her before she woke her up.

"Kim, it's not your fault, you were over powered and had little choice. I do not think it your fault and I know nala won't." she finished, laying beside him and looking into his eyes.

"But I think it was my fault, I should have walked away as soon as I saw scar, not stood there and provoked him. It's my fault." He finished he looked down and closed his eyes as he felt tears welling up. He mum nuzzled him again as she said

"What ever you did, scar would have gotten to nala. Whether you walked away or did what you did, he has had his eye on her for some time now. I knew that was going to happen. Did he ask about where we were?" she asked.

"Yes, but I said I didn't know, and that's what provoked him. He knew that I knew." Kim said still not looking into his mum's eyes.

"You see? That proves it not your fault. It's my fault. I shouldn't have gone to the meeting. If I hadn't scar wouldn't have had to ask where I was and I could have been there to protect you both." He looked into his mum's eyes and said

"I sorry." And he nuzzled her back.

"It's alright, go to sleep. You've had a rough day. We all have." She said looking around at the lionesses, especially at sarabi. Kim, who still felt guilty but comforted in a way, but his head next to nala and slept.

CHAPTER 3, FIGHTS.

Over the next few days things got worse. The pride had to already compensate for having a hundred extra mouths to feed. The lionesses were worn thin and it had only been ten days. The prides mood had gone from bad to worse. They were not even aloud to have a fair share of the meat. The hyenas would just take what they want and leave a little bit for the lionesses to ration. The prides mood took an even worse turn when a few of the lionesses, lead by sarabi, had requested weather they could find and bury the bodies of mufasa and simba. Scar walked down to them and hit sarabi around the face and told her, and every one present that it was now the law never to mention mufasa's name from then on. The lionesses looked shock and a few went to help sarabi and the rest stood with their ears back and teeth bared ready to fight. Only when they saw the hyenas gather and do the same did they back down. The pride had also been joined by a group of lioness lead by lioness named zira, who was then named the queen of the pridelands. Sarabi was cast down and left aside. Things were going bad. The lioness now had to also protect nala from scar. He had tried several times to get her separated from the lionesses but they now took her hunting, saying it was for her to get practise, witch was half true. Kim had taken it in his stride to now be with her at all times, like his mother made him swear. He also puzzled over the dream. How scar had said 'This is how mufasa meet his end'. He thought about this almost all the time now trying to work out how he would tell every one else. That was not the only problem on his mind. The hyenas were getting on his nerves, trying to get into fights and such. He new what they were doing. Scar had been looking for an excuse since the night of nala's rape to banish him. He was not going to give him that chance. He had been keeping himself and nala out of the way. He had taken up going hunting with the lionesses to learn how to do it. And when they were not hunting he stayed close to the lionesses, for protection. Scar knew he got stronger every day, and was starting to get on edge about it. He was getting paranoid about it, watching Kim closely for an excuse for him to be banished. That chance was drawing closer.

***Six Months Later***

It happened when Kim was making his way to the water hole with nala at his side. She had grown and was now roughly twice the size she was on the night of scar's take over and had recovered from mufasa's and simba's death and even the rape and was stronger than ever, mentally and physically. Nala didn't blame Kim for what happened to her. Kim was now bigger too; he was now just a bit bigger than the average lioness. His mane stretched from the top of his head to his belly but stopped there, it was still growing, coming round the front and moving down his back and belly. The land was starting to dry out as the grass went dry and crispy. The heard's, sensing the scarce had started to move off, pushing the lionesses to their limits for hunting. They sometimes had to move to outside the boarders. As they made their way nala said,

"It's really getting dry out here, I wonder if it'll rain soon." She looked up at the cloudless sky with doubt.

"It will. Well we can only hope. If it doesn't scar'll get even more pissed off and...well god knows what he'll do." He said. Noticing the look she gave him he quickly said

"But it won't come to that. Things will look up."

"Yeah, keep dreaming, hair bag." A familiar voice said from behind him. Shenzi, banzai and Ed stepped out of the long grass with a couple of hyena cronies.

"What do you flea bags want?" Kim said his face full of loathing and annoyance.

"Tut tut. You should be nicer Kimoni, lest you like the thought of being banished." Shenzi teased him. They started walking in circles around him, the two cronies snapping there teeth at him. He bared his teeth too, but nala stopped him by put her paw on his shoulder. The hyenas continued to circle them, testing Kim. They were certainly pushing it today, they would usually try to make him start the fight, but it looked like they were going to start it.

"Shouldn't you lot be polishing scar's claws or something?" nala said with the same look as Kim on her face.

"Watch you mouth or scar might fill it with something." Banzai said and they all burst out laughing, witch made nala bare her teeth too before Kim stopped her.

"Well, well. Looks like you two are carrying a lot of anger. That isn't good for you. You've just got to let it OUT!" a on the word out shenzi swiped at Kim who stepped back, making the swipe miss him by inches. She countered and jumped at him. Kim this time side stepped and she rolled into the long grass. Banzai growled and while Kim's back was turned he jumped at him, landing on his back, biting the back of his neck. Kim roared and hit him off. Ed and the two other hyenas joined in, jumping at Kim and landing on him and bringing him down. Nala helped by hitting Ed off Kim but then had to move out the way for Kim had started swing around to get them off. Shenzi burst through the long grass and jumped on Kim also. At this point Kim roared and swiped at anything he could with all his might. He hit one of the hyenas that had tagged along with the others. When Kim's paw hit him every one heard a sicken crack as he flew through the air and landed some distance away. He didn't move. His neck had been broken in one swipe. The four remaining hyenas bit, slashed and maimed Kim as much as they could. He got another hit in and it landed in the second hyenas who had tagged along. He flew as his friend had before him through the air and landed a few feet away, moaning and grabbing his chest. He coughed up blood, he was bleeding internally. Another down. As banzai, shenzi and Ed still did everything they could to Kim nala joined in, trying to help. Shenzi saw this and hit her hard across the face shouting,

"Stay out of this bitch!" nala lay on the floor with blood coming from her face. Kim roared and hit shenzi off him were she yelped and landed near the dead hyena, with blood running down from a deep gash on her back. Then a loud roar cut across the fight and the fight and the two remaining hyenas ran off to the side lines as the lioness came onto the scene. Sarafina ran over to Kim, witnessing his wounds. He had a long gash on his side that looked to be the most serious injury. He had a dark bruise under his fur, indicating his ribs were broken. A trickle of blood ran from his mouth down his muzzle. Apart from that he had scratches and bite marks all over. She cried out his name but he didn't stir, he had been knocked unconscious. Nala walked over next to her mum at looked at her franticly try to stop some of the bleeding. She looked up at her daughters face and cried out again. Nala had four cuts running down from her ear too the bottom of her cheek. Sarabi came over to examine her as the rest of the lioness tried to help sarafina clot Kim's wounds.

"Don't worry, her wounds aren't too deep. There should be no scaring." Sarabi explained.

"Thank god. If only we co...could say the same...for kim." Said sarafina crying as she licked her son's wounds. Kim then opened his eyes and said

"What...what the...? What's going on?" he said. Sarafina look and burst out sobbing saying

"Kim, oh Kim. What happened? Why did they attack you?"

"Because he attacked them first." Said a voice from behind them. Scar walked out of the tall grass with a group of hyenas. Ed was with him, apparently the lionesses had not notice him leave. Scar walked over to each of the hyenas who had been in the fight in turn and examined them. He went to the dead one first, all the eyes of the lionesses with him as he went. He casually walked up to it and looked at it. He poked it with his claw. When it did not stir nor move he moved on. He went over to the second hyena that had been hit in the chest. The hyena did not stir either when jabbed with a claw; it had apparently bled to death. He finally walked over to shenzi and examined her. She had a dark bruise like Kim did where she had broken ribs. She moaned and coughed up blood. Scar leaned in and whispered something to her. She didn't open her eyes or talk, but simple nodded. He then looked up over at Kim and then said,

"Get shenzi to the cave and tend to her wounds." Some of the hyenas broke off and picked her up and hurryed her to the cave. Scar did not break eye contact with Kim as he walked over.

"Get up you scum." He said. Kim struggled to his feet, refusing help as he got up he meet scars gaze with a face of loathing and anger.

"Cleaver, to get your hyena girlfriend to attack me, can't do it yourself?" he said without one trace of fear.

"How dare you. You have killed two of the king's aids and serious wounded another, his personal aid. Do you deign it?" he demanded looked furious.

"In several ways. One, she'll live. I've got broken ribs and I'm alive aren't in? Two, they attacked me, and nala is my witness. So you have no power." He said slowly and deliberately, raising scar's anger.

"I am the king. I have all the power. You attacked her. She confessed to it. And since she is the victim she'll be believed more." Scar said.

"So I'm bleeding of my own accord am I?" Kim retorted looking just as angry.

"You attacked her Kimoni, you are guilty. Do you deign it?" scar growled, almost losing his temper.

"For the last time, I DIDN'T DO IT! GET IT THROUGH YOUR THICK HEAD!" Kim shouted at him, starting to red with anger. The lionesses had moved off to the side to avoid what was coming. The hyenas had already formed a sort of barrier around them to prevent them getting to Kim. Scar looked thunderous. He had just been shouted at by Kim. He looked back at the hyenas and nodded. They ran at Kim and pined him. Kim was too weak to resist. Scar walked forward as one of the hyenas struck Kim repeatedly. Sarafina and the lionesses roar and tried to stop it but hyenas pined them too. Sarafina squirmed and shouted for it to stop.

"NO! NO! LET HIM GO! STOP IT! NO!" she shouted over and over again.

"Kimoni, son of sarafina, for killing and wounding the king's hyenas you are hear by banished from pride rock and all of its surrounding territories. Should you return you face pain of torture, and DEATH!" scar shout as sarafina screamed.

"NOOOOOO! LET HIM STAY! KIM, DON'T GO! PLEASE!" but Kim did only look at scar and say,

"May the King's of the past have pity on you." He then through his hyenas off him and got face to face with scar who backed up several paces.

"Because I won't." he growled.

He then turned to the lionesses and walked over to them. He walked up to his mum and head rubbed her. He whispered.

"I will come back, and he'll die when I do." He then bent down to nala who was sobbing.

"Don't worry. The only thing I want you to do is to remember what I said to that night when mufasa and simba died." Kim said as he nuzzled her as she kept say

"No, no! Not you too. Please Kim stay." Scar, whose face had been full of shock since Kim had given his warning, was now full of anger. He didn't stop looking at Kim as he said

"Kill him." The hyenas behind him barked and ran at him.

"Gotta run mum." He said as he turned and ran towards the boarders with hyenas in hot pursuit. Sarafina couldn't help but smile at his last comment, but she still felt tears running down her face as sarabi came over to comfort her.

"Good bye, son." She whispered to the setting sun.

CHAPTER 4, BANSIHED

"Where the hell did he go?" shouted a hyena.

"He can't be far, spread out." Shouted another.

"Stop!" shouted banzai.

"He's part the boarders, who cares?"

"Scar will." Said one hyena.

"What scar don't know won't hurt him." Banzai said to the group.

"You know all about that don't you, banzai?" said the same hyena, looking brave.

"Shut up, man." He said to it

"Why, there is no one hear but us. Why don't you tell the rest about your other mistake like this." Banzai stared at the hyena but said nothing.

"Not going to tell them then? I will. You see, when mufasa was killed simba was still alive and he and Ed and shenzi were ordered to kill him, but he got away, didn't he? Through the thorn bushes at the end of the gorge. So looks like scars got more than one worry now, doesn't he?" banzai walked up to the hyena and said

"What's your name again?"

"Akoko." He said. Banzai swiped and broke his neck in one hit. Akoko fell to the floor dead.

"I'll be sure to Wright that on your grave." Banzai said looking at his dead body. He then looked up and said

"Any body else want to mouth off and join him." The all shock their heads and stepped back.

"Then you'll all never repeat this to any one. Got it?" they all nodded. Banzai then turned and

started to walk off.

"Wait! What about the body?" one hyena said. Banzai looked back at the hyena, then looked down at the body and then back at the hyena and said

"Food for the buzzards or coyotes." He said and then walked off into the gathering dark. The other hyenas were quick to follow.

Kim had hidden in a small cave under a big boulder that was in an outcrop that marked the boarder of the pride lands. He was breathing very heavily. He had had little time to take in what had just been said. Simba was alive! But he went through the gorge and headed out through the desert. That meant he had headed in the complete other direction to where Kim was now. To go in that direction he would have to skim round the pridelands boarders and that would take days, weeks even. And he could be spotted by hyena sentries. No he had to head out towards the savannah. He knew there might be prides out there that would let him join them. But right now he needed to rest. His wounds burned from all of running he had just done. He started to clean them. He realised he was also hungry. He looked over at the hyena's body. He stuck out his tongue and shock his head. But on the other paw, he didn't now how long he might go without food. He sighed and got to his legs. His broken rips caused him to limp slightly but apart from that his legs seem fine, so he could hunt if he could find prey. He picked up the body and took it back to the cave. He bit into it, finding that there was hardly any meat on there anyway. He spat out what he ripped off; it tasted like a mix of crap, fleas and vomit. He forced himself to eat it though. After he finished it he looked out of the cave opening, it was now to dark to travel. But it would be easier to travel by night; it would defiantly be cooler too. So he gathered up his strength and got to his feet again and set off into the darkness. Over the next few days he grew weaker and weaker. The hyena was the only food he had managed to eat. He was heading out into dry savannah and there was still no heard's. Travailing by night was also becoming difficult too. He had had an encounter with a pack of wiled dogs and only just managed to escape. After that he was forced to travel by day. The heat coupled with injuries from his encounter with the dogs made him even weaker. After two weeks of travelling he found himself near rich woods. He thought it was a mirage. He gave up collapsing on his side. He hear sudden steps coming closer. This was it he thought. Then two shadows covered him. One then moved in front of the sun, he opened his eyes to look at the most beautiful lioness he had ever seen.

"Are you alright?" her voice was full of caring, shock and interest all at the same time. It sound distant to Kim who said

"Dose...it...bloody well...look...like it?" he said before the world went dark...

TO BE CONTNUED...

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Good chose or bad having him in it?

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