A previous verson of my story idea, please not this is a beta version of my story line written long ago

Story by vexershade on SoFurry

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The City of Nora, a sanctuary,a cemetary, A cese pool of corrupt idividuals and corperations. Grounds ripe for revolutionaries.

SIre corperation primie provider in medical and phamisudical developers

Nexe coperation primire provider of arms and weapons all over the world

Both seek control of all global trades, Both have politcal powers of tyrants, Both with Millions in thier control, Both with personal Armies

Nither cares of the conciquences in thier actions, civilan lives are expandable and those who do not conform to either of thier will...Parish before the flames of war.

In the darkness thier is but a single light, One who sides with none but seeks to over throw both with a third force far greater then any imagined.

A army of the broken,

One man againt two unstopable forces

Promise|esimorP

13 years earlier

"Vexer! get up your going to be late, the bus to the hospital is comming and if we miss it we may be too late." A impatient young Saber tooth girl, dressed in a pink sundress, wined as she banged on the door of her friends bed room. She was 6 but was very bright for her age.Her name was Blix and at 6 years old she understood life and death far better then any adult.

A muffled grunt comes through the fake wood door and a loud thud as a young 8 year old Vexer fell out of bed, much as he does every morning from this day forward.

"Alright alright jeez im getting dressed ill be out in a mo.*a loud thud followed by cursing* ment"

Blix smiles to herself trying not to giggle out loud at her cluzy friend of hers. Years later she would find her self in the same situation and over the tears she still laughed.

Vexer opened the door, dressed in kiaky shorts and a black tee-shirt, rubbing his rear and smiles at Blix.

"you ready snaggle?"

She shook her head and punched him in the arm,"Its not nice to call a lady names, lets hurry were gonna be late."

Vexer grinned but held back a comment, it wasnt the time or place to make fun of someone whos family was in the hosptial,"yeah lets hury."

The bus ride was quiet the two just watched the people piled in and out on thier way to work, Vexer tired to joke about the smell of the bus but as the buss got closer and closer to the hospital she only had a ghost of a smile and picked at her gress, Vexer could tell she was trying her best not to cry.

Her family wasent a ordinary family her father a don of a powerful growing mafia, he mother was gunned down a two ago and was put in critical condition today was the last day she she would have to go into sugery to save her life.

It would be a tragedy...So the papers would say. It would be the will of God... the doctors would claim. It would be murder... they saw.

The time they reached the hospital Blix was shaking she was scared and even with Vexer by her side she felt lost alone and abandoned. Vexer saw her expression and took her hand in his and walked her into the cold alien place.

Anticeptic and antibacterial spray was pugent in the air, a underlying tiant of death and sickness lingered in the waiting room, the nurse behind the checkout counter paid them no heed and kept watching a soap opra drama on a old holo-view (holograpic television, only portable)

The steral smell and lighting was gving vexer a head ach his head throbbing the moment the stped in intensidfied with each passing moment. Blix let his hand go and walked to the desk, vexer couldent make out what either of the tow was saying as blood pounded around his ears but by the looks the nurse was not amused to be spoken to by a child let alone ordered by one. With a dismissing wave of the hand the nurse turned back to her drama.

Furoius at the nurse blix gabs a orange steral plasti-chair and hits it agint the nurses desk,the baing vibrating in vexers ears making them ring and he closes his eyes to try and block the world out.

"SLay them, flay them,war its a war, WE CANT DEAL WITH THOSE NUMBERS!!!! theres too many, captain, what are your orders, SLaughter the weak..BETREYAL!!..Goodbye Vexer, maby youll find your pease on the other side..." Voices, voices came form all direction and yet no where, the came angry sad happy and jelous all kinds of voices all aimed at him all condemming him all but none.

Vexer opened his eyes to see Blix staring at him with a concerned look the nures was no where to be seen.

"You ok vex? you look sick"

Vexer smiles wondering what were those voices,where had they come form and who they had belonged to all the while wishing his head ach would go away.

"Im fine just got a headach from the smell, whered the nurse go?"

Blix shrugged and took vexers hand,"dosent matter lets go shes just about to go under soon we have to hurry."

Vexer followed her through the hospital for the both of them verything had a dream like feel, they were there yet they wernt only watching thier bodies walk forwardthrough endless hallways that all look alike passing the docortors nurses and the infirmed none noticing a little sabertooth girl holding the hands of a little wolf boy. Like lost ghosts they walked till they found the room Blix's mother layed being prepared for her surgery.

Zertra, Sabertooth goddess, white as first snowfall,hair as red as fire, was lying in the hospital bed, tubes running throughout her arms and body. Bandages did little to hide the patches of red fur sstained from the blood she had lost, even in her critical state she was a goddess, She was all but oblivious to the wor,ld as doctors in scrubs rushed back and forth preparing her for transport putting tubes in here tubes out there, injecting her with painkiller and anstetics, all oblivious to the children behind them.

Even in her pain riddled drugged state she recognized her daughter, her only child he pecious little gem.

Painfully she whispered for everyone to stop.That was all it took for the doctors to go up in a fuss about her talking. Blix shook her head wanting to run but Vexer held her hand and pulled her close to her mother, the doctors then took notice to them adn tried to shoo them away but nither would have it.

When a loud roar cam from the door way did the doctors scurry away to prepare the operation room. There stood Blix's father Don Kahgn 7 feet tall and 300 pounds of pure mucle, eyes that could pices through thick steel, no man dared challege him,those who did shotrtend thier life expectance to Kahgn's whim.

"Go ahead she whies to speek to you" He says curtly looking at his daugter then coldly at Vexer,"you too boy go NOW"

Jumping at the order vexer fllowed blix to the fallen goddess,pulling up a chair and sitting close to blix he could smeel death thickly and infection,the doctors were doing something,something wrong, but the thought soon was washed away in the tide of throbbing and pain in his head.

"B lix my gi rl ple ase be strong," Her mother once a beautiful actress Zertra, broadway star and up comming hollywood star,voice of a angel yet can get as loud as a demon, rendered down to nothing but a whisper,"My ti me h as come, trust only your se lf..." she smiled weakly and looks at vexer with a soft frown then a smile," pro tct onl y your loved ones do don't let them fall, d on t fa il th em,e ev er," Vexer could only nod, the adives would greatly impact and change his life.

Zertra smiled slotly and closed her eyes breathing in slowly she reached over and storked Blix's tear streamd cheek, it pained both of them greatly, zertra physically and blix emotionally. "its time for y ou to g o m y gem, mommy wil l al l w ays l lo ve y ou, al w ays a nd fo rev er..."

Kahgn stepped in over Vexer and blix and picked them up, carrying them away from the condemed, blix started to cry harder beging to go back not wanting her mother to go cathing what was wrong with the situation and wanting to do something to change it, but it is not for her to do, Kahgn oblivious to the deceptoin blinded by his own grief passes over the smallest detail. What paernts miss only childern see, the angle of death in a form of a small frail man, A man to become a household name in years to come Dr. Sraff, member of Kahgns rival mafia and president of SIre.

In the hall Blix tires to explain what she sees but falls on deaf ears as Kahgn follows the other doctors to the O.R soon her mother is whisked away by the angel of death and they are powerless to stop it. Vexer tries to calm her tries to hold her but only gets claws at and cursed. His onw head betraying his focus and thoughts sees the man but doesnt connect the two.

Closing his eyes the voices return pounding his concous and his will to kep living, fear creeps into his hart grasping him with its cold dead hands, then everything stops.

Only silence as he sees blix frozen in tears blood on the tip of her claes, his own blood as he looks down at te scrathes on his arms, blood seemingly forrzen in the air in grisly crimsom jewls. A hand comes down on his shulder, a familar and warm hand,its his own but its bigger. Truning he sees himslef, a older version of himslef, cars racing all over his face and across his arms. The older him bends down close to him and smiles, with out a word embraces him and lets go.

Now is not the time to fight, grow stronger, learn from this, rember this moment in your life where you are weak and unable to chage anything, this feeling of hopelessness, of failure to act." The older vexer said coldly,"You are entering a war without an army, alone you stand alone you will fall, your memories are surfacing soon you will remeber everything become stronger or it will over whelme you, save the girl so she can save you."

The crimson jewls fall to the groun and the cries of a young girl reach his ears, ignoring the pain Vexer holds Blix tightly,whispering nothing and yet everyting to her,from the depths of madness and grief the stops stuggling and holds vexer close like he is the only one in the world and if she were to let go the world would consume her and leave her to die as her mother was condemed to.

"shhh lets go home, theres nohing we can do today, but from this day forward we become stroger we will fight back we will save everyone we love, they will not die by the hands of the enimy, this i sewar, i promise to you blix, i promise."

Fate binds by words, Condemed by Actions