Unnamed WIP - This one will be odd...

Story by roadkill on SoFurry

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Some info here ->

This story is unnamed and unfinished. It is a rough draft but I wanted to post it to see what feed back I get. There will be more coming soon. I'm currently working a story for another furson here on SoFurry so this is on hold right now.

The "warning" here ->

Warnning the following contains, a m/solo/goo situation and other things that may squeek the weaker stomachs including: gayness, a donkey, blob/slime/tentacles, puke/barf, green goop, i think a toilet flushes somewhere (not scat). The finished story will continue with castration, possibly penectomy, death, and the character may turn to nutritious goo for the parasite to consume. So yeah, all kinds of sh1t may/will happen here. run the other way if you don't think you will like it. Not everyone does, it's ok, you wont hurt mah feelin's. Everyone else....read on.

Story Starts here ->

Jack was in pain. Lots of it. His head throbbed from a head ache that started sometime after his lunch. When the young donkey finally got to his apartment he quickly headed for the medicine cabinet in the bathroom. He quickly grabbed a large white bottle of pain relievers and without checking the label, downed six or seven small pills.

The grey furred donkey stared into the small bathroom mirror on the wall. He looked half dead. His fur was matted and stringy from sweating on the drive home from work. When his vision started to blur he decided some rest was the only thing he could do now and headed out of his small bathroom toward his little bed.

The old mattress creaked and groaned when he flopped his toned muscular frame onto it. Jack let his eyes blur out of focus again and slowly started nodding off.

Twenty minutes later...

Jack's stomach hurt to the point where it woke him up. Holding his paws to his pain stricken gut he groaned as a dull pain grew from within. It felt like he had to puke and soon. He gritted his teeth and found the strength to rollout of bed. The pain was getting worse, he wasn't going to make it. As soon as he stepped paw into the bathroom he hurked.

The pain eased a little and he felt more on it's way as he continued for the toilet. The next round did make it to the bowl. Then another and another.

Finally after two more tries he was dry heaving and the pain in his belly was back to being a dull ache. That's when jack noticed something that caused him to fall back onto his ass. His puke was green, bright neon green, like he had drank a gallon of antifreeze and, it was kinda thick or gooey.

This can't be anywhere close to being right, he thought.

After sitting there for a few minutes his head ache started to come back. By the time he stood back up and flushed the toilet his head was thumping hard. What he didn't notice was the toilet had only done one of those half flushes and was still mostly full of the neon green puke.

Several minutes passed by as he tried to wash the taste of barf from his muzzle. Turning around he saw the first batch on the floor by the tub. Jack moaned at the idea of having to clean it up but stopped thinking altogether when he realized this stuff wasn't green or snot like. It was the regular kind of gross puke he was used to. After trying to figure this all out he decided to forgo the cleaning and just take a nice hot shower and relax. At least his gut didn't hurt so bad anymore.

The young donkey fiddled with the shower knobs for a while until he found the perfect water temperature. With a low murr jack shook off his muscle tee and shimmied out of his boxers. Before stepping into the warm shower he looked over his slim form in the mirror. He ruffed his lighter chest fur and scritched at his skin below.

Mmmmm, he thought.

His hoofpaw slid down his lightly muscled, ruffling the fur on the way down. He paused at the lower part of his belly feeling a gentle curve just a little bit farther down from his belly button.

What the hel... He muttered

To some one else, it was hardly noticeable but to the hound donkey he knew instantly the bumb shouldn't be there.

Oh shit, he grumbled, what the fuck is this?

He studied himself in the mirror now, staring at the small bulge. It felt like the lower part of his stomach was distended a little. As if he had had to much to eat for dinner.

We need to get back to the gym after work again dude. He said to his reflection.

His head was thumping again and the steam from the shower was enticing him. Ill worry about it later, he thought to himself. Stepping into the tub instantly cheered him up a little. The inch deep puddle of water in the bottom of the tub felt great on his sore hind paws. He stretched and wiggled his blunt hoof tipped toes in the warm water, enjoying the feeling of heat reaching the skin under the fur. Jack leaned under the cheap water saving shower head and let the wet warmth wash onto his body.

Even with his head ache he was already feeling better. In fact, the warm sensations of the water were really starting to get to the young stud. Without realizing it jack was gently massaging his heavy nuts. Slowly he rolled his hefty spooge makers around in their big sac. His other paw was scritching across his chest while little moans quietly escaped from his long muzzle. Maybe I took too many pills, he rationed, yeah that's why everything feels really good. Jack didn't know it yet but the pills had nothing to do with how he was feeling now.

Then the inevitable happened. His paw moved to his thick sheath. Murring to himself he squeezed the swelling member just inside the stretched sheath.

Holy fuck, he gasped.

That single touch instantly got the blood moving. It was like electric pleasure running across his muzzle as his equine endowment quickly dropped from it's protective home and immediately started to harden. Jack tried to remember when he had last pawed off but couldn't think when. He had been so busy at work lately that he hadn't any time for his "needs". Deciding that now was as good a time as any he started stroking along his good sized meat stick. It was his favorite part about him, the best part about him in his mind. He loved that some how he inherited the cock of his ancestral quadrupeds. Most other equine males he ever saw couldn't hold a candle to what he packed. More moaning left his dark lips as he started stroking faster using the unusual amount of precum he was leaking as lube. Even with all the water his leaking cock kept him plenty lubricated. Must be really horny, he thought.

His cock was rigid now and leaking profusely. Jack was getting close now. His paws were sliding up and down his long tool in a blur now. Through heavy panting, jack started grunting. His stomach was starting to hurt again.

Wait, he grunted, fuck not yet. Damn almost got it. Come. On. Bitc...

Suddenly he stopped moving. He felt something really weird. No he felt something moving. Inside of him. He let go of his throbbing length and his other paw slid down to the tiny bulge. What the fuck.. He thought.

Then it happened stabbing pain in his gut again but this time he didn't have to puke. This time he felt movement again, under his paw. Jack looked down at his belly and his maw hung open in shock. The bump was moving. It was sliding down toward his groin. More pain came to him as whatever it was slowly moved down inside of him. Then he felt a searing heat pain suddenly flair up. He had to slam his eyes shut thinking the pain could have caused them to pop out. Then all the pain stopped suddenly. Nothing. No head ache. Not throwing up. His stomach felt perfectly normal.

Jack blinked a couple of times while he tried to figure all this out but nothing came to him. He let his paw slide off his belly gently bumping his semi-hard cock. That he did feel. The donkeys face scrunched up as that little motion sent amazing sensations through his groin. Oh fuck he thought. That's all it took.

His paw quickly headed back to his swelling member and started stroking again. Oh fuck. Fuck fuck. Is all that raced through his mind. It was like all his normal feelings were times 10. Then he felt something else. More movement but this time no pain, nothing but pure pleasure. It felt amazing. He didn't know what it was but it was making him weak. He needed to sit down. Jack leaned back against the end of the tub and let his knees fall to the side. Still stroking his shaft his other paw headed for his tail hole. With a little pre picked up on the way he ready to push a thick digit against his tight pucker when he noticed it was already slimy.

At this point jack didn't care. Everything was feeling so good he just didn't care. He prodded his tail hole and exhaled slowly. Just as the hoof tip was about to push something thin and slimy pushed out. The young stud moaned and the thing slowly pushed it's way out of him. It was firm but slick. Thin at first but as more pushed out of him it was beginning to thicken a little. The stud couldn't do anything more than moan. Even his paw left his pride and joy to stand on it's own accord. He was in absolute bliss. This thing. It felt so good and more was still coming out.

Not focusing on anything but the great feeling he was getting he missed that the slimy tendril was moving around outside of him as well as inside. As more of the thing came out the tip of it slid across jacks taint and around his big nuts. The slimy sensations caused little spasms all over his body. Farther the little tendril creeped. When it reached the base of his still hard cock it started to move up along it. Spiraling around to the end where it gently rubbed his cock slit.

The rubbing of the slime and the extra pre still leaking from jack cock made it easy for the small tentacle to push inside his cock. Slowly it wiggled and wormed down deeper into his pulsing member. The donkeys mind was only seeing bright colors and pleasant feelings. Even as more of the tentacle pushed it way in. The thick part of the slimy thing was stretching out his cock a little creating an obvious bulge from tip to base. The wiggling tip now deep inside jacks cock was on the hunt and as it moved through the studs plumbing it finally found what it was after. The tip came to a stop where the two cum heavy nuts meet and headed down into the left ball.

To counter the pain the part of the creature still inside the donkeys butt pumped more of it's euphoric chemicals directly into jack prostate. It had used a much firmer fang like appendage to stab the walnut sized organ and began giving it great doses of pleasure creating venom.

NOTE: There will be more of this because I really like where its going but for right now this is all I have to UL at the moment. If anyone has any comments or questions feel free to send a message or leave something in the comments. Please don't bother telling me about gramar/spelling/timeline mistakes. I know they're present. This is only a rough draft but I still wanted to post it because I haven't posted in a while.