What's Considered a Perfect Proposal

Story by Bete Noire on SoFurry

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What's Considered a Perfect Proposal.

 


What's Considered a Perfect Proposal.

This story is basically a stand alone, and has no ties to any of the series that I'm writing. It is also a story that I plan to use to test how well I can write a sex scene. The characters are a year away from the age of twenty, and live in 22nd century Brooklyn, New York. Furs and Humans coexist in this story, and are even encouraged to become couples. With this out of the way, I leave you with the standard warnings: This story will contain gay sex, a marriage proposal, and a foot fetish scene. If you have a problem with any of that, then as we Brooklynites say: Hop Off. Now sit back, put on some reading glasses, and enjoy this story. If you can. And there will be some words that don't make sense, but that's only because it's how Ariel and Ricky speak.

Location: Niagara Falls, United States side. Date: July 19th, 2011. Time: 12:30 a.m

Ariel closed his eyes as he listened to the relaxing noise of water flowing over a cliff. Next to him, Ricky Rodriguez, his Lion fur boyfriend, smiled as he looked at Ariel's happy face_. It's nice to finally see Ariel so happy after all he's been through,_ thought Ricky as he wrapped an arm around Ariel's human shoulders. As he felt Ricky's furry arms on his shoulders, Ariel opened his eyes, and looked at the lion, a small smile on his face. "Well Ricky, it's officially your birthday. We're in this nice cabin that's close to Niagara Falls, and we've been together for a couple of years now." As Ariel spoke, he moved his hand over to his back pocket, and took out a small box. Ricky flicked his ears to show that he was listening to Ariel's words, then looked down at the human. His eyes widened as he watched Ariel get up from his seat, and kneel down in front of him. "Some people propose in places of sentimental value. Others propose on the day of their mate's birthday. And still others propose when they're at their happiest. I've decided to combine all three." As he said those words, Ariel brought his hand forward, and let Ricky look at the box he was holding. Ricky looked at the box, tears welling up in his eyes as he watched Ariel open it, revealing a championship style ring.

Looking up into the eyes of the lion, Ariel continued speaking. "This ring holds sentimental value to me. It was my graduation ring. Now I want it to be your engagement ring. So, what I'm trying to say is this: Ricky Rodriguez, will you marry me?" With those words, Ariel took the ring out of the box, and held it out for Ricky's claw. The lion looked down at the ring, and gently took it from Ariel's fingers. With a huge grin on his muzzle, Ricky slipped the ring on, and said, "Ariel Perez, of course I will marry you!" With those words, Ricky picked Ariel up, and gave him a kiss on the lips. Ariel wrapped his arms around Ricky's back as he returned the kiss, opening his mouth to allow Ricky's tongue to enter. The lion quickly entered his tongue into the waiting mouth, and closed his eyes as he tasted the inside of his boyfriend's mouth. Ariel licked at the lion's sandpapery tongue, enjoying the contrast between it, and his own. After what seemed like an hour passed by, Ariel and Ricky pulled apart from each other, and walked over to their bedroom. As they walked into the room, Ricky took off his sneakers, and socks, letting his foot-paws get some air. Ariel watched as the lion wiggled his toes, and his mouth immediately starting watering. I just remembered, I've never had sex with this lion, and I've never enacted my fetish with him either. With that thought in mind, Ariel motioned for the lion to go sit on the bed. The lion quickly complied, wondering what was going on.

Ariel smirked at the lion's slightly confused face, then told the lion to back up on the bed until his foot-paws were about two feet off the bed. As soon as the lion stopped moving, Ariel took off his shirt, revealing an eight pack, and biceps that were bigger than a teenager's skull, and rock hard pecs. Ricky looked at all the muscles currently in front of him, and started drooling out the side of his mouth as his brain ceased all normal bodily functions. Ariel smirked at the sight of the drooling lion, then got down on his knees, right in front of the lion's foot-paws, and picked up the left one. With the eagerness of a child waiting for summer vacation, Ariel brought the foot-paw up to his nose, and breathed in deeply. Almost immediately, Ariel was assaulted by the scent of sweat, musk, and pure lion, which made the boy's cock quickly stand at full mast, and strain against the zipper of his jeans. Taking his focus off of Ricky's foot for a minute, Ariel reached down for the zipper, and opened it. A sigh of relief escaped Ariel's mouth as his 8 inch cock sprang free, and started leaking pre on the floor. Before he could go back to Ricky's foot, he was stopped by a low moan coming from the lion. Looking up at Ricky, Ariel wasn't surprised to see the lion slowly stroking his 7 inch long, barbed shaft. "Ya know, ya could've waited till I was done playing with ya feet before ya started jerking off." said Ariel as he sniffed Ricky's foot. The lion just grinned, and said, "I could've waited, but the scent of you arousal was too much for me." Raising an eyebrow at the lion's cheeky answer, Ariel opened his mouth, and slowly licked Ricky's foot, from the sole to the big toe.

Ricky felt a shudder go through his body as Ariel's tongue ran up his footpads. A spurt of pre erupted from his cock, and hit him directly on his right nipple. The lion let out a small growl of arousal, and tried to shove his big toe into Ariel's mouth. Having expected the lion to react that way, Ariel opened his mouth wider, and gladly accepted the lion's big toe. As he felt that toe enter Ariel's wet mouth, Ricky let out another growl of pleasure, and stroked his shaft harder as his tail swung from side to side behind him. Ariel completely ignored Ricky's reaction, and instead focused on sucking on the lion's big toe. The boy sucked on the toe like a baby would suck on a pacifier, and gently licked at the claw-slit. As he sucked on the big toe, Ariel placed his hands on his cock, which by now, was throbbing painfully, and had created a pool of pre on the floor, and slowly ran his hand up the length. As he did so, Ariel felt another spurt of pre leave his cock, and land in the pool already on the floor. Ricky, who had stopped stroking his cock in fear of releasing too early, looked down at Ariel, and noticed that the boy was pleasuring both him, and himself. Not wanting Ariel to tire to quickly, Ricky snaked his tail under the human's cock, and gently swatted away Ariel's hand.

Ariel's protests turned into a pleasurable moan as he felt Ricky slowly run the tuft of fur at the end of his tail, up the length of a highly visible vein on Ariel's cock. Spitting out Ricky's big toe, so as to not accidently bite it off, Ariel let Ricky continue what he was doing. The lion didn't disappoint. He started dragging his tail against Ariel's cock, which sent shivers down the boy's body, and added another spurt of pre to the pool already on the ground. Just as Ariel thought that his pleasure couldn't get any better than it was, he let out a loud moan as Ricky rubbed his tail against his cumslit. This lion is gon make me cum without even touching me with his paws, was Ariel's last rational thought before he was engulfed in a wave of pleasure as Ricky slowly circled his cumslit with his tail, and leaned in to suck on Ariel's nipple. The lion's sandpapery tongue sent waves of pleasure up Ariel's spine. Just as Ariel let out a loud moan from all the pleasure, a husky fur walked by, and heard it. Not wanting to dwell on the noise, the husky quickly walked away.

As Ariel was assaulted by Ricky's tail and tongue, he ran his fingers through the lion's mane, scratching the lion in his favorite spot: right behind the ears. A moan escaped Ricky's lips, and Ariel let out one of his own as he felt the lion's tail tighten on his cock. A moment later, Ricky removed his tail from Ariel's cock, and asked him to get on the bed. Ariel quickly obliged, taking off the remainder of his clothing as he did so. As soon as Ariel was naked, and on the bed, Ricky took off his clothing, and got into the bed, laying down next to Ariel. Before the lion could say anything, Ariel grabbed his muzzle, and brought it to his face for another kiss. Taken off guard at first, the lion soon started moaning into the kiss, loving the taste of his future husband. A minute later, Ariel pulled away and asked the one question that was on both their minds. "So. Who's gonna top who for our first time?" Ricky's answer was to reach under his pillow, and take out a small bottle of lube. With a small *pop,* Ricky opened the bottle, and poured out a small amount of the lube, and started applying it to his shaft. As Ariel looked on, he couldn't help but feel a little worried. He was still a virgin, and then there was the fact of the barbs on Ricky's cock. Yeah, right now, STD's are the least of my problems. How's am I supposed to deal with them barbs going up my ass? Not wanting to let Ricky know that he was worried, Ariel kept his fears to himself, and just turned to lay flat on his stomach.

Ricky, who had by now finished lubing up his cock, watched as Ariel positioned himself on his stomach. His cock jumped a little at the sight, and shot out a spurt of pre that landed on Ariel's ass cheek. That is the most beautiful sight in the world, thought Ricky as he slowly crawled over to Ariel's ass. As soon as he was close enough, Ricky grabbed his cock, and lined it up with Ariel's hole. Ariel looked behind his shoulder, and watched as Ricky slowly leaned forward, and pressed the tip of what looked to be a painfully throbbing cock, against his hole. Just before Ricky entered Ariel's virgin ass, he looked up, and asked "if I hurt you, are you going to let me know so that I can stop?" Ariel slowly nodded in confirmation, leaving Ricky with no other reason to not enter Ariel's hole. Ariel let out a small gasp as he felt the tip of Ricky's cock stretch his opening, then push into his anus. Almost immediately, Ariel's anal muscles involuntarily tried to push Ricky's cock out, but to no avail. With a small grunt, Ricky pushed his hips forward a little more, and soon had three inches of his cock inside of Ariel. Just as he was about to push forward again, Ricky noticed the beads of sweat coming down Ariel's forehead, and the pain in the boy's eyes. He stopped, and waited for the boy to adjust to his size.

Ariel let out a small moan as he felt his ass get stretched by Ricky's cock. What the hell have I gotten myself into? Ariel asked himself as he felt his muscles tense up, and his ass try to push Ricky's cock out. As he waited for Ricky to enter more, Ariel soon realized the lion was waiting for him to adjust. Grabbing a fistful of sheets in his hands, Ariel willed his muscles to relax, desperately wanting Ricky to continue. A moment later, Ariel felt his muscles relax, and signaled for the lion to continue. Ricky nodded his head, and then started to push his hips forward again. The lion kept pushing, not stopping until he had another inch of his cock inside Ariel's ass. Wrapping his arms around Ariel's stomach, Ricky leaned in, and whispered in Ariel's ear. "There's about three inches left. You wanna go one by one, or you just want get it over with?" Ariel gave his response by tensing his muscles, and violently pushing himself back against Ricky's cock. Both Ariel and Ricky let out a hiss as Ariel hilted himself against Ricky's cock. "Well, I'll regret that tomorrow." said Ariel as he felt a sharp pain shoot up his ass. Ricky let out a small chuckle, then brought up his tail, and started stroking Ariel's arm with it. As Ariel felt the furry appendage on his arm, he visibly started to relax, and the pain in his ass started to get replaced with the first signs of pleasure.

Seeing Ariel relax, Ricky slowly pulled back his cock, then thrust it back inside. A loud moan escaped Ariel's lips, and a spurt of pre escaped from Ariel's cock as Ricky's lionhood hit the boy's prostate. "Keep it coming Ricky!" shouted Ariel as he reached down to his own cock. The lion quickly obliged by pulling his cock out, and slamming it back in. Ariel groaned in pleasure. The barbs on Ricky's shaft were rubbing his prostate with every motion the lion made. Ricky smiled at the sounds Ariel made, and pulled his cock out again. Leaving just the tip in, Ricky ran a claw down his length, making himself spurt some pre into Ariel's ass. As Ariel felt the warmth of the pre enter him, he felt his own cock jump in his hands, and squirt out some more pre. As Ricky thrust in once more, he leaned over to Ariel's ear, and with a cheeky grin, asked, "So I'm assuming you're enjoying this, right?" Ariel let out a laugh that turned into a moan as Ricky hit his prostate again. Smiling, the lion let out a moan of his own as he felt Ariel clench his anal muscles on his cock. Ricky raised his tail up in the air, and then snaked it under Ariel's hips. Nudging the boy's hand away, again, Ricky wrapped his tail around Ariel's cock, and started stroking it.

Ariel let out a moan of pleasure so loud, the husky, who had earlier passed by the house, heard it from his home, two houses down. Who would've thought that my lion is this kinky in bed, thought Ariel as his cock released more pre. With a smile at Ariel's reaction, Ricky started picking up his pace, and started thrusting in and out of Ariel's hole a little harder. Each time the lion thrust in, he made sure to hit Ariel's prostate, and squeeze Ariel's cock with his tail. With a hand shaking from all the pleasure he was getting, Ariel reached up to his forehead to wipe away all the sweat that had collected there. Just as he was putting his hand back down, Ariel felt a familiar tingling in his balls, and started to tense up. Sensing that Ariel was close, Ricky pulled his cock out all the way, then thrust in hard, hitting Ariel's prostate. At the same time, Ricky squeezed Ariel's cock with his tail. That was all it took. Ariel let out a small moan as he went over the edge, and hit his climax. The boy's cock let out three long ropes of cum, soaking Ricky's tail in it. Five smaller ropes squirted out of Ariel's cock, and filled the room with the scent of the boy's musk. As Ricky breathed in his mate's musk, and felt Ariel's anal muscles clench down hard on his own cock, the lion brought his mouth down on Ariel's shoulders.

Biting down on the boy's shoulders, Ricky let out a muffled roar as he climaxed. Several ropes of cum entered Ariel's ass, and filled the boy up quickly. Ariel, who had been slightly exhausted from his climax, let out a small yelp as he felt Ricky bite his shoulder, and the barbs of the lion's shaft flare up, and dig into his anal walls. That yelp turned into a moan as he felt a sticky warmth hit his anal walls. A moment later, Ariel felt some of Ricky's cum flow out of his ass, and run down his legs. As that happened, Ricky slowly removed his mouth from his mate's shoulder, then started nuzzling Ariel's neck as he felt his cock soften up inside the boy. "I love ya Ariel. And I can't wait till we finally get married." said Ricky as he ran his paw through Ariel's hair. Smiling, Ariel turned his neck as far around as he could, and kissed Ricky on the nose. "I love ya too." With those words, Ariel snapped his fingers, and the lights in the bedroom soon turned off, leaving Ricky and Ariel to cuddle in the dark.

Epilogue.

"Do you, Ariel, take Ricky Rodriguez to be your lawfully wedded partner, in sickness and in health, for richer or for poorer, until death do you part?" asked a judge as she regarded a sharply dressed Ariel and Ricky. The boy nodded his head quickly, as he responded with an 'I do.' Smiling, the judge turned to Ricky, and repeated the same question. The lion looked at Ariel with love in his eyes, and said, "I do." Nodding, the judge quickly signed the marriage papers, and then said, "then, by the power vested in me by the state of New York, I now pronounce you two, partners. You may now kiss each other." Ariel and Ricky quickly obliged, and kissed each other. A loud cheer erupted from the back of the courtroom as Ariel's and Ricky's friends and family cheered for the newly married couple. Pulling away from each other, Ariel and Ricky walked over to their families, who followed them out of the courtroom, and over to several limos. With a grin at the lion, Ariel got into the first limo, with Ricky right behind him. As they closed the car door, Ariel turned to Ricky, and said, "Well, we're married now. We've got our whole life ahead of us, and we have a house waiting for us. What do ya think about that?" Ricky looked at Ariel, smiled, and said, "I've got you by my side, so I think the rest of our lives will be great." Ariel beamed, then turned to the driver, and asked him to put on the radio. A moment later, Eminem's 'Not Afraid' started playing, and Ariel and Ricky were kissing each other again.

Give me some credit, I've never written a sex scene before, so don't talk smack to me. Oh, and by the way, if you see some sentences that don't have good structure, it's because they're written in a way that Brooklyn speech would look like in written form. Also, I've used the term boy several times when referring to Ariel. The term has nothing to do with age. It is just my personality making an appearance on paper. I'm known to use the term anytime I don't wanna write, or say someone's name. Anyways, give me some pointers on how to improve a sex scene, but don't just talk smack to me. And yes, this story is a standalone. It will not have a continuation. Anyways, good day, and good night.