Torn Apart
This is Chapter One/The introduction of An old series i was planning on writing and for the first time ever i'm actually going to post it O.O. Chapter Two is already done Just needs to be looked over and reworked.
Being that this is the first story I have ever shared feed back is greatly appreciated. Far warning there is a potential for an annoying amount of mistakes I am horrible at editing my own work so you have been warned.
Thank you Nashoba113 for inspiring me to write again!
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!
My paw slammed down on the alarm clock ending its warning of another great day of school. Ugh, all I really have to look forward to is seeing Lux, but I guess i have to get up for that to. I got up and walked to the mirror I didn't look that bad; At 5 8' I have a pretty normal build for a sophomore. As for my fur it wasn't anything special in my opinion, I'm your typical Black and white husky with white fur going up the front of my body ending with the bottom half of my face and muzzle. I dyed tips of my ears a dark blue fading into the black fur on my head and back. Just like my tail which had a similar Dark blue tip, which I thought complemented the rest of my white and black tail quite nicely. My mother of course didn't have the same opinion.
"Honey breakfast is almost ready", she yelled.
I threw on my suit an tie she always made me wear, so I would be perfect just like her, and started for the door.
"Wait, Valko dear, aren't you going to eat your breakfast?"
"I never eat breakfast mom." I yelled back annoyed as I walked out the door.
I don't even know why she bothered making it she never has before. Normally she's at work like she always is, whatever I'm gonna be late.
Lux was already at the bus stop waiting for me, his beautiful white Fox fur shining the sun light. It was hard enough not staring at him in class but it's impossible when he ....who am I kidding its always impossible. With his sky blue eyes watching me ,tail swaying with the wind it was almost hypnotic. He was pretty average like me other than being the sexiest fur around. If he knew what I thought about doing with him he probably wouldn't ever talk to me again. Still I wasn't like I could ever do anything about those fantasies even if I wanted to I could care less what happen to me if we got caught ,but I don't think Lux could handle a life sentence. Still I can't imagen what it be like to WHAM!
I fell backwards after walking straight into a stop sign. "ouch, you ok?" asked lux laughing at me. "Ya I'm fine" I said rubbing my muzzle as he pulled me to my feet "you got my stuff?" He tossed me a black bag of clothes and I began striping off my "formal wear" and replacing it with a black hoodie and cargo pants.
"Your mom still dressing you Valko?"
"Ya, but I guess she always will."
"Well at least your parents care about you even if they have no sense of fashion"
"Parent" I said harshly "and she just cares about her image not me."
"Oh right...well let's get walking." he said trying to change the subject
I said that a bit mean didn't I ....well he knows I could never be mad at him especially on a day like this, the sun is out birds are chirping not a dark cloud in the sky.
"I'm surprised the Government hasn't made days like this illegal yet".
"Valko if you don't stop talking like that someone is going to hear".
"I would like to see them try and take me away."
"I wouldn't I'd go insane without you."
"Well don't worry; I don't think I'll be leaving you anytime soon."