Battle on planet Traquil Chapter: 1

Story by Tone Fox on SoFurry

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The year is 4,327 on the planet Tranquil, a war as broken off and has broken off into two army's, once a peaceful world, crupted by power and freedom, the two army's control one side of the planet, spliting it almost in half.

One side included an highly advanced city of great power, there stricted over layers of contsruction and builting, made it very haste to even get near the word freedom, but the ones that choose to work for them decided it whould be best, Tone was one of them. He joined the army of that city due to all the great advances the city had, till then he has been takeing tough training and made his mind stronger as well with his body.

On the other side: The great forest of Galp covers the rest of the planet, showing more freedom and willpower then the other side once had, the battle damage from the meny ships that have crashed there continued to burn slowly, but stayed contained. The castles that also once stood there layed in ruin's near some villages and bunkers around the forest, dragons and meny other species protect this fair side but some do fail, due to the massive ships and 10,000 degree lasers that shoot out from them, frying them instantly to nothing.

The war: This is where our story will begin, the battle continued to rage off in the distant, exploasives going off in the full of night as the army's of both Tech city and Galp collide with eachother, slowly pushing eachother back and forth, nearly makeing the war endless.

"Sir, We must hurry to the south bunker!" Said Lt.powell

"Indeed I know Powell." said Tone, soon there was an exploasion close by. "Just keep your head down!!" He shouted as another bomb came flying by them, landing in a bush and causeing a crater to form.

A few chunks of rubble hit both of them as the rest of the army took cover in a ditch. "We have to take out that bomber some how!" Said Powell soon after spotting the rest of the army take cover.

"I know powell, but we we also must try and keep the enemy lines from advanceing too close to us!." Replyed Tone, looking around as tho he might have spotted something.

"Something wrong sir?!" Powell yelled out, trying to get his voice over the loud gun shots fired in the distance as they echoed across the field.

"Dragons....Lt.Powel! Take cover ...NOW!" Both Tone and powell took cover behind a rock instantly as a red flameing dragon came blasting down at them, slashing the rocks as sparks suddenly fly out of it as well, then retreating back into the night sky.

Tone and powell both looked up as the dragon continued to fly higher and higher. "He's going to be in range of the sky beams if he keeps going..." Said powell, gazeing at the dragon as it suddenly sparked blue lights for a few moments, then suddenly exploading by the heat from the beam. Both Tone and Powell and a few other soldiers that where near by gasped at the sight slightly as the dragon's remains suddenly fell to the ground, a few chunks of blood landing on the rock next to them and some covering the soldiers.

"Alight men..LETS MOVE!" the army suddenly advanced and attacked the bomber, it had just enuf time to let out one more bomb, everyone took cover right away, trying not to end up how that dragon did in the sky.

"We need to take it out once more before it has a chance of fireing another!" Said Powell quickly, takeing out is rifle and shooting some of the guards.

Suddenly Tone flew up with his wings and thrusted his sword down at the bomber, sending it flying and as it rotated and closed in on the bomber, time seemed to stand still at that very moment. Both the army of Galp and of Tech City whatched in horror and hope as suddenly an enemy dived infront of the sword, time sped up once more, the enemy's helmet flew off as a quick sound of blood splattered onto the controls of the bomber and the sword stayed stuck with the enemy between the hilt and the contols. Tone quickly pulled out the sword and the enemy fell to the floor in pain.

As the blood splattered controls soon started to spark due to liquid and damage put onto them, the injured man looked up in horror as the controls suddenly fell appart. "Lets get out of here!" Tone said quickly, flying towards home base. The rest followed behind by foot, since they did not have the wings that Tone had.

The controls then burst out into flames, the rest of the soldigers tryed to put it out, but suddenly with a quick flash, the controls exploaded and the bomb did soon after, the heat of the exploasion was so high and powerful that it just simply evaporated them all along with bone tissue and the bones themselfs, soon after it had cleared up, a huge gapeing hole stood there, now and forever.

Chacter description:Tone is a tall male Fox/Dragon, standing at about 6'1, his fur is a bright orange with white of course. He has a scar on his left eye that is about as wide as his whole eye but it goes pointed, one up and one down as it advances away from the eye. his eyes are both a color of Red-orange, the color shifts sometimes to one color, also another feature about them is what kind of eyes they are, since he is half dragon, he has dragon eyes, not normal fox eyes. His toung is also a dragon tounge, forked of course at the tip. On the way to his neck his fur is slightly ruffled up by a colar he wears all the time, it has 5 rings for each cornor of his neck. He wears a white shirt with his logo on it, the logo is ment for his name only. Next, his pants are a very loose, very baggy pare of black bondage pants a few straps on the back that make an X shape the way they cross together. Covering him from the neck, down to his ankles is his matrix like trech coat, it has no pockets, but they can hide things pretty well. Lastly, on the back is another dragon feature, his wings, they expand over his head to his legs, they contol themselfs sometimes by natural affect, or whatever is going on.

This is my first story, hope you liked ^_^ ~ TONE FOX