Prototype/ First story
#1 of beginning
This is my first story please be harsh in your critisiam. Well here goes.
I close my eyes waiting for the blow to come. It's a perfect strike. The moment the fist colides into my jaw I am sent realing backwards. While rubbing my chin i say,"That was an excellent hit, it almost broke my jaw."
My is name Gabriel Turko, I am 5'9'' I weigh 162 lbs. and I am curently 16 years old. The guy who just hit me is Branden Jonsten, we're not friends but we do enjoy eachothers company. There's not many people I would consider "friends" really. Just people who mutualy enjoy eachothers company.
"My turn" i say "now don't move this time." He tries to say something but my fist hits first and like always he is out cold. And with him being unable to move I am left to drag his limp body back home.
"Godammit, y'all need to quit that shit."
I look up to see who said that was and it ,like always, is my other two aquaintences Q and Nathen coming towards me to help with this limp carcass.
"Man you really need to stop knocking him out if you want him to walk here by himself." Nathen said with a slight chuckle.
Nathen is a smaller fellow who tends to enjoy himself quite often.
"Yeah well unless you want to be another carcass I suggest that you shut your mouth." I say while laughing slightly.
While Q is quite large for his age he really isn't that strong. We call him "Q" because he won't tell us his real name.
Moments later my little sister comes barreling out of the house ,"Oh my ***, what happened, is he okay?"
"He's fine" i say with consouling words, "now go get an ice-pack from the freezer."
"Yeah I know, I just wish you would just quit hitting each other" she said whilst running back into the house.
Oh and one other thing you need to know about me, when ever I become aroused sexually I turn into human-canine hybrid. The more aroused i get the more i look like a dog. But it's not just me that this happens to it happens to my sister too but for her its a cat. I don't know why this happens it just does.
please comment and stuff and let me know if i should continue or not.