The Struggle Within
#1 of The Struggle Within
First of I need feedback. A lot please. I'll take any type. Criticism,praise,etc. Hope you like and enjoy:) prologue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The eevee shivered In his sleep.Not from the cold but from what happened minutes ago. *Flashback* "This should be far enough" a man says "Start digging" another man says.Theres sounds of shovels hitting the dirt. A whimper emerges from a bag being held by the second man. He puts the bag down
"Poor eevee. I can't help but feel bad for him." Another whimper.
"You heard the boss, he's unstable. If he lives he could be completely fine or insane or anywhere in-between. Who knows what powers he could gave, telekinesis, Lightning bolt, shadow ball, and he's just an eevee! Can you imagine if he evolved?"
"Too bad there's no other way to get rid of him other then this. My wife would have loved an eevee"
"Yeah same here, but I've got a wife and 2 children expecting a 3rd. We need the money." Another whimper. The second man,getting annoyed, hit the bag with his shovel. "Oh my god! Is...Is he...?" the first man couldn't finish his sentence.
"Doesn't matter now. Put him in the hole and bury him before anyone sees us. Quickly!" The last thing the eevee feels before drifting Off into sweet unconsciousness is dirt starting to crush him. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ So once again any good yes no? Give me feedback