Teenage Loves

Story by Jikan Tunderiska on SoFurry

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This was a sonnet that I wrote not too long ago in a new form that I created, tercet, tercet, quatrain, quatrain. It might be a little rough, but I spent a good two weeks trying to finish it, and it seems to have come out rather well. There's some hidden allusions in here, so see if you can find out what they are ;) Well. Hope you like it. :D


You know not what love is, you are too young.

Teen hood is just sunrise to know your wants

Live with love singing songs already sung.

You will soon understand your true desire

is something not found in second ring hunts

for your blind sin will lead to Hellish pyre.

Repent! Repent! Or you'll soon see that you

will soon lose in ev'ry young love, all dignity.

To your morals you must hold fast, hold true

or else all reason from you will fast flee.

Be patient with love, don't push, don't shove

And look for your true love, the one that life

seems meaningless without; this one true love.

So live hap'ly with them, live without strife.