Revelation: A Twokinds Fanfic (Revised)

Story by inuyashasg1 on SoFurry

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#2 of Revelation: A Twokinds Fanfic


All characters belong to Tom Fischbach from his webcomic Two Kinds (http://twokinds.keenspot.com/). If you haven't read it before I highly suggest that you do.

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This is a revised version of the first chapter. With luck this should have more detail and significantly less typos. That said, plot wise nothing in this chapter has changed, so don't expect to see radical differences between the two. Hopefully I'll have the next chapter up in a week or two so if you liked this keep an eye out for it.

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Revelation: A (Revised) Two Kinds Fanfic

It was an overcast yet warm day on the Basitin Islands, but Keith wasn't in the mood to enjoy the weather. His mind was focused on processing recent events. He had gone from an exiled nobody, to the Basitin Ambassador. It wasn't a position he was sure wanted. It had granted him what he had wanted for the longest time, citizenship in his homeland, but recent events made him question if he belonged in the Basitin islands. At least the position granted him the ability to leave at his leisure. The question he was now pondering was if he belonged anywhere. He had always defined himself by his heritage and tried to conform his life to what he had been taught, even after being banished. That's why he had worked so hard to return to his homeland. Laura, his fiancée, was the only one who had ever made his banishment worth while, but now that she was dead... A knock at the door brought Keith back to reality. He quickly pushed himself away from the desk he had been sitting behind for the last few hours, and made his way to the door. No one had come to visit him since he had moved into his new house. While none of the Basitin officials challenged his appointment as ambassador, it was evident that they didn't approve of it either. As such, none had offered to help him get settled into his new position. Most simply chose to ignore him altogether. He could count on one hand the number of people who would come to see him without some political agenda. Keith casually opened the door, and quickly recognized the tall wolf. A few months ago, Natani had joined Keith's group. She stood a head taller then Keith wearing a loose fitting black shirt and a pair of grey slacks. Her fur was light brown, complimented by dark brown hair that reached down to her shoulders. She had an excellent figure, or at least she would if she didn't hide it. She was a strange woman to say the least. Sometime before she met Keith, she had been mortally injured in a fight. The only thing that saved her was a spell that merged her soul with her brothers. Her personality was affected by the merging, causing her to view herself as a man. Since that time on, she hid her feminine body from all those around her. Keith only learned the truth by accident and since then had kept the secret, even helping her hide it at times. As time went along, Keith started to develop feelings for her, but given her unique situation he never made any advances. Keith flashed Natani a smile and invited her in. It was the first time she had been to his new house, and the first time since the trial the two had been alone together. She looked around the small foyer seeing several unopened crates piled next to the wall before following him into the Study. Keith removed a set of books sitting on the chair, in front of his desk, and gestured for Natani to sit. "Thanks," said Natani as she plopped down into the chair. She turned her head and watched Keith put the books onto the nearby bookshelf. Basitins struck her as strange, looking like some sort of cat dog hybrid. Most of them tended to be short when compared to Keidrans like herself. However, what always caught her eye were their large ears, and Keith was no exception. His ears, like the rest of his body, was covered with short beige fur. She had gotten to know him well enough to be able to tell what kind of mood he was in just by the way his ears were positioned. Realizing that she was starring him, she tried to figure out something to say. "So... Nice house." "Yeah, it's umm, big." Keith said as he went back to the chair behind the desk. The pair sat across from each other in an uncomfortable silence, uncertain what to say. Natani decided to not beat around the bush and bluntly asked the question on her mind. "Are you going to come back to the ship, or are you going to stay here?" Keith looked down from Natani towards his desk before he responded. "I haven't decided yet. Does it even really matter?" "Yes it matters!" Natani said with a little more force then she meant to use. "What's so hard about the decision?" Keith looked back up towards her and began speaking. "I don't know where I belong. Everything was easier before we got here. I just assumed that when we arrived everything would be fine, but it wasn't. I betrayed my friends just to regain my citizenship. Then I had to kill Alaric, the only friend I had on this entire damn island. On top of that my so called compatriots have nothing but contempt for me, viewing my position as an affront to our society." Natani leaned closer to Keith, putting her hands on the desk for support. "Then why even consider staying?!" "Because there's nothing out there for me now!" Keith snapped back at her as he thought about Laura. Natani slowly stood up from her chair and walked around the desk. Keith watched her move towards him not knowing what to expect. The moment she was within arms reach she swung her fist. With one swift hit, Keith was thrown from the chair to the ground. Keith shook his head once to clear it as he lay on the ground, looking up towards the wolf. "You don't have anything for you out there Keith?" Natani hissed as she glared down at him. "Do you think I'd be here if I didn't care about you? I'm sorry that things turned out so badly for you here, and I'm sorry you've made some decisions you regret, but that's life. If you can't deal with that then I guess you were never really the man I thought you were." Keith sat on the floor for a minute thinking about what Natani had said. She had been with him through the entire ordeal, but somehow he had overlooked it. As memories of her filled his mind, he kept coming back to one. Keith picked himself off the floor, and met her gaze. "Why did you kiss me?" Natani was caught off guard by the question. She started to fidget, but resisted the urge to turn away from Keith when she started to speak. "I knew I could trust you. You couldn't bring yourself to betray me, even when you had everything to gain from doing so." She paused for a second taking a deep breath. A blush started to work its way across her cheeks just thinking about what she was about to say. "More then all that though, whenever I'm with you I don't mind this body." She paused again watching a smile start to creep onto Keith's face. "How often do you think about the kiss Keith?" "Every time I see you." Keith said with a soft voice as he stared into Natani's eyes. Keith worked up his courage as he walked the short distance to Natani. With their bodies nearly touching he pushed himself onto his toes in an attempt to match her height. He reached up towards her face and gently rested his hand on her cheek. She nearly jumped at the touch, but made no attempt to pull away. Seeing this, Keith decided to find out how far he could push his luck. He brought her face down to his, and softly pressed his lips against hers. Their first kiss was short and restrained, both wanting to see how the other would react. When Keith pulled away, Natani was the one to initiate the second, more heated kiss. When she broke the kiss she saw a smile form on his face and his ears perk up, letting her know just how happy he was. She returned his smile, and the two leaned into each other, beginning a passionate exchange. The ferociousness of their kisses increased as the minutes ticked by, until Natani picked up the shorter Basitin and sat him down on the desk, so that his head was level with hers. Natani renewed her attack on his lips, as Keith slipped his tongue inside her mouth. Natani was surprised at the foreign appendage exploring her mouth, but quickly adjusted to it and began to enjoy the experience. She slipped her tongue into his and began to mimic his actions causing him to become further aroused. As the pair continued to make out, Keith moved his hands down to her butt and pulled her closer, instinctually grinding his crotch against hers. Natani could feel a bulge in his pants rubbing against her nether regions. It was very clear to her what Keith, or at least his body, wanted. The question she had to answer was what she wanted. She had already admitted to herself that she was attracted to Keith, now she had to decide if it was worth risking their friendship for romance. Sensing Natani's hesitation, Keith broke the kiss. "Do you want to stop?" Keith asked while forcing himself to stop grinding against her. "I don't know." Natani responded in a distant manor. She then asked, "Is it worth us risking our friendship for a night of lust?" Keith thought about the question for a moment. Part of him wanted to tell her that they could have this night and still be friends regardless of the outcome, but that wouldn't be the truth. "I don't think it would be worth it for a night of lust, but I didn't start this because of lust." Keith said in earnest. Natani blushed bright red and lunged forward catching him in a bear hug. She held him tight and nuzzled her cheek against his, then whispered into his ear. "I fell the same way about you Keith." Keith's ears perked up more, and although she couldn't see it she was sure he was smiling. Regaining her composure, she let go of Keith and stood up. With a grin on her face she made her decision, now it was time to have some fun. She reached her hands down to Keith's pants and began to unbuckle them. Natani looked up at Keith with a smirk, letting his pants drop to the ground. Then, she used her claws to cut a small slit in his boxers. His semi-erect cock poked through, free of its confines. She had seen it a couple of times before when Keith had been bathing, but she had never had a chance to really look at it. She reached out and touched it, slowly running the back of her pointer finger along the underside, from base to tip. Just this simple act and her attention was enough to cause Keith's dick to begin to harden and grow. Natani smiled and got down on her knees so she could get a better view of his manhood, then ran her middle finer over its tip making Keith twitch slightly from the stimulation. She continued to gently caress his rod for the next few minutes, until she was sure he was at full mast. He was bigger then she had expected for how short he was, although she didn't really have idea what to expect from a Basitin. All she had to go off of was Keidran stories she overheard in pubs and taverns. Most of that was exaggeration, so to her Keith's eight inch long cock looked beautiful. Keith watched as Natani leaned in closer and brought his dick it to her mouth, before giving it several experimental licks. When Natani looked up from his cock, and realized he was watching, she decided to give the under side of his dick a long lick from the base to the tip, watching Keith's face relax as pleasure coursed trough his body. When she got to the head of his cock, she opened her mouth and took the tip inside. She held him there for a moment, rubbing her tongue around the bulbous head, savoring the taste of his skin, then pushed forward until she had most of him insider her mouth. A moan escaped from Keith, telling Natani to keep going. She began to slowly bob her head up and down on his dick, getting use to the experience. At first she didn't have a very good tempo, but within a couple of minutes, she had gotten use to his length and was beginning to increase her speed. Then she tasted something new, salty pre leaking from his cock. She pulled her mouth off of him, with an audible pop as he exited her mouth. Keith looked down at her, his eyes begging for her to continue but she had her own plans. "Where's the bedroom?" She asked while standing up. "Just down that hall." Keith responded as he got down from the desk. Natani gave him a smile then headed towards the bedroom, holding her tail up as she went. Keith started to follow her, in a hurry to continue, but nearly tripped on his own pants. Keith leaned down to pull up his pants that had crumpled up around his feet, but then decided to just take them off and leave them. Keith arrived in the room and had expected to see Natani waiting on the bed, so he was surprised when the wolf somehow got behind him. She draped her arms over his shoulders and put her head next to his so she could whisper in his ear. "Losing the pants was a good start, but the rest still needs to go." With that said, she moved her hands down to the bottom of his shirt and slipped them under it. She moved her hands to his stomach and began to move them upward simultaneously feeling his toned body and lifting the shirt off him. With his shirt off, he was left with only his feet wrappings and torn boxers. He turned around and looked at Natani. "You still have all your clothes on," Keith observed. "I think we should fix that." Natani blushed, then in one swift motion she removed her shirt. Keith eyed her large breasts taking half a step forward so that the two were almost touching. He looked up into her eyes, and with a smirk on his face he yanked both her pants and boxers down in one move. She kicked the pants and boxers away leaving her completely nude, save only her wrapped feet. Keith's hard cock was still sticking through his boxers, and when he moved forward it brushed up against her pussy, sending a small shiver through her body. Natani roughly pushed Keith away from her and onto the bed. She climbed onto the bed next to Keith and grabbed onto boxers. She started to pull them down, but they were stopped by his protruding erection. When she had cut the hole it had been just big enough for his half flaccid cock to fit through. Now that he was full sized, there was no comfortable way to get it back inside. Not wanting to wait any longer, she used her claws and shredded them, tossing the pieces of cloth off the bed when she was done. With Keith now completely free of any restraints, Natani straddled his crotch, holding herself just above him dick. She watched his face contort into a look of pure bliss as she lowered herself onto him. Her tight pussy began to spread, slowly engulfing his hard meat. She continued to take more of him inside her, until she had his entire shaft buried in her. She sat there for a few seconds getting use to his size, then leaned down and whispered into his large ear. "You can pound away to your heart's content Keith, so long as you agree to one condition. Tell me before you cum; I can't risk getting pregnant." Keith nodded his head and grabbed Natani's muscled abdomen as she sat back up. He then started to thrust up into her wet pussy. It was a little bit faster and rougher then she had expected him to start out with, but she quickly began to enjoy it. As Keith sped up his thrusts, Natani's large breasts started to bounce and she began to pant from the stimulation. Despite his best efforts, after just a couple of minutes Keith started to grunt and moan. Between thrust and moans he to tell Natani, "I'm... about to CUM!" Natani put her hands on his chest, stopping him from thrusting anymore, and pulled herself off his cock. She leaned down, propping herself up on her hands so that they were face to face, and gave him a quick passionate kiss before she spun around, putting her wet pussy right above his head and his throbbing dick right under her's. She took his cock into her mouth and immediately started to bob up and down as fast as she could. He moaned as she took him ever closer with her warm mouth, then grabbed onto her hips, bringing her pussy to his mouth. He immediately dove into it without a moment's hesitation, licking and gently nibbling on the folds of flesh. She moaned around his cock, turning him on even more, and he began to buck into her mouth without warning, forcing his cock into her throat. She started to gag but managed to fight it off, instead focusing on the growing feeling in her loins. Mere seconds later, Keith moaned louder than ever before, shooting thick Basitin cum into the wolf's eager mouth. Natani swallowed the first few shots, but let the rest of his cum pool in her mouth so she could savor the taste. When he finally finished cumming, she slipped her mouth off him, a small dribble of cum escaping her lips. Once free of his cock, she used her tongue to move the cum around to mouth, taking in its taste and texture before slowly swallowing it. As she drank the last of it down, Keith began to nibble on her clit, pushing her over the edge. She gasped, and her juices began to run free, but Keith quickly began to lick away at her pussy until he was sure she was done. After her orgasm was over Natani turned her head towards Keith and asked, "Are you ready to go again?" "Yeah," said Keith as he quickly pulled himself from under Natani. "Get off the bed and down on all fours." Natani did as Keith asked and then quipped, "I thought Basitin men preferred to be dominated." Keith waited to respond, instead going behind Natani and thrust into her wet pussy. He could have gone hard and fast, but he had other plans. He pulled out of her excruciatingly slowly, stopping when only his head remained inside her, then he would push back in just as slowly burring himself as far inside her as he could. He kept this pace as the two talked. "We do like our women aggressive, but as the Basitin ambassador I decided I needed to be a little more open minded." Natani gave a soft moan as Keith continued to thrust in and out of her, then responded. "Aren't you a dedicated Basitin. Is there anything else I should know about Basitins?" "Basitins only mate one week out of the year, and even then we have to follow very strict rules. You see, we're all taught from a young age that sex is just for procreation, and having it for any other reason is wrong. We're told that's why men and women live separately, so they don't distract each other." Keith said as he slightly increased the pace of his thrusts. "I have my own theory why my people are so repressed when it comes to sex. Do you want to hear it?" Natani moaned something that sounded similar to yes, so Keith continued on. "I think that we're afraid of losing control of ourselves in the moment." "Are you afraid of loosing control of yourself?" Natani asked as she began to thrust backwards in an attempt to force Keith even deeper inside her. Keith gave a small grin before pulling his soaked cock out completely. "A little, but you'd stop me if I started to go to far, right?" Natani forced herself to think about the question before she responded. She turned her head, straining to look into Keith's eyes. "Yes I would, but we both know you couldn't...." Natani stopped mid sentence as she suddenly felt, and saw Keith pulling her tail straight up. With his free hand, he lined his drenched cock with small her asshole. He slowly inserted his dick into her ass, watching it disappear into the tight hole. Natani looked away from him as she gritted her teeth in pain, it wasn't terrible but it definitely didn't feel good. She was going to tell him to stop but decided to give it a little more time before deciding. Keith soon had his entire cock inside her tight ass. He left himself buried there for a few seconds so she could adjust to him, and then he began to slowly pull out until only a small part of his dick remained inside her. Then he thrust back in, just a little faster than the first time. Keith kept doing this over and over, and each time Natani felt a little less pain and little more pleasure until eventually the pain was gone. Keith started to near his limit much faster than he had expected, but he didn't want to come without Natani. With his cock buried deep in her rear, Keith leaned forward and down towards Natani's back. With his left hand, he reached down, inserting two fingers into her pussy and began to thrust them in and out. With his right hand he reached around to Natani's chest and tenderly grabbed one of her breasts and began to fondle it. Between Keith's dick and hands, Natani lost control, spewing her juices all over his hand and fingers. Now that she was satisfied, he removed his fingers from her pussy and let go of her breast. He brought both of his hands to her rear and rested them on her butt cheeks for support. Then he let himself lose, rapidly pounding in and out of her ass until he couldn't hold back any longer. Keith slammed into her one final time, burying his cock as deep in her ass as he could before releasing his load. As the cum flooded her rear, Natani felt a strange but pleasant feeling. Keith pulled out of Natani, some of his cum oozing out of her ass, and then went over to his bed where he collapsed exhausted. Natani crawled up next to him, giving him a kiss on the lips before resting her head on his chest. She closed her eyes, and listened to his heart beat as she fell asleep content with how things went. Keith thought to himself that an hour ago he wasn't sure where he belonged. Now he knew without a doubt in his mind.