young hearts
This is the story of Todd a highschooler whos life is turned upside down. This is my first story so critique is welcome and please post your comments. ;)
Todd slammed down on the alarm clock. He slowly started to rub the sleep from his eye's but he felt something wrong with his face. He looked at his hand's and saw they had become paws. He ran to the bathroom to look at himself in the mirror. He was covered in head to toe in fur! It was reddish orange with white on his belly and black on his legs and fore arms. He was a fur, a giant fox. He had seen on the news about some teens turning into furs recently from a suppressed gene being activated but never thought he would be one. Then he noticed his tail, it was huge! It was soft orange fur with a white tip. How would he explain this to his mom, would his friends still want to hang with him? He went down to the kitchen, "mom" he called. "yes honey", she asked? "well", said Todd, "I'm a fox". "O my god" she exclaimed, "just like those kids on the news! I'll call the school and see what they say to do." Later that morning, "ok Todd, they say to just go to school like normal and they will inform your teachers. "his mom said. And so, Todd ate breakfast and left for his first day of school as a fur.
When he got to school his friends were shocked at his transformation but also thought that it was cool he was a fur and Todd thought that being a fur wouldn't be so bad. Up until lunch his day went fine, it was a little weird with every one staring at him but he kind of liked the attention. At lunch though while he was at his locker getting his books for his next class some one walked by and yelled "freak!". He just ignored this and suddenly herd a voice behind him, "Don't listen to them", it said. He turned around to see who had said that and was shocked to see another fur! He had heard his friend talking about her but had never seen her. She had become a fur a few weeks a go and had been the talk of the school. She was a gorgeous vixen with a shapely body and eyes like sapphires. He got lost in those eyes for a moment staring at her when she said, "Are you all right?". He turned red and wondered if she could see him blushing through his fur. "Hey, what's your name?", she asked. "Todd, what's yours?" he said, "Leah" she replied. "Well Leah you want to hang hot after school?" Todd asked. "sure" she said.
After school Todd and Leah hung out and went to the mall. they attracted a lot of attention but didn't care. This went on for weeks and Todd became good friends with Leah but after a while he relised he was in love with her. He wasn't sure if she would say yes but he finally worked up the courage to ask her out. They were at her house when Todd said, "do you want to go out for dinner or something on Friday?". "You mean like a date?" Leah asked. "Well yeah, sort of", Todd replied, blushing. On Friday they went to a little Italian place, Todd ordered spaghetti while Leah just had a salad. "So hows the food?", she looked up and started giggling. "What's so funny?" he asked. "O, nothing" she said, "Just that you have sauce on your muzzle." "O" he said, blushing as he reached up to wipe the sauce off his muzzle. But Leah grabbed his hand and said, "I got it," and slowly leaned over the table and licked the sauce from his muzzle. Then suddenly, they grabbed each other pulling close into a passionate first kiss tongues exploring each others muzzle. It only lasted a brief moment but felt like hours to Todd. They continued to go out as the weeks past, their love for each other only growing as time went on. Then one day while they were nuzzling on a park bench Todd asked Leah to prom and she eagerly agreed.
Todd and Leah couldn't stop thinking about prom and they could barley sleep. When the night of prom finally came Todd wore a nice tux and went to pickup Leah. When he opened the door he was awestruck, she wore a flowing dress that matched her sapphire eyes and accentuated every curve of her perfect body. "Do you like it?" Leah asked, "It's beautiful" be said. Once they reached the highschool they sat and cuddled for a few minutes just reveling in the softness of each others fur. When they went into the prom they went straight to the dance floor. They danced all night and as the night wore on their love blossomed and when the last song ended time seemed to slow down as they shared a tender kiss. After the prom they went back to Todd's house and just cuddled on the couch. As they cuddled Leah whispered, "I don't ever want to leave you Todd, I want to spend the rest of my life with you." "Me to baby, me to" he replied. And as they dozed off in each others arms, Leah gently whispered into his ear, "I love you Todd."