The mysterious primitive killer Chapter 3

Story by Seductive Dragon on SoFurry

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The mysterious primitive killer Chapter 3

Just a while after Ven discoverd that piece of paper that might have been awating to be obtained by Ven, he remained in his room, barricaded and silent, curling up and sighing deeply, struck with sudden thought. he surely wasn't comfortable being in Carver's presence now, and he sure was feeling as if he wasn't the type of guy to have around. Ven stood in his room, he began to walk back and fourth, he bit his lip and shook his head, folded his arms and kept frequently doing so until this redundancy went on to the night, Ven blinked and looked at his clock, pretty surprised of how fast time was consumed, yet he was happy to know that this was the time that Carver leaves to do something guilty and suspicious. Ven wasn't as curious as he always was in this day, he grew lazy and thoughtless, he just waited and waited for something to happen, then suddenly he stepped back as he heard the strong footsteps of Carver as he walked past, Carver knocked innocently and Ven wasn't keen on answering nor was he keen on letting him in, though he had to eventually and Ven slowly unlocked the door, leaning against the wall in fear. Carver peaked in and wrinkled his nose as he said "uh Ven just uh...stay here and well..... meh as much of a baby as you are you should know what to do.." Carver then left with haste and Ven crawled to his doorway, peaked and watched Carver walking fast to his Edonis, he made a strange glance at Carl's house as he entered his car, then immediately drove off and drifited into the busy streets. Ven pushes himself up and slowly creeped down the stairs, slyly moving to his destination which was Carl's house, he slowly opened the door, and closed it, quickly running to Carl's house until something put him in a hault. He strangely saw Carly watching Carver drive away and look at her watch, nodding and walking freely to her house, Ven stood feet away as Carly's senses made her spot Ven. She stopped and played with her V-neck on the clothing she was wearing which was pretty formal for a regular day, Vem watched her approach as Carly walked toward Ven with a slight smile, she kneeled down in front of him and said softly "Ven dear, what are you doing at this time wondering around hrm?" Ven shrugged, then sighed and began to say with a stutter "Umm..w..well I just.. not sure just need to be with Carl today.." Carly knew Ven better then his own father at the time, and she nodded and left Ven amazed at how she understood him well, Ven smiled and held her paw, Carly smiled and simply walked to her Opel Speedster, Ven then realized that he was taking his time and that Carver could come back at any time he desired. Carly glanced at Ven and said easily "You know this is the day when your father goes gambling and eventually gets drunk and then hangs out at a friend's home right?" Ven looked up at her and blinked, confused of why. "Well you must not then, so no worries, you can spend the night and morning with us no problem, so you should be out of trouble by then", Ven hopped a bit and nodded quickly, "Really really? Finally! This is great, hey where we going anyway?" Carly gestured for Ven to wait then called Carl over and in a few seconds, he sprinted down the stairs and tripped on the last step, falling on his cheek. Ven gasped and Carly giggled, shaking her head and going over to help Carl up. Carl was used to getting hurt and he could deal with great amounts of pain to his surprise, it took a while for Carly to adapt to this repetition, but she knew Carl would always end up fine and giggling. Carlquickly recovered and stood up fast, looking as if nothing happened and quickly said "Hey so uh.. where we going tonight mommo? Oh I mean momma hah!", Carl giggled loudly from what he said and then smiled widely, his maw opened a bit as he saw Ven, he ran and hugged him tightly and wrapped his wings around him, Ven smiled and hugged back, having a bit of trouble breathing. Carly smiled and frontflipped near her car, cooly touching certain parts of the door as her pawprints would light up in neon green, making the door slide open. Ven watched in awe and gazed at Carly, who gestured for the boys to enter the car. Carl let go of Ven after about a minute hugging him, then jumped into the car, Ven followed and did the same as Carly happily sat in front and snapped her fingers, making all doors close automatically. Ven looked around and gasped, looking down with a big smile and pressing against the soft seat. "Whooaa! This is almost better than my dad's car! So soft, big and futuristic!". Both Carl and Carly smiled and giggled, shrugging and simultaneously saying "Well it was worth the price!", Ven blinked with an open maw and looked around again. Carly reversed into a drift that made them do a 360 onto the road that was near on the right side of their house. Ven held the seat and Carl as Carly accelerated quickly into 50mph down a slope. Ven and Carl smiled and nodded with mischief then said "YEAH! Go mom!", Carly laughed and slowed down, stopping at a sudden red light and moving the position of her mirror, turning on the AC and tuning to a station which gave loud and exciting rock music. Ven clapped once and looked at Carl, they held paws and shook them up and down to the beat of the music, then waited for Carly reaction as she laughed and leaned forward, her nose pushed the horn and she laughed more, leaning up and grasping the steerwheel. Ven then said "Rock in and out, it's what it's all about! Make the heart wanna shout, help it make the party loud!". Carl then sang along with the chorus and then Carly joined with her young personality and Jolly voice making the song exciting. She stood still and smiled, looking ahead until the boys stopped and smiled at each other, they all began laughing until Carly headbanged and said sarcastically "Yeha dude let's go burn a tree or something! Woot!", Ven and Carl stared at each other in surprise and confusion, then slowly smiled widely and laughed hard, hitting back against the seat. Carly chuckled and accelerated at the green light, eyeing them on the mirror every 10 seconds. The boyd kept laughing and finally stopped, then Carl poked Carly's shoulder and said "Uhh mom....here's something you should know... don't eat too much sugar in the night!" Carly snickered and shrugged, steering left and right into and away from their lane, scaring Carl until he poked her hard and said "Mom you trying to kill us?! Drive right!". Carly stopped when a dark Toyota Prius came close and nearly hit them. Carl panted and layed back when Ven pulled him near. He looked around and poked the ceiling, which activated a mechanism to fold out a big, HD TV screen. Ven gasped and coverd his mouth, shaking his right paw. "Oh! I want this in my car! Whooaa this is sooo awesome!". Carly nodded as her arm-scales would gleam and brightly reflect the headlights of a nearby vehicle. Ven watched her scales patiently and focused on them while Carl was continously poking Ven to get his attention, Ven blinked and leaned on Carl. "What what?!" Carl giggled and waved at him "Hi there", Ven shook his head and sighs happily. "Hey Carly, where are we going anyway?". Carly eyed then on the mirror with an evil smile, saying with a deep voice "Somewhere scary! Muahaha!", Ven and Carl gasped and shook, holding each other as Carly laughed and nearly drove into a pole. The boys then said "Oh you were kidding.. good..", Carly nodded "Why of course! And we're going to the biggest store in Valhalla City", Ven and Carl hopped in their seat and nodded in excitement. Carly smiled and drove down a dark and congested road...

About an hour later, the boys were napping while Carly tuned to some soothing music of her choice, she smirked and watched the boys slumber, then lowered her head and gazes at a wonderful and remarkable attraction that the city was full of. It had everything anyone would want, stores, malls, casino's, five-star restaurants and even a beach. As they were in the best part of the town, Carly simply found a nice spot to park. She moved in a secure area with lots of lights and pictures of famous furries and movies. She was now under a tunnel and had a nice spot between two sports cars. She drove ahead and turned around, then speeded and drifting into a stop perfectly between the silver exotics. She smiled and fistpumped, whipsering to herself "Yes... I still got it", the boys woke quickly after the sudden stop and the loud sound of the engine reving. They rubbed their eyes and looked around, poking each other. Ven looked at Carly and smiled while saying "Holy shoot! This is the best city ever! We can do anything here! Let's go there, and there! And oh, look at that!", Carl then followed and said "And there, and over there also, and can't forget there!", They pointed in all directions and stopped as Carly said "Now don't get too hyper! We won't be here forever, but we have time to reach the good spots yes", Ven shoved open the door and Carl leaped out, Carly patiently shut off the car and stepped out, shutting the door and walking back into the lights and attractions of the city. Ven and Carl quickly walked by her sides and held her paws tightly, she smiled warmly and looked at many stores and many sales. There was almost too much to look at, so much things it was impossible to walk by and see everything that you pass without missing one or two things. Ven and Carl hurried to a huge mart and Carly followed at their pace, they almost made her trip as she stepped on a rock and a bump. Ven and Carl was amazed, they stopped and looked around, Carly went off checking near the shining and luminous gems and rings on display. To their surprise there wasn't as many residents and pedestrians as always, but it was better for them anyway. They spent countless minutes searching and looking and walking and staring, by then it became midnight and they were having lots of fun. They was still so much more to do that it might take weeks to do it all in one great, huge city. Ven and Carl was greatly admired by civilians whom never seen such adorable kids before. They then bought some things here and there, mostly for the boys but also some new clothing and jewelry for Carly. They were moving quite fast around town and got to see some great momunments and interesting statues and such, though each was greatly enjoying themselves. It's quite rare to have been to many stores in only about half an hour when in Valhalla City. They have done lots and yet only Carly knew it was the next day already, though time is the least someone would care about here. It had too much to even sleep away from, inexplicably an eccentric feeling or control occurs mentally when someone is literally hypnotized by what the city has to offer. Carly and the boys had themselves a great quantity of desirable items. So far they have been through a couple of stores, malls, museums and a nice hotel to look at. Ven and Carl wanted to go everywhere, even at places they have already visited. Well the only thing they didn't do is walk in a beach, attend a concert and check out the new pools that just opened. They did a lot in a few hours, though the boys were always behaved and happy, and Carly was still hyper and satisfied.

As the sun began to rise and it made the sky filled with colors from blue, black, violet to yellow, pink, purple and red orange. It looked beauitful with the gold, yellow, black, green and white colors of the city. It was something that catches the attention of many who see it. Carly looked at her watch and sighed, squeezing the boy's paws and heading down a pathway after coming from a great meal that left them stuffed. Carly didn't spend much, though she was planning to, but time stopped that from happening. As they were on their way back to the car, Carly was greeted by an expert car dealer who sells the fastest, best and most beautiful cars. He was a tall wolf anthro, who wore a black suit and black jeans, as well as red glasses and an oddly big hat. He was confidently saying "Well hello mam, you look like a fine woman with lots of money eh, I am a dealer and I can help you acquire your dream car, I sell the best and finest cars ever to be known to furrykind" He handed her a card that contained vital information needed to contact or visit him, as Carly took it, he went on saying "That's my card if you need an exotic, muscle, tuner, or concept car you wanna buy, they're relaly something worth the money, well... tally oh!", he waved and cooly walked away wtih a smile and Carly looked at the card as she walked with the boys. They were fatigue and tired, Ven was hardly awake and Carl's legs were giving up on his weight. Carly still contained remnants of energy through the dusk day. She slowly walked to her car and had to drag Ven and Carl through some of the walking, she let go to activate the door, Ven leaned onto a sports car and Carl sat down, Carly gestured them to get inside and Carl slowly got up and dragged Ven to the car while saying "Wow Ven you get heavier ever week, ow my foot..", he leaped inside and pulled Ven onto the seat, Carly sat in position and closed the doors with the snap of her fingers. Ven leaned onto Carl and Carl layed his head back, resting his overly used feet. Carly moved out the parking space and drove down a brightly lit up road that was empty for once. She can easily get the boys back home now. Ven got comfy and layed on his side, resting his head on Carl's lap, beggining to doze off as Carl watched what they passed, he didn't want to miss anything nice. Carl then began to get tired and didn't mind slumbering for a while until they reach their destination without delay.

Eventually the boys slept well as the hour went by, Carly had her focus on her driving and a little on Ven since her kept snoring, but she found it adorable and she would giggle at times when he snored. So they come back in the fron entrance and Carly pulled in their area adjacent to the house. Carl woke up slowly and stretched as Ven did the same as well, Carly shutt of the car and stepped out, looking around as it became dawn and the morning was nearing. She walks over and opened the door, Carl lazily scooted over and walked out and over to the stairs, then stopped, took a breath and waited by the door for Carly. She grabbed they're shopping bags and walked up the stairs, looking at Carl and saying "Carl sweety, can you take my key in the right pocket please?", Carl did as he was told and he find the keys, then unlocked their door himself and immediately walked upstairs to his room, Ven slowly followed and rubbed his eyes as he stepped up the stairs and into the lovely, spacious home. He just caught sight of Carl heading upstairs as he then noticed how quite they have been, se he said "Carly, thank you so mu... much for bringing me with you...it was the best..", he lazily raised a fist high in the air and sighed, slowly laying on their couch. Carly smiled and placed the items where they needed to be and said "Why anytime dear one, if you'd like you can come with us anywhere we go, it's more fun with you coming along", Ven smiled and met his gaze with Carly's, she tapped her head and looked at her watch, then bent over and kissed Ven's forehead saying "Now try to get some sleep if you could, it's pretty unhealthy to remain awake at this time..", Ven slowly nodded and closed his eyes, resting once again. Carly walked down the hallway and whistled on her way to a good morning sleep, she jumped in her bed and drank some milk, then afterwards she snoozed and Ven was in a deep sleep and Carl was in his soft water bed, sleeping soundly after growing out of snoring which used to occur about a week before.

In the morning the birds were singing, the sun was shining with brilliance through the town and the weather was clear and warm. Ven woke up to the sound of laughter and slowly sat up, stretched a little and fell off the couch, he then saw Carl's PSP on the ground near him and then saw Carly standing in front of him saying "Fine morning to you sleepy head", she giggled and Carl continued chuckling and laughing, Ven got up and shook a bit, waking up fully and asking "Hey Carly, what's for dinner?", he shyly walked around as Carl held his paw and said "About time you wake up! You almost fudging missed the coolest breakfast ever!", Ven giggled and shrugged, stepping in the kitchen since there was a delicious aroma emanating from the kitchen, Ven loved the smell of any breakfast he could eat, he then sat in a chair sitting in the middle of the living room with a ruby red table that was pretty big, Carly and Carl stepped out of the kitchen and both bended over, gazes at the table and aimed while holding a knife and a fork, they both threw them high and they landed perfectly at one another's spot, each was symmetrical. Ven leaned away and gaped as their throw was very accurate and said "What the heck?! Teach me how to do that!", Carl and Carly pokes each other smiling and then slapped each other's paw. Ven was impressed and clapped for them both as they giggled and bowed, then went in the kitchen and layed the plates of their food onto the table. Ven was wide-eyed and drooled a bit, smiling and squinting, "Cool! This looks great! You guys are good!", Carl blushed a bit and chuckled, sitting as Carly did and they began to feast. Ven quickly consumed the six strips of bacon, half of an egg sandwhich and pancakes that were covered in syrup and butter. Ven rubbed his full belly and giggled, watching Carl finish the other half of the sandwhich, he licked his fingers and smiles at Ven, beginning to chuckle. Ven raised his head to his victory and calmy said "I am the winner of his breakfast hah! beat you Carl! In your face!", he pokes his nose twice and laughed at him, Carl rolled his eyes and shook his head. Carly sat quietly and grinned, looking away and tapping her head, Ven noticed her forgot her and he asked "hey Carly where is your plate?", she gazes at you and smirked, taking the plate off her lap and holding it in Ven's face, giggling and diagreeing, "Ah no I won! Hah I finished before both of you as always I win! Woohoo! I'm the winner of this breakfast! Hahah!", she laughed and patted Ven's head, taking the plates to wash them and then humming as she began clensing the dishes, Carl and Ven stared at one another intentely and then laughed, they both drank they're juice and handed the cups over to Carly, Carl bowed and said "Thank you mother" then walked to his room, Ven did the same and Carly got lost in thought, she began immagining Ven being her second son, then she smiled and focused back on the dishes, she was hoping such a good thing could occur. Ven ventured upstairs and looked around as the hallways were long and covered with nice pictures and great wall patterns, it was blue with white squares and a darker blue circle cutting through the square. He slowly walked to Carl's room and Ven was amazed at how much Carl had. His room was large, colored with a smoothing color of lime green, had a large 3D TV screen attached to the wall, had a PS4 which wasn'r for sale yet, lots of car models and die-cast designs that are highly detailed, a guitar hero controller, instrument and a nice and big water bed that was covered with fluffy blankets, Carl was laying on the ground watching his TV in 3D without the need of specially designed glasses. Ven stares at everything and just stood there, wishing he had it all. His room was nearly as good but Ven never thought that Carl's would have so much.

Carl jumped up and licked all over Ven's face, Ven closes his eyes tightly and backed away until he hit the wall, Carl giggled and shook his head, turning around and tripping onto his face. Ven gaped and was holding in a laugh, he couldn't help but cough and moves out the room and snicker it our slowly. Carl got up and jumped on his bed, laying back and relaxing, "Buddy you can come out now, it's fine to laugh duh", Ven came in again and sat near Carl, then saw that the paper he obtained in his father's room fell out of his pocket, Ven gasped softly and quickly grabbed it and shoved it in his pocket. Carl raised an eye ridge and wondered, became curious and said "What was that you had? Is it important or something?", Ven shook his head and pokes Carl, slightly anxious and saying quickly "No no nothing, don't worry abou...hey look change to channel 57!", Carl blinked and shrugged, tuning to the chosen channel and tilting his head, "Hey this that funny show.. I think it's called Nitro Circus", Ven nodded fast and hops a bit, "It's the funniest and greatest show ever!" He said, then remembered about Carver and began to get scared, he then jumped off Carl's bed and headed downstairs, nearly bumping into Carly, he looked out the window and saw a car that looked like the Edonis, he gasped and headed to the door slowly, then Carly came down and poked him, "Is everything okay? Is it your time to leave now dear?", Ven rubbed his arm shyly and nodded slowly, "Umm....sorry but I think it is, so tell Carl I said bye and bye to you Carly", Ven smiled and waved, then Carly stopped to give him a peck of a kiss on his cheek, then Ven smiled and headed out, as the door shut he hurried to his house with haste and didn't want to become dead for any evidence of him leaving to a city with Carl. He ran fast and stopped, slowly and quietly opening the door which was still open, he creeped inside and looked around and saw no sign of Carver. Ven was confused, he scratched his head and said silently "That bully must now be here now, all well better for me", he shrugged and took a cookie on his way to skipping up the stairs and into his room, he was saddened a bit to return to the house that held the worst times of his life, but he was happy he had a home anyway, he waited by then until Carver arrived, then was thinking of all the possibilities of why he isn't here yet...

Well this is the third part, sorry I took a while to finish it since things got quite busy lately, but hopw you enjoyed!

Seductive Dragon