That Night at the Motel

Story by _Scales_ on SoFurry

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(Alright, I've edited this story a bit, following the advice of Daiyuki, whose comment ...


(Alright, I've edited this story a bit, following the advice of Daiyuki, whose comment from the original version remains at the bottom. This story was created with the help of Adsila Drakon through this forum:http://www.sofurry.com/threadview?threadid=6316&pagenum=0)

That Night at the Motel

Where is she? Critias thought. I hope she didn't forget. He sighed. It had been four hours already. If she didn't forget, then she would've been here by now. She said she'd be here in an hour. Where is she? Critias was waiting for a female dragoness named Adsila. He had met her in this strange new world he had somehow arrived in. He assumed it was Drax, his homeland, just in the future. Ever since he arrived, he tried to find dragons of his species. Unfortunately, none were found. He then realized something. He was the last of his kind. Unable to deny the truth, he sadly accepted this. He then realized something else. It was up to him to repopulate his kin. Which meant one thing. He needed to breed a female. This only worsened his mood. He thought he had absolutely no chance with females. When he had reached maturity, he believed he would be a virgin for the rest of his life. Obviously, he was wrong.

 One day, he had decided to give it a shot and try to find a mate. After all, he was used to the pain of rejection, even though this wasn't the same type, rejection was rejection. He didn't really try to approach anyone. His natural shyness was to blame. He eventually went up to Adsila. Well, not exactly went up. He was going back and forth with approaching her, and eventually, she had noticed him. They talked, but it took a while for Critias to openly talk to the female dragoness. Then it got to the point to where Critias finally told her his situation. Nervous yet again, Adsila finally persuaded him to finally say what he had "came" to her for. Expecting rejection, he instead received something he had never received his entire life. You can guess what that is. 

Now, the original plan was to meet at Critias' temporary, (possibly permanent), new home at 5:00. It was 9:00 right now. Maybe she changed her mind. Critias thought to himself. I wouldn't be surprised though, I mean, who'd want to become mates with me? His question was answered by a knock at the door. "Hello?" called a kind voice. "Critias? You there?"

"Yeah, I'm here." he called back. "Come in, the door's open." The door opened, and a young dragoness slowly entered the room. Her outer scales were red orange and the inner scales, covering her lower jaw, chest, and inner thighs, were tannish yellow. She didn't wear any clothes, which wasn't surprising to Critias since a lot of people here didn't wear clothes to begin with. Which was a good thing for him, cause he himself didn't have any clothes to wear. The only thing she wore was a collar around her neck. She had explained to him when they first met that it enabled her to talk. He didn't know why, but he figured he would get more in depth to that in the near or distant future. Her breast cup size was about a C. Her eyes were colored amber and, on her head, two horns that came out at an angle.

The young dragoness closed the door, and looked around the room. "So this is your home for the time being?"

"Yep." he replied. "It's a miracle I got this place, being that I came here with no money."

"How did you get this place in the first place?" Adsila asked curiously.

"Well," he began, "this old guy saw that I had no place to go. He insisted on letting me stay at his motel. He knew I had no money, so he made a deal that if I worked for him, I'd be allowed to stay here. And now, here I am."

"Interesting." she replied. "And by the way, sorry for being so late. I had some things at home I had to sort out and it took longer than expected."

"It's alright," he said, "I'm just glad you're here." Now he was getting nervous.

"Why so nervous? I can see it in your eyes."

"Y... you remember what we're about to do, right?" he asked her, looking her straight in the eye.

"Yes, I do know. But are you ready for it? I mean I don't want to do it if your not. I would like to help you as much as I can..."

"I am, but... I apologize, you see I've never done this before and... I just don't want to upset..." His gaze then fell to the floor.

"Well, you wont upset me, so why are you worried?"

Critias blushed for a moment. "It's just, you're so beautiful and, I'm just some runaway dragon. I really didn't expect this to ever happen."

"Well, I never thought someone would choose me for this. I mean, I never did. I am only a spykeeper of my tribe..."

"Well," Critias said, slowly approaching the young dragoness, "I picked you."

Adsila looked into his eyes. "Why pick me out of all the others?"

"Well, there was just something about you that just... drew me to you."

"There is? I mean, what was it that drew you to me? I can only talk with my collar I have now..." She looked down at her collar and let out a sigh.

"It's just... the way you looked at me, how you were so kind to me... I don't know, maybe it's just... I've never met a female that doesn't want to, you know, kill me." He smiled at this.

"Well, I choose to be who I am, and only can be who I am. My mother told me to be who I am and be happy." saying this, she nods a bit. By now, Critias is close enough to hold her close, which he does.

"Adsila..." he said, looking into her eyes.

"What is it?" she said, doing the same.

"I..." Critias said, his face getting closer to hers.

Adsila began to move closer to him as well. "But..." she says, suddenly starting to feel something for him. And then, their lips finally met. They kissed each other with great passion. As passion rose, Adsila moved her hand to Critias' cheek to deepen the kiss. He closed his eyes, and let her in, forgetting everything that happened back home, ignoring why he was here, putting aside that his species was almost extinct, only wanting to focus on this one moment, he was no longer in control of his body, his body was in control of him. Slowly, he laid down on the floor, with Adsila on top of him, not breaking the kiss. And as they kissed, Adsila's hand started to rub against Critias' muscular chest.

She began to blush a bit, and some moans began to escape her lips as they continued. "Mmmm..."

This feeling, it's... incredible. Critias thought to himself. Suddenly, he felt his member getting harder and harder. Adsila let out a soft murr as she kissed him a bit more, then broke the kiss. "Are you sure you're ready?" she asked softly.

Critias opened his eyes, taking a few breaths. "Yeah... I'm ready." At that, Adsila began to rub her already wet slit against his member. She shivered a bit and let out a soft moan. "Ahhh, so hard..."

"Mmmm... I... I know." Critias said, closing his eyes again. He laid his head on the floor.

Adsila then gave him a deep kiss. She began to lower herself onto his dragonhood, now covered in her juices. Her slit began to wrap around it tightly. She let out a soft moan as she began to slide herself fully onto him. "Mmmm..."

"By the heavens..." Critias said, now purring in pleasure. And as if by instinct, he began to slide his slick phallus in and out of Adsila's wet, needy cunt, who arched her back a bit and let out a moan in response.

"Ohhhhhh... ." she moaned out as she took in his member fully in her sex. Critias placed his hands on her hips, guiding her as he slid his member in and out of her.

He began to feel his climax coming close. A rush of pleasure ran through the both of them as Adsila began to ride Critias. She moaned out as her walls tightened around his hard member. She slowly moved in and out as she enjoyed the feeling the both of them shared. But Critias couldn't take it anymore. He could feel that his climax was getting closer and closer by the second.

"I...I feel like I'm gonna...gonna... r-RRROOOAAARR!!!" At that, his orgasm began, face grimacing as it did. Adsila felt him shooting his seed into her. She moaned out as she began to ride him more, slowly speeding up as she milked him for his seed. Critias couldn't help but moan along with her. He began to thrust into her faster, applying a bit more force now. Adsila gasped out as her walls tightened even more around his cock and rode faster. Critias, feeling her tightening, just continued to go faster, applying even more force now, all while his phallus continued to squirt his seed into her.

"Ahhh, yes..." Adsila moaned out in etcasy. Her hand pressed to Critias' chest as she felt her own climax about hit soon. Yet his just kept going, seeming like it just wouldn't stop.

"By the gods..." Critias said as is seemingly infinite orgasm continued, "th-this is... uhhh..." He couldn't even put it into words at this point, but even if he could, it wouldn't have mattered. He was too into this, fucking in time with Adsila's riding. He could still feel his dragonhood pumping his sperm into her as if there was no tomorrow. Adsila just rode him more, moaning out as she did so. She started milking him for his sperm as she continued riding more and more.

"Aahhhhh, ohhhh yessss!" she moaned out, feeling her sex tightening around Critias' dragonhood.

Feeling his orgasm finally coming to a close, Critias slowed his fucking to a stop and waited for it to finish. Adsila, on the other hand, had just hit her own orgasm, moaning out in pleasure. She shivered a bit as she slowed her riding on Critias, whose orgasm finally came to an end. He collapsed to the ground, completely drained of energy. He felt Adsila's cum drip out of her cunt as he pulled out of her. When her orgasm finished, she did the same. So the two of them lied there, unable to speak or move. It was quiet for a while, with the only sound being their heavy pants. It was Critias who finally broke the silence.

"That was... wow." Adsila giggled in response and kissed his cheek.

"I know, but I like it a lot." She blushed a bit saying this. "Though it sure is exhausting."

"Yeah." He then let out a yawn. "I'm tired."

"Me too." She said in reply, letting out her own yawn. "Good night Critias."

"Good night Adsila."

"I love you." Adsila said, drifting off to sleep. Critias was surprised to hear this, being that he thought he'd never hear that phrase his entire life. Although he also thought he would be a virgin his entire life.

"I... I love you too." He finally said, drifting into his own sleep.

End

(Again, I know that wasn't the best yiff story ever, but remember, this is my first time writing this kind of story. Also, I know I didn't include the fingering part. As hot as it would have been, it wasn't necessary. Added to that I strayed from Critias' actual personality. I'm probably not going to write any more stories since I'm mainly using previous rps for my stories and lately I haven't had any good ones so far. But I still might try, so keep an eye out for more. Just don't expect them to come too soon. Thank you for reading this story. Please comment, rate, favorite, whatever your furry little heart desires. I'll catch you guys later.)